GJ's Poetry Thread: In the spirit of inspiration.

[Grimmjow Jaggerjack]

Well, anyway, a new one! =D Hope you all like it. I think it'll be more of a short, poetry based story, in stead of a normal poem. We'll see.

Hehe, it turned out as a middle-way. Its a bit story-like, but still a poem. ^^

And btw, I'd love to see some poems of you then, SD. PM pwease? :3

In search of happiness

Walking through this world of dreams,
I stare at all these wonderful things.
A bird flies by, with colors blue, green, yellow, red, or so it seems.
A bird floats gently on these winds

A bright, yellow sun is rising,
with strings of red touching the earth I'm walking.
The fluffy clouds are lying,
trying to be green instead of white, while I'm talking

to myself and even singing
a song of nature.
Its like a life of easy biding,
this place with temperature.

A gentle sun.
A bright blue sky.
Makes all undone,
And lets me fly.

A single breeze,
or a drop of water...
Is more to me,
than all that matters.

I my dreams.

In a wish.

[Spyells]

That poem was awesome. Please keep writing them.

[Grimmjow Jaggerjack]

:3 Thanks once again. It makes me blush when I look through the thread and see how much it is appreciated. :3

[Darkness Princess]

*tackles*
Pretty poem is pretty!
=D

[Lectori Salutem]

The poem is really nice!!!

[Grimmjow Jaggerjack]

:3 Much thanks too both. <3

And I'm letting know that I won't be posting new ones any time soon. These are my last two weeks in Mexico and today my brother from Holland is coming over. =D

So yeah, very busy and all. =P

[Darkness Princess]

Oooo!
Have fun and stuff. <3

[Grimmjow Jaggerjack]

Lol, little late, but thanks.

Anyway, I'm leaving the forums, but I'll be posting poems once in a while so check in now and then. See ya'll. <3

Probably new poem next week btw, I feel inspired by all these changes in my life. =D

[kazukifafner]

Good luck, GJ! Sorry to see you go!

Love your poems, btw.

[Darkness Princess]

Ehh... You're leaving?
Shame... I liked you. <3
Will look forward to your poems.

[Grimmjow Jaggerjack]

Just a reminder; if anyone has a good topic for a poem, let me know! =D

[Grimmjow Jaggerjack]

Hi everyone! Been a while, no?

It seems like me writing stories and poems stopped when I left this forums some time ago. Too busy with my life and all, and completely out of inspiration or will to write whatsoever...so yeah.

Anyway, I found myself a nice girl to like, and not to get into that too deeply.. as this is the internet and no one cares ..I'll just continue with saying that it just brought back some of my inspiration. So, without further redo...I hope you all enjoy this poem of mine that I wish to dedicate to nothing at all, lol. Now read! =D (And tell me what you think! =D (it sounds a bit too cliche in my ears...(but yeah =D!)))

Btw, yeah, the bold first verse is the title. ^^

Eyes like diamonds,
they shine so bright.
My lips are like vitamins,
to your lips light.


I do not wish to talk to you,
I do not wish to kiss.
I do not wish to laugh with you,
or cry with you, for all there is.

Rays of the sun,
hair alike;
ways that you stun,
me despite

That I do not want to touch,
nor hold your hand.
As I do not want to stroke,
your hair back and stand
beside you with your dreams.

But these are just,
words of a fool,
spoken by many,
Just used as a tool,
to give a tone to all that seems

Bright and shiny in our lives,
and gives a tone to all that is;
alive, and what
always will be dives.

Into this ocean,
into this sky.

...

You know...

I just want to stare,
at you while you sleep.
And dare
to speak deep
about nothing at all
in silence
in patience

Quiet

With you

[Spyells]

That poem was so nice. I was wondering what had happened to you. I hope that you can still find the time to keep writing even though you have a life now.

[Grimmjow Jaggerjack]

Lol, thanks, Spyells! How are you doing?

But yeah, it seems being away for a while really kills of a thread. =P Where's the love, people? =D

I was planning on posting a new one right away now, but the string of thoughts I had turned sideways and I lost track of what I was writing, so I'll keep it for a while until I finish it.

Till then!

[Archetype00x]

I can't believe I didn't find this thread sooner. D:

Anyway, he's something I wrote a while ago.

“Cold. Thirteen months old, like the child in my heart that would refuse to grow. Pulsating

endlessly, a violent throbbing within my brain machine - tick tock tick tock; for time is

running thin and out and long and cracked. No time, no time; no time for this thought,

like a dream, like a child, living off tubes and machines from my deepest nightmares,

fueled by my inhibitions, fears, lies, decaying aspirations. But perhaps with your deepest

sleep shall come as salvation to you, an angel’s embrace that would pull you from the icy

rooted fingers of my attentive, never-ending neglect, my failure to realize that I can never

make it, never make you my own, never see you grow up and reach your first birthday,

get married, be remembered in the hearts and minds of children everywhere because

they drank you in word for word on yellowing pages. Cold, thirteen months old, resting

here, in a graveyard of shattered dreams; here you are respected, here you are at

peace. So rest, my child; rest,

and be free.”