The Exiled

[Xyffejer]

Originally Posted by twilight abyss

Good point, we can't really have new members, I guess me and AO were the last ones =D
Maybe we should get rid of some(not a lot, just some) of the Exiled 2 characters
Like Xyfejjer, he doesn't come here anymore soooo....

LOL I wanted to get to 1000, and then when we were just at that point...gone, LOL

EDIT: LMAO, I just was about to read the overveiw and then "The other thread was closed because it had too much awesomeness" LOLOL

Actually i pass by every so often but since Exiled 2 is still in the "not sure its even going to happen" phase i pretty much just read. Oh and i work so i don't go online as often.

Originally Posted by Knightflare

I'm about to draw a set of pictures/a picture that have some of the recurring jokes of the Exiled(IRL AND IN STORY).

Finish one drawing before you start another your gonna get bogged down.

[DrBanxon]

KF: Jynx being Banxon's daddy
Greatest meme right there

AP: Jynx looks eyegasmic, you're awexome :D
And those pics made me lol agian for like the 3rd time

Ojike: I hate that Lenxe guy, move him down to 49 if ya want to.
Or even better, 69... :>

[yoyoj06]

whoever is doing that brief plot outline has to fix the whole reverse order deal

[Ojike]

Originally Posted by yoyoj06

whoever is doing that brief plot outline has to fix the whole reverse order deal

I can't do that until you tell me what to fix. D:

[Maverick E.S]

Is there anything I can do for the story?



Ojike and everyone else who has posted in the art conversation no typing section nice artwork i submitted a few of mine in there too but i just started so i only have 3 stuff on the last 2 pages.

[twilight abyss]

Dude, since you left early, and we never really establish that your character was an actual in the story(people make characters and leave all the time) I don't think you can be in it, since we are accepting NO NEW MEMBERS

MM- You should edit the first post with the new outline =D

AP-Nice pics 0o0

MAJOR EDIT:
Just some things I would like to say

-The Mystic Order is introduced. A brief description of their past as a group is given. (The option of individual human pasts will be there, just before each Mystic Order member is defeated, though it take up too much time/prove unnecessary.)

-The Exiled continue to recruit members, adding members 22-30 (Or should this take place AFTER the Mystic Order?)

-The Mystic Order honorably challenge the Exiled to battle, in attempts to see exactly why Trinity shows so much interest in this group of nobodies. Each group of Exiled members is teleported to a separate place in time and space to fight their respective Mystic Order member. This is all just to show their strength. If they wanted, the Mystic Order could crush the Exiled Order without breaking a sweat, if they attacked as a group.

okay, first of all, me and AO were talking about Charxai's and Xatsuin's partnership, and we decided that they met before the exiled, but charxai didn't join at first, so we were thinking his joining would happen like this, Xatsuin is fighting the mystic order and the group Xatsuin is in is doing bad, everyone except Xatsuin has fainted/died, and Xatsuin has basically all of his power drained, as he is about to strike the deathblow to Xatsuin, Nitrogen explodes on his back =D
Then it's just Xatsuin and Charxai killing him
We should establish who is fighting who in all the battles

-Do to the massive number of casualties, and the near victories ONLY gained by exploiting small weakness of the Mystic Order, some of Exiled get their wake up call of how weak they really are. Many of the members go off into solitude to train, while others do so as a group. This is when Jynx and Rextanse (Xatsuin sneaks in with them) re-enter "The Void", to learn to hone their powers. Upon which time, they are ambushed by Xemo.

That gave me an idea, that's when they decide to take him as an apprentice, Xatsuin does good(he still gets his ass handed to him) in the battle and actually manages to help a little, and that's when Jynx and Rextanse see his potential and decide to take him as their apprentice =D

[yoyoj06]

ojike- wher you have the part that says that they are stopped at the gate by reverse order, say that after a talk between the reverse and exiled, the reverse leaves, and maybe about 15 seconds later, xias and xymed reappear to attack the exiled without exel knowing.
from here either
a) xias fights one or two members SEPARATE from xymed, who fights one or two exiled members. then we keep going between the 2 battles. both reverse members eventually fall
or
b)its a 3 vs 2 or a 4 vs 2 fight. reverse members fall

then you have daxic reveal his plans starting in sect 5. and then right before the daxic battle, exel appears,makes a hint toward a higher power (trinity) and fights ruxel. ruxel kills exel, dying himself in the process, axel is freed from exel's body and explains how exel came to be and his purpose and such.

then daxic fight

hopefully you can rewrite that when you add it lol

[NobodyImportant]

Originally Posted by yoyoj06

a) xias fights one or two members SEPARATE from xymed, who fights one or two exiled members. then we keep going between the 2 battles. both reverse members eventually fall
or
b)its a 3 vs 2 or a 4 vs 2 fight. reverse members fall

Who fights who? I know you guys came up with this before I joined, so I'm in the dark about this.

[twilight abyss]

Hey, I had an idea for the last chapter of the Exiled, well, since it says some people believed dead are alive, I want to have it that Xatsuin's fight with whatever traitor he's fighting, it ends in a stalemate =D
They both fall, and both presumed dead
And then he comes back in the Daxic battle(but not to fight Daxic, I know that's only for Jynx and Rextanse =D)

But the problem is, which traitor shall I ask to fight, I know!!!! Since Caxjob was supposed to kill Zaverxi, and Geist is permanently gone, can I be the one who fights Zaverxi??? Unless you want him in 2 NI.
Either way, I at least want him to be Xatsuin's enemy, as in they hate each other, since they are basically opposites.

So, what say you NI?=D

Also, I'm working towards Xatsuin's final template

[╬ProperArtist╬]

Originally Posted by twilight abyss

Dude, since you left early, and we never really establish that your character was an actual in the story(people make characters and leave all the time) I don't think you can be in it, since we are accepting NO NEW MEMBERS

MM- You should edit the first post with the new outline =D

AP-Nice pics 0o0

MAJOR EDIT:
Just some things I would like to say



okay, first of all, me and AO were talking about Charxai's and Xatsuin's partnership, and we decided that they met before the exiled, but charxai didn't join at first, so we were thinking his joining would happen like this, Xatsuin is fighting the mystic order and the group Xatsuin is in is doing bad, everyone except Xatsuin has fainted/died, and Xatsuin has basically all of his power drained, as he is about to strike the deathblow to Xatsuin, Nitrogen explodes on his back =D
Then it's just Xatsuin and Charxai killing him
We should establish who is fighting who in all the battles



That gave me an idea, that's when they decide to take him as an apprentice, Xatsuin does good(he still gets his ass handed to him) in the battle and actually manages to help a little, and that's when Jynx and Rextanse see his potential and decide to take him as their apprentice =D

DUDE WTF!?

It's not gonna work at all. Xemo vs Rextanse "First of All" is a a grudge no holds bared match. Xatsuin would even survive that battle, let alone be in it. Jynx helps Rextanse fight Xemo, one reason is because in the making of this fight Jynx learns the HIKE ability AND he's both a creation of me & knightflare.

Just no dude...

and having everyone in your group dead or beaten..is an understatement. If Rextanse, Jynx, Xana, Daxic, Zixan, Xodyc, Zhymarx, Salix, Sabixel & Ruxel have a hard time against them..seriously how in the HELL do you think Xatsuin would even be alive in those fights.

Hell we don't even know if Xatsuin's gonna be in the story that long...

[NobodyImportant]

Originally Posted by twilight abyss

Hey, I had an idea for the last chapter of the Exiled, well, since it says some people believed dead are alive, I want to have it that Xatsuin's fight with whatever traitor he's fighting, it ends in a stalemate =D
They both fall, and both presumed dead
And then he comes back in the Daxic battle(but not to fight Daxic, I know that's only for Jynx and Rextanse =D)

But the problem is, which traitor shall I ask to fight, I know!!!! Since Caxjob was supposed to kill Zaverxi, and Geist is permanently gone, can I be the one who fights Zaverxi??? Unless you want him in 2 NI.
Either way, I at least want him to be Xatsuin's enemy, as in they hate each other, since they are basically opposites.

So, what say you NI?=D

Also, I'm working towards Xatsuin's final template

Sure if you want your arse handed to you. And actually it was Sabixel who was supposed to kill Zaverxi. So sorry.

As for hating...sure! Can I kill you? ^___^

[twilight abyss]

^sorry, I thought that Caxjob was supposed to kill him

Oogie-ummmm... Matt put that up, I thought that was the new story, so don't blame me, I thought you 2 had talked about it

And I'm sick of everyone saying" if he/she can't beat them how do you think Xatsuin can" shit
Higher rank doesn't mean more power! I mean WTF, who says that Xatsuin is automatically weak cause he's new!

EDIT: No you can't, he doesn't have a big part Xatsuin lives until exiled 2(if there is one)
But hating each other is fine =D

[╬ProperArtist╬]

Just talked to Ojike...and haha you're in for a surprise

I'll let him talk

[Ojike]

sheesh...shoulda known there'd be conflict before page 5....

Originally Posted by yoyoj06

ojike- wher you have the part that says that they are stopped at the gate by reverse order, say that after a talk between the reverse and exiled, the reverse leaves, and maybe about 15 seconds later, xias and xymed reappear to attack the exiled without exel knowing.
from here either
a) xias fights one or two members SEPARATE from xymed, who fights one or two exiled members. then we keep going between the 2 battles. both reverse members eventually fall
or
b)its a 3 vs 2 or a 4 vs 2 fight. reverse members fall

then you have daxic reveal his plans starting in sect 5. and then right before the daxic battle, exel appears,makes a hint toward a higher power (trinity) and fights ruxel. ruxel kills exel, dying himself in the process, axel is freed from exel's body and explains how exel came to be and his purpose and such.

then daxic fight

hopefully you can rewrite that when you add it lol

I'm not so sure we can work it out that way. What do they talk about? Why do they leave? Why do Xymed and Xias return without Exal (we need to spell it this way, so to keep constant with the "jumbled version of the original)? I just don't know. D: It conflicts.

TA- Umm....yeah...I really don't know if Xatsuin would survive against the Mystic Order, much less live long enough for the betrayel. Which is why I was hesitant to bring him in before that attack. Each individual Mystic Order member can PWN Rextanse (when he's at full power), seeing as they harbor the powers of SEVERAL gods rather than one. That's why so many people fall to them. They're the strongest enemies the Exiled have to face. If they actually attacked all at once, there'd be no survivors. But, of course, Xatsuin DOES survive to enter the void.

As for the void issue, I had Xatsuin sneak in behind Rextanse and Jynx for several reasons. He just seems like a more meschevious type, and it's kinda what you did here. xD I'm not sure about Jynx and Rextanse taking him on as an apprentice, but I'm sure they'd let him tag along. Rextanse would probably even grow to really like him. I have no clue if he'd survive against Xemo, but that's not for me to decide. I honestly think Xatsuin dieing to Xemo just after Rextanse grew to like him would be a great motivator to actually use his sword. And a very moving moment in the story. I'm not saying Xatsuin's weak....but you've yet to really give us a reason to think he's strong.

I'm tired of typing...and I finally got photoshop back up. So I'm done.

[twilight abyss]

Okay, and just how am I supposed to show he's strong???
As for the killing thing, I'm sorry no, I don't want him to die, if there is no Exiled 2, then he'll die in 1, but I'm not sure how yet

EDIT: I have an idea for killing off Caxjob =D
Since NI probably hated him the most, I think Zaverxai should kill him
It's kind of the same thing as Banxon(kind of) he pops in on the traitors, and when they ask "join or die" he says "You really think you can beat-"*claw through the face =D