The Exiled

[twilight abyss]

Sorry if it's not up to expectations, I don't think I'm that good at the actual fighting parts though...
Also, I want to say 2 things
1- In my story Rex can see the future, KF has told me he can, but the laws of the gods make it so he cant change the future
2- I'm sorry if I portrayed any characters wrong, I'll start over if I have to to portray them correctly

Xemo Fight, Part I

He heard footsteps. "Shit!" Xatsuin jumped behind a wardrobe, just before the door opened. Jynx and Rextanse walked into the room. Rextanse quickly looked around the room and saw a small clump of brown hair. Damn it!, he thought, if he comes, it will happen...
"You ready?", Jynx said.
"Huh?", Rextanse snapped back into reality.
"I said are you ready?" Rextanse was silent for a moment.
"Yeah..."
Jynx held out his arm and a corridor of darkness appeared, he started to walk towards it, but then stopped, looked at Rextanse and said, "You okay?"
"I'm fine.", he lied. Jynx stared at him for a moment, but then looked around and walked through. Rextanse took one last look at the place where Xatsuin was hiding, and walked through. The second they left Xatsuin quickly ran from his hiding spot and jumped through the portal just before it closed.
The place he landed in was very deserving of it's name. The Void was an endless white abyss, and even though there was space below you, you seemed to stand on a non-existant platform. Xatsuin looked up at Rextanse, who had his usual solemn, almost bored face on, and strangely, his face seemed...sad. Then he looked at Jynx, his face was a different story.
"Damn it Xat!", Jynx was mad. "We told you not to come, you'll only get in the way! Now get the hell ou-"
" Stop it...", Rextanse interrupted, his voice calm. "We have a visitor"
Xatsuin and Jynx just realized there was someone else not far off. The man had a big insane grin on his face, and you could feel his bloodthirst, for some reason he was staring at Rextanse. Rextanse was staring back, his face a combination of hatred and pity.
Then Xatsuin finally realized who the person was.
"Oem...Xemo..."
Xemo readied his weapons, as did they. He raised one of his katars high. Then Rextanse realized.
"DAMN IT!"
Xemo brought down his katar, stabbing his own shoulder. Scarlet blood gushed from the wound. A puddle of blood was forming on the floor. Xatsuin didn't know what the hell was happening, but he didn't care, he charged.
"Bastard!"
Just as he was about to strike though, the puddle of blood seemed to spring to life. A thread of blood shot out of the puddle. He leapt to the side, the thread missing his head by mere inches. He stared at Xemo, the blood was collecting in an orb of blood behind his back.
"What the fuck are you?" Xemo merely stood there for a moment, with his insane, bloodthirsty grin, then disappeared, almost like he evaporated. Xatsuin then heard a whisper in his ear from behind him.
"A murderer..."
"OH FUCK NO YOU DON'T!" With black electricity flowing around his right hand, Jynx's fist connected with Xemo's cheek, a crack was heard and Xemo was knocked off his feet and sent flying. Jynx quickly glanced at Xatsuin, his face concentrated and stern.
"You okay?"
"Fine...thanks..." Rextanse walked up beside the two of them, his face calm.
"Be more careful, this guy is...a monster." A little ways off Xemo was getting up, collecting the newly acquired blood, curtesy of Jynx's fist.
"No more uncertain lunges, now get ready, he should be up b-" But he was already gone.
"Not this time!" Rextanse spun around and swung down. Xemo leapt back, disappeared and reappeared far away. Rextanse lunged at him, and with the first slash the two were locked in combat, going at each other blow for blow. Xatsuin and Jynx now ran after the two, when a gigantic dome of blood rose out of the ground around Xatsuin and Jynx.
"NO!"
"DAMN!", no matter how much the two tried, the wall of blood would not break.
"So how do we get through?", Jynx asked, he was not calm anymore. Xatsuin was now looking at the ceiling.
"We have more important things to worry about..." Blood was forming on the ceiling in the shape of Xemo, the blood plopped off the ceiling, retaining the shape of their master...clones.

***

Rextanse swung a final diagnol slash, and with a final clash of steel, they jumped apart, neither had landed a hit. Rextanse could hear sounds coming from a dome of blood, where there was no doubt Jynx and Xatsuin were fighting clones in now. He stared at Xemo, as Xemo met his gaze, he could feel hatred gathering inside him.
Xemo finally spoke.
He said in a low, cold, smug voice, "You do know you can't change the future...right?" Rextanse continued to glare at him.
"What are you talking about?"
"Don't play dumb, I'm a god too, I can see the future just as well as you can." Xemo finally turned his glare into his lunatic smile. "He will die, there's nothing you can do." Rextanse replied, his voice a little lower.
"I know..." Xemo's grin grew wider, his eyes seemed to be drilling into his.
"Okay, just remember..." Xemo disappeared and reappeared in front of Rextanse
"There is no escape from the future!"
Rextanse felt the cold of the steel pierce his stomach. He took a sharp breath, eyes wide. Xemo slowly approached his ear and mockingly whispered.
"Hurts...doesn't it?", at these words he jerked the blade from his body. Rextanse's stomach lurched, he couldn't help himself, he dropped to his knees and threw up blood.
"Oh no no no, little Terry.", he mocked, "Waste not want not", and with the flick of his wrist the puddle joined his growing supply of blood.

End of Part I

How did you guys like it, I thought it was okay, but I personally liked the end.

[╬ProperArtist╬]

There are some major problems here.

The Void isn't a white area. If anything it's the exact opposite, by which I mean a dark and foggy endless abyss.
For the first part it seems to jump into the action far to quickly without a proper introduction of who Xemo actually is. Everything is moving so fast I just don't feel like there's any set up to it, it just jumps right into the action (even though it works in some cases it doesn't here)

Xemo also doesn't attack as a close range fighter (well not right away) if anything he likes to screw with his opponents. By this I mean he'll block an attack here and there, maybe even let them land a couple blows but he'll get right back up wipe the blood off with his finger and lick it while keeping that same creepy smile. He hardly ever talks as well and he doesn't have a blood dome attack, however he does have a tidal wave like attack.
Xemo likes to fake out his opponents by creating somewhat exploding clones, that have blood needles in them and killing them will guess what cause them to go flying into you.
For the most part Xemo stands back fights from far allowing the blood to flow like water to which he increases or decreases it's quantity, density and pressure as he sees fit.
The only time he will fight you close up is if you manage to get in close to him and actual damage him a bit, this is signified by a trickle of blood which flows from his right eye. By then the gloves are off and it's anything goes and nothing short of Rextanse himself can stop him.

His weapon of choice are Razor Blades and if he feels the need to be close combat, he'll form blood around his arm to create a blood like drill.

Jynx is a hand to hand combat fighter, but against someone like this he wouldn't charge him straight up especially if he can see the fear in Rextanse's eyes.
Jynx cusses but he doesn't cuss that much in battle, it just makes him seem like he doesn't fight with his brains at all.


I do however, like how Rextanse's attitude is that of Melancholy and Sorrow because he knows what's going to happen to this young kid. In truth it shows just how much Rextanse is conflicted with the fact that he can see and do things that no one else can, but he can't do anything about them because he abides by the rules....unlike Xemo.

They are good foils of each other.

But yeah those are my gripes.

I think I may do a version myself just for kicks, seeing as I never really got to test out what he could do. It might even get me into the mood to draw him again (hopefully) Or if not that get his template and attacks written out finally, but I need to consult Knightflare to help with the backstory.

[Mastermind]

I quite liked that dome attack actually. It was crafty. I also like how Rex was portrayed. However, PA is the only one on the forum that can really critique Xemo's performance, which is located above my post. Overall, it was an enjoyable read.

[Xodyc]

enjoyable. I enjoyed Rex's portrayal

[Angel's Prayer]

Okay, a bit of news here. First off, I'm afraid I have to take a bit of a hiatus away from the Exiled, and the Internet in general. I don't know how long this'll last, probably a few weeks, or a month, I'm not entirely sure; there's just a bit of a crisis at home that I need to take care of.

On a lighter note, I finally have updated profiles for X, Zhymarx and Xalatine. Lose them and I'll kill you >

Exiled Order #:
Original Name: Yzmahr
Exiled Name: Zhymarx
Alliance: the Exiled Order
Dominant Hand: Right
Age: 23
Height: 5’7”
Weight: 87 lbs.
Eyes: Emerald Green
Hair: Spiky, Navy Blue and combed to the side. Zhymarx sports two beaded braids by the right side of his face.
Sex: Male?
Alias: The Dimensional Transcender
Weapon: They Symbol of Passing, a staff that can also separate into a spear and a sword. They vary in length and represent the Second, the Hour and the Minute respectively.
Clothing: Prior to the formation of the Exiled, Zhymarx wore a black robe similar to what Organization XIII wore. When mingling in the realm of Light, Zhymarx sports a white tunic with buckles and straps. After joining the Exiled, he sports the New Order Robe.
Hometown: Radiant Garden
Location: Zhymarx often visits places that hold mysterious and high levels of magical energy, such as that of Yen Sid’s tower, the Corridors of Darkness or the ruins in Radiant Garden. Since he does not partake of missions often, he can also be found wandering the stronghold, often trying to spark conversation and cooperation between members.
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Fighting style: Zhymarx has a decent and limber build, and aside from studying magic, he has managed to learn a form of martial art that uses his staff effectively. He can also manipulate the Symbol of passing in its more powerful form; that of three weapons floating about and moving by his slightest thought.
Quote: “Emotions are a curse, but being unable to understand why we have these feelings is a worse fate.” –Zhymarx’s thoughts on what the Exiled Order is truly for.
Personality: Zhymarx is often seen with a radiant smile on his face. He is extremely cheerful and optimistic, but can also tend to be a bit arrogant, aloof and easygoing, even childish at times. However, this is a mask that hides a brilliant, if not eccentric mind and remarkable insight on the situations the Exiled faces. Zhymarx has never been shown to lose his temper, and even in grave circumstances, he retains his sunny disposition. However, Zhymarx sometimes reveals another kind of smile, one that is sad and lonely, and when he seems to be closer to achieving his goals, he dawns a very serious look.
Nobody Name: Mesmers
Nobody Description: Mesmers are a high-ranking Nobody, they are able to cast spells that shoot out from their sleeves. However, like Zhymarx, they often behave playfully and do not harm opponents unless provoked or ordered to. Their main weakness is the star on their head, from which they draw their powers from.
Element: Star/Aldakar
Element Description: While Zhymarx can draw his powers from stars in general, he has chosen a particular star, named after a mythical goddess named Aldakar. Zhymarx uses his ability to draw energy from the celestial objects like a limitless battery. As a wizard, he can cast spells of a wide variety, usually requiring huge amounts of energy to pull off but able to do so effortlessly because of his element. A particular spell he likes to use is geared for mass transport, in which he can create holes between dimensions to arrive at a destination instantly.
Background: Zhymarx wasn’t always a wizard. At some point he was a scientist working in Radiant Garden. There, he met and fell deeply in love with one of his colleagues. However, during the Heartless attack, his precious person was lost into the darkness when her Heart had been stolen. Grief-stricken, Zhymarx tried to find a way to bring her back into the Realm of Light, but no form of pure Science could help him. Frustrated, Zhymarx began to lose faith in the scientific ways, and began to look to magic to solve his problem. And while Zhymarx showed to be quite a prodigy in the magical arts, no matter what he did, he still could not find a way to return his beloved to his side. Eventually, Zhymarx, desperate as he was, began to experiment on Heartless, so that he could somehow find a way to return his beloved to his side. During which time, an experiment had gone awry, releasing a Heartless and causing it to attack Zhymarx, removing his Heart.
Zhymarx’s intense desire to be reunited with his colleague was what would eventually cause him to create a Nobody. As a Nobody, Zhymarx resided in the realm of Darkness, and there, tried to see if the person he was looking for managed to develop a Nobody of her own. But try as he could, Zhymarx could not find a Nobody. What did this mean? Could it be that the person did not love Zhymarx as much as he did her? Was her Heart not strong enough? Did it lack an intense will that it could not manifest a Nobody? Zhymarx did not believe it, and spent many years trying to find her. After so long, Zhymarx had given up. To look this far and wide, for this long, it was obvious that what he sought was impossible to find. With his desire slowly fading away, Zhymarx began to drift on the edge of non-existence. Fortunately, he had been taken in by the Exiled Order, and they had shown him a new ambition to strive for. And so Zhymarx remained in the Organization, however, he had not lost complete hope on his previous endeavor. After learning of a Nobody with the power to control Time, Zhymarx’s intentions were lit anew. If he could get close to this Time-wielding Nobody, then perhaps he could get her to help him realize his wish; to return back in time and stop the events that would eventually lead to his eternal grief.

Exiled Order #:
Original Name: Talanie/ Natalie
Exiled Name: Xalatine
Alliance: the Exiled Order
Dominant Hand: ambidextrous
Age: 22
Height: 5’2”
Weight: 79 lbs
Eyes: Dark Green
Hair: Short and Dark Grey
Sex: Female
Alias: The Time and Space Ninja
Weapon: A pair of Blue Khukri daggers with Turquoise highlights
Clothing: Xalatine, under Darthex’s command previously sported a black robe. Currently she dresses in the robe of the Exiled Order.
Hometown: Radiant Garden
Location: Highly skilled in the art of stealth, Xalatine is always busy on many missions. When at the Stronghold, she has developed a liking for doing remedial chores, such as cooking and looking after the younger members, although she isn’t so good with the former.
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Fighting style: Xalatine specializes in the art of ninjitsu. She is able to strike quickly and elegantly with deadly accuracy. When fighting in close combat, she does so effortlessly and gracefully, while maintaining an aggressive offensive and impenetrable defense.
Quote: ”Even Darkness can offer a warm hand in times of utter dismay.” –Xalatine’s remarks on Nobodies
Personality: Xalatine is one of the Exiled’s more mature and intelligent members. She is strict and serious about everything she does, and this is how her lifestyle has maintained a sense of perfection. However, she is not overly aggressive and is calm to the point of being stoic. She also has some very sweet maternal qualities about her, making her easy to get along with and adored by younger members.
Nobody Name: Clockwork Angel
Nobody Description: An extremely large Nobody that can manipulate time for short periods. It is very persistent in attacking opponents and is quite fast despite its size. This Nobody though can be easily confused once it his hit in the pendulum on its belly that helps it to maintain balance.
Element: Gravity/ Demi
Element Description: Xalatine has refined her ability to control her element to make up for its seemingly minimal variations and powers. She can alter the Gravity in certain locations, causing objects to float or to weigh down. By quickly manipulating the Gravity in an area, she can make objects float in the air, increase their momentum and attacking force or weaken it significantly by eliminating weight. She can slow down opponents, and speed herself up, and can even fly in a manner of speaking. Because of her intelligence, she is able to use her element in numerous ways to her advantage.
Background: Xalatine was at a time, a lonely young woman who lived in Radiant Garden. Because of all the grief she had once suffered, she lived in isolation, feeling that she might be discovered by her past and be reminded of more painful times. However, by a pure coincidence, her past had eventually caught up to her. The same mysterious creatures that destroyed her previous life had reached Radiant Garden, attacking and taking the hearts of some of its denizens. Xalatine had been among the many who fell victim to the claws of a Heartless. However, just as her Heart was about to be lost in Darkness, an unknown individual had saved it, and returned it to her body before it could fade away entirely.
Thus when Xalatine was born in the Realm In-between, she had little to no memory of who she was. Lost and confused, Xalatine was easily manipulated into becoming one of Darthex’s disciples, under the contract in which Darthex would help her learn who she truly is in exchange for her missions. Xalatine was somehow already well-versed in martial arts; a memory fragment left over from her Heart’s separation, and was of valuable assistance to Darthex’s cause.
However, on one particular mission, in which she was to locate and eliminate Darthex’s Heartless, Xalatine found something unexpected of a Nobody; a feeling of camaraderie and friendship towards Marx, her employer’s Heartless. Like her, Marx was confused. He had no idea who he was or why he was here, and through this understanding, the two developed a close bond. However, Xalatine was expected to kill Marx, but for some reason couldn’t. This was probably due to her friendship with him, but might also have been triggered by a coincidence, in which this child greatly resembled someone she knew from Talanie’s past.
Regardless of what the reason truly was, Xalatine wanted to spare Marx’s life. Darthex used this weakness as an advantage and began to threaten Xalatine to carry out his orders, else he would personally kill Marx. Seeking a means to escape his wrath, Xalatine arrived at a conclusion. He would have to kill Darthex before he could kill her friend and eventually her.
Xalatine sought out the power of the current keyblade wielder of the era, Sora. He possessed the power of light, and was possibly strong enough to do what she couldn’t. Xalatine tested Sora, coaxing him into carrying out her own plans. Unfortunately, this act of treason eventually reached Darthex’s ears, and with his plan coming into full circle, he felt he no longer needed Xalatine or his Heartless. He manipulated his own Heartless, threatening to kill Xalatine unless he defeated Sora. This would in turn, cause Xalatine to attempt to defeat Sora herself, and whoever survived would then fall at the hands of his other supporter, Myromex. By doing this, he would have more than enough time to attain his own goals.
Sora confronted Marx at first, but was stopped by Xalatine, who was willing to sacrifice her own life to save his. Eventually, Myromex was growing impatient of all this, and proceeded to attack them all himself. But with Sora, Marx and Xalatine realizing who the true enemy was, they worked together and were able to defeat Myromex.
Sora then proceeded to defeat Darthex with the help of another Nobody and keyblade wielder, Selvix. After the battle, Xalatine thanked the both of them and apologized for involving them in a problem she alone could not handle. Selvix then reveals that he knows who Xalatine was before she became a Nobody and that the person was living in Radiant Garden. She, alongside Marx returned to her home where she finds her past self, trapped in a coma, awaiting the return of her Nobody. Marx is happy that Xalatine can finally return to being who she was, but Xalatine becomes hesitant of this decision. She has come to realize that what she wanted was not her past life, but a new one. After further remembering the painful memories, Xalatine for a while did not want to return. However, in a conversation with her Heart, they arrived at a compromise. Talanie needed Xalatine to be complete, and Xalatine desired a Heart so that she would be able to appreciate her own life. Thus, the two made a deal. Xalatine would stay by Talanie’s side, though not completely reuniting with one another, such that she is able to exist in her own right. In return for her assistance, when Talanie will one day die, she will instead give her Heart to Xalatine before this happens. Thus the two lived as one under these pretenses.
Several years later, as Talanie grew old while Xalatine, as a Nobody, did not age, it eventually came to the point in which her Heart would now belong to her Nobody. However, Xalatine once again realized something; to take Talanie’s heart would cause her to continue living well past what her mortality was capable of. She would be cursed to an eternity of living alongside her other self, and forced to remember her own painful memories. Not wanting this for her Other Self, Xalatine did not accept Talanie’s Heart, and so she managed to die peacefully.
Xalatine continued to walk about, often regarded as being a ghost of her Other Self. She no longer had a Heart, and was beginning to lose her feelings for everything. Her friend, Marx, having a Heart as well, also eventually expired. His death caused the last bit of emotion left in Xalatine to fade away, and she was left without anything inside. Empty, though not grieving the loss of emotions, Xalatine began to wander aimlessly, burdened with memories that only confused her. Soon, she had been discovered by Zhymarx, who at the time was a member of the Exiled Order. Offering her shelter and consolation for her losses, Xalatine became a member of the Order herself. Desiring a new purpose, she agreed on being eternally faithful to the Exiled and aiding it in its times of need, as it did for her.

Exiled Order # 31
Original Name: unknown
Exiled Name: X
Alliance: the real X was not present during the point in which the Order was halved into the traitors and the allies. At this time, his identity was stolen by his clone, Xofur, who aligned himself with the traitors. Soon, the real X was discovered, and he remained firmly faithful to the Exiled Order.
Dominant Hand: ambidextrous
Height: 6’3”
Weight: 96 lbs.
Eyes: unknown
Hair: unknown
Sex: Male
Alias: The Sage of History
Weapon: X does not control any one weapon, and arms himself with a certain type depending on the situation. However, though he is forbidden from wielding the signature weapons of other members, he is known to possess Marluxia’s Scythe, Larxene’s Kunai, Lexaeus’s Tomahawk, Vexen’s Shield and Zexion’s Lexicon in his arsenal. According to him, he says he obtained these by “picking up the leftover memories in Castle Oblivion.”
Clothing: X sports the New Order Robe, the Exiled Order’s signature uniform. Prior to this, he also had the Organization XIII cloak, and he still uses this sometimes as a disguise. X never shows his face, and constantly has his hood up, though why he does this is uncertain. There have been many attempts to unmask his true face, but all have failed. Only one person has seen X’s true face, and that is Zhymarx. After seeing it and often interrogated as to how X looks, Zhymarx would mischievously chuckle to this and simply mention that “His face certainly doesn’t fit his personality.” Zhymarx also once indirectly said that X looked young, by jokingly saying that X uses cosmetics to hide his real age.
Hometown: unknown
Location: X is a highly dependable Nobody and thus he is almost always on a mission. Because he does not mind the dangers or sometimes even the sheer simplicity of certain missions, this has made him incredibly lax with doing just about anything, most humorously demeaning, remedial chores in the rare instance he is left at the stronghold. X is apparently the best chef among the members of the Exiled, but try as he might, he cannot seem to teach Xalatine how to cook properly.
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Fighting Style: X is a master of countless Martial Arts disciplines. Because of this, he acts calmly in a battle and employs mostly defensive measures to counter the opponent. When deemed necessary, he can also use deadly and aggressive force.
Quote: “…Very well then.” -It is the response most people will receive from X when speaking to him or asking him for a favor.
Personality: X can be described as being extremely patient and never bearing ill will to any member of the Order. He is willing to do just about anything for the Order, no matter how dangerous, stupid or humiliating the task. This is not because he is gullible though. X is probably one of the most intelligent members of the Exiled, due to his ability to remember vast amounts of information in explicit detail. He is willing to do these things because he pities the other members in a sense. X doesn’t particularly care for the other members, and sometimes looks down on them. He tends to be a know-it-all, though his ramblings are most often ignored or are so annoying, others try to walk away from it. However, X does some times get the best of his fellow members, particularly with the fact that no one other than one Nobody knows what he truly looks like. X is amused by the frustration this gives some members and in this he is shown to be as calm and easygoing as both Xalatine and Zhymarx respectively. However, X also has a very serious side, and it is most prominent when he is carrying out more dangerous missions. Because X almost always knows exactly what to do, he can be strict and even cold to comrades that do not take his advice seriously. But because his strictness can be seen as his caring for the safety of his teammates, one might also describe him as being noble to some extent.
Nobody Name: Scribe
Nobody Description: a high-ranking Nobody. It studies its opponent by viewing the memories before attacking. A strange effect occurs when near a Scribe. One tends to forget certain memories in his/her Heart.
Element: Memory
Element Description: X possesses an ability similar to another Nobody, Namine. He is able to view and manipulate the memories of people. Unlike Namine though, his power affects a wider range of people, specifically, anyone who comes into physical contact with him. Another manner in which X’s power is far more advanced is in his ability to make copies of other people’s memories and use them himself. Through this, he can learn information almost instantly and even replicate special powers and abilities. However, the most powerful manifestation of his element is through the creation of physically real memories, such as someone or something a person knew from the past. However, X also has his limits. Though he can view them, he is unable to manipulate the memories of Nobodies, because Nobodies themselves are a physical manifestation of the memories of the Heart, and trying to manipulate a Nobody even with this philosophy would require a lot of power to pull off. As a general rule among the Order, its members are not allowed to use their elemental powers against fellow members, and so X is not allowed to view the memories of others unless instructed to by only the highest ranking members of the Order. (This is one of the reasons why he never knew Daxic’s intentions) Further more, though his illusions are physically real, they are still illusions created by his power, and will fade away once he is destroyed. Also, once X reaches the maximum limit of memories he can store, he tends to suffer from painful headaches, and any more memories would cause him to literally break down.
Background: X was formerly one of the four bodies under the identity of the Nobody, Myromex. Each clone acts as a façade of Myromex’s personality, and each have sworn to treat the other of equal importance as none of them truly know who the real Myromex is anymore. Despite being similar, they are also different, prominently in their true personalities, their characteristics while uninfluenced by the memories each replicates for their own needs.
Though little is known of the Myromex clone Enox, another clone known as Xowt has a very egocentric and arrogant personality. The clone known as Tehrex possesses an inquisitive and highly logical persona, while the last clone Xofur is an unstable but brilliant and conniving sociopath.
With four bodies, Myromex thought that he would be able to attain his goal of world domination. Each body had its own unique plan to realize their collective ambition, and it was the duty of the other bodies to help see this through. But when the second body, Xowt carried out a plan that did not involve the others as closely as was intended; feelings of distrust began to spread between them.
Eventually, Xowt’s plan failed and he was destroyed while attempting to carry it out. With three remaining bodies, the Myromex tried to strengthen the bonds to prevent any one body from trying to gain the upper hand and realizing he might possibly be the real Myromex. Each Myromex monitored the other closely, no one body was allowed to keep memories or important information to himself, and the goal of world domination was constantly engraved in each of their minds. However, unbeknownst to Xofur and Enox, Tehrex would be the next Myromex to start detaching himself from the other two bodies.
At some point, Tehrex had obtained a very enlightening view of the world. He began to further develop this memory by studying the philosophies and knowledge that it based its own view on. Soon, Tehrex himself became enlightened by what he had learned, and realized that there really is something far more important than his previous ambition. Further more, Tehrex unexpectedly began a desire to grow more as an individual and less as just another vessel for Myromex. He no longer trusted the other bodies, to the point of blocking off their attempts to enter his own memories.
Eventually, his individuality grew obvious. Outraged by his new-found views and ambitions, the two remaining Myromex bodies threatened to kill him if he ever dared interfere in their goals. Tehrex, unwilling to live under such pressure, left the two bodies to live out his own separate life. He changed his identity and seeking protection, joined the Exiled Order under the name X. While in their ranks, he felt he would be safe from whatever ploys the remaining Myromex would plot in order to kill him. In gratitude though unbeknownst by the Order, Myromex served them faithfully. Whatever he was tasked to do, he was confident he would be able to do, so long as it would not interfere with his own ambition to obtain spiritual enlightenment.

lol epically long post.

Well, see you whenever.

[twilight abyss]

Originally Posted by ╬ProperArtist╬

There are some major problems here.

The Void isn't a white area. If anything it's the exact opposite, by which I mean a dark and foggy endless abyss.
For the first part it seems to jump into the action far to quickly without a proper introduction of who Xemo actually is. Everything is moving so fast I just don't feel like there's any set up to it, it just jumps right into the action (even though it works in some cases it doesn't here)

Xemo also doesn't attack as a close range fighter (well not right away) if anything he likes to screw with his opponents. By this I mean he'll block an attack here and there, maybe even let them land a couple blows but he'll get right back up wipe the blood off with his finger and lick it while keeping that same creepy smile. He hardly ever talks as well and he doesn't have a blood dome attack, however he does have a tidal wave like attack.
Xemo likes to fake out his opponents by creating somewhat exploding clones, that have blood needles in them and killing them will guess what cause them to go flying into you.
For the most part Xemo stands back fights from far allowing the blood to flow like water to which he increases or decreases it's quantity, density and pressure as he sees fit.
The only time he will fight you close up is if you manage to get in close to him and actual damage him a bit, this is signified by a trickle of blood which flows from his right eye. By then the gloves are off and it's anything goes and nothing short of Rextanse himself can stop him.

His weapon of choice are Razor Blades and if he feels the need to be close combat, he'll form blood around his arm to create a blood like drill.

Jynx is a hand to hand combat fighter, but against someone like this he wouldn't charge him straight up especially if he can see the fear in Rextanse's eyes.
Jynx cusses but he doesn't cuss that much in battle, it just makes him seem like he doesn't fight with his brains at all.


I do however, like how Rextanse's attitude is that of Melancholy and Sorrow because he knows what's going to happen to this young kid. In truth it shows just how much Rextanse is conflicted with the fact that he can see and do things that no one else can, but he can't do anything about them because he abides by the rules....unlike Xemo.

They are good foils of each other.

But yeah those are my gripes.

I think I may do a version myself just for kicks, seeing as I never really got to test out what he could do. It might even get me into the mood to draw him again (hopefully) Or if not that get his template and attacks written out finally, but I need to consult Knightflare to help with the backstory.

Yeah, I'm not really sure if I'm good at writing actual battle scenes, so I may just write things like meetings and more social things, I know I'm pretty good at those.

EDIT: I didn't know we needed to introduce Xemo, I mean the reader will have read the prologue correct?
Also, sorry, I remembered Xemo fighting in the prologue with katars so I thought...

Yeah, that's how I was trying to portray Rex, that's why he had an "almost bored" look, he already knows what happens.

[yoyoj06]

AO- you forgot one thing, we decided kaarix is 2nd and ruxel is 3rd in chp 3

[╬ProperArtist╬]

Originally Posted by twilight abyss

Yeah, I'm not really sure if I'm good at writing actual battle scenes, so I may just write things like meetings and more social things, I know I'm pretty good at those.

EDIT: I didn't know we needed to introduce Xemo, I mean the reader will have read the prologue correct?
Also, sorry, I remembered Xemo fighting in the prologue with katars so I thought...

Yeah, that's how I was trying to portray Rex, that's why he had an "almost bored" look, he already knows what happens.

What I mean by introducing Xemo is have him talk a little bit or show a more recognized expression on Rextanse's face, for the fact that Rextanse and and Jynx went into the Void to train and having someone else be there and Rextanse' brother at that would most definitely cause a bit more words between everyone.

Xemo's weapons have been changed for a while, I guess no one remembered to change them from katars to Razor Blades :<

[Dawning Twilight]

Originally Posted by Angel's Prayer

Okay, a bit of news here. First off, I'm afraid I have to take a bit of a hiatus away from the Exiled, and the Internet in general. I don't know how long this'll last, probably a few weeks, or a month, I'm not entirely sure; there's just a bit of a crisis at home that I need to take care of.


Exiled Order # 31
Original Name: unknown
Exiled Name: X
Alliance: the real X was not present during the point in which the Order was halved into the traitors and the allies. At this time, his identity was stolen by his clone, Xofur, who aligned himself with the traitors. Soon, the real X was discovered, and he remained firmly faithful to the Exiled Order.
Dominant Hand: ambidextrous
Height: 6’3”
Weight: 96 lbs.
Eyes: unknown
Hair: unknown
Sex: Male
Alias: The Sage of History
Weapon: X does not control any one weapon, and arms himself with a certain type depending on the situation. However, though he is forbidden from wielding the signature weapons of other members, he is known to possess Marluxia’s Scythe, Larxene’s Kunai, Lexaeus’s Tomahawk, Vexen’s Shield and Zexion’s Lexicon in his arsenal. According to him, he says he obtained these by “picking up the leftover memories in Castle Oblivion.”
Clothing: X sports the New Order Robe, the Exiled Order’s signature uniform. Prior to this, he also had the Organization XIII cloak, and he still uses this sometimes as a disguise. X never shows his face, and constantly has his hood up, though why he does this is uncertain. There have been many attempts to unmask his true face, but all have failed. Only one person has seen X’s true face, and that is Zhymarx. After seeing it and often interrogated as to how X looks, Zhymarx would mischievously chuckle to this and simply mention that “His face certainly doesn’t fit his personality.” Zhymarx also once indirectly said that X looked young, by jokingly saying that X uses cosmetics to hide his real age.
Hometown: unknown
Location: X is a highly dependable Nobody and thus he is almost always on a mission. Because he does not mind the dangers or sometimes even the sheer simplicity of certain missions, this has made him incredibly lax with doing just about anything, most humorously demeaning, remedial chores in the rare instance he is left at the stronghold. X is apparently the best chef among the members of the Exiled, but try as he might, he cannot seem to teach Xalatine how to cook properly.
Artist:
Theme Song:
Fighting Style: X is a master of countless Martial Arts disciplines. Because of this, he acts calmly in a battle and employs mostly defensive measures to counter the opponent. When deemed necessary, he can also use deadly and aggressive force.
Quote: “…Very well then.” -It is the response most people will receive from X when speaking to him or asking him for a favor.
Personality: X can be described as being extremely patient and never bearing ill will to any member of the Order. He is willing to do just about anything for the Order, no matter how dangerous, stupid or humiliating the task. This is not because he is gullible though. X is probably one of the most intelligent members of the Exiled, due to his ability to remember vast amounts of information in explicit detail. He is willing to do these things because he pities the other members in a sense. X doesn’t particularly care for the other members, and sometimes looks down on them. He tends to be a know-it-all, though his ramblings are most often ignored or are so annoying, others try to walk away from it. However, X does some times get the best of his fellow members, particularly with the fact that no one other than one Nobody knows what he truly looks like. X is amused by the frustration this gives some members and in this he is shown to be as calm and easygoing as both Xalatine and Zhymarx respectively. However, X also has a very serious side, and it is most prominent when he is carrying out more dangerous missions. Because X almost always knows exactly what to do, he can be strict and even cold to comrades that do not take his advice seriously. But because his strictness can be seen as his caring for the safety of his teammates, one might also describe him as being noble to some extent.
Nobody Name: Scribe
Nobody Description: a high-ranking Nobody. It studies its opponent by viewing the memories before attacking. A strange effect occurs when near a Scribe. One tends to forget certain memories in his/her Heart.
Element: Memory
Element Description: X possesses an ability similar to another Nobody, Namine. He is able to view and manipulate the memories of people. Unlike Namine though, his power affects a wider range of people, specifically, anyone who comes into physical contact with him. Another manner in which X’s power is far more advanced is in his ability to make copies of other people’s memories and use them himself. Through this, he can learn information almost instantly and even replicate special powers and abilities. However, the most powerful manifestation of his element is through the creation of physically real memories, such as someone or something a person knew from the past. However, X also has his limits. Though he can view them, he is unable to manipulate the memories of Nobodies, because Nobodies themselves are a physical manifestation of the memories of the Heart, and trying to manipulate a Nobody even with this philosophy would require a lot of power to pull off. As a general rule among the Order, its members are not allowed to use their elemental powers against fellow members, and so X is not allowed to view the memories of others unless instructed to by only the highest ranking members of the Order. (This is one of the reasons why he never knew Daxic’s intentions) Further more, though his illusions are physically real, they are still illusions created by his power, and will fade away once he is destroyed. Also, once X reaches the maximum limit of memories he can store, he tends to suffer from painful headaches, and any more memories would cause him to literally break down.
Background: X was formerly one of the four bodies under the identity of the Nobody, Myromex. Each clone acts as a façade of Myromex’s personality, and each have sworn to treat the other of equal importance as none of them truly know who the real Myromex is anymore. Despite being similar, they are also different, prominently in their true personalities, their characteristics while uninfluenced by the memories each replicates for their own needs.
Though little is known of the Myromex clone Enox, another clone known as Xowt has a very egocentric and arrogant personality. The clone known as Tehrex possesses an inquisitive and highly logical persona, while the last clone Xofur is an unstable but brilliant and conniving sociopath.
With four bodies, Myromex thought that he would be able to attain his goal of world domination. Each body had its own unique plan to realize their collective ambition, and it was the duty of the other bodies to help see this through. But when the second body, Xowt carried out a plan that did not involve the others as closely as was intended; feelings of distrust began to spread between them.
Eventually, Xowt’s plan failed and he was destroyed while attempting to carry it out. With three remaining bodies, the Myromex tried to strengthen the bonds to prevent any one body from trying to gain the upper hand and realizing he might possibly be the real Myromex. Each Myromex monitored the other closely, no one body was allowed to keep memories or important information to himself, and the goal of world domination was constantly engraved in each of their minds. However, unbeknownst to Xofur and Enox, Tehrex would be the next Myromex to start detaching himself from the other two bodies.
At some point, Tehrex had obtained a very enlightening view of the world. He began to further develop this memory by studying the philosophies and knowledge that it based its own view on. Soon, Tehrex himself became enlightened by what he had learned, and realized that there really is something far more important than his previous ambition. Further more, Tehrex unexpectedly began a desire to grow more as an individual and less as just another vessel for Myromex. He no longer trusted the other bodies, to the point of blocking off their attempts to enter his own memories.
Eventually, his individuality grew obvious. Outraged by his new-found views and ambitions, the two remaining Myromex bodies threatened to kill him if he ever dared interfere in their goals. Tehrex, unwilling to live under such pressure, left the two bodies to live out his own separate life. He changed his identity and seeking protection, joined the Exiled Order under the name X. While in their ranks, he felt he would be safe from whatever ploys the remaining Myromex would plot in order to kill him. In gratitude though unbeknownst by the Order, Myromex served them faithfully. Whatever he was tasked to do, he was confident he would be able to do, so long as it would not interfere with his own ambition to obtain spiritual enlightenment.

lol epically long post.

Well, see you whenever.

i'm sorry to see you leaving for a bit but i was wondering if i could use X in order to help Salix with a few things during Exiled 2?

[The Lionheart]

i hope everyone found that summary that took me about thirty minutes to type useful

anyways, AP, i'll put those updates on the site ASAP. i'm kinda pressed for time right now, so yeah, it might be awhile.

on a lighter note, i've decided to switch off writing a part every other night of charxai's background, and i'll spend the rest working on his recruitment.

also, thank you guys (it was in a yahoo convo) for all of your positive feedback on my recruitment. It was really, really inspiring. just made me feel a lot better about what i've been doing!

so again, thanks A LOT!

i couldn't do the things i do without the collective encouragement of all of you.

[yoyoj06]

well i jsut got back from nashville from a frisbee tournament. my team should have been in the championship game, but we got screwed over in the semis because its call your own fouls and the other team decided to call fouls that were such bull.

anyways, i can start ruxel's recruit now

[The Lionheart]

Exiled Order #:

Original Name:
Kaarix

Exiled Name:

Alliance:
Sabixel
Lexinoth
Lenxuzob

Dominant Hand:
Sabixel
Lexinoth

Age:
Xenge

Height:
Sabixel

Weight:

Eyes:
Lexinoth

Hair:

Sex:

Alias:
Lexinoth
Xenge
Lenxuzob

Weapon:

Clothing:

Hometown:
Kaarix
Lexinoth
Skyx

Location:
Rextanse
Xowlin
Xodyc
Kaarix
Sabixel
Lexinoth
Ojex
Skyx
Xenge
Lonex
Xatsuin
Xenra
Lenxuzob
Caxboj
Darthex

Theme Song:
Xana
Salix
Kaarix
Xishn
Xenge
Lonex
Axit
Lenxuzob

Artist:
Xana
Salix
Xishn
Xenge
Lonex
Axit
Lenxuzob

Fighting style:

Quote:
Kaarix
Lexinoth
Xenge
Lenxuzob
Darthex

Personality:

Nobody Name:
Charxai
Xana
Lexinoth

Nobody Description:
Charxai
Xana
Xodyc
Ruxel
Lexinoth
Lenxuzob

Element:
Lenxuzob

Element Description:
Xana
Lexinoth
Lenxuzob

Background:
Charxai
Kaarix
Lexinoth
Ojex
Xenge
Lonex
Axit
Lenxuzob
Caxboj

Characters who are DONE:
Zaxeldion
Zixan
Jynx
DrBanxon
Zaverxi
Daxic
Jixah
Zhymarx
Xalatine
Myromex
Lorxissa
Toxit

Characters who are INCOMPLETE:
Charxai
Rextanse
Xowlin
Xana
Xodyc
Salix
Kaarix
Sabixel
Lexinoth
Ojex
Xishn
Skyx
Xenge
Lonex
Xatsuin
Axit
Xenra
Lenxuzob
Caxboj
Temallox ( needs a lot of work D: )
Darthex

Characters with NO INFO:
Zallex
Exel
Xias
Xymed
Banxius
Exdahs/Sezux
Nodix (haha)
Ruthax
Shizax
Xemo

Edit:

Originally Posted by NobodyImportant

I thought we were doing away with the theme song?

I wasn't completely sure, to tell you the truth. So i just left it in there.

If we are indeed doing away with the theme song, i'll just take it out of there.

Also, if you don't want your character to have the following categories, PLEASE tell me, so that I can put a "Not applicable (N/A)" under that specific category:

Location
Theme Song
Artist
Nobody
Nobody Description (only if you don't have a nobody minion)

i'll be PMing everyone individually later, to remind you guys what you're missing (i'm even gonna PM people that have been inactive, so maybe if they somehow log on, they'll get the PM).

[NobodyImportant]

I thought we were doing away with the theme song?

[Mastermind]

Once I get around to it, I'll PM you with all the changes I will make to Zixan's profile. However, you can go ahead and change his element from Cloud to Vapor.

[Dawning Twilight]

Originally Posted by Mastermind

Once I get around to it, I'll PM you with all the changes I will make to Zixan's profile. However, you can go ahead and change his element from Cloud to Vapor.

MM who finds Zixan?