The Exiled

[Dawning Twilight]

...Ok. i just wrote almost 3 pages on a recruitment that never happens. xD oh well...

[twilight abyss]

DT- What do you mean no one knows what happens when you first become a Nobody... Xatsuin doesn't get turned into a Nobody during the fight, he's already a Nobody way before the fight happens

[The Lionheart]

Dang there's been a lot of posting recently.

Sorry I haven't been on, I've been puking my guts out :/

Anyways, I like Donnie Wahlberg as Charxai. Seems to match (except for the balding part, lol).

Originally Posted by pokepotterkhkids

I always thought Cam from Twilight would b good 4 Xodyc

Oh, and sorry for the pun babe. Totally not intended.

Auctually me and my friends do that... Train @ nite, i mean

I don't think anything having to do with twilight would be good for Xodyc (or the rest of the Exiled for that matter).

Haha jk.

But really.


Anyways, I'll be on later. And btw, the convo we had was full of fail. I was an hour late and I don't think anything got talked about.

[Dawning Twilight]

Originally Posted by Axel Owns

Dang there's been a lot of posting recently.

Sorry I haven't been on, I've been puking my guts out :/

Anyways, I like Donnie Wahlberg as Charxai. Seems to match (except for the balding part, lol).



I don't think anything having to do with twilight would be good for Xodyc (or the rest of the Exiled for that matter).

Haha jk.

But really.


Anyways, I'll be on later. And btw, the convo we had was full of fail. I was an hour late and I don't think anything got talked about.

i wish i could rejoin in the unique tastes of the convos you all have.

Originally Posted by twilight abyss

DT- What do you mean no one knows what happens when you first become a Nobody...

when someone becomes a nobody i doubt that they would know that they had any power and i also doubt that they'd know what they are. it'd take time.

Originally Posted by twilight abyss

Xatsuin doesn't get turned into a Nobody during the fight, he's already a Nobody way before the fight happens

how long has he been a Nobody? has he had any previous contact with Nobodies before that? has he ever entering combat with another being before that either? these are the questions that must be answered. ^_^





Anyways i finished chapter 1 of section I of Salix's recruitment story. it so far has IV sections with at a minimum 1 chapter per section and at the most 3. however i only got to go through one editing phase but i wanted to get it done with faster because i'm so past deadline. T_T so please everyone tell me what you think of it. thank yous. ^_^

Section I: The Resurgence

Chapter 1: Corruption

Sail paced around the room furiously. He was clearly focused very hard on something. As for what that something was only Sail could have known. So much had happened as of late and as a result so many people had come to pay their respects. That was at least what they called it. They came in groups saying how sorry they were for his loss.

However none of them really meant it. They were all just greedy bastards who were just happy that they hadn’t been the ones to have to save the world and sacrifice their lives for the greater good. They all deserved to pay the price that Ocean had in order to save his beloved home world. Slowly Sail walked over to the TV as he listened to what they had to say before carefully sitting down on the couch behind him.

“…And in further news, the story of the young astronaut who saved our world from certain destruction. Many people around the globe have been praying for him and thanking him for all that he did to save our homes,” the man on the TV said.

This only angered Sail more as he shot his hands out in front of him and grabbed the table before flipping it over violently. Everything that had once been on top of the table was now scattered all over the floor. Sail shot to his feet as he walked over to the counter and moved his hands around to try and feel for the book that he had left there a moment ago. Sure enough in a matter of seconds he’d found it.

Slowly he moved his fingers through the pages until he’d found the page that he’d marked with the corner bent in. Swiftly Sail raised his right hand as he placed his fingers on the first page and felt through the indentations of the letters in order to read the book in his rather unique non-visual method. Each letter had indentations and each letter formed a word and for a man like Sail it was child’s play to read an entire book the way he did. For a man of his intelligence it took only a few minutes to find out all the information that he needed.

Sail had picked a section of the book that focused primarily on key information relating to the darkness as it was named. The darkness held the key to summoning those that were amply named the “Heartless”. They were creatures of all shapes and forms. All however held in common a single major factor that stated how they all yearned for the taste of hearts that all beings young and old possessed. Sail had always and forever been a man of science and now that he had the necessary materials to go deeper into the realm of science than any man on his planet had ever dared to go before, why not? Why not summon them and see how their powers worked in action?

Sail took a deep breath as he considered everything that he had now and everything that he would lose after he summoned the creatures of the never-ending pitch black. In the end he decided that it was truly worth it. It was worth dying, it was worth killing and more than anything it was worth being able to see Ocean once again in whatever lay beyond his restricted human form. Sail closed the book as he walked to the center of the room and placed his right hand gently over his heart.

As he began to focus on his heart Sail suddenly felt something. It was as if his heart were calling out to the Heartless inviting them to join him now. They must have heard him because they almost immediately responded. Out of nowhere Sail heard something move and it was more than just one something. There were a lot of them and they all seemed rather anxious. As if they hadn’t eaten in ages.

Although he couldn’t see the Heartless they could see him and they could see that his heart was ripe for the picking but did not approach him. It was as if they needed to confirm their invitation before they devoured his heart. So then he would give them one, one that they could not refuse.

“You who devour whole worlds hear me! I shall give you my heart voluntarily. But in return I ask that you show me what truth lies beyond this mortal body. Show me what land lies beyond that which is bound solely to heart, body and soul. Now open the gates to that land of prosperity and hunger, and give me what I truly desire! Give me the life that I so desperately seek,” Sail shouted.

Slowly they approached Sail gathering around him until they were close enough to touch him. Then in an instant they had surrounded him from the sides and above and below. Each one tore away at him as they hungrily attempted to remove his heart and in only a few moments they managed to do exactly that. As Sail felt his heart being removed from his body he suddenly felt a hint of regret and fear course through his veins. That’s when he began to panic but the deed had already been done and there was no going back.

Sail tried to move his hands but found he couldn’t as they began to slowly become transparent. He was vanishing! But this wasn’t the life he’d wanted! He’d wanted a good life. He didn’t want to disappear! Sail tried to struggle but already his arms had vanished and the rest of his body was quickly following in suit. Suddenly he felt his thoughts focus on that of his brother Ocean as well as about how he must have felt upon leaving their world and with that Sail felt a overwhelming sense serenity. As he took a deep breath.

“…I’m coming, brother,” Sail whispered softly.

Overall it took only took a few seconds, but to Sail it felt like an eternity as his body slowly vanished piece by piece until he had completely vanished from his god-forsaken world. His last thoughts before he had completely vanished were all focused on that of his beloved brother of whom he would see again soon one day.

[╬ProperArtist╬]

Me and Ojike were talking again and he brought up how Xemo's background seems to have a big hole in his story.
From Knightflare's backstory it of course mentions how that Xemo snaps, however it isn't ever spoken as the reason for this occurrence. Therefore we collaborated and came to this idea.

(The following may contain mature subject matter. View Discretion is advised)

Naturally being brothers Xemo and Rextanse have always been competitive but something has happened to push him over the edge and helping form Xemo into the person we know him to be now.
During their youth their mother had a close relationship with both of them and with their father barely in their lives (he's a military man, so he isn't around much if at all and he's not really much of a father figure at all) it makes things a bit harder on them so they tend to cling to her; for them she's a both mother & father.
(Sometimes they'd be forced to fight until they'd bleed so there could only be one true victor and the first to draw blood was held the victor, as you can imagine Rextanse was hailed as the favorite among his father which only fueled their sibling rivalry)
However, something isn't exactly right about this trio ( here's where it gets a little weird).
In their teenage years their mother begins to have a sexual relationship with Rextanse, which in part would explain why he's such a ladies man now it's a way of dealing with the past almost.
Now this inning of itself is a twist situation but something about their relationship has caused something to snap within Xemo. For you see Xemo has a bit of what you'd call the Oedipus complex so in his twisted mind it should've been him.
Therefore as Xemo walked in, baring witness to there incestuous union and so he did the only think he knew how to do; taking full advantage of the only thing their father taught them.
He slaughtered his family save for Rextanse who was able to fend his blood lust off just enough.

That's essentially the idea in a nutshell.
Now did you catch the hints and foreshadowing of Xemo's character?

Comments or Ideas are greatly appreciated.

[Xodyc]

hmmm twisted, but interesting. nice use of the complex

edit: hmmm not that this matters but I could see the dude poke mentioned as Xodyc but that's me lol nice suggestion babe.

[The Lionheart]

holy shit that's twisted.

but I like it D

[twilight abyss]

Reminds me of how Otacon had sex with his mom xD

DT- Yes too all 3 of those questions, specifically the fighting part, read his backstory, he was the leader of an army... he can fight just fine

[╬ProperArtist╬]

Originally Posted by twilight abyss

Reminds me of how Otacon had sex with his mom xD

Actually Otacon was seduced by Emma's, his half-sister, mother essentially meaning he was pulled into it.
The Oedipus Complex implies that it's something that you're knowingly wanting/longing to do. As in loving your own mother on the level of a girlfriend or wife like relationship it being both sexual, emotional, and physical.

Not really the same.

[twilight abyss]

I know what an Oedipus Complex is...I was just referring to the whole "sex with mother thing" xD
Also, I knew it was his stepmother...but it was still messed up :/

[╬ProperArtist╬]

For the record 6:39-6:47 is how Jynx powers up when he goes into his berserk form.
YouTube - KH Re:CoM [Rev/Reb] - Walkthrough (56) Riku Replica Fight #2

[pokepotterkhkids]

Look, I know this is off topic, but I would appreciate it if everyone left me alone today. Today is the 7th anniversary of the death of someone very close to me and 7 years havent exactly made me get over it. So... if anyones on today and need me... please just... wait till tomorrow

[Dawning Twilight]

PA - interesting ideas although i personally find the idea to be a bit too realistic and twisted you should go ahead with it. ^_^

Originally Posted by pokepotterkhkids

Look, I know this is off topic, but I would appreciate it if everyone left me alone today. Today is the 7th anniversary of the death of someone very close to me and 7 years havent exactly made me get over it. So... if anyones on today and need me... please just... wait till tomorrow

if you need time to be alone don't ask just don't come poke. no one minds if you take a day or so away from the Exiled. ^_^ hope you feel better.



well anyways i finished another chapter. please i'd really like it if people commented on anything involving this chapter.








Section II: The Awakening

Chapter 1: Genesis



Sail laid motionless on the ground as he stared up at the heavens above. It was raining there, just as it always did in the dark and gloomy world. How had he gotten here? Why was he here? He began to think and tried to pull up old memories. Nothing. There was nothing there.

Did that mean he in turn was nothing? He barely even remembered his name. But, if he had a name, that meant he also had a past. It was just a matter of finding out how to recover it.

“So this is where you were,” a rather feminine voice said echoing through the streets.

Sail looked around but couldn’t see anyone. Had his mind been playing tricks on him? Was he losing it? He thought he might be, but then something caught his attention out of the corner of his eye. An oval shaped object appeared out of nowhere as a young woman slowly walked out of it and approached Sail. Even though she was standing and he was lying on the ground it was clear to Sail that she was pretty short but obviously not a midget.

As the portal closed up the short woman tilted her head slightly. Slowly she came into full view. She donned a black cloak with an odd symbol on the front of it. The symbol seemed oddly familiar, almost as if he had seen it before, but where?

“So what’s your old name,” the woman asked going straight to the point.

“…What do you mean by old name,” Sail asked as he slowly sat up.

“Well everyone has a name, but only people like us have more than one,” the woman replied.

“What do you mean us? How am I at all like you,” Sail asked confused.

“You like myself do not have a heart,” the woman explained.

“The ones who were never meant to exist…” Sail muttered as images and memories suddenly appeared in his head.

Sail grabbed his head tightly as he scraped his teeth together with his eyes shut tightly. His head was throbbing and hurt so much. It felt like he had smashed his head into a cement wall. Slowly the images and memories stopped as the pain in his head began to die down slowly until it had completely gone away.

As Sail released his head he slowly pushed himself up until he was standing for the first time since he had arrived on the dark world. He looked around able to see his surroundings. It seemed so different to him. But obviously this was not his home world so it would naturally feel different. Yet something inside felt different, but he couldn’t understand what it was.

“What does that make us then,” Sail asked emotionlessly. “What are we if we have no right to exist in any world and yet do?”

“Well there’s a lot of things people could call us. But I think that perhaps Nobodies are what we truly are,” the woman answered calmly.

“What purpose does a being who isn’t supposed to exist but does have,” Sail asked. “What do we do as beings with no emotions or a heart?”

“We do whatever we can to get back what we lost and what was taken from us so cruelly,” the woman answered.

Suddenly something caught her attention as the woman turned to see that dozens of black coated human like beings had surrounded them. There were so many! But why had so many been attracted to this one particular spot? Neither one of them possessed a heart. So unless someone of a higher intelligence was manipulating the black coated beings into attacking the two of them, then that meant that they were being attracted or called to something.

But who or what was calling them? It surely couldn’t have been the newly born Nobody that stood beside her. So was there someone else, watching from the shadows and waiting for the precise moment to strike? She wouldn’t give them that opportunity if so! Immediately the woman raised her hand in front of herself as she called forth her staff. Even if there were so many of them, she would have to take care of it on her own, as there was no backup that could help her now.

“Just what are those grotesque figures,” Sail asked as he stared at the creatures that had surrounded them.

“They’re Heartless, they’re the result of what happens when a being loses it’s heart to darkness,” the woman explained.

“Why are they here then,” Sail asked curiously.

“I’m not exactly sure. But regardless of why they’re here we need to make them disappear for good,” the woman explained.

Almost as if they had comprehended what the woman had said the Heartless slowly began to move in on the two of them in order to kill them before they themselves were killed. The woman took a deep breath and then exhaled before launching her self forward and attacking the enemies. Swiftly with graceful gymnastic like speed she swung her staff across and upon impact made the Heartless vanish into thin air.

But there were too many of them. On her own and so limited she couldn’t hope to take them all down before they got to Sail. In moments Sail had noticed that the numbers of Heartless had been greatly reduced by at least a fourth of how many had originally been there.

However the others had already managed to surround him and currently Sail had no weapon to defend himself with. What was more he was definitely not a fighter in the first place. The woman who had been fighting the Heartless swung around just in time to see the remaining Heartless jump at Sail to attack him.

“Get out of the way,” the woman shouted as the Heartless attacked Sail.

[rpgangel]

that was kool DT lmao short person...i do feel somewhat insulted for being short too, but i find myself laughing anyways

[Xodyc]

nice DT good job