The Exiled

[gene chaos]

its funny that i didn't consider xenge dying untill i drew a different character thats why i called the element spirit contract.
basic xenge personally story overview:
gene loses heart gets frozen in a big mystic door for 200 years after unknown old dude sends him though a corrider of darkness leading to TWTNW found by xana from there does exiled things.
soon he finds a lab and a little girl by accdent little girl gets attached to xenge, xenge leaves her in a world as heads to go somewhere and gets killed but as he dies soul gets put into a contract with the little girl who lookes 15 now.

have 2 questions one may have been answered by now but... what does the exiled do between attacks go to a spa or have an all exiled picknick with games and such.

second whats with the sudden intrest in exiled 2

[Dawning Twilight]

Originally Posted by gene chaos

have 2 questions one may have been answered by now but... what does the exiled do between attacks go to a spa or have an all exiled picknick with games and such.

second whats with the sudden intrest in exiled 2

the first is relax in any way they can. Salix gets more involved ^_^ that means i get to write more as in Exiled 1 Salix barely has any roles in it.

[The Lionheart]

kay guize.

I've been thinking of a charxai scene for exiled 2. but, that'll have to wait.

as most of you know, i've been working on charxai's backstory recently, and although its like 50 billion pages long, i'm still not done. however, today an idea struck me as to how i was going to end it.

now realize, charxai's whole village has been destroyed by "Igor" his former slave master that charxai thought was dead. Now, charxai's "lover" was a part of this village, but was not killed. just kidnapped. Igor left a mocking note on what used to be charxai's doorstep that lead charxai to believe this. however, when charxai finally reaches his "lover" at Igors camp, it's too late, and she dies, in his arms (sound familiar? *coughstarhackcoughwarswheezehackcough*). Anyways, this is the scene right after, by coincidence, Igor finds charxai with his lover in his arms.

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La Parte Final: Recompensa (The Final Part: Retribution)

I stared in awe as tendrils of darkness started wrapping themselves around my sword. After losing sight of the blade for a few seconds, a new sword appeared, with an expressionless eye staring straight at me. It seemed as if I could feel life pulsating from this sword, as if it had become more than just that.

“What is that?” Igor’s shrill voice, laced with fear, demanded. “What are you?”

A tormented laugh escaped my lips. “This is the darkness of my heart, master. All of my hatred, my despair, has been imbued in this blade. As for myself,” I chuckled darkly, “I am what you have made me. The only thing I have to lose is my life, and even that matters nothing to me anymore. All I have to live for,” My eyes darkened, and my face grew serious, “is killing you.”

Igor stepped back, the fear shining through on his face. “Guards! Get him! Kill that man at all costs!” Swarming forward, the soldiers that had been bristling behind Igor charged at me. Not one stood that did not fall as I cut a swath through the sea of soldiers.

“Igor! Death has come! Do not try to escape!” I screamed as another soldier fell beneath my blade. The only reply I received was more furious shouting from Igor, urging his troops on with the flat of his blade. Joy coursing through my veins, I laughed as my soldiers were mercilessly slain by my blade. The thought of avenging my loved one gave me strength as I had never felt. No, it was more than the thought of avenging the death of my love. It was the simple thought of revenge that allowed me to press on. Revenge for everything Igor had done to me, my friends, and my family.

Feeling the darkness closing around my heart, I carved through the soldiers in front of me like a scythe carves through grass. Closing in on Igor, I felt the darkness taking a hold of me. With one last breath, I sawed Igor’s sword in half with one blow, cutting straight through his torso. As the final light of my life faded away, I smile floated upon my lips.

[Ojike]

It's an awesome story, AO. But ...you really should change Igor's name. I just can't read any of that without THIS popping into my head. >.>

[twilight abyss]

It's true, you really need to change the name :[
But anyway, sorry I couldn't make the template, I will tomorrow because I have something important to do today.

[The Lionheart]

Originally Posted by Ojike

It's an awesome story, AO. But ...you really should change Igor's name. I just can't read any of that without THIS popping into my head. >.>

lol. Igor, not Egor.

but i'll think about it. I'll change that after i'm done with the story. i'm not creative enough right now >.>

[Mastermind]

Awesome story is awesome. 'Nuff said.

[Ojike]

Originally Posted by Axel Owns

lol. Igor, not Egor.

but i'll think about it. I'll change that after i'm done with the story. i'm not creative enough right now >.>

Actually that character's name is Igor. He's from Mel Brooks' classic "Young Frankenstein". I'm disappointed that you didn't know that.

Edit: Hells yeah Page 200, almost 3000 posts.

[Mastermind]

Originally Posted by Ojike

Actually that character's name is Igor. He's from Mel Brooks' classic "Young Frankenstein". I'm disappointed that you didn't know that.

Edit: Hells yeah Page 200, almost 3000 posts.

And it only took us a little over a year to reach it. Although, I'm just on page 75.

[The Lionheart]

Originally Posted by Ojike

Actually that character's name is Igor. He's from Mel Brooks' classic "Young Frankenstein". I'm disappointed that you didn't know that.

Edit: Hells yeah Page 200, almost 3000 posts.

i'm dissapointed in myself too.

*facepalm*

but yeah, page 200, that's pretty sweet. i hope we can get to 1000 this time before mods close us down

[Mastermind]

Originally Posted by Axel Owns

i'm dissapointed in myself too.

*facepalm*

but yeah, page 200, that's pretty sweet. i hope we can get to 1000 this time before mods close us down

I highly doubt that feat will be achieved any time soon.

[The Lionheart]

Originally Posted by Mastermind

I highly doubt that feat will be achieved any time soon.

many because there are very few posts like this:

Originally Posted by Axel Owns

k thanx a lot guys
i brb
gotta go mow the lawn...

gawd i was an idiot.

*facepalm*

[Mastermind]

Ah, don't beat yourself up over it. Everyone has spammed or made pointless posts. Hell, it's what made CaM 1.0 so epic.

[The Lionheart]

i'm about to fight some son of a bitch.

Sajax - The Atomic Nitro by ~Screwthestars on deviantART

fucking stole my element D:

since i put the copyright thing on the exiled website, could i sue?

edit: guys, i changed Igor's name to "Jahdai". Thoughts?

[Dawning Twilight]

Originally Posted by Mastermind

Ah, don't beat yourself up over it. Everyone has spammed or made pointless posts. Hell, it's what made CaM 1.0 so epic.

Lol. the men in white EPIC! xD

AO - Igor, Lol. i like the new name a lot better.