GJ's Poetry Thread: In the spirit of inspiration.

[_Nadie_]

Grimmjow Jaggerjack,
your poems are f.cking beautiful.

may I say, you must have a great deal of inspiration where you get it from.

awesome.
I hope you keep on writing even more.

:]

[Darkness Princess]

...O_O
This is by far my favourite poem from all of those you've written.
*Gives cookies*
Its awesome. O_O
I love it. <3
I can actually picture a pretty melody for it and turning it into a song. XD

[Cicero]

Thanks for all the love. <3

Hehe, well now that I re-read it it seems to have a bit of disturbed flow, but its ok. I was half asleep when I wrote it...I couldn't sleep before I got it off my mind.

And yeah, love inspired poems ftw. <3

[Spyells]

That poem was beautiful! Please keep writing more your writing is awesome.

[Cicero]

Thanks, Spyells. <3

[Darkness Princess]

The flow is fine.
Its an awesome poem. <3

[Cicero]

Thanks. <3

I remembered her again when I re-read the poem, and got a faint feeling in my stomach. :3 Seems the crush is still going. :3

I love the way she used to say my name when I did something silly. <3

[Darkness Princess]

Aww adorable. <3

Love is always a good, if not the best, type of inspiration one can get so its pretty cool that you like a person enough for them to inspire you to write something like this. ^_^

[Blue]

Your new poem is awesome Grimm!

I like it a lot,one of my favourites so far. 8D

[Cicero]

Thanks, blue! =D

I'll be writing a new one today I think. Still have that idea in my head.

[Lectori Salutem]

Such a beautiful poem <3 I love it!!!

[Cicero]

Thank you, thank you all. =D

Here's a new one, and I'm busy with another. This one I'm not sure about though...The beginning is alright, I think, but I lost track near the end. But yeah, you now how that goes. =P Once you make a poem, it is hard to re-write it without breaking the flow or vibe.

Anyway, here it is, tell me if you like it:

Sweet like Cherries/Cherrysweet

It is not about need
It is not about war
It is not about greed
And for you...
It is not so you can be a star.

You need not bleed
You need not cry
You need not scream
You need only...to die

Die
For the ones you love
The ones you cherish
You will leave for above
With a smile you will perish

To be sweet
To be loving
To be gracious
To be walking

Down the path of death...
For planting the seed
Of being loved

[Darkness Princess]

Its nice but I prefer the previous one more.
I like it though. =3
<3
Much love to your skills.

[Cicero]

Thanks, DP. <3

And yeah, I agree that the previous one was better. I am beginning to like this one too though.

[Darkness Princess]

It does grow on you...
The more you read it, the prettier it gets. <3