Divine Comedy - Page 2

Vicodin · 09-30-2007, 01:01 AM

I'm awesome.
You're psd inspired me, C4E. xD

Xidon · 09-30-2007, 03:23 AM

Hey you guys started without me! D:

Anyway welcome to the clan everyone.
C4E gimmy some of your sprites, I lost some of my when I switched PCs...

C4E · 09-30-2007, 08:05 AM

pretty nice Vic

good color choice.

**Milkman** · 09-30-2007, 10:56 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Vicodin

I'm awesome.
You're psd inspired me, C4E. xD

lose the text
move everything to the near center
make a background and keep what you have as a foreground.
?????
profit

Rem · 09-30-2007, 12:13 PM

So uh, I made a new tag, it's one of my favorites.

CnC my dear clan?

Xidon · 09-30-2007, 12:37 PM

OK I like the text placement and the flow is good, it is a lot better on the left then on the right mainly couse of the right corner.
I like the stock placement but I think you should crop a bit from the bottom.
You should try to work more on your depth which is pretty bad and try creating a foreground also the right is a bit empty and that emptiness clashes with the light source and again ruining the depth so I suggest either crop the right again or tone down the light source (not the part near Sora, that part is great).

Nice tag and left>right

Oh I didn't comment Vics work, anyway Vic fix the text ( the Divine Comedy part), change the font and make it smaller, crop a bit from the top and the right so you don't have to work on the background as Milk suggested couse it shouldn't be too empty then and it should be <3 then, nice work Vic.

squall leonhart · 09-30-2007, 12:38 PM

Wow.

I really don't have any complaints on that tag Rem.

It's awesome.

And Vic, yeah, text doesn't really do anything for the tag.

Other than that Vic, it's beautiful.

Vicodin · 09-30-2007, 12:48 PM

**** the text.
I don't give a damn. I explained in the seperate thread where I posted this, if anyone read it, that I only put the text there to simply state that I'm in Divine Comedy.

And cropping any vertically, imo, will make it lose some the of -WOW- factor.

Anyways, Rem. For whatever reason, I REALLY like that tag. It's simple, but not TOO simple; and that works. I really like it. xD Even the text works. COlors are awesome, and the light source is good.

squall leonhart · 09-30-2007, 12:56 PM

Well, if it's there for that, then yeah, keep it.

Vicodin · 09-30-2007, 01:07 PM

KAY GUYS FIRST ASSIGNMENT UP GET YOUR ASSES THERE. ;D

<3

Hydrogen · 09-30-2007, 01:46 PM

Best work evar, methinks.
Vicodin- Love everything but the text font
Rem- Lose the text and fix how the light source sort of drifts off to the left.

C4E · 09-30-2007, 07:28 PM

hydrogen, the stock looks too squished and the color of the stock is wtf. id also recommend losing the pure black in the background.

Rem, i would work the flow on the right side more. left side is excellent.

keep up the good work

Xidon · 10-01-2007, 06:43 AM

Anyway I don't have a lot of time now so I am just gonna say that you shouldn't use brushes that much Hydrogen

Not quite finished but I want some CnC:

SolidMetal · 10-02-2007, 09:29 PM

Can I join now? :D pleasee

C4E · 10-02-2007, 10:21 PM

application?

09-30-2007, 01:01 AM	#16
Vicodin relative power Join Date: Aug 2005 Age: 15 Posts: 2,024 Rep Power: 6	Re: Divine Comedy I'm awesome. You're psd inspired me, C4E. xD __________________ ehh. Pressies: [x] I'm female. Doomination

09-30-2007, 03:23 AM	#17
Xidon Memento Mori Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Why do you want that? Age: 16 Posts: 2,165 Rep Power: 5	Re: Divine Comedy Hey you guys started without me! D: Anyway welcome to the clan everyone. C4E gimmy some of your sprites, I lost some of my when I switched PCs... __________________ C4E is advertising himself in my sigspace <333 Pressies: [♠][◘][•][♥] 98% of teens does or has tried smoking pot. If your one of those who think that this is a highly inaccurate percentage, but you still haven't smoked pot, copy paste this in your signature

09-30-2007, 08:05 AM	#18
C4E Procrastination is Key Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: o.o somewhere... Graphics Clan: Divine Comedy Age: 18 Posts: 1,881 Rep Power: 6	Re: Divine Comedy pretty nice Vic good color choice. __________________ Giving C4D a Second Chance Gifts DevArt.

09-30-2007, 12:13 PM	#20
Rem Pulling your strings Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Being a leech, most likely Age: 16 Posts: 1,883 Rep Power: 4	Re: Divine Comedy So uh, I made a new tag, it's one of my favorites. CnC my dear clan? __________________ My Apocalypse - Guitar Hero

09-30-2007, 12:37 PM	#21
Xidon Memento Mori Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Why do you want that? Age: 16 Posts: 2,165 Rep Power: 5	Re: Divine Comedy OK I like the text placement and the flow is good, it is a lot better on the left then on the right mainly couse of the right corner. I like the stock placement but I think you should crop a bit from the bottom. You should try to work more on your depth which is pretty bad and try creating a foreground also the right is a bit empty and that emptiness clashes with the light source and again ruining the depth so I suggest either crop the right again or tone down the light source (not the part near Sora, that part is great). Nice tag and left>right Oh I didn't comment Vics work, anyway Vic fix the text ( the Divine Comedy part), change the font and make it smaller, crop a bit from the top and the right so you don't have to work on the background as Milk suggested couse it shouldn't be too empty then and it should be <3 then, nice work Vic. __________________ C4E is advertising himself in my sigspace <333 Pressies: [♠][◘][•][♥] 98% of teens does or has tried smoking pot. If your one of those who think that this is a highly inaccurate percentage, but you still haven't smoked pot, copy paste this in your signature

09-30-2007, 12:38 PM	#22
squall leonhart Organization Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Your mother? o.o? Posts: 429 Rep Power: 0	Re: Divine Comedy Wow. I really don't have any complaints on that tag Rem. It's awesome. And Vic, yeah, text doesn't really do anything for the tag. Other than that Vic, it's beautiful. __________________ this has got to be the most legendary piece of work i've ever seen.

09-30-2007, 12:48 PM	#23
Vicodin relative power Join Date: Aug 2005 Age: 15 Posts: 2,024 Rep Power: 6	Re: Divine Comedy **** the text. I don't give a damn. I explained in the seperate thread where I posted this, if anyone read it, that I only put the text there to simply state that I'm in Divine Comedy. And cropping any vertically, imo, will make it lose some the of -WOW- factor. Anyways, Rem. For whatever reason, I REALLY like that tag. It's simple, but not TOO simple; and that works. I really like it. xD Even the text works. COlors are awesome, and the light source is good. __________________ ehh. Pressies: [x] I'm female. Doomination

09-30-2007, 12:56 PM	#24
squall leonhart Organization Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Your mother? o.o? Posts: 429 Rep Power: 0	Re: Divine Comedy Well, if it's there for that, then yeah, keep it. __________________ this has got to be the most legendary piece of work i've ever seen.

09-30-2007, 01:07 PM	#25
Vicodin relative power Join Date: Aug 2005 Age: 15 Posts: 2,024 Rep Power: 6	Re: Divine Comedy KAY GUYS FIRST ASSIGNMENT UP GET YOUR ASSES THERE. ;D <3 __________________ ehh. Pressies: [x] I'm female. Doomination

09-30-2007, 01:46 PM	#26
Hydrogen THAT'S A HELEECOPTER Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: San Diego, California Age: 14 Posts: 1,631 Rep Power: 4	Re: Divine Comedy Best work evar, methinks. Vicodin- Love everything but the text font Rem- Lose the text and fix how the light source sort of drifts off to the left. __________________ Truth & Justice brought this tag together [Veritas Aequitas] Playing now: PS3: MGS4, TF2 Wii: Brawl PSP: Secret Agent Clank

09-30-2007, 07:28 PM	#27
C4E Procrastination is Key Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: o.o somewhere... Graphics Clan: Divine Comedy Age: 18 Posts: 1,881 Rep Power: 6	Re: Divine Comedy hydrogen, the stock looks too squished and the color of the stock is wtf. id also recommend losing the pure black in the background. Rem, i would work the flow on the right side more. left side is excellent. keep up the good work __________________ Giving C4D a Second Chance Gifts DevArt.

10-01-2007, 06:43 AM	#28
Xidon Memento Mori Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Why do you want that? Age: 16 Posts: 2,165 Rep Power: 5	Re: Divine Comedy Anyway I don't have a lot of time now so I am just gonna say that you shouldn't use brushes that much Hydrogen Not quite finished but I want some CnC: __________________ C4E is advertising himself in my sigspace <333 Pressies: [♠][◘][•][♥] 98% of teens does or has tried smoking pot. If your one of those who think that this is a highly inaccurate percentage, but you still haven't smoked pot, copy paste this in your signature

10-02-2007, 10:21 PM	#30
C4E Procrastination is Key Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: o.o somewhere... Graphics Clan: Divine Comedy Age: 18 Posts: 1,881 Rep Power: 6	Re: Divine Comedy application? __________________ Giving C4D a Second Chance Gifts DevArt.

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