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    When I was making this I was like 'Wow this is going to be so good', I look at it now and i'm like '....... it's not terrible'.

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    could I bother you for the psd.

    btw, you kick started with momentum, but your foreground and middleground don't really need changing. I really like your use of cool reds, and blues in this piece. Your background is way too negative and doesn't present a color that makes the existing FG and MG pop bro.

    Remember color temperature & value are your friends, and powerful ass tools.



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    You should definitely implement some depth into this

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    i like this a lot. fabulous contrast :3
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    theres definitely potential for a great tag here but right now it looks unfinished tbh.

    The black background kinda takes me out of the general 'feel' of the tag(if that makes sense).I suggest you blend it more with the foreground effects.
    The smudging has a good flow but right now it's very basic.Lightning,clipping mask and displacement layers would help alot.

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    reminds me of geo's colliding balls

    but yeah more depth would work here
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    Default Re: Whorb

    I find some parts to be over saturated, but it seems to be the style you want in this. So do what they said, they pretty much nailed it.



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    Quote Originally Posted by voiceofourgeneration View Post
    could I bother you for the psd.

    btw, you kick started with momentum, but your foreground and middleground don't really need changing. I really like your use of cool reds, and blues in this piece. Your background is way too negative and doesn't present a color that makes the existing FG and MG pop bro.

    Remember color temperature & value are your friends, and powerful ass tools.
    I'll upload the PSD later when I get a chance for you. :)

    Quote Originally Posted by Pablo View Post
    You should definitely implement some depth into this
    Quote Originally Posted by Apple Jaxx View Post

    but yeah more depth would work here
    But i'm so bad at depth D:

    Quote Originally Posted by Reflection View Post
    i like this a lot. fabulous contrast :3
    Why thank you :)

    Quote Originally Posted by CaptainMarvelQ8 View Post

    The smudging has a good flow but right now it's very basic.Lightning,clipping mask and displacement layers would help alot.
    Believe it or not but there's actually some displace and clipping masks already in there.

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    Default Re: Whorb

    Well, I like this tag a lot and everyone else has already said what was up with it (too much black background, etc...), but I love the colors as well. Your smudging technique is great, too.


    Looking for something new to spruce up your signature? Come on down to Madman's Revenge and request a tag and avatar like mine today! :D

 

 

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