How to Tick off the Organization.

[Musical Muffin]

Alright. This is a story about my nobody. Xanele. It's just her experience with Organization XIII and trust me... she knows how to get those members ANGRY. >.<
It's comedy so there shouldn't be that much fighting and stuff. Minor cussing.
That's about it.
Enjoy.

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Xemnas stood before the whole Organization who were waiting impatiently.
"Members of Organization XIII... we have gained a new and powerful member."
There was an awkward silence. Everybody stared at Xemnas, not caring.
"Please welcome member XIV. Xanele."
A small girl, around the age of 14 came bouncing out behind The Superior.
"Hi!" She squealed.
Xemnas rolled his eyes. "She will be joining us."
"And... what is it that makes you so special, Xanele?"
"Well... I use RAINBOWS for my element." Xanele smiled from ear to ear. "And my weapon is a REKKA. Which is basically a giant Shurikin... Kind of like what the red headed guy is carring. Except... not so.. circular."
"Wow." The red head remarked. "You sure are smart." He said sarcastically.
"Hey, hey! Don't hate me 'cause you ain't me. Nyahaha!"
The Organization went from not caring to the slightest bit freaked out.
"Umm... one of you. Show her around before the next meeting, which is in... 5 minutes. I have business to attend to."
The small nobody grinned. Exposing her braces. She had dark blonde hair, and light blue eyes, which were covered by her red square glasses. She was really pale and skinny. Plus, her coat was obviously too big for her.
"Ha, Marluxia. She ripped off your hair style." Xigbar said.
Marluxia took a deep breath and just shook his head. "Have fun showing her around."
"Actually-I was planning on dying it red!" She yelled.
Axel's eyes widened. "Hey! That's MY thing!"
"He, he! Oh well!!" She yelled, grabbing Zexion's arm. "Show me around! Please!" Xanele put an innocent look on her face.
Zexion stared at her. "...Well... um.. oka-?"
The other 10 members watched as the newest addition to Organization XIII dragged one of their smartest members with her.
"...Well, that was... awkward." Xaldin said. "I'm going to go... hide."
******5 MINUTES LATER******
All of the Organization members sat in their thrones. Xemnas waited for everyone to be quiet, which they weren't going to be anytime soon.
"Quiet! The superior now speaks!" Saix said.
Everyone hushed their tones and put their full attention to their leader.
"Organization XIII, the time has come. In only a couple of days when 'he' reaches Castle Oblivion... we will attend to our goal. Kingdom Hearts. We now have Fourteen members, and that is more than enough to succeed. We will become whole..."
Xemnas continued his speech.
Xanele, on the other hand, was eyeing the elderly member who seemed to be falling asleep. 'Hmm, this should be fun.' She thought, deviously. She put out her palm, making sure none of the members were looking at her, and formed a rainbow in the middle of her hand. She bounced it up and down before shooting it at Vexen's chair, making sure it didn't hit him.
"Gwaahh!!" He yelled. "Uh! Did you-Did you just SEE that?!" He yelled.
Xemnas glared at Vexen. "....No, what?"
"Something just blasted a HOLE in my chair!" He screached.
Everyone looked at his chair, which was perfectly undamaged and sparkling clean. "There's nothing there, loser." Larxene said.
"Vexen... we know that you want to be respected more here... but pretending to be hurt isn't going to get you it." Xemnas said. "Now let me finish my speech. Anyway, Castle Oblivion has taken a lot from us........"
Xanele cackled her laugh in a low tone so no one could hear it. 'This IS fun!' She thought. She held out her palm and formed another rainbow. She aimed it for right next to his hand, so he would feel some intense heat from it. She shot it out and watched.
"Arghh! Ouch!" He screamed again. "What?! What IS that?!"
Everybody switched their attention to Vexen again. "Vexen... maybe you should like, take a nap or something." Demyx said. "That happens to me when I get tired."
"If I can go on?"
"Sorry, sir."
"Once again... When 'he' enters the Castle, it'll be your duty-Marluxia, to lead him the right way..."
Xanele formed yet, another rainbow.
Vexen, who was looking around him, discovered Xanele's acts. "You! Hey-kid! What are you doing?!" He yelled.
Xanele cupped her rainbow in her hands. "Well, nothing-Vexie! Nyahaha!"
"Number IV! If you do not stop I will personally remove you!" Xemnas exploded. "Now let me finish before I bore you all to nothingness."
"It's not me! It's the new kid! She's the one! She's the one blasting those... THINGS at me."
"She's not doing ANYTHING!" Axel yelled. "Jeeze! Shut up!"
Vexen gave a death glare to Axel and crossed his arms in a very angry tone. He looked towards the side with his eyes closed.
'Fuuuume'
His eyes shot open and stared at his foot. "Oh my! Ouch! See! She just-graahhh!!!"
"What are you talking about?" Xanele asked. "I don't even know how to fully USE my powers yet."
"Sure! Look! My boot, it's smoking!"
".... Vexen. Stop-or you will be forced to leave." Saix said.
"I'd be happy to leave!" He burst.
"No, Vexen. You need to listen to this-if you are forced to leave, you will be punished."
"The last time I was punished, it was just a mission in atlantica! ...With Marluxia. Okay, yes, that was pretty bad."
"Then quiet!" Saix concluded.
Xanele shot at Vexen again, he saw this time.
"Ughh!" He yelled. "The little brat! She shot me! Did you see that? I did! I saw it perfectly! Hah! You've been caught." Vexen turned to Xemnas, he looked more angry than ever. "Number VII!"
"Right away, Sir." Saix said. "Vexen..." He pointed towards the exit. "I'll deal with you shortly."
"But! But!!"
"No! Out!"
"You'll regret this!" He yelled. "I'll get you, brat!" Vexen faded away and Xemnas continued his speech. Xanele sat, smiling, content with the stunt she just pulled.

-LEXAEUS-
Lexaeus stood on the corner of the main hall way trying to figure out his rubix cube. He was surprisingly good at figuring these thing's out. He needed his peace and quiet though. Xanele knew about this and could use it to her advantage.
She reached in her pocket and pulled out her MP3 player. She scrolled through all of her songs and looked for the most annoying ones she had.
'This is great.' She purred.
Lexaeus almost had it completed when a song started to play.
An extremely long guitar solo. He looked up, confused.
'I hope you flip some guy the bird, he cuts you off and your forced to swirve. In front of the beatles tour bus, a book mobile and a mack truck...'
Lexaeus set his rubix cube down and began to search for the device playing the awful music. As the lyrics went on, it was obviously about wishing for misfourtune on other people.
'I hope this helps to emphisize, I hope this helps to clarify.... I hope you die.'
He stopped dead in his tracks and his eyes bulged out of his skull. "What?!" He thought outloud.
"Nyahaha." Echoed through the halls. Cackling laugh. He knew that laught well enough-since he had to deal with it... everyday.
"Xanele-get out here..." He said.
Xanele waited a few minutes before she decided to pop out. "Hi, Lexy! What's up?" She squealed.
"... What in the hell are you playing?"
"Well-understanding that... you're an ancient from MY world... this is called an MP3 PLAYER." She smiled. "It plays music-without having to have actual INSTRUMENTS."
"Oh, quiet. I know what an MP3 player is... What I want to know is-what were you playing on your MP3 player..."
"Oooooooohhh! It's called 'I Hope You Die'!"
"...how lovely. Listen, if you're going to play a song-play one that's... more... normal."
"Okay. Sorry if I annoyed you!"
"Oh, it's okay." He said. Lexaeus was happy that she apologized. Maybe Xanele wasn't that bad after all. He picked up his Rubix cube and continued to solve it.
'Charlie, you look quite down, with your big fat eyes, and your big fat frown. The world doesn't have to be so grey!'
Lexaeus cocked an eyebrow. 'Wait, what?' He thought. "Um, Xanele..."
'All you have to do is-put a banana in your ear! (A banana in my ear?) Put a ripe banana right into your favorite ear!'
"Xanele-you're doing it again!" He yelled.
"Oh, but this song is so happy! Not to mention it has good humor."
"Says who?"
'It's true! (says who) So true. Once it's in your gloom will dissapear!'
"I'll ask again, number XIV... please-change it."
"Oh fine!"
The older nobody watched as the younger one scrolled through her many, many songs. She pressed the center button and waited for it to come on.
Lexaeus sighed in relief. 'Thank goodness. She's finished.'
'Oh, you touch my tra la la. Mmm, my ding ding dong. Oooh.*sigh* Oh, you touch my tra la la.'
The silent hero couldn't take it anymore-he snatched the small item from Xanele's hand and crushed it with his giant fist. "For the love of-can you just shut up!?"
"Psh't!" She spat. "That wont stop me." She ripped another MP3 player from her pocket and blasted it, again.
'The boxman, he's the boxman. He's the boxman. He's a box. He's a boxman.'
The voice playing from her MP3 player was thoroughly annoying and out of key.
Lexaeus summoned his weapon. "Xanele-I'll give you three seconds... One."
"Dude, I was just kidding!"
"Two..."
"Hey, hey-take it easy. I'm sorry-"
"One!"
Xanele screached and ran out of his way faster than a bullet. Mission two success. She had many other members to annoy-besides the supirior... who thought she was just an innocent kid. She had skipped through the halls and glared at any of the members she seemed to find.
-XALDIN-
Xanele continued to skip until she found Xaldin. He was taking apart a remote control for one of the TV's.
"Whatcha doing?!" Xanele yelled.
Xaldin put the discombobulated remote down and stared at her. "What do you want?" He asked, coldly.
"I'm just curious!!" She yelled. "My god! You are so mean!!"
"...I'm not mean-it's not like you would actually care anyway..."
"Well-you're being mean to me!"
Xaldin rolled his eyes and continued his taking apart of the remote control.
"So... what are you doing?"
"I'm trying to figure out why the remote wont work."
"...why wont it work?"
"Well, it doesn't change the channel or control the volume of the television." Xaldin said, continuing to take random objects from it. "I can't seem to figure out why..."
"So how old are you...?" Xanele asked randomly.
"...thirty.... six."
"I don't know if it's just because your old or what... but did you ever try... an invention called BATTERIES?!"
Xaldin stared at the wall, beaten by the 14 year old nobody. "So... I took this thing apart... for nothing?" He asked. "All it needed was batteries? Wait..." He paused. "I already tried that!! Ha! Ignorant!"
"...did you put them IN the right way? Were they even the RIGHT batteries?!"
"...damn it! No. You're right! Gaahh!" He said, defeated. "So + doesn't go with -? I thought opposites attract!"
"They do... stupid. They attract when their put in the right way."
"I hate you..."
"You can't hate! Haha! You're a noboddy!!! You have no heart-meanwhile you have no feelings even though scientific studies prove that feelings come from the BRAIN stem! Hahaa! Some scientist YOU are!"
"Shut up! Please, just leave me alone!"
"No booty calls! Nyahahahahahaa!"
He reached for her violently, She dodged his attacks. "You're a little brat! I don't know why Xemnas would ever hire you!" He summoned his six lances.
"Dude... I'm just a kid."
"You're 14... you're a teenager. You should know how to act to an adult."
Xanele sat on the floor and proceeded to cry. "I know, I'm a horrible person." She said. "Don't rub it in!" She said even louder.
Xaldin's mouth dropped open. 'Maybe she was right about the emotions thing...' He thought. "Xanele... I'm sorry." He walked up to her and offered to help her up.
Xanele smiled. She stood up and quickly kicked him where it hurt. "That's for being so damn rude!!" She yelled. Xanele zoomed out of the area, leaving Xaldin moaning in pain.
Axel walked into the area with a lemonade slushie and lifted an eye brow. "Are you okay?" He asked.
"That little demond just kicked me."
"Oh... okay." Axel said, walking away. "Good little demond girl, then." He whispered.
"Hey! Where are you going? Can't you help me or something?" Xaldin yelled.

[AsYrsGoBy]

Firstly, you should space things better.
Its difficult to read how you have it.

You need more description and actions to balance out the dialog. Watch your spelling and grammar.
How you structure things is a little off sometimes too

[Musical Muffin]

Alright. Thanks.
I don't have word so I have to try my best with the spelling.
And description's always been a problem with me.

I'm trying to improve.

[MasterofShadow]

TRAITOR!!!! YOU'RE IN OUR ORGANIZATION!!!! You will now receive the maxium punshiment...COOKIES!!!!!!
Lol. I'm bored. Good story though. Man, I'm hoping the XIV's doesn't up like Xanele.

[Blaze]

That would e the epitome of hilarity but the downfall of all the Kingdom Hearts Series.

Why is everyone in our RP starting to write their own stories? I thought we were a team.

[Musical Muffin]

lol. Nuu, I'm not a traitor.
But seriously-The whole Organization must hate Xemnas for hiring me. lol.
And I hope so too. I'm the worst, aren't I?

XD. Ah yes. Kurix-lol. We are a team. But seriously-I felt the need to post this up.
Bwahaha.

[Soraslittleangel]

Lol I love it....I DEMEND MORE....MORE...MORE!!!

[Elorah]

That was quite funny, although I sometimes got lost when there were extremely long walls of words. Perhaps it would be easier to read if it was properly spaced out.
I'm glad you're taking the criticism well, and I look forward to reading more. ^___^
hehe Im also glad that your 14th member isn't an all-perfect Mary-Sue. That happens so many times xD