Continue BbS game story.

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Ok hi everyone here's the continue of BbS game story. To read these two I suggest reading the first three.
Here's the link to the first three stories of BbS: My Addition----------- Click Here
Now on this web page it contains the last two stories. Ven Story and Trio + 1. Ven story will sorta be like Terra Story [length wise] scratch that it's becoming long. Trio + 1 will be rather long.
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Here's Ven's Story. His story continues where Aqua Story ended. Now Here's...
Ven's Story
Chapter 1
"Ahhhhh, let go of me! Aqua, Terra, your majesty help!" Screamed a rather short 18 year old boy. This boy was dressed in white and black jacket with matching sweatpants. On one arm he had armor on sorta like a robot hand but it was armor. The boy's name was Ven. Ven is soon to be a keyblade master if he can get his keyblade. He was with his sister, his king, and a friend/ siter's boyfriend before being dragged into a darkness portale. "Let me GO!" yelled Ven but this time with anger. Ven was in a super dark place the only thing around him was black, pitch black. He knew someone was holding his arms behind his back cause he can feel them. "Why don't you answer!?" Ven asked real angry like. "Cause if I let you go you might run away again." The person answered. "What- Who are you?" Ven asked. "You know me in your heart. You ran away once from your destiny this time I'm pulling you in with me." The voice answered. "I ment your name and what are you doing with me?" Ven asked. I'm your self consience and I need you to become darkness so I can become real. Right now Ven your a being of twilight. I want to become real! The only way I can be real is if you pick a side. The light for some reason won't accept you-" The voice was saying before Ven stopped him and Ven asked "What light won't accept me? Why? What's your name? If your my self conscense don't you have power to make me light?" "No, I don't. I to, like you, is a being of twilight. And you know my name." The voice said starting to laugh. "You created me! I was your best friend..." Ven started to think hard. He then got a flsh back in kindergarten. He rember his parents saying how he was suppose to have a twin but the twin left. He rember asking where. His parents saying in his heart. He then asked what was his name they said they were going to name him Sora but since he left they didn't get to name him. He rembers how when he went and took the letters he needed to spell Sora he grabbed an X. His teachers asking him what's he doing,and him saying spelling a name and they said their was only one name he coulld get out of those letters and it was Roxas. Ven then realized that his self conscience name was Roxas. After that day with the scrabble letter squares he started seeing a boy that looked like him. The boy said his name was Roxas. How though in third grade he came to conclusion that Roxas was an imagenary friend. Roxas disapeared. "Your Roxas my-" Ven paused. "Yes my name is Roxas but I'm not your twin your twin was born in a diffrent time and to a diffrent family. That's another reason why you can't be light cause your brother took all of your light. You can never waild a keyblade!" Roxas answered. "I can and I will!" Ven answered gaining the strength he needed to break free of Roxas grasp. "Now I might not be strong but be prepaired to feel pain." Ven said but ended up falling backwards. Ven kept falling and falling. Ven thought how long will he fall. He looked up and saw Roxas. Roxas was laughing. Ven fell into darkness!

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Try spacing between sentences, other than that it's okay. Hope to read more soon.

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Chapter 2
"Falling, Falling into Darkness... What will happen to me? Will I live?" Ven was saying to himself as he continued to fall deeper into darkness. He felt his body changed he saw all his friends and family go flowing in and out of hhis memory he knew once this was over he would lose all memories of being Ven. "Was it true what Roxas said about Sora?" Ven said to himself. Then Ven seemed like he stopped falling. he stood up. And took a step pidgeon's went flying in his face. He looked down there was a tile formation of a boy holding Terra's keyblade. 'Was this possibly Terra when he was a boy.' Ven thought that to himself then he realized he didn't lose the memory of Aqua, his parents, the king, and Terra. He was so happy but he felt something did happen. Ven closed his eyes all he saw was darkness. He opened them he then realized he became darkness! Would his friends accept him or would he fight him? "Ven! Do you know your pupose in life?" A voice asked. Ven turned around standing there was a man with long blonde hair he was wearing a lab coat. "Who are you?" Ven asked. "Answer my question, Ven. I'll then answer yours." the man said. Before Ven could answer the mans question he disapeared. "Ven! Go prove Roxas wrong and think of my question." A voice said. It was the mans voice. "Wait, where are you? How do I get out? Ven asked. "I can't help you. Let the light be your guide." The mans voice said. "But how can I? I'm darkness no-" Ven said when he started to realize he was alone. Ven looked at the ground below him. "It's Sora is my light. I must follow Sora. Me and Sora are connected as well as Roxas!" Ven said starting to laugh. "I am darkness, Sora is Light, and Roxas is Tiwlight. Sora isn't my twin were one person me, Sora, and Roxas. We're one person." Ven said he knew what his destiny was. "Well I can look at the good side they always say fight fire with firre well I'm fighting Darkness with Darkness." Ven said. Sudenly from the ground below stone stand rose. One had a sword, another had a staff, and the last had a sheild. "Well I need strength..." Walking over to the sword Ven said. He took the sword. The ground sudenly started to break under his feet. Ven fell again deeper but landed on his feet. Creatures started to appear. Ven knew what they were he did not know how but they were called heartless. Ones without a heart to call their own. Steeling other people's hearts, yet it will not be enough. Another creature appeared these were nobodys the shells of people who's hearts were stolen by the heartless. In Ven's head new moves to use with a sword. "Alright back up here comes my true power!" Ven started flying defeating all 20 creatures in 1 minute. "Their all gone, all defeated." Ven said looking at the tile below him this time Roxas was on it. A door appeared Ven's sword turned into a keyblade. His keyblade was red and black skin like feeling. On the end of his instead of looking like a true key their was a white wing. Ven turned aaround tto notice the man from before apear. "Way to go Ven. Now do you know your destiny?" The man said. Ven nodded and said "Yes, my destiny is to defeat the darkness and in return defeat mysef I can't let anything get in my way. I am a third of a being. My true being is Sora. Even know he is younger than me he's my original being. For us to be a being the being of light, twilight, and darkness must be together. That's the only way we can be whole. One being." Ven said confident thinking of that tile formation he then got flashs of his other two lives as if they were combining. "Hahaha, You three are splitting each others powers right now." The man said. "Since you follow through on what you said I will tell you my name. My name is Ansem. Most people call me Ansem the Wise. I study the hearts of people and of all worlds. I am not your current Ansem but your future Ansem. I have had expierence with all three of you. You right now. I am your bond. more so my daughter is your bond. My daughters name is Kari. She-" "Wait Kari. She was in that newspaper article. She washed up-" I know. I don't want her rembering me as her father. Not yet have you met her but you will soon." Ansem said then disapeared. "Wait!" Ven called out to Ansem. Ven himself started to feel weird as if Ansem was his father. "Wait!" Ven yelled out that was his father they died in an accident but it must have just been his mother who died. Kari was his little sister. Then all of a sudden Ven got all the memory he needed to know about the keyblade and his family. Facing the door again, Ven unlocked it and moved into the next room. There was two people. A man with red, black snake like skin. The other was "The man in the elevator!?" Ven said it was an old man who was in the elevator at the hotel with him and Aqua. Ven looked down this time the tile formation was of him! He looked up and knew that they were his enemy and ran torward them and started hitting them with great strength. It took Ven an hour but he defeated them. A blinding light then apeared around Ven. He sam that he was being transported back to the beach. He knew he had to be ready to fight and could not tell Aqua the truth, or find his little sister and tell the truth but he knew he would have to ask the king if he knew, but all he needed to worry about was what danger was he being transported to.

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Chapter 3
"Aqua, Ven, your majesty!" Ven called. He was back on the beach he had his keyblade armed and ready. "Ven!" called a young beutiful lady with blue hair she was sat up against a rock. Her name was Aqua. Aqua was obvious hurt and Ven went to go over to her but she called to him and said "No Ven! Help the king and Terra." Ven turned around and saaw a small mouse fighting and a tall muscular man fighting against a big dark creature. The mouse name was Mickey. He was the king. The man's name was Terra. "Ven help us!" both the king and Mickey called to him. "I'm on my way." Ven said turning around to looked at his injured sister. She smiled to him. "Terra your majest get out of the way!" Ven said standing with the end of his keyblade facing the dark creature. Powering up his keyblade Ven stood perfectly still putting his power into it. "Fight Darkness with Darkness!!" Ven yelled and unleashed the power that was stored into the keyblade at the creature. Ven defeated it. He defeated the creature! Ven was so proud. Terra looked up at the old sage on the cliff he had a smile on his face and disapeared.Terra then looked at Ven. "Your power it's darkness." Terra said seeming unpleased. "Ven said "Yes, I can change my ways if I try." "No Ven. Once darkness theirs no way to go back." Terra said. Terra looked at Aqua who was gettleng up and then at the king with an usure yet sad face on. "Ven, you can't come with us." Terra said making his final decision. "I know somewhere where you'll be wanted we'll take you there. Maleficent will take care of you like a son to her." Ven surprised and kinda mad looked at him then the ground. "Then erase me..." "Ven, no your powers might be dar but your heart is good." Aqua said. "Terra we must take him he's a keyblade welder chosen by the keyblade." The king said. Terra unsure what to do finally made his decision. "We need to check everyworld and make sure they're safe. While we do that we will put Ven under Maleficents care. I know she will take him. Before we pick up Ven one last time we will come here and seal this world of darkness. Then we will get Ven. There will be only one world without a seal. Sunset Horizon. That is where we will fight the darkness. I'm hopping though we can get at least ten keyblade welder from every world. We will fight there. After the battle is over we will do as Ven wishs. If he choses to be erase we will erase him if he does not then we will not but if he does not want to be erased we will give him to Maleficent to care for." "Well-" Aqua started to say but the king finished her sentence. "We will have to follow your plans. I think they will work." The king looked at Aqua and winked. Ven looked up from the sand and said "Fine take me to Maleficent."
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Ven will go to Maleficents castle but during all that Terra, Mickey, and Aqua will go to every world and make sure they are secure. They will go to all the world's but Mount Olympia.

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Originally Posted by AntiSora92

Try spacing between sentences, other than that it's okay. Hope to read more soon.

Thank You and more is coming your way. Do to me trying to reach a due date I am typing them to fast to double space. I'm hoping to have the stories done Sun. If I have any time after that I will go back through and double space them.

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Chapter 4
Ven was sitting rather quite in the longe on the gumi ship The king came in. "Terra driving, your sister's with him." The king said and continue to say "Ven their is something on your mind, right?" Asking as if he knew. "I've talked with ansem the wise already. The one from the future. He was in my room. So who would have thought. Yen Sid was right after all. He said that I would meet you three one day and he would meet the final combination..." Mickey said. "Yes that's on my mind I know I am darkness. I should fight on the other side but-" Ven was saying. "Oh, welp for you to be with us and to defeat that creature you must have some light in you. Yen Sid like Terra can see in the future as well. He said that Terra will come back to you because while you two become seperated he will soon come to relize he enjoys you being around. Oh, and about Kari she'll learn the truth one day and you and her well I guess her and Sora will raise a beutiful younng family. You should be proud of that. So don't tell her now or Kari and Sora will never fall in true love and raise that beutiful family." The king said. Ven looked at him and smiled. Let's go back upstairs we should almost be at Radiant Garden. "Your Majesty," "Hmmmm." "what do you think of Maleficent? Do you think she'll do something to me that will make me join the other side." Afraid that he would ask that, the king walked up to him pointed at Ven's heart and said "You have friends who are in there along with enemies in there but listen to your friends and follow your heart. Everything will be fine." Ven smiled and the two of them headed up stairs to join the others.

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Pretty interesting so far, so will there be any romantic feelings between Terra, Ven and Aqua??

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Chapter 5
"We're here. I will take him you two stay here." said Terra Terra stood up and looked at Ven. Ven looked at him and knoded and got up. Walking past his sister his sister went to stop him but the king stopped her. Stepping out of the gumi ship Ven saw the big castle Maleficent lived in. "We don't have to walk to far. We are in the Crystal Fissure. Terra bagan to ran and grabbed on to Ven's arm to make sure he would not escape. When they got to the cliff that over looks the castle Maleficent was already there. "Maleficent! I bring you this boy who weilds the darkness. He's yours..." Maleficent turned around and looked at him. She was a tall women with erie green skin. A crow sat on her shoulder. In her hand Maleficent held a Magical darkness staff. Terra looked at Ven and said "Sorry but you are the darknness." Terra again looking at Maleficent saying "Your crow is getting old and might die soon. This boy can be your new one. For forever more." "What!?" Ven saying looking at Terra. The face Ven saw was obviously no joke. "Forever?" Maleficent asked. "Yes." Terra said to answer her question. An evil smile went across her face when she looked at Ven. "Ven, hmmmmmmm. Heartless take this boy to the dungeon I will get our guest opinion on what to do with him." Heartless apeared all around Ven and Terra. Terra pushed Ven to one of the heartless and the heartless got they're grasp on him. "Terra, You'll miss me you know it! Terra the next time I see you, you can say your last wishes." Ven was yelling at Terra but then said to him calmly and nicely "Take care of my sister. Aqua can be fragile at times." Ven was pulled into the dark portale which led to the dungeon. He looked at Maleficent uncertain of her and let himself go with the heartless.

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It's pretty good Star Light, although you're going pretty quickly.



Chapter 1

"Ahhhhh, let go of me! Aqua, Terra, your majesty help!" Screamed a rather short 18 year old boy.
This boy was dressed in white and black jacket with matching sweatpants. On one arm he had armor on sorta like a robot hand but it was armor. The boy's name was Ven. Ven is soon to be a keyblade master if he can get his keyblade. He was with his sister, his king, and a friend/ siter's boyfriend before being dragged into a darkness portale.

"Let me GO!" yelled Ven but this time with anger. Ven was in a super dark place the only thing around him was black, pitch black. He knew someone was holding his arms behind his back cause he can feel them. "Why don't you answer!?" Ven asked real angry like. "Cause if I let you go you might run away again."

The person answered. "What- Who are you?"

Ven asked. "You know me in your heart. You ran away once from your destiny this time I'm pulling you in with me."

The voice answered. "I ment your name and what are you doing with me?"
Ven asked. I'm your self consience and I need you to become darkness so I can become real. Right now Ven your a being of twilight. I want to become real! The only way I can be real is if you pick a side. The light for some reason won't accept you-"
The voice was saying before Ven stopped him and Ven asked "What light won't accept me? Why? What's your name? If your my self conscense don't you have power to make me light?"

"No, I don't. I to, like you, is a being of twilight. And you know my name." The voice said starting to laugh. "You created me! I was your best friend..."

Ven started to think hard. He then got a flsh back in kindergarten. He rember his parents saying how he was suppose to have a twin but the twin left. He rember asking where. His parents saying in his heart. He then asked what was his name they said they were going to name him Sora but since he left they didn't get to name him.

He remebers how when he went and took the letters he needed to spell Sora he grabbed an X. His teachers asking him what's he doing,and him saying spelling a name and they said their was only one name he coulld get out of those letters and it was Roxas. Ven then realized that his self conscience name was Roxas. After that day with the scrabble letter squares he started seeing a boy that looked like him.

The boy said his name was Roxas. How though in third grade he came to conclusion that Roxas was an imagenary friend. Roxas disapeared.

"Your Roxas my-" Ven paused.

"Yes my name is Roxas but I'm not your twin your twin was born in a diffrent time and to a diffrent family. That's another reason why you can't be light cause your brother took all of your light. You can never waild a keyblade!" Roxas answered.

"I can and I will!" Ven answered gaining the strength he needed to break free of Roxas grasp. "Now I might not be strong but be prepaired to feel pain." Ven said but ended up falling backwards. Ven kept falling and falling. Ven thought how long will he fall. He looked up and saw Roxas. Roxas was laughing. Ven fell into darkness!
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Spaced like that? Alright, I like your story

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Thanks again, and yes they will soon have emotions for each other. Real soon. So did you read the other three stories. It helps to read them.

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Chapter 6
Ven was sitting on the dungeon floor he had to shre it with skelton bones. His legs were stretched out in front of him and spread apart from each other. His hands were in the middle of them his arms resting on his thighs. He had his head down and was staring at the floor. "Ahhhh poor dear", he turned around to fine a red fairy in the cell behind his. "You ok dear?" The red fairy asked. "Who are you?" Ven asked. "My name is Flora. I work for Yen Sid but when I went to buy some fabric Maleficent kidnapped me." She said. "Yen Sid!? The Yen Sid as in the king's teacher Yen Sid!? Hi, I'm Ven." Ven said. "Yes and I know." Flora said. The two of them heard something so they went back to the way they were. "Ahhhhh Ansem this is the boy I was talking about." He heard Maleficent say. Ven began to wonder could this be 'Ansem the Wise, Ansem!?' The Ansem she was talking about spoke "Yes I can smell and taste him. He defanetly has Darkness in him. He also has light, too, but more darkness." Ven knew it was not the Anxem that he knew. He then saw they're feet they were standing in front of his jail. "Get up boy, I know your awake or alive." Ansem said. Ven raised his head and looked at him. Ven could not believe his eyes! It was the man he faced in the darkness. The same black, red snake like skin covering his whole body. "I say turn him into your crow or a hearrtless." Ansem said. "I was thinking more along the lines of being my eternal son." Maleficent said. "You might be right though, a crow will work. Terra was right about my current crow getting old. Bring him to my room, Ansem." Maleficent said. She left. Ansem starring at the boy bent down in his jail cell and made sure he had his grasp on the boy. He asked while undoing the chains "What's your name, boy?" Ven did not answer. "What's your name!?" Ansem started to yell and pinched his arm harder and jerked him up quickly. "Owww. The name Ven." Ven answered in pain talking like he was saying his last words. "Well Ven your about to become a crow. You should learn how squall like one. Hahahahahaha, and learn how to fly." Ansem said. Ven could tell he wasn't joking. Ven started to think what he said about being able to smell and taste darkness in people. Ven, too, seem to notice how dark Ansem and Maleficent was. He did notice though how much more darker Ansem was.

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I'll take the time to read them, by the way. A little hint of advice but be to rename the thread (I don't know if you can honestly) from Continue BBS game story to something like "Birth by Sleep: Kingdamu Hatsu or something else or you're choosing

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Chapter 7
Ven felt inside eating away at his stomach. He didn't want to be a crow for the rest of his life. "We're here, Ven. Have fun being a crow." Ansem said while shoving the boy into Maleficent's room and holdin the door shut so he could not escape. Ven started pushing on the door to get it to open but Ansem was holding it shut. "Let me out, let me out!" Ven scream while pushing on the door. "Ven it won't be to bad. Terra was a crow." Maleficent said stab=nding behind him already to go. "What, Terra would fight you." Ven said. "Well he didn't I promise him his parents. They died when he was 15." Maleficent said. "Wait..." Ven started to wonder. "If I turn into a crow you must bring my parents to life. I'll be your crow for eternity even in after life." Ven said. "Hahahahaha, I got you from Terra." Maleficent said and continue "You are my slave given to me through a bargain. You don't have a choice Ven." Then standing on Maleficent balcony Terra was standing there. Out of view of Maleficent but in full view of Ven's. He put his fingure to his mouth to be quite and pointed up. Ven glanced upward and there in the air vent was Aqua and the king. Ven looked back at Terra. Terra summoned his keyblade and used the move reflega. Ven got what he was saying. He said to reflect her spell. Maleficent spoke again "Since last time my spell was to weak against Terra I'm making the spell a whole lot stronger. By the power of Darkness..." Ven was ready. "Turn this boy into a crow!" The bolt came and Ven Took his keyblade and is holding it back. He got it away from it but he used to much power and fell backward. He fell into a deep slumper. The very last thing he saw was Aqua barracading the door. The king putting a sleep spell on Maleficent and Terra picking him up. The End

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Ven's story is over so it times for the best one yet. Trio + 1. Trio stands for Aqua, Ven, and Terra and the plus 1 is the King. This where the big war is in. This one will be very long. So here's...
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Trio + 1
"Aqua, your majesty come on I have Ven. Your Majesty, you freeded Flora right." Terra shouted to his team. "How's Ven?" Aqua asked concerned for her little brother. "He's out cold..." Terra said frowning. "Come on, Hurry!" the king said to them Aqua and Terra looked at each other and knodded. They then looked at Ven. They went out the balcany and jumped to the cliff. "We have to get to the
Gum-" Terra paused standing in front of them was a red, black snake like skinned man. "Well, Ven's not a crow, hmmmmm. already introduced myself to him now let me intr-" The man was saying but noticed the king. "You!" Terra got an angry face on and said "How do you know him, who are you!?" Terra asked still holding Ven. the man pushed Aqua and the king back and created a dark wall. Terra could no longer see Aqua or the king. They could not see him, or hear them. "It is I, Ansem, the seeker of darkness. Surrender Ven at once." Ansem said. "Never, I might fight with Ven and he might posses the power of darkness..." Terra was saying and looked at en he was up. "but I like this bone head kid." Ven's eyes widen and he jumped off Terra and summoned his Keyblade. "Thanks Terra..." Ven was saying "and hey what do mean boneheead." Ven said with dignaty and smiling at Terra. "Ansem, whats your real name!?" Ven asked real angry. "We will meet again..." "No we won't!!" Ven ran straight at him and went to swing but he disapeared. "Owww." Ven fell flat on his face. The dark wall collapsed and the king and Aqua ran in. "Ven!" Aqua running up to him and started hugging him. "I'm never letting you go." Aqua said starting to cry. "I'm fine. I'm not a crow. Now can you get off me." saying pushing his sister off so he can sit up then he went and hugged her. "I have so much stuff I need to tell you about our family that I found out from Dad." Ven said himself starting to cry. the king smiled at Ven and looked at Terra and asked "Did you two win?" Terra shook his head no. "Ven oh dear, your not a crow!" someone called. Ven felt someone hugging him he looked. "Flora your ok!" Ven said cheerfully. "Yes thanks to your friends." Flora said. "Are you going back to Yen Sid?" Ven asked. "No, I'm staying with you till your adventure's over." Flora said. Ven smiled at her and smiled at all his friends. "We should probaly head to the gumi ship. We didn't check Mount Olympia, yet." Terra said. Everybody knodded and started heading torward the Gumi Ship.

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Chapter 2
"Is everyone ready we're gonna go warp speed." The king said to everyine once settled in the gumi ship. "Go ahead we're ready." Everyone answered the king. "Ok" The king said. "Ok were free to move about." Terra said to everyone. "I'm going down to my room." Ven said looking at Aqua. "Me, too." Aqua said. They went down together but instead of going to eachs room they went to Ven's. "Oh Ven do you ever clean your room?" Aqua asked in disgust. Ven looked around. "It is clean." Ven said honestly even know it was a pigstye. Aqua sat on Ven's bed and Ven sat next to her. "I ran into dad in the darkness. He said that he is alive that the one who visited was from the future and the one for this time is alive. Remeber that guy we saw in the elevator reading that article in the newspaper?" "Yeah, he's a sage for the darkness." "Well in the newspaper that girl is our little sister." "What mom and dad would never have a baby behind our back! How could you say that!" "Well mom didn't dad and light itself did. Dad thought that we thought which was true thought that he was dead, but he's not. He's alive. He feels gulty because he did a certain research that started this war!" "Ven, why would he think that if he were alive!?" "Because rember the king saying this war was started by a man who did research on hearts of people and the worl-" "Wait, Ven your saying that, that man is our-" "Yes, Ansem the Wise!" "But that man at name was Ans-" "Thats not our dad it's an imposter! Our dad is out there we just have to find him." Ven finally said standing up and walked over to the window and looked out on Radiant Garden get smaller and smaller.
"Ven, This war do you think he might be a keyblade welder?" Aqua asked. Ven shrugged his shoulders. "Let's go to the library we might find something there about him." Neither Ven nor Aqua said anything but the King! "Your majesty, do you know where Ansem the Wise is?" Aqua asked. "Yes, he lived it that other big castle in Radiant Garden." The king said. "Friends of mine are the ones going to all the worlds to get the keybladers. I'll call and ask them if they'll pay a visit to him." The King said. "Who?" Aqua asked. Her being a servant she knew everyone in the castle. "Donald and Goofy" The king said "They will all be at Destiny Island, once they gathered enough keybladers." He finished. "We're coming up on Mount Olmpia" Ven said still standing over at the window. "Let's head upstairs." Aqua said. They all headed upstairs.