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| Banned | ... I really cannot think of a name. So this was just something that ran into my head after five seconds of creative thinking. It's a phase. Pt. 1 Followers of a secondhand religion Checkered crosses running through Outlined in a haze of colors, Some thoughts are so new. Red rimmed eyes, stitched shut Too much of a good thing? Black tears run down now, Menagerie of red, purple and green. Then you lift a fist Hundreds, then thousands follow Never pay homage to the murderer One day their pride will be swallowed. Concious thinking now reigns But not for long, certainly Minds must weep once again Victims' lives never a fee They take no action No thinking is needed Throw the innocents in jail, Common sense goes unheeded. Scratch yourself out of life, Catch the sun when it falls Glazed eyes wide open; White flecked faces of porcelin dolls. Pt. 2 Never too much, No need to wait Crystals dance forever Now it's far too late. Never too much, No need to lie Six feet under now, Any tears left to cry? Never too much, No need to die Time to apologize, Hold in your sigh. Never too much, Never too late Do you still not see? Shining crystals don't satiate. Never too much, Never to live again Meet your murderer, For your life he ate. Interperate what you will from it; there's some of a meaning behind every line. Last edited by Miss Murder; 05/09/08 at 02:24 PM. |
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| Consul Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: provoking people into discussions. Age: 18
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Rep Power: 4 ![]() | <3 Nice poem. Didn't understand a word of the first part, loved the second part. Need to read it another time, I guess. Second part could be called 'Never too much', although its a bit corny. =P Don't know about part 1. Also, you misspelled 'purple' in the first part. It states 'puple'. All togheter, nice poem. ^^ |
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