GJ's Poetry Thread: In the spirit of inspiration.

[Blue Sky]

I love all of your poems Grimm,and your new one is no exception.

<3

[Lectori Salutem]

The new poem is really nice, but I do like the previous one better.

[Shadow Denizen]

Poetry huh? You've got talent that's for sure. What am I talking about? You're GJ! You're all about quality!

Love it and keep it going.

[Grimmjow Jaggerjack]

Thanks for the comments, everyone, I really appreciate it. <3

And SD...you give me too much credit. :3

Anyway, new one up today, probably. =D

[Darkness Princess]

*Waits for the new poem*
Yeah, don't mind me. >_>

[Grimmjow Jaggerjack]

Lol, impatient are we, DP?

New one now. Writing it down at this moment, and without planning...let's see how it works out shall we.

Side note: Sex inspired. =D And yeah, short phrases ftw. :3

When we feel

A touch
A bite
A stroke
And love

Blowing in your neck
nibling your ear
A slight peck
Do you want to hear?

A moan
A word
A scream
Of love

Stroking your hair
And your wet skin
Isn't it fair?
Come on, give in

Come on, give in...

And let me kiss you

[Darkness Princess]

Awesome poem!
Its so abrupt and I love the pace. <3

[Grimmjow Jaggerjack]

Thanks once agian, DP, thanks once again. =D

Lol, now that I re-read it, it sounds more like lyrics down from 'Do you want to hear?'. xD

[Lectori Salutem]

It's kinda nice. I like it!

[Shadow Denizen]

Sex inspired

That's unexpected.

A moan
A word
A scream
Of love

You must have loving companions.

Writing it down at this moment, and without planning

I always do that when I write poems. They don't come out that bad. Anyway, really good and...motivating.

[Grimmjow Jaggerjack]

Originally Posted by Shadow Denizen

That's unexpected.



You must have loving companions.



I always do that when I write poems. They don't come out that bad. Anyway, really good and...motivating.

1. Unexpected?

2. Its a poem, what does that have to do with companions? :/

3. Yeah, I normally don't just planning, but most of the time I have some sort of idea at least of what I want. This time I just wrote down what was on my mind, and formed it into a poem.

4. Motivating? In what way exactly. xD

[Shadow Denizen]

1. Unexpected?

Yeah. Coming from you of all people.

2. Its a poem, what does that have to do with companions? :/

Well...such vivid descriptions can only come from experience.

3. Yeah, I normally don't just planning, but most of the time I have some sort of idea at least of what I want. This time I just wrote down what was on my mind, and formed it into a poem.

You wrote what was on your mind? Are you lovesick or perhaps hormone-driven?

4. Motivating? In what way exactly. xD

Suddenly I feel like going back to school.

[Grimmjow Jaggerjack]

Yeah. Coming from you of all people.

What do you mean by that? Sarcasm I pressume?

Well...such vivid descriptions can only come from experience.

Its just sweet lovin', baby. xD I never go without passion.

You wrote what was on your mind? Are you lovesick or perhaps hormone-driven?

I was acutally thinking a lot about my ex that day, so maybe. :3

Suddenly I feel like going back to school.

I still don't get what you find motivating? =P

[Shadow Denizen]

What do you mean by that? Sarcasm I pressume?

Never mind.

Its just sweet lovin', baby. xD I never go without passion.

How nice.

I was acutally thinking a lot about my ex that day, so maybe. :3

The question is: is she thinking about you?

I still don't get what you find motivating? =P

Let's just say I don't attend an all boys school.

[Grimmjow Jaggerjack]

No, she is not thinking about me.

And I get why you want to go to school again. xD