The Exiled

[╬ProperArtist╬]

Originally Posted by NobodyImportant

Edit: Also, wanna see something I did that's totally awesome?

Yes that is quite amazing! Fantastic Job NI

Originally Posted by Sir Schmoopy

Also, should I start making my introduction into exiled?

I'd say yes to that question :3

[Angel's Prayer]

Originally Posted by NobodyImportant

What with essays left and right, getting ready for finals, and people just not really looking forward to the Zaverxi/Larxene fight, I wasn't inspired to write it, sorry everyone. XD


My finals end next week, so maybe then I'll write it.


And yeah...my post count didn't go down either, which is good because I pretty much exclusively post in here now. I bet I'd have 1000 if they took the CAMs out of FI.


Edit: Also, wanna see something I did that's totally awesome?

This may be because I've somehow gotten myself hooked on the Sims again, but I'm totally loving this picture right now. Regardless, it's an awesome job, NI, good work.

[Knightflare]

I saw your picture on DA, NI! I was like, "Aw hell, that's tight!"

The Eyepatch thing was because I wanted Rextanse to look more modern, haha.
Having hair that looks like Rextanse's in the main story would make him look like a what in where he is in this spin-off?

A faggot. lol jk.
It'd draw a lot of attention to himself. I and I'm pretty sure he don't really want that. And he doesn't have that incredibly bad burn all over his face+neck. Just an effed up eye. I originally wanted his eye to get shot out, but I thought that would be kinda hard to do. So, I'm still figuring out good enough reason. It happens at the beginning when Xana, Rex, Zax, and Xowlin attempt to escape.

[Sonja~Soulheart]

Originally Posted by Ojike

I like the first picture better. =l (lol)

ppk- Just wanna say that weapon is really awkward looking. But you know what would be cool? If those three blades spun like a pin wheel. O: I'd be like a saw and a sword IN ONE.

or maybe like rinoa's weapon?... what her weapon was kewl >_>

Originally Posted by NobodyImportant

What with essays left and right, getting ready for finals, and people just not really looking forward to the Zaverxi/Larxene fight, I wasn't inspired to write it, sorry everyone. XD


My finals end next week, so maybe then I'll write it.


And yeah...my post count didn't go down either, which is good because I pretty much exclusively post in here now. I bet I'd have 1000 if they took the CAMs out of FI.


Edit: Also, wanna see something I did that's totally awesome?

dude... that so rocks ;__; darn your talent D: *nah jk but still looks awesome*

eh sorry for not being able to post for... ages D: someone should send a kick msg soon .__.;

*work list*

DT's character sketches- wip in head
Axel Owns character sketch- same progress D:
NI's character sketch- same as two above

[DrBanxon]

Originally Posted by pokepotterkhkids

There is no way in Hell that Riax is going to wear an eyepatch Banxon. SHES A GIRL!!!! And I am so not saying that in a Sexist way.

You're not even paying attention to the situation at hand. I'm talking about Knightflare's spin-off :/

Ojikie - Temallox was stupid anyways :]
Once you got rid of the pedo idea he was usless :[

[NobodyImportant]

Originally Posted by Angel's Prayer

This may be because I've somehow gotten myself hooked on the Sims again, but I'm totally loving this picture right now. Regardless, it's an awesome job, NI, good work.

Lol. This wasn't made in a game. I drew everything in there from scratch. Certainly not The Sims! Hahaha. Thanks. I worked on this independently in my AutoCAD class and my teacher, who's the head of the program, wants to use it to show professional architects an example of student work at my school. It's pretty awesome considering I only learned /how/ to do this a few days before I actually did it.

Hopefully, this means job offers for me.

[Angel's Prayer]

^ Yeah, I know. The Game's graphics aren't capable of such awesome shadows. But anyway, what's this I hear about a spin-off?

[Ojike]

How did you do the pattern on the door? Pre rendered, or did you make it from scratch? Now if only NI could make character models for the Exiled. ;D

new avi, sig, and profile info :B

[pokepotterkhkids]

I'm starting to work on Riax;s Story. I have a link right here it's on fanfiction.net and on my account, if there's anythign you want me to edit, i will just review it on there. THX!!!!!

Edit: Two more things.

1) I'm going to make a few new accounts for on here. I'll edit later with the names just in case.

2) Um, Sonja Soulheart, guezz whut!? My breathing's gotten better! Yay! Now I can write more on the computer instead of KILLING MY HANDS WRITING IN BED BECAUSE I DONT HAVE A FRIGGING LAPTOP. Both my hands are dead by the way, you can thank my Riaxness brainstorming for that. Oh and it got better cuz I auctually slept for once in my life. lets see... *opens calculator* 24 x 7 ÷ 2 = 84. I slept for at least 84 hours in the last week if my calculator is correct. But i don't know if it knows i'm doing time... whatev. I slept 50% of a whole week and now my health is betters. Now I can auctually get up and use the computer when I'm not in my bed. my phone hates me now... i used it too much... hahaz im in trouble. daddeh got a big phone bill...

[Victor]

Originally Posted by pokepotterkhkids

1) I'm going to make a few new accounts for on here. I'll edit later with the names just in case.

That's bannable.
Trust me, I'd know. xD

[pokepotterkhkids]

Originally Posted by Sir Schmoopy

That's bannable.
Trust me, I'd know. xD

Well, technally, it's not mine, it's just an account I'm gonna have access to. It's shared by 4 of my 'fangirlfriends' and me, and they're all willing to help me with this. What evs.

[Victor]

Doesn't matter.
If you have access to that account its considered yours and you will be banned.

[pokepotterkhkids]

Fine then. Never mind. I'll still have access to it because we all know the password, but i won't use it.

[Knightflare]

Well. I think me, Ojike, and OogieBoogie talked about people's roles in the Exiled Spin-Off but I don't remember em too well, so here.:

(Not accurate)

Zaxeldion - Dies at the beginning protecting Rex, Xowlin, and Xana. Street Legend. Former O13
Rex (not Rextanse) - Believed to be dead at the beginning. Returns to the story real quick like at the second chapter. Haha. DJ at a Dance Club and Street Legend. Former O13
Xowlin - Dies at the beginning protecting Xana. Street Legend. Former O13
Xana - Female lead. Jynx's love interest and one of the centers of the story. Former O13
Zixan - Incredible hand to hand fighter, one of the higher members of the Exiled. Formerly in a Bike Gang.
Xodyc - Gifted with a sword. One of the higher members of the Exiled. Formerly in a Bike Gang.
Jynx - Street punk that Rex picked up off the streets. Main Protagonist. Has a bone to pick with the O13's
Dr. Banxon - Used to be an incredible Scientist/Doctor. Reduced to a drug dealer as well as an addict. Exiled's source of back up power.
Ruxel - Street Legend. Friend of Xana's father and promises to protect her.
Salix - Blind scientist. Need to work on this.
Kaarix - Exotic dancer in Rex's Club. After showing her talents in combat against enemies, Rex takes her in the Exiled. Rex's love interest. Used to be associated with the O13's.
Charxai - Records data for the Exiled and is a pretty decent fighter.
Zaverxi - A walking rage-machine. Piss him off, he'll kill you.
Daxic - Main Antagonist. A real speedy bike punk who loves causin' trouble.
Sabixel and Lexinoth - Partners in crime. From things like pickpocketing to terrorism. These guys are all up for it.
Jixah - Daxic's slave.
Ojex - Manager of weapons. Pretty nifty at them, too.
Zhymarx - Mysterious "man" who joins the Exiled.
Delacroix - AW HELL NAW. OLD SCHOOL PIMP FROM THE PROJECTS! RETIRED FROM PIMPIN'! STREET LEGEND! Friend of Rex and Banxon. More like DelaCRUNK
Xishn and Lonex - Salix's subordinates.
Skyx - Daxic's provider.
Xenge - I can't even remember what he does. :[ Sorrrryyy
Xatsuin - Rex's apprentice. : D
Xalatine - Her story is tied with Zhymarx's
Axit - Need to work on himmm, too.
Xenra - Ojike, OogieBoogie, and I said that she would play a cool role. Don't remember it though.
Lenxuzob - Gay. :[ He's the reason why Dr. Banxon lost his job.
Caxjob - I'm pretty sure he dies early. I don't know his role.
X - OH MAH GAHHH. X! IT'S EEEEEEECCKSSSSSS.

Just post if you have any comments like if I need to change anything or whatever.

[Angel's Prayer]

X - OH MAH GAHHH. X! IT'S EEEEEEECCKSSSSSS.

lol

Axit - Need to work on himmm, too.

Axit would be the emo of the group, crawling to whatever corner he usually resides in every time he does something stupid...which is all the time. He's just terribly terribly confused, but ends up doing the right thing in the end. Dying. (seriously, he died for the right thing.) How that translates to the spin-off I'm not entirely sure.

Xalatine - Her story is tied with Zhymarx's

Outside being Zhymarx's bishie Yuri action giiirlllz, she's the resident ninja and old-school spy. She's available for tutoring in stealth, ninjitsu and horrible cooking.

Zhymarx - Mysterious "man" who joins the Exiled.

Yesh. I'mma working on hir origin story thing.















also there might be a second X after the first one dies.