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Old 05/29/08, 04:05 AM   #1
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Default Chronicles of Narnia: A new beginning

Hey guys saw the chronicles of Narnia and read some of the books-- SPOILER ALERT! ok don't read this next part if u don't want to see what happens in the last book but u won't understand my story lol so ill let u decide from here------

.....this is what happened after the last book-which i didnt read- but basically what happened in the last book is that peter edmund and lucy and their cusin estuace and jill pole all die in this train crash---however they live in heaven or aslans country and there is a new narnia....and susan still alive is no longer a friend of narnia

....well thats all the important facts you need to know before you read this! KK.........

1939, London- prologue part 1

Susan Awoke. She was thinking about her brothers and her sister. It was three years since they died. But she wasn't even sure if they were dead.... No bodies were found in the train accident where they were thought to be dead. Were they in Narnia? she thought. No that was just a stupid little game they played. "where did the go" Susan said outloud as she elevated herself from her pillow. Were they looking for that place that didnt exist?

"Whats wrong?" Henry Susans boyfriend asked his head still on his pillow.

"its nothing" Susan said shaking her head.

"No" Henry elevated himself. "its something you are thinking about your brothers and your sister again. He said sounding annoyed.

"Yes" she said equally annoyed. "so what-"

Henry cut her off. "Why cant you tell me your feelings?"

Susan became depressed. "i just need time"

Henry got up from the bed. "so Ive heard"

"why cant you understa-"

Henry cut her off again, his voice growing more anry. " I do understand Susan" He turned looking at her. "your depressed you don't sleep you barely eat, and your becoming more difficult"

"difficult?" she said in her pist off tone. "difficult?" she said again. "im sorry i didnt know that caring for my family who i dont even know if their dead was difficult" she glared into henry's eyes. They stared at each other for a minute.

"i dont think this is going to work" Henry finally said.

Susan looked down. She was still pissed. "then leave"

"you gave me no choice" He started to walk away.

"I gave you the chance to wait for me"

Henry stopped and looked back. "you had long enough, Im not waiting anymore" Then he left.

Susan wanted to cry... She liked Henry but she knew he didnt care for her not like the way she once felt with the first boy that she kissed....Caspian. Susan got up the sheets covering her and walked by the big window looking over all of London. She looked out the window looking at the north star. She wanted her brothers and sister. and she wanted.... love but not with anyone with him... but he was long gone she thought. Was he even real? she thought. No she reminded herself he was imaginary. But did that even matter anymore? she felt so alone like she was locked inside a cage. She just wished she could see them all again like the last time she was...there.

"it was a stupid little game" she said out loud.

Then she started to cry. She looked up at the north star. "even if it was just a stupid little game I wish I could see my family again- there in Narnia."

Susan colapsed by the window crying. She fell asleep looking out the window

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Old 05/29/08, 04:14 AM   #2
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Interesting read, though you might want to warn folks of the epic spoilers from the books.

I'll look forward to more. :D
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Old 05/29/08, 04:20 AM   #3
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thanks! and ur right i should warn
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Old 05/30/08, 03:15 AM   #4
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Amazing fan fic! Kairy, like always! More!
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