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| Keyblade Wielder | I've been on this forum for a while now. Not as long as some of you old geezers, but long enough to understand most of the work that gets posted here. Most of it really is the same. Let's say that the average poster Sam writes a fanfiction and posts it up on the forum. Here is my critique of average poster Sam: Sam has an excellent grasp of grammar, though it is often used sloppily. His creativity shines through in an interesting and somewhat complex plot, supplemented by a romance or two. However, Sam pays absolutely no attention to the strength of his characters. CHARACTERS. This is what holds almost everyone on this forum back from breaking free of the mediocre zone. The characters are used as a vehicle for whatever the plot commands of them, nothing more. They have no...if you will...character. Ladies and gentlemen, it's time for a change. Welcome to the character building workshop! ...Well, it's actually going to be more of a guide at the end. But there's really far too much to say on the subject of building characters to put in a single post, and throwing all that out at once would ensure that nobody took the time to read it all. So I'm breaking it up into several bite size chunks for you guys. And oh yeah...there'll be homework. I totally, absolutely do NOT expect anybody to actually do it, but I'm putting it out there for the people who want practice with building characters. Most of the stuff won't take any more than ten minutes, and I'll critique anybody who shows it to me. So here's the game plan, which is subject to change if/when I remember something important. Lesson 1: What makes a good character Lesson 2: Character Analysis Lesson 3: How to construct a character Lesson 4: How to develop a character These will be posted as often as I write them, perhaps once a week or so. Lesson 1 will more than likely be up later today, as it's going to be very short. Lastly, I want to hold a signup. In reality, this means nothing. You can stop reading this whenever you like and not say a word to me, and you can pick it up and even do the assignments without signing up. But it gives me a general idea of how many people are interested in it. ROSTER aldrain Shadow Denizen Takushi Rena Frozen Fate -Arcana-X- 1-up salesman Jack London kazukifafner Last edited by giuocob; 07/23/08 at 06:03 PM. |
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| Ruler of Light Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Somewhere on this planet...
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Rep Power: 2 ![]() | This is cool. Can I assist, if you need it? |
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| Keyblade Wielder Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Well were ever i am its dark and i can here laughing Age: 13
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Rep Power: 1 ![]() | DUDE I AM SO IN!!!!!!!!!! AND can you read my fan story and see how it is its the re done 358/2 days fanstory theory i re did them cuz people wanted it in the same thread so ill take the class by the way. ![]() |
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| Sorrow burdens the heart Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: That dark void between the World of Dreams and the Realm of Reality, uncertain of which is which. Age: 15
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Rep Power: 2 ![]() | I fill out character sheets, but some more tips would be great. I'll be checking in again. |
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| Ruler of Light Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Somewhere on this planet...
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Rep Power: 2 ![]() | @ giuocob: By assistence, I meant like, if you have trouble explaining something, or if example are needed. Just think of me as a scout or reference book. lol. |
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| Warrior of Darkness Join Date: Jul 2008 Age: 17
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Rep Power: 1 ![]() | When making a character, just fill in a template: Name: Age: Gender: Personality: Bio: Etc: It's not that hard. =\ |
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| 二人の心が一人になる Join Date: May 2004 Location: トラヴァスタウン Age: 8
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| Warrior of Darkness Join Date: Jul 2008 Age: 17
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Rep Power: 1 ![]() | Nope, it really is that simple. People just like to complicate the matter. Character advancement is more of an evolution than anything. Like building a tower. We start with the basic foundations, then we expand upon them. |
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| Keyblade Wielder | Certainly. And 'character advancement', if I'm interpreting it correctly, will be one of the main points of this guide. |
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| Warrior of Darkness Join Date: Jul 2008 Age: 17
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Rep Power: 1 ![]() | Can't wait to read it. ; ) |
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| VOTE FOR HOKAGE | This seems like a great idea, giuocob. Sign me up, please. |
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| Twilight Knight Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: SEPHIROTH IS OWNED. FINALLY.
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Rep Power: 1 ![]() | -raises hand- I want to join! Sign me up! Cool that we're getting 'homework'. |
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| Organization Member Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: *Poot*
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Rep Power: 1 ![]() | looks pretty cool. Maybe it can make my fan-fics beter. Sign me up!!! |
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