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| Look at the Stars | Well,that sounds like fun! Enjoy your trip,especially because you don't have to go to school on Monday xD |
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| Consul Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: provoking people into discussions. Age: 18
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Rep Power: 4 ![]() | Thanks, Blue. See you all on monday or Tuesday with a new poem. =D |
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| Look at the Stars | Yup,I'm already looking forward to it ![]() |
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| Court Mage Join Date: Dec 2005
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Rep Power: 3 ![]() | Nice poems, but they're better in Dutch. |
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| Irony Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: I live here.
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Rep Power: 7 ![]() | Aww. . .. there's another language I shall never understand. . .like Japanese . . |
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| Consul Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: provoking people into discussions. Age: 18
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Rep Power: 4 ![]() | Too bad, Chosen. And yeah...page 3! WTF! High time for something new, lads! =D So yeah, once again this turned out completely different than I first wanted...looks pretty random at the moment, but I somehow like it. Don't know why. Well, here we go!: A storm will rise tonight Whispers of wood Shadows by fire An inspired mood Letters for sire Scents of old books Of ink, gentle flames An old man by looks With half a dozen names Rooms within rooms Doors made of doors Keys out of keys And warmth within rain Mystery and Unknown Will write tonight a poem sheltered by surrounding walls listening to sounds of rain A poem A quiet screaming storm |
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| Friends in my Heart | That was pretty good! I loved that one! It's the best one so far. Not like I know much about poetry anyway. But still. ![]() |
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| Consul Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: provoking people into discussions. Age: 18
Posts: 1,516
Rep Power: 4 ![]() | Thanks, Spyells! =D |
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| Friends in my Heart | I checked out your poetry guide. It's pretty good. I'm going to give some of your hints and tips a try the next time I try to write poetry. |
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| Consul Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: provoking people into discussions. Age: 18
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Rep Power: 4 ![]() | Meh, I need to actually rewrite the whole thing...what I posted was just the beginning sheet. :3 |
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| Daydreamer | Much love to that poem. Its awesome. <3 |
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| Consul Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: provoking people into discussions. Age: 18
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Rep Power: 4 ![]() | Why thank you! =D |
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| Look at the Stars | I like your new poem a lot.Probably one of your best. <3 |
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| Consul Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: provoking people into discussions. Age: 18
Posts: 1,516
Rep Power: 4 ![]() | Thanks Blue. I'll be writing a new one soon, a thought is building in my mind, and I think it'll explode not too much later from now. xD |
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| | #45 |
| Consul Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: provoking people into discussions. Age: 18
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Rep Power: 4 ![]() | New one. =) I was listening to some old songs I used to love. Classical music, good to fall asleep with, you got to love it. But as I was listening I suddenly remembered...a girl whom I used to love, but since recently left my life for what I think is for ever. And...while thinking of her, combined with the music, thoughts of...melancholy floated into my mind. I needed to write this down, so...this one I dedicate to her. Btw, the music I was listening to was, among others, Memory of Fanelia: The soundtrack of the anime Escaflowne. You really should listen to it sometime. Flown away Memories My heart, My heart is wavering. Remembering or so it seems. Those times long forgotten, Times long gone. My heart, My heart is longing. Eagering or so it seems. For your touch long forgotten, Your touch that I miss. This song, This song is whispering. A melody or so it seems. A melody of love... A melody for you. This feeling. Yes, this feeling. Melancholy or so it seems. Is wanting to tell me, These memories of us. Us? Yes, us. Happinness or so it seemed. But, this is just a mere glimp... Of times long forgotten, Times long gone. ... Tonight I remembered you... Tommorrow you are gone. Last edited by Cicero; 05/13/08 at 11:46 PM. |
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