The Exiled

[Knightflare]

Originally Posted by AP

the Ultima Lance will resemble a cross between Soul Edge and Ultima Weapon btw....

Woah.
Woah
Soul Edge?
Crazy.
CRAZY
CRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAZY

Originally Posted by DT

i never realized that Skyx was so short O_O

He's like twelve. xD

[Dawning Twilight]

Originally Posted by Knightflare

Woah.
Woah
Soul Edge?
Crazy.
CRAZY
CRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAZY

He's like twelve. xD

i never realized he was so young. O_O



EDIT:
also i'm about to edit chapter 27 with DrBanxon, Xatsuin, Zaverxi, Zixan and Rextanse. so i will send out the chapter before posting it to those who i can remember asking their names of their characters above are in bold.

EDITED EDIT:

Chapter Update
i finished chapter 26 which involves Salix and Selvix. i hope it will be viewed. ^^ and also the link in my sig called "DT's Exiled Order Story" is the link for the story if you need one. ^^
Chapter 26: Preparations

[yoyoj06]

can someone PM me the new template i have to use for aconex so i can give it to AO

edit: nvm got it

[Dawning Twilight]

yep i sent most of it though i'm not sure if that was all of it.

[yoyoj06]

Original Name: Ocean
Exiled name: Aconex
Appearance: smart looking? he just looks like a smart guy, and he is. has that awkward smile at times
Height: 6'2
Eyes: ocean blue eyes, high tech glasses, sort of like goggles
Hair: dirty blone, short hair, like a typical guy scraggly hair
Gender: male
Dominant hand: left-handed
Age: 25
Alias: The Broken Tide
Weapon: A giant frisbee like weapon. has 4 blades sticking out the sides. can throw it like s frisbee, use it as a shield, ride on it,shield bas someone, take off the blades and throw em
Clothing: organization cloak
Hometown: same as salix's, dont remember name of it
Quote: (coming soon)
Theme Song: tbd
Artist: tbd
Personality: outgoing really, DOESNT use his smarts to outwit people, but kind of mocks stupidity from people. he is really only searching for his brother
Element : atmosphere/disambiguation
Element Description: he can manipulate the atmoshpere and fight in it. if out in the open, he can break into pieces and fly around to places and reassemble(meaning he can also go to multiple places at once. if he is killed outside in the open air, HE WILL come back to life, cause when he fades, the fade things go up, and once in the atmosphere, they reassemble. so he can only be killed in an closed envorionment where the fade stuff eventually wears out. the weapon can also use powers of the atmosphere.
Nobody Name: Forlayers
Nobody description: tbd
Fighting Style: will get right in on the action, loves being smart in battle, he taunts to himself, not out aloud, he is what you would call a "technical fighter" meaning faster, weaker attacks than stronger, powerful attacks
Background: its done, but im editing, it has been released b4, but i have made some changes to it

[Dawning Twilight]

Originally Posted by yoyoj06

Original Name: Ocean
Exiled name: Aconex
Appearance: smart looking? he just looks like a smart guy, and he is. has that awkward smile at times
Height: 6'2
Eyes: ocean blue eyes, high tech glasses, sort of like goggles
Hair: dirty blone, short hair, like a typical guy scraggly hair
Gender: male
Dominant hand: left-handed
Age: 25
Alias: The Broken Tide
Weapon: A giant frisbee like weapon. has 4 blades sticking out the sides. can throw it like s frisbee, use it as a shield, ride on it,shield bas someone, take off the blades and throw em
Clothing: organization cloak
Hometown: same as salix's, dont remember name of it
Quote: (coming soon)
Theme Song: tbd
Artist: tbd
Personality: outgoing really, DOESNT use his smarts to outwit people, but kind of mocks stupidity from people. he is really only searching for his brother
Element : atmosphere/disambiguation
Element Description: he can manipulate the atmoshpere and fight in it. if out in the open, he can break into pieces and fly around to places and reassemble(meaning he can also go to multiple places at once. if he is killed outside in the open air, HE WILL come back to life, cause when he fades, the fade things go up, and once in the atmosphere, they reassemble. so he can only be killed in an closed envorionment where the fade stuff eventually wears out. the weapon can also use powers of the atmosphere.
Nobody Name: Forlayers
Nobody description: tbd
Fighting Style: will get right in on the action, loves being smart in battle, he taunts to himself, not out aloud, he is what you would call a "technical fighter" meaning faster, weaker attacks than stronger, powerful attacks
Background: its done, but im editing, it has been released b4, but i have made some changes to it

very nice ideas yoyo ^^
...........

[black_myth]

I must say it is hard to read 20 pages with a slow computer. xD

I am going to try to come onevry day now but i warn you all. I may not be able to.
for reason i wish not to get in.

for all of you who do not know i am currently, writting 3 to 4 other storys so working on he is hard. but fear not, i have not stoped writting about this story.

My art teacher does not like fantasy drawing and said my pictures are crapy that hurt.

And AO should have info abot Zallex

[The Lionheart]

i found some info on zallex, but ill figure that out later
but is zallex a friend or foe to the exiled?

edit: this is what i have on zallex:

Exiled Order #: N/A
Original Name:
Exiled Name: Zallex
Alliance:
Dominant Hand:
Age:
Height:
Weight:
Eyes: Jet black.
Hair: Long and black that hangs below his shoulder blades and long bangs.
Appearance: He has a twisted right arm. (Like nightmares)
Sex: Male
Alias: The Demonic Demon
Weapon: A twisted large sword.
Clothing:
Hometown:
Location:
Theme Song:
Artist:
Fighting style:
Quote:
Personality: he does not care what others think and is harsh to others.
Nobody Name:
Nobody Description:
Element: Disentegration
Element Description:
Background:

and here is the template for all who need it (mm can you post it on the main page?)

Exiled Order #:
Original Name:
Exiled Name:
Alliance:
Dominant Hand:
Age:
Height:
Weight:
Eyes:
Hair:
Sex:
Alias:
Weapon:
Clothing:
Hometown:
Location:
Theme Song:
Artist:
Fighting style:
Quote:
Personality:
Nobody Name:
Nobody Description:
Element:
Element Description:
Background:

and i think i will fill mastermind's request from a long time ago, by the end of this week i will bold all of the categories ( like element: ) so the site will be easier to read

edit #2: dang its late, stupid homework.... anyways, i have a question to ask of you guys. in my story, part of my writers block is the fact that i cant seem to think of a good name for the enemy army. I have thought of "white cloaks", but it just seems like that would fit better as the elite division of that army, not the name of the army itself. so, if anybody has any ideas for a rebel army on a cold wasteland (o star wars) then that would be great.
o ya, and 1st place gets a cookie

[lonekyuubi]

Snow pirates? When I think of Charxais world I think of the game Lost Planet XD

[The Lionheart]

interesting, but theyre not really pirates...
i guess when i when i said rebels, i was mistaken. i really meant more of the freedom fighter type. they're not fighting the gov, there just fighting the system. I 70's language, they're "stickin it to the man"
anyways, i had some questions/updates id put out there......

Questions for the Exiled:

1) How’s the story going?
2) Who will appear in Exiled 1 that was originally supposed to be in Exiled 2?
3) We all know AP is drawing zaxeldion right now, but who else is on AP’s drawing list?
4) Is it worth making bios for the reverse and mystic orders?

Site Updates:
I’m gonna try to have all of this done by Saturday, but Sunday might be a better bet.

- bold/underline all categories
- edit all pages so that the templates match
- get any missing info from people
- change up the nobody name/description so that the name is a link for the pic and get all missing descriptions
- make sure that the element/weapon lists are up to date

[Dawning Twilight]

*INFO*
TA - you need to clear out your mailbox some so i can send you part 2 of chapter 27. i'll check again for you later tonight ^^ but please get it done ASAP thanks.

[NobodyImportant]

Originally Posted by Dawning Twilight

*INFO*
TA - you need to clear out your mailbox some so i can send you part 2 of chapter 27. i'll check again for you later tonight ^^ but please get it done ASAP thanks.

DT, weren't you going to PM it to me too? I wanna see!!

[yoyoj06]

AO- for question 2, all i know is aconex, there are a bunch more and for question 4, yes

[Dawning Twilight]

Originally Posted by NobodyImportant

DT, weren't you going to PM it to me too? I wanna see!!

i just posted it in the thread ^^


*Chapter Update*
well the funny chapter with other Exiled is in. i hope everyone lol at it. ^^ once again the link is in my sig labeled. "DT's Exiled Order Story".

[Sonja~Soulheart]

^ oh yeay! must check it out. *hurries to read*