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Old 05/14/08, 03:10 AM   #31
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Old 05/14/08, 08:28 PM   #32
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It's all going good, when are you going to post more Kairy.

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Old 05/18/08, 01:32 AM   #33
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Old 05/18/08, 01:32 AM   #34
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Namine Awoke. She just stared at the cieling for a minute thinking what happened while she was sleeping. She dreamed that Sora was there but she knew he wasnt. She knew someone with Sora's strength was there. Was it Roxas? shit. she thought. she missed her chance to meet the one boy she has been dreaming about ever since she was born. He was so beautiful she thought with his blonde hair and strong body....She didn't want to think about it anymore. she was just so sick of being alone.

Namine turned her head to see axel on the floor holding his chest.

"Axel!" she shouted. She got up from her bed and ran to his aid.

"what happend?"

"Roxas came to see you"

Namine wanted to smile. Roxas came to visit her? she thought. but why was axel hurt? then it hit her.

"Xemnas was here"

Axel looked at Namine, and then back at the ground.

"yeah"

"and he knew Roxas was here"

"yep that's pretty much how it went."

"shit"

Namine looked down. Axel still holding his chest looke at her. He knew she loved Roxas. He knew that sadly they would never be together.

"I don't understand even if I did meet Roxas it wouldnt matter, he still needs to combine with Sora, I only can control his memories but why would I want too, what does xemnas think I will do?"

"He thinks you will control Roxas's memories so he will overthrow the organization" said Axel with very little strength.

"why does Xemnas need Roxas, i mean if he knew i can control his memories than why didnt he kill him? Namine ask impatiently

"if Xemnas keeps Roxas in the organization, he will be an enemy to sora, and the fact that he could wield a keyblade is also the reason" said Axel still tired.

Namine and Axel looked at each other.

Axel went on. "Look you and Roxas can't meet, you guys will die. Dont you get it, Xemnas wants to use you both for his plans but together you guys could overthrow the organization. and now you guys will never meet hell have someone guarding you 24/7"

"great. I dont even care about the organization I just want to live my life free from all of this"

Axel looked down.

"yeah me too"

Namine just looked at Axel. He was sort of a conudrum. Who's side was he on? hers or the organization?

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Old 05/18/08, 03:56 PM   #35
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Amazing, I assume Namine and the XIV are going to quarrel over Roxas
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Old 05/19/08, 05:13 AM   #36
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hell ya! but they are goin to be friends
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Old 05/19/08, 08:36 PM   #37
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hell ya! but they are goin to be friends
then write it!!! Come on!
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Old 05/29/08, 12:38 AM   #38
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Namine wanted to know where Axel stood. But not right now she thought. Right now she just wanted to help him. Axel felt like a brother to Namine. He didn't act like her capturer, he acted like her protector.

Namine looked Axel up and down."cmon let me help you up" said Namine in a friendly tone. Namine grabbed Axel's arm and hauled him up.

Axel looked Namine up and down. "Thanks" he said in an equal friendly tone. They bothe smiled at each other. Axel felt like Namine was his little sister, and they both felt the need to take watch over one another. Axel didn't even care if this feeling was just another illusion, if he knew who he was loyal too it would have to be Namine.

"cmon you should res-"

Axel cut her off. "I have to go talk to Roxas first" He said in angry tone.Axel summoned a portal.

Namine became scared. Was Axel gonna hurt Roxas?

Axel started to walk foward towards the portal. Namine stood in front of him and put out her arms.

"LooK I know you're mad because he was here and Xemnas knew about it, but you shouldn't kill him"

Axel looked confused. Did Namine think that Axel was that ruthless?

Axel gave a small laugh. "Namine im not goin to Kill Roxas" he said in a reasurring tone. Axel walked foward to the portal.

She backed off.

He turned around facing Namine who was watching him. " Dont worry" He said givinga reasurring smile. Namine smiled back.

Axel wasn't going to kill Roxas...Like Namine he felt something with him like he was his brother. Axel just wanted to make it apparent to Roxas to never meet with Namine again which may involve some hurting....
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Old 05/29/08, 12:46 AM   #39
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Yeah! Nice end to the chapter Kairy!
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Old 05/29/08, 12:49 AM   #40
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thanks! axel's about to kick roxas's a**...its gonna be a love fight though--ahem and not in that way moe like how brothers fight
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Old 05/29/08, 01:06 AM   #41
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Great end!!! I want more!!! No Nami! We want XIV!
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Old 05/29/08, 01:08 AM   #42
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K she will definatly be there next chapter! sry ive been working on like 3 stories!
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Old 05/29/08, 01:13 AM   #43
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Three stories hmmmm, then may you tell me of these other 'stories'
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Old 05/29/08, 02:57 AM   #44
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Here ok Ill start
Chapter 3

Roxas sat on his bed thinking about everything that was goin on. He took out the drawing that he stole from Namine. He smiled at it.... He almost wanted it to be a memory. He wanted Namine to be a memory.....

All of a sudden a dark portal appeared. Roxas quickly stuffed the drawing under his pillow. He sat up trying his best not to look like he was anywhere or hiding anything....Luckily it was Axel. Roxas let out a sigh.

"hey" Roxas said looking straight at Axel who seemed hurt and very angry.

Roxas gave him a concerning look... "what happend?"

"you went to see Namine thats what happend" Axel said in an agry voice.

Roxas got up and grew angry. Axel came foward and hit him in the face. Roxas blocked Axel's next attempt and hit him in the stomach. Axel stood up. They both looked at each other angrily.
" im not going to let Xemnas, you , or the organization control what I want to do or who I want to see, Got it memorized" Roxas said in the most angry voice he could find, mocking Axel with his usual quote.

Axel gave his most angry face. He walked around Roxas giving his most challenging stance. "Are you that Naive? don't you understand that they will kill you if u disobey them"

"f*** the organization" Roxas said in his most hateful tone. He came at Axel again buck Axel blocked himand kicked him making Roxas fall on his back on the floor.

"No the organization will F*** you, if you get in their way"

"let them" Roxas got up agrier.

Him and Axel through blows at each other and wrestled knocking over Roxas's small amount of furniture.

Finally Axel caught roxas by the throat and pushed him against the wall. Roxas took out his key and Axel took out his chakrams.

"What you think your hot shit? take a f**** look around Roxas your trapped. The minute you joined this F**** organization you sold your soul."

"I joined to get answers, but im not about to be controlled." Roxas said weakily.

Axels grip tightended on Roxas's throat. "Don't you get it you could die!, got that memorized!"
Axel let go. His Chakrams dissapeared and he sat on the floor up against Roxas's bed.

Roxas's keyblade dissapeared. He didn't know what to say. Did Axel care for him? He knew he Cared for Axel like a brother but than again Roxas Knew he wasn't a normal nobody.

Roxas sat down by Axel who didnt say anything and seemed to be thinking a lot about something. Roxas was confused, just showing up in Namine's room couldnt have ticked him off that bad. something happened but he wasnt about to bring it up.

"look I don't know what happ-"
Roxas tried saying in a thoughtfull tone.

"Xemnas Knows, he knows you saw Namine" Axel Said still not looking at Roxas.

"Shit" Roxas said. He put his head foward and put his hands through his hair. Then it dawned on him thats why Axel was hurt. He straightned up.

"Thats why your so pist cause Xemnas Knew I was there, he hurt you because of it..........." Roxas put his head down. " Im sorry"

Axel looked over at Roxas. "Hey its not your fault, Xemnas has been waiting to kick my Ass" Axel laughed.

"Then why were you so mad?" asked Roxas who was confused. If it wasn't his fault then why was Axel so pissed off at him?

"Because I was.......afraid"

Roxas laughed. Axel didn't get afraid. " You never get afraid Axel what are you talking about?"

"I feared for your life and Namine's, you two are the only one's that make me feel like I have a heart or even a family" Axel said in a cool tone.

"Im sor-"

"don't be just try not to meet with Namine I know you like her- alot and don't denie it, just try because if you two meet- you will die and I dont want that to happen"

Roxas looked down. "ok I'll stay away"

They both agreed with a clasp hand-shake.

Then all of a sudden a portal appeared in Roxas's room. Axel and Roxas got up. Out came Xigbar.

"Good at least I wont have to go looking for both you little shits" Xigbar said noticing Axel and Roxas were together. Xigbar noticed the room in shambles and how they looked like they fought each other.

"Aww whats the matter did you two p*ssys get in a fight?"

Roxas and Axel gave eachother the look friends give when they are about to tell someone off.

"whats the matter Xigbar coming off of your period?" Said Axel with his usual hand jesture, smirking.

"maybe Larxene can help you with that" Roxas said, giving a grin.

Xigbar walked foward angrily towards Roxas.

"why don't I tell the superior that you went against his orders and met with Namine, I know all about you two, I know everything that goes on in this organization"

Roxas gave him a dirty look. Xigbar smirked.

" yeah like what time Saix picks his ass"

Roxas laughed. Xigbar took out his gun and walked to Axel. Axel just stood there grinning. Xigbar put his gun to Axels chin.

"I can't wait till you die"

"aww come on Xigbar I thought you were my B**** just like Saix's and Xemnas's"

Roxas Laughed.

"SHUT UP!" Xigbar said looking at Roxas.

He turned back to look at Axel and seemed like he was about to strike with his weapon until a dark portal appeared.

Xigbar's weapon dissapeared and he turned around....it was Saix.

"the superior is waiting for Axel and Roxas, you were supposed to bring them ten minutes ago"

Xigbar walked foward to Saix. They hated each other. Xigbar was placed second in command but Xemnas clearly had more faith in Saix to be his right hand man. Making Saix in more control then Xigbar.

"Fine tell him we'll be a sec"

Saix remained cold.

"no leave now, if you have a problem take it up with the superior"

Xigbar wanted to kill Saix. what right did he have telling him what to do?

"fine" he said in a very angry voice

He turned around to find Axel and Roxas grinning. " Lets go shit heads"

Together they summoned their portals and went to go meet with Xemnas.

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Old 05/29/08, 03:25 AM   #45
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Interesting......I like it
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