poems inspired by KH

[UnKept_PrOMisEs]

Forgive me if this is the wrong place... but this is inspired by KH, so I said to myself...what the hell? Ok, anyways... I wanted to post some poems that KH inspired me to write. I want to know what KH fans think of the "KH inspired" pieces I've written. Please, be critical...I...can....take....it... ... ...I think Okay, I'll start off with my favorite:

From Sora to Kairi (These Promises)

These promises...promises...
from me to you.
These promises... promsies...
they're stuck like glue.

Stuck on me,
to remember you.
The one I need,
my love, that's true.

These promises...promises...
can't make me forget.
These promises...promises...
they're already set.

I'm trying to find you,
I'm holding onto my light,
but it's hard to hold on
when you're not in my sight.

These promises...promises...
they...keep me together.
These promises...promises...
help me remember you...forever.

And even though we are separated,
and so far apart.
I know I'll always find you,
deep down inside my heart.

It's a little corny...I know...Oh well, what can ya do? If you want more poems, please tell me. and if you don't...then tell me also.

[doreo503]

Its cool, i say their good but could you tell me if mine are, its under fan fictions and posted as A Chance Series!!

Thanx even if you don't do it.

[Angel X]

i'v got one too!!! here......Beyond the Darkness

Upon a time a light was born, it was clean, and it was warm.

People craved for thus light,

The land it shone on forever bright.

"As light grow, so will the shadows..."

Quoted a man upon snow-white meadows.

So as he said, as it was true, man began to fight, for the light they loved and knew.

Then one day, it was gone,

Swallowed away by darkness. “What once existed, only memories knew..."

Said a young child, of what he thought was true.

"What is darkness, what is light, which one really gives us the fright?"

Then suddenly darkness appeared yonder, the child gasped and yelled for mother!

"Do not be frightened, young child, as it's you who will make it all worth while."

Said a pale voice.

"But the light is gone, and no one stands,

Only me who wish this could all end!"

“Do not be afraid, as I will tell you,

What you bare is the brightest of all,

With your heart my friend, darkness will fall."
By Tina Chen 25/05/05

[UnKept_PrOMisEs]

WOW! Yours is absolutely amazing!!!! I'm jealous now! I wish my poems could be deep and meaningful, write down another one. Well anyways, here's another one of mine. Ok, somehow this applies to KH, or at least, I thought so...well part of it were my feeligns about waiting for KH2.

Sharp pains
everywhere,
and nowhere.
It's in my brain.

In my mind,
nothing fits.
So everytime my head hits
something...rewind.

You look towards me and speak,
"calm down,
breath, what's wrong," and
"why frown?"

My reply to you was,
:no light,
I'm just drowning
in all this darkness surrounding.

"It's deep,
unendless...
trying to wake up
from nightmares... take a leap,

But wait! I can't
I'm insecure,
only human,"
and so I rant on...

"I must find a light,
a prism of hope.
I just can't sit,
stay here, adn mope.

"I'm feeling depressed,
the reasons...
so unsure,
I only wish that
I knew the cure."

And to you,
I plea,
"help me fly,
I hate drowning...
let me take flight,
and touch the sky!"

Ok, not a very good one...It's just all jumbled and confusing. But my favorite part is the darkness surrounding.

[Angel X]

i like it !!that's better than mine, how long did it take u to write that?

[kingoflight91]

i like all yalls they seem cool

[UnKept_PrOMisEs]

Actually, not that long, wait, are you talking about my 2nd poem? Woah, thanks! yeah, not too long, I was feelin kinda depressed that day...thinking of KH2 makes me feel like that sometimes...GIR it's not out yet.

[Angel X]

i'm really glade that there's actually ppl out there that loves to write as much as i do!!

[UnKept_PrOMisEs]

Of course! I'm sure there's got to be more, but...where are they? Here, I'll write another, but you should write down another too, yours was fantastical(neat word) Ok...

From Kairi to Sora

Each day I come out,
and wait for you...
I want to scream and shout
"Are you looking for me too!"

But non of my screams are heard.
So, from dawn to twilight I wait,
and from twilight to dawn, I'm concerned.
Sleeping is impossible...it's late.

When sleep arrives, I'm glad
because dreaming of you makes me that way,
but when sanity arrives, I'm sad
because I just wait for you, day by day.

I want to look for you,
find you somehow,
but it's so hard to cross this ocean of blue.
So please hurry up, come back to me now.

As each day goes by,
i grow more insane,
because thoughts of you leaving,
makes so much pain.

Okay, so I thought it was only fair to write a poem from Kairi to Sora, if Sora had one to kairi!

[Angel X]

Tender Heart

the light shone over me,i opened my eyes.
then it was covered over by darkness that gave me a fright.

what if life never had a beginning and end
what if life was never for us to attend

maybe one day darkness will rule
be forever evil, mean and cruel.

but will that someone come along,
and with his keyblade he brought that's strong,
to defeat the darkness, to save the highness!

that someone is real or not,
depends on what you believe in.

will he really be that powerful,
rests upon whether you let him

what if light appears once more,
because your heart was strong

maybe darkness never existed,
the only reason you think it did,
is cuz your eyes were closed.

what if life had a begining and end,
but instead of wandering about it,
you live it instead.

[beastin4kh2]

wow you guys are amazing

[UnKept_PrOMisEs]

Wow, awesome! I like this one better than your last one...I don't mean to put the first one down though, because your poems are amazing!!!! Ok, here's another one of mine... it's kind of Advent Children and Kingdom hearts combined...

So alone, so lost
so many lives, could be the cost,
I can no longer help anyone,
that's because there's danger...
A face continuing to linger in my dreams.
My nightmares are my realities.
I wish you were here, with me.
You, the one I need.
You, my light,
my shield.
But, now I wander a lost world,
with my demons all around.
And now, I live in a dark world,
because my light has dimmered down.
Where's my light?
Where is my light?
You're gone from me...
my world,
my sun,
my moon, my stars,
my light.

O geez, I'm such a hopeless romantic! O, oh well!

[UnKept_PrOMisEs]

Sry to double post, but thanks for your compliment beastin4kh2! (don't make fun of me because I forget how to put in quotes)

[doreo503]

Wow, all of you poems are really good. I don't want to take up space with mine on this forum so if you want to take a look at my poems, you can go to fan fiction and look for A chance series. Please tell me wat u think.

Thanx even if u don't

[Angel X]

here's another one

Riku to Sora

why are they laughing? why arent they afraid that someday we will never be okay?
why do you talk to me? i never talked to you.
Do you have to be so inmature, and live only from a fun-point-of view?
why cant you be like me, be solom and cool?
can you not see that life is too short, for you to do what ever you aught?
dont u know that at a stage in life, we have to face fear?
that's the only way you wont get scared.

come and hold my hand, i'll lead you to your destiny,
to help you become as powerful as me.
please try harder to reach my hand,you wouldnt want this to be the end
im leaving you now as i understand, that maybe you should stay here and never
leave your friends
you are a child that will never grow up,
you will never beat me with a pure heart.