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Old 05/29/08, 03:30 AM   #46
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thanks anti! always good reviews
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Old 05/29/08, 03:33 AM   #47
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I'm expecting more soon in both of your fan fics, I might post another fic of mines soon.
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Old 05/29/08, 03:36 AM   #48
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cool! send me a link so i can read it...and ill definatly post more in both
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Old 05/29/08, 03:39 AM   #49
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Well one of mines is in fanfiction. net Kingdom Hearts: A Tale of a Nobody and another one is a FF influenced original story of mines that I plan on writing once I get the details all listed
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Old 05/29/08, 03:44 AM   #50
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cool im thinking of posting a chronicles of narnia fan fic
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Old 05/29/08, 03:48 AM   #51
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cool im thinking of posting a chronicles of narnia fan fic
Sounds interesting, PM once you got that going.

All I know is that my story occurs in the mystical planet of Terra where four continents lie to the North, South, East and West. I'm trying to use mythological or foreign sounding names for places and characters like (Theotoko ie)
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Old 05/29/08, 03:52 AM   #52
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this sounds good and its ff! which i love but hey are u going to have a hero or herioine or both----a hero like cloud and a heroine like yuna or tifa would be awesome
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Old 05/29/08, 03:57 AM   #53
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My story will take in medieval times (European Middle Ages) and have someone like Cloud, or course a hero. I wasn't sure to add a heroine because that's been overdone. I'm going to give the hero a Greek name (because Greek names kick ass) Prince Theodosios
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Old 05/29/08, 04:15 AM   #54
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ahh cmon lol u need a heroine u always need a figting chick and she has to be in love with the hero lol but hey posted the new story under chronicles of narnia
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Old 05/29/08, 08:14 PM   #55
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More Roxas and 14!

Anyways, I'm still not sure. Every story always need to have some romance added on, does that include me. PM me if you're still curious or just a shout out
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Old 06/05/08, 06:26 AM   #56
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Xemnas sat in where nothing gathers. He was awaiting Roxas's and Axel's arrival. Those two were getting on his nerves. He would have killed them all ready if he didn't need them. Unfortunatly he had to keep that shithead Axel because he knew if Axel died Roxas would leave the organization. He also knew that Axel was a good little puppet when it came to maintaining peace among the organization.Xemnas needed Roxas as he would contribute greatly to his plans. Xemnas knew as long as Roxas stayed in the organization he would remain Sora's enemy and keep Sora's heart in confusion.

He also believed...that Roxas would find the room of Awakening. That F*cking room which he was starting to believe didn't exist. He searched high and low for it in castle oblivion. It had to be here....."A place where memories are forgotten"

Xemnas rubbed his head. He was getting impatient and annoyed. And where the hell was Axel and Roxas. What the f*ck was taking them so damn long. Finally black portals started to appear....

Roxas, Axel, Saix, and Xigbar appeared on their seats....

Axel Rolled his eyes. "What now Xemnas?" he said in annoyed tone.

Xemnas gave him a dirty look. "You two are going on a mission"

"great...what else is new" Axel said more annoyed than before.

"AXEL" Xemnas yelled.

Axel just sat not even paying attention to Xemnas. Xemnas grew frustrated but continued on.
Roxas wanted to Laugh.

"You two are too go to twighlight town,traverse town, and the end of the world."

Axel's eyes directed toward Xemnas. WTF he thought.........

Roxas just sat looking confused.

Xemnas continued on...."You are to report anything unusual you see and kill hearless"

Roxas still look confused. He wondered why were they going to all of those places they were like ghost towns.

Axel wondered too, and what were they supposed to be looking for anyways. Those worlds were strange. Axel wasn't a fool he knew Xemnas wanted to find something but what?

Axel sat up smirking. "what are we really looking for xemnas?"

Xemnas gave Axel a cold look like he was about to strangle him.

Xigbar spoke up. "anything unusual like your D***"

Roxas laughed. "um why were you looking at Axel's D***, thats not right maybe you should just concentrate on saixs"

Axel couldnt believe what came out of Roxas's mouth. He was laughing so hard that he could feel Xemna's, Xigbar, and Saix's tension build.

"ROXAS, AXEL" Xemnas yelled. Roxas gave him a grin as did Axel.

"for that remark you have an extra mission" said Xemnas still yelling.

Roxas looked at Axel and the two exchanged grins. Then he looked straight at Xigbar. "so worth it" he said still recieving glares.

"you are to go to the sunset horizons"

Roxas just laughed, that was a big punishment he thought.

"ok whatever" he said like a teenager usually says when he or she gets in trouble.

"the both of you will start your mission early tommorow morning" Xemnas said with a fierce voice.

"ok lets go Roxas we should get prepared for tommarow" Axel said while still reciving glares from xigbar.

Roxas and Axel looked at each other than gave the higher members smirks as they summoned into darkness while recieving glares.

"I can't wait for the day till that little shithead dies" Xigbar said with a very angry tone.

"We need him for now" Xemnas said in his usual cool tone.

"for what? Xemnas" Xigbar gave xemnas a grin, while saix gave Xigbar a cold look.

"You know why"

"oh so he could take down all the heartless and fill kingdom hearts"

"why do you think i would have another purpose for him, unless you know otherwise"

"oh no i don't, i am very clear of what our plans are, im sure saix knows all the details though" Xigbar said while grinning at the both of them. Xigbar knew xemnas could kill him but sometimes he couldn't stand how he wasn't exactly second in command.
"well i should leave"

"yes that would be best for your sake" Xemnas gave Xigbar an evil face while Xigbar gave him a dirty look.

Xigbar faded into darkness...

"you think he knows" Saix asked Xemnas only a moment after Xigbar left.

"of course he does" Xemnas explained. "but if we kill him it will make the organization less stronger, as he is primarily the second in command"

"he wants to do all the field work and still have high administrative power" said saix annoyed."well he can't get everything he wants just like I can't act the way I want"

"don't worry once sora is no longer needed and kingdom hearts is full you can act any way you like"

Saix gave a cold sadistic grin. "good..and as for Roxas why send him to the sunset horizons alone, you know without Axel there's no telling where his intentions lie"

"because I don't think its there"

"but what if it is"

"Then maybe I should talk with Namine "

The two exchanged evil grins and dissapeared into darkness

Meanwhile

Roxas and Axel sat in the clocktower in twighlight town. After a long day with xemnas it seemed like the perfect place to go to. And they needed to talk about what they were confused about.

"why is sending us to all those places, i mean what is he looking for?" roxas asked while sitting on the ledge.

Axel walked over and sat down next to Roxas. He scratched his head and rested his arm on his knee while he left the other leg hanging.

"i don't know Roxas, but i think we need to find out"

Roxas looked over at the sun which was starting to go down.

"We need to find out quick because whatever they have planned for us they are going to be talking about it"

Axel looked down.

Roxas looked over concerned. "whats wrong?"

"i just have a bad feeling that Xemnas has the wrong intentions for all of us, i hate Xemnas but i really did think that he would be able to help us achieve our dream of actually having a heart again."

Roxas looked down then looked back up at the sunset.

"you know i know you may not believe this but i think some nobodies still have a heart, and I don't think Xemnas wants that for us"

"what are you saying you don't believe in the organization?"

"no, I'm just saying I don't believe in Xemnas like you" Roxas didn't know what to believe anymore and he felt more like a prisoner of the organization rather than a member.

"We have to find out why they are sending us to all those places because that may give us some insight on where Xemnas truly lies."

"yea but how are we gonna find that out Axel..."

Axel just gave a smirk.."i know how, the higher members meet in the morning and talk about missions...now if we get into where nothing gathers we could listen in their conversation"

"thats great axel but do you really think Xemnas would tell all the other members of his plans"

"well he would tell saix, and you know how they usually talk about crap after everyone leaves"

"youre right"

Roxas looked back on to the horizons he wondered how Namine was doing and how she was being treated. He knew she hated the organization and somewhat connected on that level with her. Roxas felt like a prisoner just like she felt and she actually was. but Roxas wasn't a prisoner, but he knew once he was in this organization it was gonna be one helluva time getting out. And he didn't want to leave mainly cause of Axel and Namine...and he still wanted to find the answers to alll of his questions, the reasons he joined the stupid organization in the first place...

"I wonder how Namine is doing" Roxas said.

Axel looked over he smirked.

"what?" Roxas asked while grinning.

"nothing" Axel looked back into the sunset as did Roxas. Axel Knew Roxas was in love with Namine and he knew that eventually they would meet again, he just didn't want xemnas to kill them in the process. Axel admired how Roxas followed the illusion of love, he remembered that feeling once from his past life. As strange as it was he felt that feeling with Larxene when she wasnt acting Sadistic, and she acted like she was well normal.

"I wonder how Larxene's doing" Axel said.

They both exchanged grins at each other and continued to look out into the sunset.

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Old 07/26/08, 01:05 AM   #57
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Hey thanks for your help.
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Old 07/26/08, 01:35 AM   #58
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Yay!!! Big fan, love your work, right more please X3
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Old 08/18/08, 03:03 AM   #59
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hey guys i will continue writing tommarow i apologize for long wait for my fans! AND ok i know new info has leaked about the 352/8 days game (ok maybe u guys knew fir minths but hey ive been incognito for a long time) anywaysi am still continuing the story please note that this story will not follow the storyline of the game....so please dont criticize it even though im sure u guys wont ....and i will include Xion in it eventually dont worry she'll come after all the story is about her and roxas but ok just wanted to say that! oh and i will try to kind of stick to some parts of th 352/8 storyline but i will use them in different ways thanks!~

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Old 08/18/08, 10:45 PM   #60
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Great chapter, I missed your presence here in the forums
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