The Exiled

[The Lionheart]

thanks xodyc. i'm kinda inspired, so i think i'm going to work on fixing up charxai's battle. it basically needs plastic surgery. i'm gonna try to finish a different part each night, so hopefully, i'll have it done by next week.

[Mastermind]

Quick question about the topic everyone loves to avoid, ranks. Story-wise, how are they determined? For example, if some new recruit in the story asks how the ranks were determined, what would the answer be?

[gene chaos]

aw two post in the month amazing

well finnaly rerefound xenge's prolouge let me type it before i lose it again

PROLOUGE

Hello my name is gene, or well it was. this is the story of how i live and die, but before i start let me tell you my name.Xenge.

CHAPTER 0
The Curtain of Dusk Falls, the Play Ends

All things in this would end, it's a know fact.
even the sonata's of light and darkness must end one day...

World// Endcity.
Location// Area 2 Sector 54.The old library Vertios Avius.
Its a brisk morning the world just starting to awaken from its slumber. All is silent in the streets of the old city. Past the decaying building lies a gothic style library, inside voices can be heard.
"Hey come on! it's time to get a move on get up" the voice shouted.
"Huh? what time is it?" a voice replied.
" Time to get up!!" she shouted louder.
"Geez no need to shout , i'm up" he said wearily as he got up.
"Geez, Gene old man delius is going to fire you if u keep being late!".
"Ezra you worry too much deluis isn't going to do that"gene replied.
"well then you gotha go now cause the shops in sector 19" Ezra said
As he started walking out the door he said" stop worrying or your gonna get wrinkles!".
As he walked toward th inner wall the two suns started to rise bring life to the world.

Location// Area 3. Sector 19
Time// 8:00
Finishing off a stolen apple he thought[ sure hav been some pretty strange characters of late].
Entering the shop he looked around" hey old man were are you?!"he shouted.
"In the back Gene!" a replie came.
Walking into the back room Gene spoted delius holdind a small box" hey whats that?".
Delius" your delievey".
Gene"where to?"
Delius" beyond the old city at Regnum Lacum".
Gene" no one lives there ..." , "thats what the coustumer wanted so we deliever" delius interupted
Gene" fine...."taking the package from delius he left the shop and headed toward the Regnum Lacum.

Location// Regnum Lacum entrance
Time//12:00

As he walked down the cystal illumatied hallways he reached the center of the structure ianua ex stella lucis.
"Okay drop the package in the middle of the room then gat out of here" he mumbled to himself.
as he reached the middle of the room he was ready to place itthen he thought[ what ciuld be in here that it needs to be delievered to a place like this? one peak couldn't hurt] he thought as he tore a hole into the the side of the box. As he pered into the box the darkness inside rushed out and moved it self to the darkest corner. Shocked by the sudden bust of darkness he fell to the floor.
"What the hell was that!!"he shouted in a paniced tone.
Staring at the shifting darkness as it grew form its body grew more distink with each passing second. The form that arouse from the darkness was that of a human torso a serpent tail for the lower body a falcons head with horns. He stared at the behemoth as it opened its pale yellow eyes teirffed. Gene started to think logical again, as silently as possible mae arun for the door. As he reached the corridor he noticed the glowing crystals shone no more the whole thing covered in darkness, soon more pale yellow eyes cut through the darkness, he backed up. The creature knew what it had to do, for in the foom it started to punch the walls yelling an indisictive noise. It belowed, it screeched, it roared all in the while Gene sat in a corner scared out of his mind trying to understand what was happening. The creature had stopped its assult on the wall for it noticed Gene it looked at him with its cold yellow eyes.
It moved closer untill it was in the only light working it had pitch black skin and dark blue scales, the heartless insinga on its chest. Gene noticed the mark he saw it in a book once it was a heartless. Creatures banished from this world by the Dominatus Diei a society of people that worshiped the light and sacrficed themseles to protect this world. The heartless was infront of him now [ well if i'm going out i'm going out strong]he thought as he stood up to face the beast ready to die.
It attacked he felt its blow but the blow was not with its hands but its tail the tail was behind him he looked at his chest to see the tail sticking out of his chest. It pulled back its tail his heart stuck on it, he stared as it devored his heart. He had fallen to the groundas his heart was devored by the beast.

"DENKO !!"a voice shouted with it a burst of lightning struck the beast .
On the floor Gene only saw the lightning hit the creature, it was only injured not dead.
"Procelle ex Lucis...Sol Solis Inflecto ex Ianua!! Letum Furor ex Nox Noctis!! Rose Rubicundior, Lilio Candidior!!
With those words the gaint stone doors opened from within a heavenly light pored forth . As the heartless was hit by the light it beloowed out a scream of pain as it faded away.
Even gene lost him self in the light," hmmm so your the child of the star, born in a broken world".

CHAPTER 0.5
The Play Ends and the Squel begins.
After Winter its Time for Spring...

"Ugh my head, my chest..... wait", checking his chest there was no sign of a hole no blood nothing.... "nothing, thats how i feel right now". Getting up he survayed the room noticing that the walls the floor all of it had been worn down by time. This was not the same room he thought but it was he couldn't deny that. He headed outside, to his surpise white specs were falling from the sky." what is this??"
"Its called snow".Shocked by the voice he turned around to see a hooded man, a fat man long white beard.
"who are you??" he demaned.
" you should be asking your self that boy" the elderly man replied
[me?!, wait what is my name ?! its g-g-ge-gen-..... no thats not it] he thought" I know, its Xenge".
"Xen-gay......" thinking for a moment the old man turned away and started to laugh heartfully"ahahahahahaaha great name boy xen-gay ahahahahahahah. that was a good laugh"
"geez what a great old man you are" xenge replied a bit discouraged.
"Back to work waited 200 years for you boy"-"Wait what 200 years you can't be serious!! wait your voice your the guy that killed that heartless thing!!"
"Yes that was me after the light of the stars destroyed the curent heartless the door transfered to a new location, after that the heartless marched right in here took down 3 setors of the city", the old man went on explainng the situation.
Xenge just listened to all the things that happened in his absence.

xenge"no this can't be"
"geez your dense well no more i can do so here" in is hands were tinted glasses just xenges size" well time for u to be off" with that he summoned a portal of darkness ad pushed xenge through- " hey wait !!" xenge shouted in protest.

Location// The World That Never Was

As xenge was sent flying out the corridor of darkness he noticed that he was several stories in the air.
Xenge"crap!" he said as he plummeted to the ground.


In Each Verses of Light and Darkness New Characters May Join The Fold
The Symphony of Existence is One Of The Gods Masterpiece

well there it is hope its good and thought of xenge title// The Star Gazer and since i could not figure out who i wanted to recuite xenge so i diecded to put all people with a higher rank in a hat then picked one the winner is Xana also great chapter AO

[The Lionheart]

Originally Posted by Mastermind

Quick question about the topic everyone loves to avoid, ranks. Story-wise, how are they determined? For example, if some new recruit in the story asks how the ranks were determined, what would the answer be?

that's a good question. i dunno, just seems like the more powerful members would have higher ranks to me. But also, it seems like ranks would be something of seniority.

i didn't really ever think of the exiled as a group that would have a "hierachy", you know, like "leader" "officer" stuff like that. I always just kinda pictured them as a group that followed jynx and rextanse.

but i really don't know, i never really thought of it before.

and a question, how exactly do the exiled get in fights with org xiii? do the members of organization xiii just go looking for a fight, or what?

and also, how much time passes between when the exiled escapes and when they actually fight organization xiii? seems like it would have to be a few weeks, cuz zax would have to die of poisoning or sumthing.

edit: GC, i enjoyed the read. good job. although, it could do with a little grammar/spell check xD

[Mastermind]

Lol, the Exiled doesn't follow Jynx and Rex. However, if Rex were present half the time, then he would be the "leader."
Also, a considerable amount of time has to have passed because they would need time to settle down and recruit people. I'm guessing 6 months to a year, at least.

Also, congrats on becoming premium, AO.

Gene- You might want to work on grammar and spelling. Nice story though.

[rpgangel]

Originally Posted by Mastermind

Quick question about the topic everyone loves to avoid, ranks. Story-wise, how are they determined? For example, if some new recruit in the story asks how the ranks were determined, what would the answer be?

last i was told, ranks were determined by leadership, though looking at the ranks it doesn't seem right (just my opinion, maybe its right and im just dumb xD).

[pokepotterkhkids]

Originally Posted by Xodyc

overall, good story ao. I enjoyed it

I know, and you know you enjoyed mine so much better. XD
WHich reminds me. PPLZ! STORY UNDERWAY!

Chapter 1 – Before
-Lexlyk’s pov-

“Xana!” I yelled, half angered, half complaining.

“Calm down Lexlyk. She’s done it to me before.” Xodyc said. Now I was intrigued.

“Really?” I asked.

“Yup. It ended in disaster.”

I laughed. “Well, knowing you, you escaped. They didn’t let you out.” I expected him to blush, but he didn’t.

“Yup.”

I grabbed his hand and led the way. “Let’s go then.”

“Put your sadist face.” Xodyc joked.

We made our way to some asylum. But as long as he was with me, I didn’t really care where I was.

Chapter 2 – The Room

-Lexlyk’s POV-

“Hmph. Well, at least Xana got us into a nice expensive Asylum this time.” Xodyc said. Of course this was an expensive asylum. In our room, there was a really nice set up. Xodyc and I shared a bed of course. And again, of course, there was a single bed other than our bed.

“I like this room.” I whispered as I sat in his lap. He played with my hair absentmindedly.

“Would you mind if I cut my hair?” I asked

“Not really, it’s really way too long. But keep it long. Just not too long.” He said. I used my powers and shortened my hair.

“I like this.” He whispered.

“I like you.” I replied.

Xodyc grinned, and I knew what was about to happen. So simple. So easy. So normal. For us at least.

Us, and Jynx and Xana.

I giggled and started to unbutton his shirt.

Xodyc lifted my chin and looked at me. I saw him smile and kissed him tenderly while continuing to unbutton his shirt.

I led him by the hand and pulled him to the bed, continuing to kiss him, passionately this time. He began to take off my clothes while caressing my back.

I ran a finger on his chest lightly as I pushed him down with my other hand.

“I like this” I smiled.

“Me too.” He agreed, and pulled me towards him.

-Xodyc’s POV-

I held Lexlyk’s uncouncious form close to me. She was dreaming of her horrific past. A betrayal worse than my own. Many betrayals worse than my own. Her sisters. Her brothers. I’d slipped a black silk nightgown on over her, of course while she was awake.

Is it really her? A thought from not too far away.

Layered dark brown hair. A caring face. A slim figure.

“C’mon Stephanie! Let me go!”

Lexlyk’s voice from the past. Playful. Happy.

Stephanie… Her old teacher! I remembered now.

I closed my eyes and put my arm around Lexlyk. The woman walked in. She sighed when she saw me and Lexlyk, and the ring around her left finger.

“My girl… Married.” The ring was a prop, though we both wished it was real. The woman bent down over her. “He’ll be disappointed. And she’s so much older now. Of course, I can tell she hasn’t changed at all. After all, she’s here.” She was talking to herself.

Lexlyk stirred, and I woke from my ‘sleep’. I put my hand on her forehead, then kissed her.

“You’re her husband?” Stephanie asked.

“Yes.” I answered.

“Take care of her for me…” She said. And then she left. I wondered what that was about. As she was about to open the door though, Lexlyk screamed.

-Lexlyk’s POV/Lexlyk’s Dream-

I looked around, terrified. This was always the hardest part. I was a member of the Exiled Order now, but could I ever truly give up my first family? My first home? Exiled or Crysalis. I would never be able to truly choose one or the other.

“Rixdyan! Xaliah! Xeluxs! Vixnek! Xadlyn! RUN!” I screamed, trying to save the lives of my brothers and sisters. Zixan quickly grabbed Xeluxs by the hair, and she struggled to get free, but could not.

I could see the bloodlust in Xodyc’s eyes as he loomed in on Daxivd.

“No!” I screamed.

-David/Daxivd’s POV –

I heard a woman’s scream coming from my room and went in to investigate. I stopped short when I saw the scene inside. Stephanie’s eyes were wide in terror. And on the double bed was a man with blonde hair and… A woman with long, brown hair that had a bronze tint to it, and blonde highlights. The man was comforting her it looked like. He held her protectively in his arms.

“Is that…?” I asked Stephanie. She nodded. I ran out of the room, and into Naxnyd’s room.

“She’s back!” I said breathlessly.

Naxnyd’s head jerked up. “What?!” He yelled. “I thought she was dead! I thought we killed her”

“I thought so too.” I said.

Chapter 3 – Future

-Lexlyk’s Pov-

After I finished telling Xodyc about the dream, I laid back down on the bed. Xodyc called a nurse, and she came in quickly. After checking me out, she finally said, “Alycia Emrea Caliane is your first and middle name, correct?” “Yes.” I said weakly. She jotted something down on a clipboard. “Which name do you prefer to go by?” she asked sweetly. “I prefer it when people switch between the three.” I said.

“Well, it seems, Caliane, that you have the flu.”

I groaned.

-Xodyc’s Pov-

They moved me and Lexlyk into another room, and made her go on bed rest. She fell asleep quickly. Then the woman from earlier, Stephanie came in.

“She has the flu?” She asked.

“Yes.” I replied.

“Careful with her. It’s rare for her to get sick. Her immune system is really tough.” Stephanie warned.

“I will.” I promised.

We sat there in silence for a minute. Then she broke the silence. “I submitted a request.”
“Huh?”

“I submitted a request to take care of you two.”

“Ah. And?”

“They agreed that it’d be better for her if it was someone she knew, and you because you’d feel better knowing she was in good hands.” Stephanie said.

“Okay then.” I said.

Stephanie’s phone rang. She spoke on it for a minute, and when she got off she said to me. “It seems you have a visitor.”

-Naxnyd’s Pov-

Oh shit. I thought to myself. I thought we killed her. I watched her writhe in pain. I heard the beats of her heart stop. How could she have survived that? Not even our great second-in-command could have survived that.

Originally Posted by gene chaos

aw two post in the month amazing

well finnaly rerefound xenge's prolouge let me type it before i lose it again

PROLOUGE

Hello my name is gene, or well it was. this is the story of how i live and die, but before i start let me tell you my name.Xenge.

CHAPTER 0
The Curtain of Dusk Falls, the Play Ends

All things in this would end, it's a know fact.
even the sonata's of light and darkness must end one day...

World// Endcity.
Location// Area 2 Sector 54.The old library Vertios Avius.
Its a brisk morning the world just starting to awaken from its slumber. All is silent in the streets of the old city. Past the decaying building lies a gothic style library, inside voices can be heard.
"Hey come on! it's time to get a move on get up" the voice shouted.
"Huh? what time is it?" a voice replied.
" Time to get up!!" she shouted louder.
"Geez no need to shout , i'm up" he said wearily as he got up.
"Geez, Gene old man delius is going to fire you if u keep being late!".
"Ezra you worry too much deluis isn't going to do that"gene replied.
"well then you gotha go now cause the shops in sector 19" Ezra said
As he started walking out the door he said" stop worrying or your gonna get wrinkles!".
As he walked toward th inner wall the two suns started to rise bring life to the world.

Location// Area 3. Sector 19
Time// 8:00
Finishing off a stolen apple he thought[ sure hav been some pretty strange characters of late].
Entering the shop he looked around" hey old man were are you?!"he shouted.
"In the back Gene!" a replie came.
Walking into the back room Gene spoted delius holdind a small box" hey whats that?".
Delius" your delievey".
Gene"where to?"
Delius" beyond the old city at Regnum Lacum".
Gene" no one lives there ..." , "thats what the coustumer wanted so we deliever" delius interupted
Gene" fine...."taking the package from delius he left the shop and headed toward the Regnum Lacum.

Location// Regnum Lacum entrance
Time//12:00

As he walked down the cystal illumatied hallways he reached the center of the structure ianua ex stella lucis.
"Okay drop the package in the middle of the room then gat out of here" he mumbled to himself.
as he reached the middle of the room he was ready to place itthen he thought[ what ciuld be in here that it needs to be delievered to a place like this? one peak couldn't hurt] he thought as he tore a hole into the the side of the box. As he pered into the box the darkness inside rushed out and moved it self to the darkest corner. Shocked by the sudden bust of darkness he fell to the floor.
"What the hell was that!!"he shouted in a paniced tone.
Staring at the shifting darkness as it grew form its body grew more distink with each passing second. The form that arouse from the darkness was that of a human torso a serpent tail for the lower body a falcons head with horns. He stared at the behemoth as it opened its pale yellow eyes teirffed. Gene started to think logical again, as silently as possible mae arun for the door. As he reached the corridor he noticed the glowing crystals shone no more the whole thing covered in darkness, soon more pale yellow eyes cut through the darkness, he backed up. The creature knew what it had to do, for in the foom it started to punch the walls yelling an indisictive noise. It belowed, it screeched, it roared all in the while Gene sat in a corner scared out of his mind trying to understand what was happening. The creature had stopped its assult on the wall for it noticed Gene it looked at him with its cold yellow eyes.
It moved closer untill it was in the only light working it had pitch black skin and dark blue scales, the heartless insinga on its chest. Gene noticed the mark he saw it in a book once it was a heartless. Creatures banished from this world by the Dominatus Diei a society of people that worshiped the light and sacrficed themseles to protect this world. The heartless was infront of him now [ well if i'm going out i'm going out strong]he thought as he stood up to face the beast ready to die.
It attacked he felt its blow but the blow was not with its hands but its tail the tail was behind him he looked at his chest to see the tail sticking out of his chest. It pulled back its tail his heart stuck on it, he stared as it devored his heart. He had fallen to the groundas his heart was devored by the beast.

"DENKO !!"a voice shouted with it a burst of lightning struck the beast .
On the floor Gene only saw the lightning hit the creature, it was only injured not dead.
"Procelle ex Lucis...Sol Solis Inflecto ex Ianua!! Letum Furor ex Nox Noctis!! Rose Rubicundior, Lilio Candidior!!
With those words the gaint stone doors opened from within a heavenly light pored forth . As the heartless was hit by the light it beloowed out a scream of pain as it faded away.
Even gene lost him self in the light," hmmm so your the child of the star, born in a broken world".

CHAPTER 0.5
The Play Ends and the Squel begins.
After Winter its Time for Spring...

"Ugh my head, my chest..... wait", checking his chest there was no sign of a hole no blood nothing.... "nothing, thats how i feel right now". Getting up he survayed the room noticing that the walls the floor all of it had been worn down by time. This was not the same room he thought but it was he couldn't deny that. He headed outside, to his surpise white specs were falling from the sky." what is this??"
"Its called snow".Shocked by the voice he turned around to see a hooded man, a fat man long white beard.
"who are you??" he demaned.
" you should be asking your self that boy" the elderly man replied
[me?!, wait what is my name ?! its g-g-ge-gen-..... no thats not it] he thought" I know, its Xenge".
"Xen-gay......" thinking for a moment the old man turned away and started to laugh heartfully"ahahahahahaaha great name boy xen-gay ahahahahahahah. that was a good laugh"
"geez what a great old man you are" xenge replied a bit discouraged.
"Back to work waited 200 years for you boy"-"Wait what 200 years you can't be serious!! wait your voice your the guy that killed that heartless thing!!"
"Yes that was me after the light of the stars destroyed the curent heartless the door transfered to a new location, after that the heartless marched right in here took down 3 setors of the city", the old man went on explainng the situation.
Xenge just listened to all the things that happened in his absence.

xenge"no this can't be"
"geez your dense well no more i can do so here" in is hands were tinted glasses just xenges size" well time for u to be off" with that he summoned a portal of darkness ad pushed xenge through- " hey wait !!" xenge shouted in protest.

Location// The World That Never Was

As xenge was sent flying out the corridor of darkness he noticed that he was several stories in the air.
Xenge"crap!" he said as he plummeted to the ground.


In Each Verses of Light and Darkness New Characters May Join The Fold
The Symphony of Existence is One Of The Gods Masterpiece

well there it is hope its good and thought of xenge title// The Star Gazer and since i could not figure out who i wanted to recuite xenge so i diecded to put all people with a higher rank in a hat then picked one the winner is Xana also great chapter AO

Me likes.

It kinda reminds me of Ghost In The SHell tho...

Edit: Xodyc knows which parts he wrote.. ^_^

[The Lionheart]

Originally Posted by rpgangel

last i was told, ranks were determined by leadership, though looking at the ranks it doesn't seem right (just my opinion, maybe its right and im just dumb xD).

rpg, did you see how charxai enters the exiled?

i can't remember if i ever cleared it up with you or not. and i really don't know how accurate portrayal of xana is.

it's on the previous page if you need to find it.

edit: exiled sex is killing my brain right now. *shudders*

why ppk, why?

[pokepotterkhkids]

BLAME XODYC!

HE'S THE ONE WHO WROTE THAT PART!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Mastermind]

My eyes...they bleed. Why ppk, why? Xodyc? WHY?! What happened to Xamas?

[The Lionheart]

Originally Posted by Ojike

To be honest, the idea of a nobody having a bf/gf has never sat well with me. I never said anything about it with Jynx-Xana(I can't put an x in between them, because it'll wind up tripple x lawl) because it's an imperitive element of the story. Without the love, they wouldn't get hearts, and then we'd have to come up with a completely different ending. Not to mention Jynx having a bit of Roxas in him, and Roxas wasn't an average nobody. I never said anything about RextansexKaarix because their's is more of a physical attraction, not realy involving emotions of any kind. Sooo yeah. I DISSAPROVE. >=[

Originally Posted by Dawning Twilight

^i can agree with that Nobodies have no emotions and thus how could they go out with each other. it doesn't seem to fit well.

Originally Posted by Mastermind

Nobodies are incapable of having emotions or a sense of morality. They feel no guilt when theydo something which is deemed morally wrong. They feel no love towards people or comrades. They do, however, trick themselves into thinking they have emotions, which is also the loophole to the whole situation.

So, in conclusion, in wouldn't make sense for Xatsuin to go out of his way to pretend to like someone. Is it possible for him to trick himself into liking another? Yes, but why would he do so in the first place, especially with one of the newer members?

guys, after Twilight Abyss, ah, erm, pursued Xenra, we all decided it was too complicated for us to have relationships inside the exiled outside of Jynx and Xana. Many people didn't like the idea of a relationship in the first place.

(well, idk about rex and lorxissa/kaarix. but i agree with ojike on them anyways.)

save it for exiled 2, lovers.

[Mastermind]

Some people feel the need to pair their character with a lover. I don't understand why, but they do it anyway. The concept of "Nobodies have no emotion whatsoever" just doesn't get through with some people. You can only fool yourself for so long. Jynx and Xana are special cases and it has always been that way. That's how they get around the stipulation.

[The Lionheart]

Originally Posted by Mastermind

Some people feel the need to pair their character with a lover. I don't understand why, but they do it anyway. The concept of "Nobodies have no emotion whatsoever" just doesn't get through with some people. You can only fool yourself for so long. Jynx and Xana are special cases and it has always been that way. That's how they get around the stipulation.

so true.

i think the closest thing charxai has to a relationship is his longing for his old lover (i don't really know if she's a girlfriend or not, i thought about marriage, but 18 seems a little young. whatever, its on a foreign planet) okay, wife. Anyways, its not that he really loves her anymore, its just he feels like he needs her. he chased her down for the last part of his life, and kinda just can't give that up.

but it's not love, and it's not emotion. it's just need.

i really don't even know why i wrote that. but whatever.

i'd just rather not go through the whole relationship thing again.

[gene chaos]

whoa, the life of a nobody is a complicated one. we a lawyer for a these loopholes... also PPK liked ur story it was different, also what part of my story reminded u of ghost in the shell?

[rpgangel]

Originally Posted by Axel Owns

rpg, did you see how charxai enters the exiled?

i can't remember if i ever cleared it up with you or not. and i really don't know how accurate portrayal of xana is.

it's on the previous page if you need to find it.

edit: exiled sex is killing my brain right now. *shudders*

why ppk, why?

think i missed it, sorry :[ could i get a link or page number?

i like exploiting loopholes

actually 'fake love' can be excellent for use in writing, but seeing as the story is complicated enough, we need not make it harder :] maybe in the 2nd part, could add to the tension where everyone literally starts stabbing each other in the back (or something like that, no?).

ah, ive been inspired, now i go to my notebook to write...sucks i got my laptop taken away :[