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Old 05/06/08, 11:26 PM   #1
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My FF Fanfic is sucking noodles with my writer's block and I have the desire to do something of seven parts (very small number for a fanfic I suppose). But I have faith in the idea. Here's the Introduction.
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~The Introduction~
/Sessions to Accost the End\

My journey to the end
from the darkness to deep to comprehend.
Blood has left alone,
on the barren world given to roam.
"I shed the blood of the innocent,
leaving few to vent."

I can't provide lost protection,
this is an immortal session.
My wings have come back,
wishing I obtained what we had.
Losing trust in the light,
the session concludes at the wake of night.
I pray on shattered knees,
"What does a world want from me?"

Picking up where my life went,
letting go of hell that's been bent.
So many times forgetting,
time for the opposite of remembering.
Darkness is unable to cry,
in the battle we do not fight.

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The initial pattern is a poem then a story. I'll post the Introduction's story post after at least 1 or 2 comments.
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Old 05/07/08, 02:16 AM   #2
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Sounds like a pretty good story, I'll willing to read the first chapter once you post it soon
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Old 05/07/08, 04:25 AM   #3
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Nice poem.

Love the title of this thread as well as the introduction. <3
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