The Darkness Within

[rikus_darkness]

My first fanfic yay! I thought this up at my bus stop it might not be good, but it's mine.
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Chapter 1: The Beginning of the End.

20 years after the events of KH2, one man is still at Sunset Horizons. Forced against his will there, he is fighting himself. That person is Sora.
"Get out of my heart!!!" he cried. "Never." A reply came."Not as long as you weild the keyblade, I shall never leave you."
"Xehanort!!!!" Sora cried as he slashed thin air. "Leave me!!!"
"I just told you, not as long as you weild the keyblade." Xehanort replied.
"I'll never give it up, i'll kill you for what you did!" Sora was near the point of death after the 5 years he spent here. "I'll never give it up, not as long as there is darkness in my heart! It is the only way to get them back!" Images of Riku, Kairi, Donald, Goofy, and Mickey flashed through his mind. They were all either dead, or stuck in Xehanort's darkness untill he was defeated.
"You still belive that they are alive? Ha!' Xehanort replied. "And please, call me X now. It's what I'm known as by the other dark beings in your heart."
"Shut up!!!"
"So, if you really want to save your friends, if they can be saved, I will let you go from here, so you can attempt to save them." The barrior around S.H. vanished, as Sora ran out, with the immpossible feat of darkness in his heart, to banish it, and get his friends back.
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So thats it for now, tell me what you think, and for those people who put negative comments about me everywhere, save it for a PM for the mods. I know my chapters are short, but it is my first fanfic, and im trying to be like one of my fave authors, Margaret Peterson Haddix.

[rikus_darkness]

Chapter 2!
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Chapter 2: The Story

While Sora is exiting Sunset Horizons, X is in Sora's heart, which has taken up the shape of a dark, evil, Traverse Town. Every dark being who Sora was ever defeated goes into this "world" and can cause damage to it. Every monster's heart gets bound to his own when the heart vanishes after a heartless is slain. Kingdom Hearts is made out of something else, which X is trying to figure out. Part of what it is was to do with Sora, his friends, and the keyblade.
"Curses! Why can't I find out what it is!?! I thought for sure capturing them would help, but it's not doing anything!" X slamed his fist into the keyboard he was working with. "I should at least be close to finding something out!"
One of X's most loyal shadows came up to him. "Um, boss, how did we find this out in the first place? I forgot."
"Hmph." X smiled. His shadows are imbeciles, but helpful. "You see, when we came across Sora's memories here, after we came into being, we looked at Kingdom Hearts, only to find out that it wasn't made out of what we thought it was. When we dived into it, and took a sample, we put it into the computer you see here, only to find that it couldn't identify it. The computer did say that the keyblade holds some of this power, and Sora is the only one with a decent keyblade, so we kidnapped his friends to get him to give it up. You know. As a ransom. Where he is going, he will have to give it up, for he is headed for the Substantious Chasam!"
"Wow boss, you do have this thought out." The shadow replied.
"Of course I do you imbecile!" X snapped
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Thats it for now!