The Exiled

[Maverick E.S]

My messege to be continued becuase i forgot what i was going to post

[Dawning Twilight]

*Chapter Update*
i finished chapter 32 and i think it should be enjoyable ^^
http://forums.khinsider.com/fan-fict...ml#post2572822

Note: after chapter 32 finishes there will be only 4 more chapters until all is finished with Salix I. from there i will begin Salix II though it's difficult right now because i don't have all the necessary elements only 3 of them so far.

*Sacrifice
*Reversal Polarity
*Doctor

[The Lionheart]

Originally Posted by Angel's Prayer

On the subject of Locations....I do not quite get what you're asking me for xP...

i really never understood them myself, but i think it means where they hang out the most, or "where they are at the time" like for jynx, it might be "the void" or it might just be "with my xana-chan" xD

edit: and AP, how exactly did you get 'darthex' from 'marx'? im sure you've had to explain this a million times, but i want to make sure i dont have anything mixed up

[Dawning Twilight]

*Chapter Update*
i finished chapter 33 and i put when the updates for the next chapters will be made as well as a few spoilers as to what will happen in the last 3 chapters of Salix I and the beginning chapter of Salix II. click the below link if needed ^^
http://forums.khinsider.com/fan-fict...rm-key-11.html

[Maverick E.S]

Awesome you sure are doing alot of chapter updates fast

[Dawning Twilight]

^thanks i work hard on my writing as DT hopes to be a writer later on in life =D





EDIT:
NEED ALL INFORMATION ASAP PLEASE. THNX ^^


MasterMind/Xodyc
i'll be needing either Xodyc or Zixan to volunteer for Salix II the opening first chapter.



after that i'll be needing 3 characters for a scouting mission that will turn into a battle. then i'll be needing 1 different character from the above 3 to join either Zixan or Xodyc for a chat earlier and later on in the chapter.


one of the three must be pretty good at scouting/spying and all 4 characters that includes the 1 below must be alive after the betrayal of Daxic and a good while after the new Exiled Order is formed under Zixan and Xodyc.




Scouting party/battle
1.
2.
3.
maybe
4.


Joins Zixan or Xodyc for a chat
1.
maybe
2.

[Tenerence Love]

hey guys I was watching this thread for a while and i finnaly finished up a member i’ve been working on

Exiled Order #: i dont know >>
Original Name: Ganelon
Exiled Name: Nalgenox
Alliance:
Dominant Hand: Right
Age: he was attacked by heartless when he was around thirty but has been a nobody for almost 1,000 years
Height: 5 feet 8 inches
Weight: 150 lb.
Eyes: Black
Hair: he has a short beard and mustache like those old european knights
Sex: Male
Alias: n/a
Weapon: medieval flail and caltrops (Caltrop - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia)
Clothing: organization coat?
Hometown: Somewhere in Europe (cant decide)
Location:
Theme Song: dunno
Artist: n/a
Fighting style: he’ll slow you down with the caltrops then beat you with his flail. otherwise he’ll be on his horse (keep reading)
Quote: n/a
Personality: quiet, european
Nobody Name: Guenes
Nobody Description: Guenes was Ganelons horse when he was alive. Guenes heart was taken by heartless at the same time as Ganelons and so she became a nobody with him. Nalgenox can summon Guenes and is the only one that can ride her. she can go really fast, like to the point of running over water. this is basically his element too, being unable to fall off her unless he wants to and make her go so fast. i decided that with Guenes he doesnt need a real element.
Element: Control over Guenes
Element Description: explained above
Background: Ganelon was a knight back in medieval europe (12 century or 1100's) who served his feudal lord. he was known for his exelent skills and whatnot. When his lords manor was under siege by heartless, everyone got their heart taken, but only Ganelon and Guenes hearts were pure enough to become human/horse like nobodies.

Is he good? i’m hoping Guenes is a original idea…
I dont know what alliance means, i guess its good or bad? And whad does it mean by location?

[╬ProperArtist╬]

The profile seems original and all but it just doesn't seem to fit the eXiLd at all. It's more Old English folklore rather than a nobodies story. Maybe you can talk to Xodyc about his Norse Mythology Mystic Member and see if this character of yours could pair with otherwise there's no place for him in a place such as the eXiLd.

And I'm not even sure that we're accepting new members, you'll have to ask the other's for approval

[Dawning Twilight]

Originally Posted by Tenerence Love

hey guys I was watching this thread for a while and i finnaly finished up a member i’ve been working on

Exiled Order #: i dont know >>
Original Name: Ganelon
Exiled Name: Nalgenox
Alliance:
Dominant Hand: Right
Age: he was attacked by heartless when he was around thirty but has been a nobody for almost 1,000 years
Height: 5 feet 8 inches
Weight: 150 lb.
Eyes: Black
Hair: he has a short beard and mustache like those old european knights
Sex: Male
Alias: n/a
Weapon: medieval flail and caltrops (Caltrop - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia)
Clothing: organization coat?
Hometown: Somewhere in Europe (cant decide)
Location:
Theme Song: dunno
Artist: n/a
Fighting style: he’ll slow you down with the caltrops then beat you with his flail. otherwise he’ll be on his horse (keep reading)
Quote: n/a
Personality: quiet, european
Nobody Name: Guenes
Nobody Description: Guenes was Ganelons horse when he was alive. Guenes heart was taken by heartless at the same time as Ganelons and so she became a nobody with him. Nalgenox can summon Guenes and is the only one that can ride her. she can go really fast, like to the point of running over water. this is basically his element too, being unable to fall off her unless he wants to and make her go so fast. i decided that with Guenes he doesnt need a real element.
Element: Control over Guenes
Element Description: explained above
Background: Ganelon was a knight back in medieval europe (12 century or 1100's) who served his feudal lord. he was known for his exelent skills and whatnot. When his lords manor was under siege by heartless, everyone got their heart taken, but only Ganelon and Guenes hearts were pure enough to become human/horse like nobodies.

Is he good? i’m hoping Guenes is a original idea…
I dont know what alliance means, i guess its good or bad? And whad does it mean by location?

you certainly limit your control don't you. i saw you in the family guy thread =D as for everything it's certainly interesting but as OB said as of right now i do not believe we are accepting any new members. you may want to get a bit more specific as well.

[Tenerence Love]

Originally Posted by OogieBoogie

The profile seems original and all but it just doesn't seem to fit the eXiLd at all. It's more Old English folklore rather than a nobodies story. Maybe you can talk to Xodyc about his Norse Mythology Mystic Member and see if this character of yours could pair with otherwise there's no place for him in a place such as the eXiLd.

And I'm not even sure that we're accepting new members, you'll have to ask the other's for approval

oh youre not? that sucks
then what can I do?

DT: i guess i can say his element is that he can ride any four legged horse like animal and not fall off.
Good enough?

[Dawning Twilight]

Originally Posted by Tenerence Love

oh youre not? that sucks
then what can I do?

DT: i guess i can say his element is that he can ride any four legged horse like animal and not fall off.
Good enough?

um well sure if that's what you want. it's up to the creator i suppose. as for what you can do. not much if anything.

^^;;;

[╬ProperArtist╬]

Originally Posted by Tenerence Love

oh youre not? that sucks
then what can I do?

DT: i guess i can say his element is that he can ride any four legged horse like animal and not fall off.
Good enough?

you don't have to be such a smart ass about it. This is our story, you can't just come in and get mad because we comment about your character which YOU'RE submitting to US so you can join.

[Xodyc]

oh oogie, i made the anglo-saxon(british) member. (of course with ojike's help) ,just to let you know

[Angel's Prayer]

Originally Posted by Axel Owns

i really never understood them myself, but i think it means where they hang out the most, or "where they are at the time" like for jynx, it might be "the void" or it might just be "with my xana-chan" xD

edit: and AP, how exactly did you get 'darthex' from 'marx'? im sure you've had to explain this a million times, but i want to make sure i dont have anything mixed up

Ah I see...

Zhymarx- Exploring the Dark Corridors of the Worlds
Xalatine- Meditating in the Exiled Stronghold
Axit- the resting place of the Real (basically, the graveyard where his Heartless was buried. Axit's Heartless continued to live without a Nobody and thus died seeing as how Exiled took place such a long way into the future)
X- Anywhere the Exiled takes him

Darthex's origin actually links several characters together. For starters, it all began with Myromex/X. Back then, when X was still known as Myromex, he was conducting experiments on Nobodies. Specifically, he was conducting research on the false emotions brought about by the lack of a heart.

His first experiment was where he attempted for the first time to gain a Nobody that had no memories, with that, he proceeded to a specific location where he found a particularly strong-willed subject.

Through which, he was able to garner his first Nobody Experiment, a boy named Tai. Having figured where to pick up this Nobody, Myromex proceeded and began to do experiments on Axit. Axit was bombarded with different emotions, each different from the rest, with the use of Myromex's now honed ability of memory transferrence. But Axit was an unstable Nobody, this was due to a strange circumstance in which a fear, anger and other negative emotions had been instilled and left within his shell when Myromex removed his Heart.

With that, Myromex moved on to a new subject, a young boy named Marx. (Myromex lieaks teh little boys D Myromex had surmised an experiment in which he would instill a single emotion on a Nobody, and for Marx, he chose the emotion of Hate. Seeing the grudges this boy had, he could easily manipulate the circumstances to produce a very strong feeling, and with that, he would then proceed to remove the heart and create a Nobody.

Myromex picked up Marx's Nobody in Twilight Town and proceeded to test him. Eventually, he found that being attached to a single emotion, the Nobody was becoming alarmingly powerful. It fed on that single emotion, using it as its own power. With that, Myromex proceeded with several other experiments, each making use of a single emotion at a time, but the results were nothing compared to Marx's Nobody. He was impressed to the point that he decided to give it a new identity, but not as a regular Nobody like his past attempt, Axit. This thing was not completely human, it was more like a weapon. With that, he called this experiment "Darthex"

wow, long and pointless, yes? If anything, it's given me an idea to come up with the several other Nobodies Myromex was working with s

[Dawning Twilight]

^pretty cool AP do any of them survive past the betrayal of Daxic?