Keyblade Wielders

[Soraslittleangel]

Hey guys, This is my first attempt for a fan fic. With an extra charcter. I have turned it into a RPG but so far no one has subscribed so i am going to turn it into a fanfic. I hope you will all like it and send me your thoughts on the story.

Charpter 1:Introduction

It was a typical school day, that was started by a typical sunny morning in Twilight Town. Many teens woke up to the sound of there alarm clock at 7:00am. Sora, Riku and Kairi walked down the street together to meet up with a few other friends. Roxas, Namine and a another girl named Sakiyo. As they arived at the school gates they all decided to meet at the cafeteria at lunch brake. They all split up into groups of two and walked to there classes. Sora and Kairi to maths, Namine and Riku to English and Sakiyo and Roxas to music. In maths Sora was extremly bored and started to pass notes to his un-confessed love, Kairi. They continued doing so untill the teacher caught them doing it and got them seperated. In English, Riku and Namine were working on a project. Although they got nothing done in the period they enjoyed laughing with each other and mucking around. In the second floor hallway all you could hear was a beautiful angelic voice in a magical duet with soft strums from a guitar. Sakiyo and Roxas were working on their musical composition project. The bell went for second period and the halls were full with young teens with books and bags, heading to there lockers on the side walls of the hall. The group all had lockers next to each other. The three girls, Namine, Kairi and Sakiyo all met together at the lockers.

'Hey, How was class?' asked Namine as she walked towards Kairi and Sakiyo.

'Alright. Sora and I got seperated after Mrs. Hardly caught Sora and I passing notes. She had that look on her face again. You know, the one where her left eye twitches. It was scary.' the girls laughed and opened their lockers simultaneously.

'Well Sakiyo, How was your music class with Roxas?'Namine asked as her and Kairi giggled.

'It was nothing i swear. It was the same as anyother class.' Sakiyo tried to hide face her into her locker.

'Yes. Were both quite sure it was nothing.' smiled the girls as they skipped off to their next class.
Sakiyo sighed, closed her locker door and leaned her back against it.

Sakiyo met Roxas on summer brake when she first moved to Twilight Town and most importantly to Twilight High. Roxas was always happy to be with her no matter what plans were. And Sakiyo was the same. Before the boys could find their way back to the lockers she wondered off to her next class with Namine and Kairi. Once again another meeting was assembled at the lockers. But this time by the males of the group.

'Sora. Roxas.' yelled Riku from down the hall. 'Sora. Heard you got in trouble with Mrs. Hardly. What did you do?' asked Riku as he gave Sora a hi-five.

'Passing notes.' he said with a huge grin on his face.

'Wow. Playing with fire. Never knew you had the guts Sora.' the group laughed at Roxas remark and then soon drew their attention to Riku.

'Riku...' said Sora. 'What did you do?'

What do you mean? What did i do?'

'Well with Namine of coruse.' Roxas voiced his opinon on the matter.

'Nothing we just did our project.' he said as he slammed his locker shut and stomped off to his next class. Roxas and Sora both looked at each other, closed their lockers and ran after him.

*

'Class. I want your Science homework on my desk immediately.'

The girls got out of there chairs and slowly walked towards Mr.Newlberry's desk.

'Did you do question 8?' wishpered Namine to kairi and Sakiyo.

'Yes.' they said together.

'Why would you ask? You always do your homework.' Kairi had a serious look on her face while Sakiyo blocked Mr. Newlberry's veiw.

'Well last night I tried to solve the problems in all ways possible. But it never came out right.' Namine was almost in tears.

'Quick take mine write it down.' Sakiyo said as she walked over to distract Mr. Newlberry.

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Sorry guys but my brother wants to go on the computer i will finish the first charpter next time i am on the computer. Dont forget to leave your comments.

[Soraslittleangel]

I'm back. and I have the second half to charpter one. I hope you are all liking it so far.

Charpter One:Introduction Part 2

'Sakiyo have you got your homework?' Sakiyo was walking towards Mr. Newlberry.

'Oh...I...ummm...forgot it' Sakiyo was scared. The last time she "forgot" her homework, she got a detetion for a week. But this time she was helping a friend. Would Mr. Newlberry understand? Mr.Newlberry just turned around to watch the others bring their homework. Whoa. That was close. Sakiyo said to herself.

'No i can't do it!'

'Why can't you do it?'

'Because its cheating.' Namine was starting to feel the pressure. Namine was very timid and shy. She did not want Mr. Newlberry or any teacher to yell at her. She felt as if the walls were closing in on her. Like her life was soon going to end.

'Namine! Don't worry about, he didnt care that I said I forgot mine. I am sure he wouldn't care if you missed out on one question.' said Sakiyo as she quicky walked towards the troubled girl.

'Really?' Namine was huffing and puffing.

'Yes!'

So Sakiyo walked with Namine to put both their homework on the desk.

'I thought you forgot your homework?' Mr. Newlberry sure the two girls walking to his desk. Namine was scared. She tried to turn around but Sakiyo held her back.

'I just found it. In my bag Mr. Newlberry.' Sakiyo was scared as well. Sakiyo, Namine and Kairi all got back to their seats. Mr. Newlberry started his lecture again. 'A Compound is two elements together...' his lecture went on and on.

'Man I can't wait for Gym.' Kairi loved gym and all of us girls loved our teacher. He was so nice and laid back.

*

In wood works, the boys, of course, were mucking around. The teacher was only rarly in there when the class did practical lessons. He was only there for the explanations on what to do. Well now because the teacher was out of class, both Sora and Roxas got their keyblades out. The kingdom key was Sora's, and for some reason an exact dupilcate of the Kingdom Key was Roxas. Although they knew that Roxas is Sora's nobody. It just didn't explain the duplicate keyblades.

'Hey guys put them away.' said Riku while twirling the Fenrir Keyblade on one of his fingers.

'Riku!'Sora looked upset. 'Come on. It's only to cut wood.'

'Yeah. It would also sharpen them.' added Roxas.

'And you always want us to keep our keyblades in good condition.'Sora tried so hard to persuade Riku. But he didn't give in.

'You guys played that trick on me last class. I'm not going to fall for it this time.' Riku had a rather distinktive smile.

'It was a few other classes before that aswell.' said Sora under his breath.

Riku now had an angry look on his face, walked over to Sora and began to give him noggies on top of his head.

'Ouch that hurts.' laughed Riku and Sora. Riku slightly noticed Roxas laughing so hard that it was a possibility that he could wet his pants.

'What are you laughing about?' Riku then went to Roxas and did the same thing. It was all part of harmless fun to them. Before they met Roxas, Namine and Sakiyo, Riku and Sora always had play fights on the shores of Destiny Island.

'Hey i have an idea!' Sora jumped out of his chair.

'Lets take the girls to Destiny Island.' Sora was exsited at his suggustion. Riku had a funny look on his face like he was looking into the not so distant futrue. 'Oh and Roxas.' Sora laughed

'Yeah we should do it. Roxas, Namine or Sakiyo have never been.' Riku was happy for the suggustion. He wanted a reason to show Namine the island and now he got it. ' And Since we moved here we havn't been there for ages.'

'Alright. We will do it this afternoon.' Sora was excited. The boys finally put their heads down and started to work.

Charpter End
The next Charpter will be called Lunch meetings. I hope to hear your comments soon cya.

[-Arcana-X-]

Sounds like a good story. I will comment on the first chapter.
Grammer and Punctuation.
When you start your quotes, you should put " not '.
After quotes the first letter of the word isn't capitalized. I'm ok about that since Word automatically does that for me.
The word 'tipical' of the first chapter is spelled wrong. It is typical
The word coruse is spelled wrong. It is course
I thought I read 'Maths'. I'm assuming it's right.
I see some 'I's aren't capitalized.

Grammer is especially important to writing and reading a story. The reader cannot understand the story then.

For the plotline, it seems pretty good. Expand more on setting and character.
WOOT!

[Soraslittleangel]

Thanxs i will fix those problems up for you. Thanxs for the tips. Highly appreciated

[Soraslittleangel]

Lol im pretty quick in posting these lolz have fun.

Charpter 2: Lunch Meeting

In the school cafeteria, Riku and Sora were first to arrive for food. They both lined up to get the food they had been waiting all morning for. The girls got there shortly after and went to sit down at a table close to the line. Seating arrangments were normal Roxas and Sakiyo had one side and Riku, Namine, Sora and Kairi had the other. It just turned out that way.

'Hey Sakiyo.' yelled Roxas as he just joined the line.

'Hey! I'll be right back.' Sakiyo got out of her chair and jogged over to Roxas.

'No just take your time.' Namine laughed, turned to kairi and looked at the two boys coming towards them.

'Hey guys.' they said together.

'Hey we have a plan.' Sora and Riku sat down and started to tell the girls the plan.


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'Hey, how was class?' Sakiyo was happy to see Roxas.

'Alright. Just mucking around. How about you?'

'As always, a pop quiz.'

'I hope you did well.' the conversation started to get awkward.

'I did.' they walked a few steeps to catch up to the line.

'Urrr....Sora and Riku are going to take us to Destiny Island. Its where they used to live with kairi.'

'Really? I can't wait.'

The pair got their lunches and went over to the table.


*

'So it's a plan. Yeah?'

'Whats going on?' Sakiyo said smiling as she joined the group.

'Has Roxas told you?' asked Namine.

'I think so. Was it about going to Destiny Island.'

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Sorry guys my brother wants to go on the computer again and + my minds gone sorta blank. I think im going to change the start of charpter 2 next time sorry about always having to stop. Thanxs cyas