The Exiled

[╬ProperArtist╬]

Originally Posted by Ojike

sheesh...shoulda known there'd be conflict before page 5....



I'm not so sure we can work it out that way. What do they talk about? Why do they leave? Why do Xymed and Xias return without Exal (we need to spell it this way, so to keep constant with the "jumbled version of the original)? I just don't know. D: It conflicts.

TA- Umm....yeah...I really don't know if Xatsuin would survive against the Mystic Order, much less live long enough for the betrayel. Which is why I was hesitant to bring him in before that attack. Each individual Mystic Order member can PWN Rextanse (when he's at full power), seeing as they harbor the powers of SEVERAL gods rather than one. That's why so many people fall to them. They're the strongest enemies the Exiled have to face. If they actually attacked all at once, there'd be no survivors. But, of course, Xatsuin DOES survive to enter the void.

As for the void issue, I had Xatsuin sneak in behind Rextanse and Jynx for several reasons. He just seems like a more meschevious type, and it's kinda what you did here. xD I'm not sure about Jynx and Rextanse taking him on as an apprentice, but I'm sure they'd let him tag along. Rextanse would probably even grow to really like him. I have no clue if he'd survive against Xemo, but that's not for me to decide. I honestly think Xatsuin dieing to Xemo just after Rextanse grew to like him would be a great motivator to actually use his sword. And a very moving moment in the story. I'm not saying Xatsuin's weak....but you've yet to really give us a reason to think he's strong.

I'm tired of typing...and I finally got photoshop back up. So I'm done.

yes es all about la story telling :3

EDIT: I find it utterly awesome how the underdog/comic relief of the Exiled is the only one who beats their Mystic Member...alone at that xDDD

[Dawning Twilight]

Originally Posted by Angel's Prayer

Hey all...



Sorry if it took me forever, but here's Jynx..also...



For added effect... :3

very nice AP ^^

Originally Posted by Ojike

Awesomeness, AP. And it's odd that you all think that the interview comics were my idea. >.> I just did two, and they were playing off of AP's. xD

I see no reason for abandoning this perfectly fine thread. Especially since every other time we've tried to leave KHI, we just wind up coming back. Soo...I'll just go ahead and post the new rankings, without Daxic's followers. Also Temallox no longer works with Daxic. He's with Oogie's volcano character. Then I'll post the updated, more detailed version of the Outline. THIS IS A VERY IMPORTANT POST THAT YOU DON'T WANT TO MISS!

1 ZAXELDION (???)
2 REXTANSE (TERANES)
3 XOWLIN (WOLIN)
4 XANA (ANA)
5 ZIXAN (ZAIN)
6 XODYC (CODY)
7 JYNX (***)
8 DrBANXON (BRANDON)
9 RUXEL (RULE)
10 SALIX (SAIL)
11 KAARIX (***)
12 SABIXEL (BLAISE)
13 ZAVERXI (ZAVIER)
14 DAXIC (CIDA)
15 JIXAH (JIHA)
16 LEXINOTH (LITHOEN)
17 CAXBOJ (JACOB)
18 OJEX (JOE)
19 ZHYMARX (YZMAHR)
20 DELACROIX (CLADEROI)
21 XISHN (SHIN)
22 SKYX (SKY)
23 XENGE (GENE)
24 LONEX (LEON)
25 XATSUIN (AUSTIN)
26 XALATINE (TALANIE)
27 AXIT (TAI)
28 CHARXAI (RICHAR)
29 LENXUZOB (ZEBULON)
30 MYROMEX (X)

(I also cut out Rogexeg, and moved Lenxuzob and Myromex down in rank. Lenxuzob, since I figured Brandon wouldn't mind and him being there would make it an even 30. Myromex, because I just thought it fitting that the most mysterious and unknown member join last.)

PART/STORY/CHAPTER ONE Beginnings.

-Organization XIII is resurrected by an unknown being (Trinity), except for the traitors from Chain of Memories and KH2(Marluxia, Larxene, Axel, and Roxas).

-The empty spaces are filled with Rextanse, Xana, Daxic, Zaxeldion, and Xowlin.

-Over a severe difference in opinion, Rextanse and Zaxeldion decide to defect from Org. XIII. Xowlin and Xana follow with them.

- Daxic and Xigbar, who discovered this information, rat them out to Xemnas. Xemnas (along with Xigbar, Zexion, and Saix) confonts and assaults the four. Daxic's there too, but not to fight.

- During the battle, Zaxeldion attempts to fend them off alone, while the others escape. He gets poisoned by Zexion, just before Xana manages to tap into her powers and get everyone out of there. This is where Daxic's obsession with Xana's powers is born.

-Daxic is sent, as a mole for Xemnas, to join them.

-The recruiting of the first 9 of the Exiled takes place(this makes 14 if you include the original 5). This part should be a time lapse, that gives an overview of the other members.

-Daxic informs to Xemnas that the Exiled have grown too large, and need to be cut down (though he's telling them FAR too late, on purpose. He hopes the Exiled will end Org. 13 without him having to lift a finger). Organization XIII, along with an extremely powerful heartless, attacks the Exiled Order.

-The Exiled eventually end Organization XIII, and we reveal to the reader Daxic's plan to break down the Exiled in a similar fashion(none of the other members know he was a mole, but some just don't trust him anyway).

- Through a series of events that took place during the battle, Rextanse and a battered Jynx, enter "The Void" to attempt to bring Jynx back to the conscious world.

- A keyblader scout(Ricti), who has been spying on Org. 13 since their resurrection, returns to his base to report the past events the other Keybladers.

During the time Ricti is away, the Exiled recruit members 14-21, and Rextanse returns with Jynx from “The Void”.

-Assuming that the Exiled are attempting to use Kingdom Hearts, like Org. 13 did, the keybladers attack members of the Exiled Order separately (learning from Org. 13's mistake: not fighting as a whole group). While the members are off on a specific assignment (perhaps the recruiting?), the keybladers attack while they're scattered about.

-Each keyblader looses, save Liri. Though she won her match, she spares her adversaries because of her crush on Rextanse. Ricti, Jixah's brother, is killed by Daxic without Jixah knowing.

PART/STORY/CHAPTER TWO Weakness.

-The Mystic Order is introduced. A brief description of their past as a group is given. (The option of individual human pasts will be there, just before each Mystic Order member is defeated, though it take up too much time/prove unnecessary.)

-The Exiled continue to recruit members, adding members 22-30 (Or should this take place AFTER the Mystic Order?)

-The Mystic Order honorably challenge the Exiled to battle, in attempts to see exactly why Trinity shows so much interest in this group of nobodies. Each group of Exiled members is teleported to a separate place in time and space to fight their respective Mystic Order member. This is all just to show their strength. If they wanted, the Mystic Order could crush the Exiled Order without breaking a sweat, if they attacked as a group.

-In a bit of a Dragon Ball Z style (jump from fight to fight in order to make the battles seem longer than they are), each battle takes place. And, again with many casualties on the Exiled's side, the Exiled win and are taken back to the dimension they're used to.

-Do to the massive number of casualties, and the near victories ONLY gained by exploiting small weakness of the Mystic Order, some of Exiled get their wake up call of how weak they really are. Many of the members go off into solitude to train, while others do so as a group. This is when Jynx and Rextanse (Xatsuin sneaks in with them) re-enter "The Void", to learn to hone their powers. Upon which time, they are ambushed by Xemo.

-At this time, the Reverse Order's Exal shows his face and warns all the members of the upcoming "test", before leaving with a cocky laugh. He gives this warning in the form of a group of questions and riddles.

PART/STORY/CHAPTER THREE Conspiracies.

-(The battle with Xemo is carried over, and finished in this chapter)Most of the members are still training, some are done, The Order of Sin give their assault on each individual member. This takes place within their minds.

-While the attack is taking place, the Reverse Order hold a meeting, to discuss their goals and plans (this serves as their introduction). The details on the clone experiments that created them and Jynx are revealed.

-The results of the battles with the Order of Sin vary. Some win, some loose. Those who win become better for it, while those who loose become even more consumed by the sin they lost to. This event causes each of the members to realize that it's time to regroup back at The Castle That Once Was. This does not include Jynx, Rextanse, and Xatsuin, because they’re still struggling through “The Void.”

-They each arrive only to meet the Reverse Order standing at the gates. This battle causes the most tragedies of all, leaving about 8(give or take a few) members alive. During this battle, Jynx and Rextanse return from the void just in time to aid the wounded. After everything was said and done, (everyone beaten, battered, or dead, and the Reverse Order eliminated) the traitors ambush everyone else, and kidnap Xana.

PART/STORY/CHAPTER FOUR Betrayal.(or) Endings.

-Daxic reveals the full extent of his plans. That he plans to combine his and Xana's powers to create a beast of ultimate power. “The Eater of Worlds”, a creature made of acid, with Xana’s newly formed heart as its core. And it would be under HIS control.

-While Daxic begins the creation of his eater of worlds, the last of the knocked out Exiled come to. They realize what happened, and begin searching for Daxic and the other traitors. As they get closer and closer, they begin to loose faith in the idea that Xana's still alive.

-The finally locate Daxic when the creature is completed, and Xana is nearly drained of all of her energy. The final battle takes place, atop the roof of The Castle That Never Was (unless we can come up with a better location).

-At the end of the battle most everyone is dead. Jynx is able to destroy the world eater, and Daxic soon after. He joins the other survivors in a sigh of relief. That is, just to find out that Daxic wasn't dead. He couldn't be killed. He simply reformed from the acid.

-At this moment, Trinity finally reveals herself. With the simple phrase "Sleep, ye restless soul.", Daxic fades into nothingness. She tells the few survivors her role in the story. That she brought Org. 13 back to life, that it was her fault the Mystic Order attacked, and that the Order of Sin were her former disciples (and a gift given to the Reverse Order to do with what they will). She told them that this was all to give Jynx, the one of two nobodies ever to gain a heart, enough strength to seal Kingdom Hearts for good.

-Sacrificing his heart and soul, Jynx seals Trinity within Kingdom Hearts, and removes the lock. This prevents anyone, even a keyblade master, from opening Kingdom Hearts again. It's simply too powerful, and too pure to be tampered with. And Trinity's natural urge to send the world into nothingness is one that cannot be allowed to roam free. Eventually, she will erode from the inside out (being the mistress of naught), leaving Kingdom Hearts devoid of anything but what it was originally meant to have: Light.

-The remaining members band together, yet again, in attempt to recreate the Exiled from the ground up. There are signs, though, that some of the members thought to be dead might still be alive/return.




I'm not really sure where/when we could fit the whole Darthex stuff in there...any suggestions would be nice.

hmm this is good to know.

[yoyoj06]

the reason xymed and xias return w/o exel knowing is because they wanted to get rid of the exiled then(at the gate), but exel they had to wait for the right moment or they would for sure fail

as for who fights them, i cant remember if we decided on that or not

[Ojike]

Hm. Yeah I think that could work. I'll try to edit that in when I get the time.

[Knightflare]

Had a conference.
Since there may not be an Exiled 2... There's a character that NI and I want in Exiled 1.
Lorixssa =D
And I guess we kinda talked about her background and stuff.
She and Rextanse go way back apparently.
Before the Exiled.
And we talked about how she could be a "Fallen God(dess)", kinda like Rextanse, whose a Fallen God.
And I think she becomes a Fallen like Rextanse because of the fact that becomes a Nobody before a becoming a full one, I guess?
I don't know.
I think it'd be a cool idea.
It's real apparent that Rextanse and Lorixssa had a relationship.
I'm pretty sure it was sexual as they're real flirty around eachother. "Wraps her braids around Rextanse's neck and pulls tight" :>
So, having her in the Exiled 1 Story would kinda put some OSHI- to Rextanse's and Kaarix's relationship.
I'm thinking she's not a member of the Exiled but is there to help.
I think both her and Rextanse are too lazy about their powers, but she's more cheery than ol' boy.
So this is what we have in mind.
Really, this is what I can remember from the conference.

So, if I get some stuff wrong, don't kill me NI :[[[

[Axel Owns]

k oji, the people you didnt include in the rankings, should i cut them off of the site? or keep them on as "other characters:

[╬ProperArtist╬]

Originally Posted by Knightflare

Had a conference.
Since there may not be an Exiled 2... There's a character that NI and I want in Exiled 1.
Lorixssa =D
And I guess we kinda talked about her background and stuff.
She and Rextanse go way back apparently.
Before the Exiled.
And we talked about how she could be a "Fallen God(dess)", kinda like Rextanse, whose a Fallen God.
And I think she becomes a Fallen like Rextanse because of the fact that becomes a Nobody before a becoming a full one, I guess?
I don't know.
I think it'd be a cool idea.
It's real apparent that Rextanse and Lorixssa had a relationship.
I'm pretty sure it was sexual as they're real flirty around eachother. "Wraps her braids around Rextanse's neck and pulls tight" :>
So, having her in the Exiled 1 Story would kinda put some OSHI- to Rextanse's and Kaarix's relationship.
I'm thinking she's not a member of the Exiled but is there to help.
I think both her and Rextanse are too lazy about their powers, but she's more cheery than ol' boy.
So this is what we have in mind.
Really, this is what I can remember from the conference.

So, if I get some stuff wrong, don't kill me NI :[[[

sounds awesome >:]

haha i smell cat fight between Kaarix & Lorixssa...
and seeing as she's gonna probably always hang around Rextanse when she's introduced..she'd probably insult Jynx or smack him with her hair on accident or something xD

[black_myth]

AP- AWSOME PIC. love it

AO -Zallex is not ranked cuz he is not with the Exield. he was for a bit but not long enogh to be even in the Exiled. he Works for Daxic. so not all peopel who are not rank are not in at all. they just dont fall under the Exiled

[Ojike]

Originally Posted by Axel Owns

k oji, the people you didnt include in the rankings, should i cut them off of the site? or keep them on as "other characters:

Put 'em under the "others". Except Rogexeg. >.> Unless you guys want to keep him.

[NobodyImportant]

Originally Posted by OogieBoogie

sounds awesome >:]

haha i smell cat fight between Kaarix & Lorixssa...
and seeing as she's gonna probably always hang around Rextanse when she's introduced..she'd probably insult Jynx or smack him with her hair on accident or something xD

Or try to add him to her manharem and get Xana mad for the first time in her life. :D

[DrBanxon]

Awww, that's not fair, Myix can't be in Exiled 1 :[

At least I can't think of a way for her to be in it...
*sigh* There goes another The Calx exclusive

Oogie: You mess with the Banxo, you get the HORNS.
That stupid egyptian thinks hes sooo cool with his name and his ankha crap.
I bet that's not even a word. >:[

[twilight abyss]

Originally Posted by twilight abyss

Okay, and just how am I supposed to show he's strong???
As for the killing thing, I'm sorry no, I don't want him to die, if there is no Exiled 2, then he'll die in 1, but I'm not sure how yet

EDIT: I have an idea for killing off Caxjob =D
Since NI probably hated him the most, I think Zaverxai should kill him
It's kind of the same thing as Banxon(kind of) he pops in on the traitors, and when they ask "join or die" he says "You really think you can beat-"*claw through the face =D

^Just wanted to make sure people saw this, also, I'm making Xatsuin MUCH younger, now instead of 8000 years of being a nobody, it's 50 =D

Okay, I think that I know why you think Xatsuin is so weak, I kind of described him as not being serious
Like how you guys think of Banxon, when he acts goofy or nervous he sucks at fighting, butb when he gets serious and brave he kicks uber ass =D
Xatsuin is not always goofy, he gets serious quite often, also, he is smart too, he actually is majorly involved with the study of 2 things, the heartless, and if there is an afterlife for nobodies
So he is serious A LOT of the time actually, but when he's relaxed he becomes more goofy and friendly.

I'm also not sure about the dualities thing, I think I just might want speed instead, I need to think about it

EDIT: I wouldn`t mind Xatsuin dying to Xemo if Ruxel brings him back =D

[Ojike]

Originally Posted by twilight abyss

^Just wanted to make sure people saw this, also, I'm making Xatsuin MUCH younger, now instead of 8000 years of being a nobody, it's 50 =D

Okay, I think that I know why you think Xatsuin is so weak, I kind of described him as not being serious
Like how you guys think of Banxon, when he acts goofy or nervous he sucks at fighting, butb when he gets serious and brave he kicks uber ass =D
Xatsuin is not always goofy, he gets serious quite often, also, he is smart too, he actually is majorly involved with the study of 2 things, the heartless, and if there is an afterlife for nobodies
So he is serious A LOT of the time actually, but when he's relaxed he becomes more goofy and friendly.

I'm also not sure about the dualities thing, I think I just might want speed instead, I need to think about it

EDIT: I wouldn`t mind Xatsuin dying to Xemo if Ruxel brings him back =D

It's not personality that makes a character seem weak. It's lack of abilities, and expansion on the element. Banxon is given that "weak" vibe, because he just doesn't like to fight. He normally avoids violence. But he has a hefty array of techniques at his fingertips. Stuff that helps him exploit Banxius' weakness(es). What Xatsuin needs are abilities to use. :O We know he can split into two opposing elements. Now expand on that.

Oh and Ruxel dies shortly after ... or even before Jynx and Rextanse get out of the void. So he won't even know about Xatsuin's death before his own death comes about.

[twilight abyss]

Oh, okay, but like I said I might use speed, awile ago actually I thought of some speed abilities
It was called "Flash Blade"
It was cool, and since I might get Speed instead, I might get to use it =D

[Knightflare]

Originally Posted by Ojike

Oh and Ruxel dies shortly after ... or even before Jynx and Rextanse get out of the void. So he won't even know about Xatsuin's death before his own death comes about.

OH AND SPEAKING ON HIS DEATH
Yoyo and I were talking about it a WHILE back and we're still trying to figure out if he's going to die while J&R are in Void or out.
Someone/peeps want to help?