The Exiled

[Maverick E.S]

Those sickles look pretty kick butt

[NobodyImportant]

Originally Posted by Angel's Prayer

It is said that the First member of the Aldakar Family, Karynland Aldakar fell in love and married an unnamed Sun Goddess, and because of which, the Sun she was born from was given the name of their clan, Aldakar. For several generations, everything was peaceful and grand. The Aldakar Clan was renowned for producing some of the greatest Sorcerers in their age. In their blood lied he powers of the Sun Aldakar, passing onto them the infinite power of the cosmos.

Lol, omg. What if that goddess was Lorixssa? XD XD XD

[DrBanxon]

Chapter 1-3 Rewrites posted on my site.
You don't have to read 'em, I did these mostly to destroy some skeletons in my closet >:]
There are some interesting clues and such to some exciting things that weren't mentioned before cause I didn't know they were gonna happen back when I wrote the original chapters xD
Whatever, I like them. That's all that matters

[Angel's Prayer]

Originally Posted by NobodyImportant

Lol, omg. What if that goddess was Lorixssa? XD XD XD

lol I never noticed that. But I'm assuming Lorxissa's element has something to do with Sol or Stars in general right?

[NobodyImportant]

Originally Posted by Angel's Prayer

lol I never noticed that. But I'm assuming Lorxissa's element has something to do with Sol or Stars in general right?

Her element is the sun, which is pretty vague because every solar system has a different sun. I think her element is 'The Sun' which means whichever one is thought of as the sun for that area. Hers isn't any specific one. So maybe at some point she went to the planet where Zhymarx's ancestor was born, thought he was cute and stayed a while with him, then left when he died. She's been around for a little over 10,000 years, after all. There's plenty of time for that. Even if each generation lives to be 100 and has one kid in that time, that'd still be 100 generations. And people tend to have kids at around 20-40 age, so it'd be more like 200 to 500 generations, or something.

And if Oogie and Xana like your idea for giving their baby the power of Aldakar, Lorixssa can help it out. She'll still be around, after all.

[Dawning Twilight]

Originally Posted by NobodyImportant

Her element is the sun, which is pretty vague because every solar system has a different sun. I think her element is 'The Sun' which means whichever one is thought of as the sun for that area. Hers isn't any specific one. So maybe at some point she went to the planet where Zhymarx's ancestor was born, thought he was cute and stayed a while with him, then left when he died. She's been around for a little over 10,000 years, after all. There's plenty of time for that. Even if each generation lives to be 100 and has one kid in that time, that'd still be 100 generations. And people tend to have kids at around 20-40 age, so it'd be more like 200 to 500 generations, or something.

And if Oogie and Xana like your idea for giving their baby the power of Aldakar, Lorixssa can help it out. She'll still be around, after all.

that's a very interesting element considering who wide it spans NI. also i have a question about the whole kid idea from Jynx and Xana. what does it symbolize? not to be rude or anything but i feel i should treat the situation similarly to the last one what reason is there for the Jynx and Xana relationship. i know that something was said about Jynx getting his heart back but what's up with that. sorry i just feel it wouldn't be fair if i ignored it ^^;;;




*Chapter Update*

well i got up the new chapter finally so i hope it will be viewed and commented on ^^
Chapter 23: Discovering the Darkness

[╬ProperArtist╬]

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Jynx is an experiment not only of the elements but of learning and developing. He's like a never ending machine that learns to evolve or time & his experiences. In the beginning however, Jynx was a being designed to have a heart an artificially made one if you will, but a heart none the less. The experiment failed, and Jynx is left with shards of what was once a heart. Thus he's nothing but a fighting machine to overthrow Sora and any other who opposes him. And from there you know what happens.

He unlike most still having shards of a heart can feel emotion, that and all of the combine characteristics of Organization XIII give him such an ability as well, on in that sense they'd be fake for a short time. Xana having a heart shows interest in Jynx.

yada yada yada they get into a relationship and Naajin is conceived

[Dawning Twilight]

Originally Posted by OogieBoogie

^

Jynx is an experiment not only of the elements but of learning and developing. He's like a never ending machine that learns to evolve or time & his experiences. In the beginning however, Jynx was a being designed to have a heart an artificially made one if you will, but a heart none the less. The experiment failed, and Jynx is left with shards of what was once a heart. Thus he's nothing but a fighting machine to overthrow Sora and any other who opposes him. And from there you know what happens.

He unlike most still having shards of a heart can feel emotion, that and all of the combine characteristics of Organization XIII give him such an ability as well, on in that sense they'd be fake for a short time. Xana having a heart shows interest in Jynx.

yada yada yada they get into a relationship and Naajin is conceived

Xana has a heart? i didn't know that. things make more sense now. also Naajin any information on him/her? again i apologize i was only trying to make it fair since we did question the reality/relevance of a relationship between Sonja's and i think it was TA's character. ^^

[╬ProperArtist╬]

everyone denied that concept, because it really has no point in the story other than it being a personal preference, but nothing adds up seeing they enter at different times and there would probably be no reason for them to even get together.

And yeah Xana has a heart, I thought everyone knew that from the beginning. It's even in her backstory.
For now Naajin's profile will remain a mystery. The only thing i can tell you is that he's got dark purple hair with some streaks of black & white in it.

You'll get more info on him later on, but for now he's unimportant

[Dawning Twilight]

Originally Posted by OogieBoogie

everyone denied that concept, because it really has no point in the story other than it being a personal preference, but nothing adds up seeing they enter at different times and there would probably be no reason for them to even get together.

And yeah Xana has a heart, I thought everyone knew that from the beginning. It's even in her backstory.
For now Naajin's profile will remain a mystery. The only thing i can tell you is that he's got dark purple hair with some streaks of black & white in it.

You'll get more info on him later on, but for now he's unimportant

nope i didn't know that and ok i see i'll wait for the story on Naajin later ^^

[NobodyImportant]

Since when do you need to love someone to have sex, anyway? That's the result of bodily urges, which are completely different from emotions. I assume nobodies still have testosterone and estrogen. ;p

[╬ProperArtist╬]

it's not needed for them to have sex, the love factor is there to help the story. If there was no "love" Jynx wouldn't want to bring Xana back, hell there would be no reason for Jynx to even want to fight Daxic as hard as he would.

[Dawning Twilight]

Originally Posted by NobodyImportant

Since when do you need to love someone to have sex, anyway? That's the result of bodily urges, which are completely different from emotions. I assume nobodies still have testosterone and estrogen. ;p

that's true but he did say that Xana shows interest in Jynx. also do Nobodies have the same "stuff" and other bodily items organs/blood/etc. or what? because i'm going on the assumption that they can at least bleed and throw up and stuff. are they able to even eat?

[Ojike]

Nobodies have always just been defined as "shells", implying that they're completely empty on the inside. But I like think that what's empty is just the spot where the heart should be. It's really kinda open-ended.

[Dawning Twilight]

*Characters Needed Read the Following*
Alright i am in need of two characters. one of them must be in the higher rankings between 3 and 9 and the two characters must have at least one of the following bolded qualities also each of the characters must have one underlined quality. however the third towards the end of this post that is underlined and bolded is also an option for one of the must have qualities.

*can become irritated easily
*doesn't like the idea of going on a mission to Salix's stronghold
*can be serious easily
*lazy
*is willing to make fun of Rextanse jokingly

The two or maybe three characters will be involved in a humorous scene with Rextanse and will later be featured with either Salix, Xishn or Lonex. their sent to Salix's stronghold to speak with him as Rextanse has not reported back to the Exiled Order yet. they were ordered to go their by #1 Zaxeldion.

i will make an exception if a third volunteers with the qualities i listed but that's just a possibility two at the minimum and possibly three at the maximum. the following underlined/bolded quality is a must have for the third character. unless a character with that quality has already been signed up.

*rather intelligent





also please mention in your post which must have or just bolded qualitiy(s) your character has.


1.
2.

*Under Consideration But Likely to Be Picked*
3.



My thanks to all who volunteer ^^

I will need these characters ASAP and if possible please post your character profile if you want to volunteer.

thank you ^^
~DT