The Exiled

[yoyoj06]

dt- i talked to mastermind, he said we could use zixan and i told him everything going on.
you can use aconex in your writing if you want(maybe even in you're current story, if you find a way to incorporate it)
in terms with the exiled story, doesn your story take place before, during, or after the exiled story?

[Dawning Twilight]

Originally Posted by yoyoj06

dt- i talked to mastermind, he said we could use zixan and i told him everything going on.
you can use aconex in your writing if you want(maybe even in you're current story, if you find a way to incorporate it)
in terms with the exiled story, doesn your story take place before, during, or after the exiled story?

Salix I which is the one i'm working on right now. it takes before the Exiled story it takes nearly right after KH2. as for whether or not Aconex can become involved at this point it'll be difficult since we're nearing the end of it. i'll try to find a way to get him in and maybe but more likely he'll be in Salix II where he'll have a much bigger role.

EDIT
also yoyo i have finished Salix's prequel and am now working on editing both it and writing new chapters for Salix I/editing chapters for Salix I so it may take a little for me to complete it.

Overall for the Salix stories there will be:
Salix Prequel I - takes place when Salix was known as Sail and before he became a Nobody. it also covers the beginnings of when he became a Nobody through his joining the Exiled Order at the very beginning.
Salix Prequel II - this takes place during KH2 as there will be no involvement with Salix in KH 1 this will be pretty long and will explain what happened with Salix during KH2 and conversations/connections with Sora and other key characters to KH2 such as Riku, DiZ and maybe an Org. member or two.
Salix I - covers his contact with Sora after KH2 and how he contacts them and eventually fights them in order to research something and gain other items.
for readers you may not want to look at this as it may spoiler some things for Salix I.
(ideas are under construction and it may or may not even happen...)
Salix II - [spoiler]while this is under construction it
will be an explanation as to what happens to Salix
it will take place it is unsure when it will take place
exactly but it may happen after Salix I. It will feature
Salix and Xishn and maybe Lonex not sure.
they will take on an enemy or two and this will
explain a lot of things from previous Salix stories.
this may or may not be the last Salix story.[/spoiler]
and he may appear in Lonex's/Xishn's prequels or basically their backgrounds. i may also do more stories from there but first i'll finish what i've got.

[NobodyImportant]

Zaverxi's a special case of Nobody. Not like Jynx, or Xana, or anything like that, but it's possible for him to feel just one emotion. After all, he distinctly remembers handing his heart over to his heartless, and in doing so he didn't give the whole thing away, he kept just a small fragment, the one that lets him feel hate. The Heartless took the rest of his heart away, and part of it stayed with him too. That's why Zaverxi is the closest thing to a Heartless of any Nobody. He's part Heartless, and that's shown by the fact that his hair is tipped in black. No matter how you cut his hair, the tips are always black. And that's why he has catseye pupils and can see in the dark.

So in short, he does have his memories, and he does truly feel one emotion, but that's it. It's how he goes berserk.

Hmm, maybe I should make an anti-form for Zaverxi in his final fight, the one where he actually does go all out. Maybe an inverted version of him like the Anti-Sora. Black skin, black hair with green-blue tips, cyan claws, and yellow eyes. And the scar on his face glowing bright like fire! That'd be kickass looking. Becoming that one little bit of Heartless he's got inside him. He only does this once though, then dies. Because when he does this, he loses his mind and memories and just becomes a heartless. Huhh, wonder if anyone wants to join the battle with him like that so he can kill them. I wanna destroy something too!

[Knightflare]

Originally Posted by NobodyImportant

He only does this once though, then dies.

I saw this before you edited it xD
It made me laugh
Anyway, I'mma get back to writing soon.
Most likely tommorow.
Gotta fix up some stuff and add things.
Thanks to the Bible, I'mma get to work! =DDDDD

[Dawning Twilight]

NI - ah that explains him i thought it was something like that ^^

[black_myth]

How do I live when all i hear is that i am a lie. that i am a gost, a bitter image of one who once lived. I am a castaway ship and no light shine's be back home. a soul that was taintend, destroyed, stolen, is everything that im not. i am a mear afterafect. I forget how to love or to be loved. All mentel pain is gone, it is now filled with questions. questions that will leads to another dark valley. Then why follow what is to belived is true when we dont even no what True is. What promissed is made when truth, trust and love does not exist. we are gosts, we are lies, we are Everthing that dies.

[Dawning Twilight]

Originally Posted by black_myth

How do I live when all i hear is that i am a lie. that i am a gost, a bitter image of one who once lived. I am a castaway ship and no light shine's be back home. a soul that was taintend, destroyed, stolen, is everything that im not. i am a mear afterafect. I forget how to love or to be loved. All mentel pain is gone, it now filled with questions. questions that will leads to another dark valley. Then why follow what is to belived is true when we dont even no what True is. What promissed is made when truth, trust and love does not exist. we are gosts, we are lies, we are Everthing that dies.

that's pretty good with the spelling errors ^^ but i liked it very dramatic but um what is it for?

[black_myth]

lol yeah i suck at spelling. ink its just something i thought a person in the Exield waould say, like to a enymy or something. it kinda sounds liek he is talking to a human, human looks down on nobodys. It came to me cuz Lexinoth tries to live aloen with people.
i like to write stuff like that. im not like that though just to let people know XD

[Dawning Twilight]

it's pretty good it reminds me of a quote from my story ^^ HOORAY FOR SPEELING! lolz

[black_myth]

YES i like leaks, it fills teh tube thats emty. ^^

[Maverick E.S]

Here goes a story to him, if i go any deeper like, what stuff he says and what happens it will be super long lol


Aixin lived on the planet Ozirus, a planet that was torn apart in many places due to many wars in the past and the just pasting threat by the "virus" threat.

He lived with his mother Samantha and father Talre, his mother stayed home and took care of the house while his father was a pilot of the universal Korr flyers, this organization kept the skies free from harm all over the universe, hence the name. One day on his job his dad called in, telling something about strange creatures taking over the sky port and taking over peoples bodies and objects like planes.The virus returned.

Talre barely got away from this incident, he left of the sky port in the last plane but before long he was followed by the infected soldiers, all of them were his friends. He couldn't bare to take them down, being his friends so he tried to lose them in some near by mountains. It worked, but he had no way of contacting his family, because when he was trying to get away from the others the plane was shot multiple times and it damaged the comunicator. He was stuck up there.

Aixin and his mother assumed the worst after losing transmission, they didn't know what to do. The days only got worse after that, the creatures Aixin's father was talking about made it to his house and got to his mother when she tried to save him. Aixin had no choice but to flee, wondering a way to stop these monsters again and get his mother and find his father wherever he was.The Virus returned to his planet stronger than ever...but the 2 who had saved the planet from the last attack were reported M.I.A, Missing In Action the savoirs were teens named Niklos and Sylex.

But they weren't dead they were taking to another world by the leader who started to virus wars, Crozer one of the strongest virus' ever, along with the ones who were defeated, Omega the second in position and Zero the one who was infected by Omega doing everything against zero's will. No one knew about it except for those 5.

The others that helped save the world were Miki,Derxien,Karlis and Aaron, and Dr.Ilias. Aixin rushed to find them and he did eventually. Now while him and the others found a way to stop the virus, Niklos, Sylex and Zero were on another planet facing off in a tournament being controled by mind since they couldn't be infected in their state. After a long battle they one but at a price,Aixin lost his life in the battle sacrificing it for Sylex's.

His heart was lost in darkness becuase of the hatred he grew from the virus and he turned into a heartless and a nobody. Now his nobody hopes to find a new life, and maybe regain his former self one day.

Well thats it i had to change some stuff to make it fit so this is the kh version and Aixin doesn't really die in the original he almost does tho but in the kh version he does.

This story was originaly part of the sequel to my story Virus to letcha know so tell me if there is anything else of any questions. ^^

EDIT: I probably should've used "I" instead of "He or Aixin" but its too late now lol

[Sonja~Soulheart]

Originally Posted by twilight abyss

Why not?
If they can trick themselves into feeling emotions, can't he trick himself into liking her?
So is that okay Sonja?

well, its really alright ^^ but how this happens is still one way to think about :3

ah and Xenra's story... please tell if something was wrong with this O:

The soft pitter patter of the rain sounded outside. Drip by drip, water fell down the glass window one after the other. My name is Anre... or what my foster family named me. My real parents died when I was at the tender age of three and my new parents took care of me from then on. We live in a town called Iricala. It’s a pretty small but peaceful town. There aren’t many sites here but it’s a lively community. My foster father owned a library here in town and was the librarian obviously and my foster mother was his assistant. I don’t really have any specific memory of my parents or anything relevant since then but as long as my new family is with me, everything’s fine.

Moments passed and the rain became stronger, gazing mindlessly at the droplets. Wind gained speed with trees outside swaying along. I started to get worried, not just because of the weather but commotion started to stir outside. People started running away, screaming for dear life as they ran. This motivated me to find my parents and another thing caught my eye. Strange black creatures attacked the people one by one. All of them fell down, dead I presume.

Grabbing the umbrella, I made a mad dash out of the house. Water splashed while the rain poured down. There was no way I’m losing my parents. All over the street, it was chaos. Some cried over a dead loved one lying lifelessly on the ground, others scrambled to get away form the weird creatures I saw awhile outside the window. One of them suddenly blocked my path. It gazed its bright yellow eyes not once blinking. It started to come towards me, showing its sharp claws. As if it wasn’t bad more of them started to show up and come closer, all looked ready to kill. Fear took hold, legs went numb, I was outnumbered and unarmed. Two of the creatures lunged forward, their claws piercing my chest thus ripping off my heart. Everything then went black…

More screams sounded much more agonized than before and more of the black creatures gained numbers. Nobody survived and the whole townsfolk died all in just one day.
For some unknown reason, I woke up, cold and wet from the rain. Then, remembering what just happened…I died didn’t I? Those creatures ripped my heart off, no mistake about that but… why can I still breathe? Or move? My hand touched my chest. There was no trace of any injury. Was it just a nightmare or perhaps an illusion? As much as I wanted to believe though, it wasn’t an illusion, the whole town had been destroyed and everybody died.

How come I’m not sad or grieved about this? How come I can’t feel pain? Not the slightest trace of emotion could be felt. I was confused… or at least I was. Eventually after finding my parents dead and a certain book with an entry written on it, it became clear that I became what was called a ‘Nobody’- a living shell without any heart. The entry also explained Nobodies can’t feel any emotion.

So now… with the death of my parents and the town of Iricala destroyed, there was nothing left. I died along those in my town… no deny about that. What was left to do was travel and to know more about what I’ve become. And my name? It isn’t Anre anymore… it’s Xenra now.

[twilight abyss]

Originally Posted by Mastermind

Had you read the entire post, you would have noticed that I touched on that and it still begs the question as to why he would go out of his way to trick himself into liking another nobody.

Oh yeah, is Sonja's character isn't, or isn't supposed to be, around until the Ex2 portion of the story starts and that's after Xatsuin is dead.

I did read the entire post
But that isn't your desicion wheter or not he tries to trick himself, it would be mine and Sonja's.
I was gunna say that he wantes to be more human, and since humans would do things like that(BF/GF) he tried to do it, he wants to try to become human again, like most of the other nobodies.

Your other point is valid though, I thouhgt she would come in about the same time as xat, seeing as the rest of the members joined then, so I didn't know.

[Mastermind]

How could you not know? Think of all the characters that have been created so far. A lot of them are waiting for Ex2 portion of the story before come into it. Banxon's friend is still waiting for Ex2. Maverick's character is waiting on Ex2, I think. Then there are the secondary characters like Lroixssa and Aconex that are waiting for Ex2 to be introduced. Yeah, there's a line. Charxai just barely got into the first half of the story recently, no?

It's somewhat silly to think that she'd come in so soon when there are other people waiting, right?

[Dawning Twilight]

Originally Posted by Maverick E.S

Here goes a story to him, if i go any deeper like, what stuff he says and what happens it will be super long lol


Aixin lived on the planet Ozirus, a planet that was torn apart in many places due to many wars in the past and the just pasting threat by the "virus" threat.

He lived with his mother Samantha and father Talre, his mother stayed home and took care of the house while his father was a pilot of the universal Korr flyers, this organization kept the skies free from harm all over the universe, hence the name. One day on his job his dad called in, telling something about strange creatures taking over the sky port and taking over peoples bodies and objects like planes.The virus returned.

Talre barely got away from this incident, he left of the sky port in the last plane but before long he was followed by the infected soldiers, all of them were his friends. He couldn't bare to take them down, being his friends so he tried to lose them in some near by mountains. It worked, but he had no way of contacting his family, because when he was trying to get away from the others the plane was shot multiple times and it damaged the comunicator. He was stuck up there.

Aixin and his mother assumed the worst after losing transmission, they didn't know what to do. The days only got worse after that, the creatures Aixin's father was talking about made it to his house and got to his mother when she tried to save him. Aixin had no choice but to flee, wondering a way to stop these monsters again and get his mother and find his father wherever he was.The Virus returned to his planet stronger than ever...but the 2 who had saved the planet from the last attack were reported M.I.A, Missing In Action the savoirs were teens named Niklos and Sylex.

But they weren't dead they were taking to another world by the leader who started to virus wars, Crozer one of the strongest virus' ever, along with the ones who were defeated, Omega the second in position and Zero the one who was infected by Omega doing everything against zero's will. No one knew about it except for those 5.

The others that helped save the world were Miki,Derxien,Karlis and Aaron, and Dr.Ilias. Aixin rushed to find them and he did eventually. Now while him and the others found a way to stop the virus, Niklos, Sylex and Zero were on another planet facing off in a tournament being controled by mind since they couldn't be infected in their state. After a long battle they one but at a price,Aixin lost his life in the battle sacrificing it for Sylex's.

His heart was lost in darkness becuase of the hatred he grew from the virus and he turned into a heartless and a nobody. Now his nobody hopes to find a new life, and maybe regain his former self one day.

Well thats it i had to change some stuff to make it fit so this is the kh version and Aixin doesn't really die in the original he almost does tho but in the kh version he does.

This story was originaly part of the sequel to my story Virus to letcha know so tell me if there is anything else of any questions. ^^

EDIT: I probably should've used "I" instead of "He or Aixin" but its too late now lol

pretty good enjoyable.

Originally Posted by Sonja~Soulheart

well, its really alright ^^ but how this happens is still one way to think about :3

ah and Xenra's story... please tell if something was wrong with this O:

The soft pitter patter of the rain sounded outside. Drip by drip, water fell down the glass window one after the other. My name is Anre... or what my foster family named me. My real parents died when I was at the tender age of three and my new parents took care of me from then on. We live in a town called Iricala. It’s a pretty small but peaceful town. There aren’t many sites here but it’s a lively community. My foster father owned a library here in town and was the librarian obviously and my foster mother was his assistant. I don’t really have any specific memory of my parents or anything relevant since then but as long as my new family is with me, everything’s fine.

Moments passed and the rain became stronger, gazing mindlessly at the droplets. Wind gained speed with trees outside swaying along. I started to get worried, not just because of the weather but commotion started to stir outside. People started running away, screaming for dear life as they ran. This motivated me to find my parents and another thing caught my eye. Strange black creatures attacked the people one by one. All of them fell down, dead I presume.

Grabbing the umbrella, I made a mad dash out of the house. Water splashed while the rain poured down. There was no way I’m losing my parents. All over the street, it was chaos. Some cried over a dead loved one lying lifelessly on the ground, others scrambled to get away form the weird creatures I saw awhile outside the window. One of them suddenly blocked my path. It gazed its bright yellow eyes not once blinking. It started to come towards me, showing its sharp claws. As if it wasn’t bad more of them started to show up and come closer, all looked ready to kill. Fear took hold, legs went numb, I was outnumbered and unarmed. Two of the creatures lunged forward, their claws piercing my chest thus ripping off my heart. Everything then went black…

More screams sounded much more agonized than before and more of the black creatures gained numbers. Nobody survived and the whole townsfolk died all in just one day.
For some unknown reason, I woke up, cold and wet from the rain. Then, remembering what just happened…I died didn’t I? Those creatures ripped my heart off, no mistake about that but… why can I still breathe? Or move? My hand touched my chest. There was no trace of any injury. Was it just a nightmare or perhaps an illusion? As much as I wanted to believe though, it wasn’t an illusion, the whole town had been destroyed and everybody died.

How come I’m not sad or grieved about this? How come I can’t feel pain? Not the slightest trace of emotion could be felt. I was confused… or at least I was. Eventually after finding my parents dead and a certain book with an entry written on it, it became clear that I became what was called a ‘Nobody’- a living shell without any heart. The entry also explained Nobodies can’t feel any emotion.

So now… with the death of my parents and the town of Iricala destroyed, there was nothing left. I died along those in my town… no deny about that. What was left to do was travel and to know more about what I’ve become. And my name? It isn’t Anre anymore… it’s Xenra now.

pretty good i liked it a lot ^^




since the time areas are different the Xat and Xen idea is off please no more discussion about it if it will lead to complicated arguments rather than complicated discussions.
-DT