The Exiled

[╬ProperArtist╬]

Originally Posted by Axel Owns

ty for you're 2 cents OB, i'll think about it.

but mah inner love for 2-handed swords probably won't be overcome.

and i think you're a great artist for drawing profiles.

so wait, are we gonna draw profiles and the way that saix looks (his second face scares me)? i kinda like the way it is.

The way Ojike explained is how character sheets are done.

• Mug Shot
• Facial Expressions
• Weapon
• Brief Description of Said Character

The way i see it this way is best, but that's just my two cents....

dit:

I made a poll in the art section so as to see which robe design people enjoy more. You guys can go there and vote as well if you'd like.

http://forums.khinsider.com/fan-art/...ml#post2923448

[gene chaos]

hello exiled been a long time sorry i haven't ben on in a long time and i know i have been an underproductive bum so if i could help in any way let me know

[The Lionheart]

kk OB thanks for clearing it up for me.

and hey GC!

anyways, i have decided charxai will stay with the two handed sword. idk, it's just kind of reflective of his personality and fighting style. a one-handed sword just isn't "how he rolls" xD.

[╬ProperArtist╬]

Okay now i know this is going to sound far fetched coming from me, but I think we should start the rp up again. I mean hell it brought most everyone to the forums and business was booming. Hell we even got some good ideas out of it that we're actually using now.

However, I think this time the rp should be based of something relevant to the story. That way it'll keep most everyone there and seeing as it's an actually plot/storyline piece for the Exiled story we wouldn't have people leaving or complaining.

So what do ya guys say?

We have several plot lines to choose from:

Exiled vs Organization XIII
final battles, meaning near the end when Xemnas & Jynx are about to go at it for the final time. Seeing as all the other fights are written out this is really the only battle left to be done and since it includes most of the others it kinda makes sense.

Exiled vs Keybladers
I know we already did an rp about it, but if you guys wanted to redo it now would be the time.

Exiled vs Mystic Order
I really don't see this one working out well considering we need just about everyone on top of people to RP the Mystic Members. These battles would most likely be done better over a yahoo conference or a giant melting pot of each other's own POV's of how the fights are going. Kinda like how Axel_Owns and dark_light13 wrote Marluxia's battle only this would be on a much bigger scale

Exiled vs Reverse Order
Seeing as Jynx and Rextanse are off facing Xemo during this time. Both me and him could rp
2 of the reverse members and whoever portrays the other member has to know his personally. I vote Ojike.

Betrayers vs Alliance
Let's face it we've all been wanting to see how this would play out and we can finally do it. RPG being unavailable doesn't hurt us either considering she's not really even in this saga other than being "technically" dead.

Again just my two cents :/

[Mastermind]

Please...stop calling it the "Xziled". It has some adverse effect on me and whenever I see it spelled like that I get slightly annoyed. I don't know why, but I do.

[╬ProperArtist╬]

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[yoyoj06]

is it bad if i choose not to do RP's? will it effect the story at all?

[╬ProperArtist╬]

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Not really no. We'd just put your part in after we RP'd everything else and make several tweaks so that both Ruxel's parts and everyone's run together smoothly instead of choppy.

It does make things a little more complicated that you don't want to rp, but we can handle things.

[Ojike]

Originally Posted by OogieBoogie

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Not really no. We'd just put your part in after we RP'd everything else and make several tweaks so that both Ruxel's parts and everyone's run together smoothly instead of choppy.

It does make things a little more complicated that you don't want to rp, but we can handle things.

Actually, things wouldn't be complicated at all if we did the betrayal fight. By that time in the story, both Ruxel and Exal are gone.

The Mystic Order battles are held in different..dimensions, I guess. So it'd be easier to do that, with the characters who are involved, on yahoo (or possibly even through PM). Also, just a reminder that the Mystic Order fights are several Exiled members against one Mystic member.

As for the Keybladers fight, since we NI (if I remember right)has the original log, all we'd have to do is build on that by adding in the other members.

The Org.13 final bout you could write by yourself, OB. Seeing as it centers completely around Jynx and Xemnas. The other members involved you should know well enough to write for. Just...don't have Daxic say "just as planned." >.>'

[yoyoj06]

yea, so the betrayal RP would be the best one to do right now.
feel free to have a character or two do a "lets do this for ruxel" speech, or something like that on how everyone has fallen or something

[Mastermind]

For a member to say dedicate something for Ruxel, they'd have to have some ounce of caring for him. Which member cares for him?

[Knightflare]

Okay guys.
I had a dream and it made me want to start an Exiled Spinoff.
Okay?
It's totally different, completely different.
Not even having anything to do with any Kingdom Hearts stuff.
Just, completely different.

I'm a little skeptical about this idea, though, so I want your opinions. It's pretty much the same story as the Exiled. Jynx is the Main Protagnist, Daxic is the Main Antagonist, centers around "The Exiled."

But, of course, it's different.

It takes place in a Fictional City. Looks very modern. Cars, Skyscrapers... Looks kinda like New York City but different. One thing about this City that makes it different from every other ones are the GANGS.

That's right. The gangs.
The Exiled is a notorious gang made up of skilled street punks that were Exiled from the things that mean a lot to them. But, the Exiled isn't just a street gang, but a group of freelancers who would do anything for the right amount.

Characters are pretty much the same except for the fact that they don't have powers, besides skills that are described as "Supernatural". Backgrounds are sorta different, too, but they're remain very similar.

Characters: (Some of these ideas have to change, though.)

Exiled-
Jynx - A ruthless punk who's aiming to kill someone in mind.
Daxic - An insane fire-headed bike thug who wants to rule.
Rex - A "Street Legend" who was thought to have died after being exiled from the O13's.
Xana - A young little lady who was forced to defend herself using a gun after her departure from the O13's.

The O13's are a ruthless bunch of people who won't stop at nothing to get money. Originally had 13 Members but after a certain event, they are now left with eight members.

The Mystic (Mistiqs) and Reverse (The Reversals) Orders are present as well.

It usually revolves around Gang Wars and Daxic's betrayal and other key events that happen in The Exiled's Main Story.

Well, right now, my mom is celebrating her birthday, so I don't have a lot of time to exaggerate.
Gimme some ideas and tell me what I need to change!

[╬ProperArtist╬]

I honestly like the idea. Hell we could even make that idea into what the Exiled actually is supposed to be if everyone agrees. It's unique and even though in our minds it's based off Kingdom Hearts, no one else would know that.

It's more like our own story.

One change i would like to make is the name of the Mistiqs group be changed to Elite Manifesto

I like the idea, but that's just me. As either a spin off or the actually story.

[Knightflare]

Originally Posted by OogieBoogie

I honestly like the idea. Hell we could even make that idea into what the Exiled actually is supposed to be if everyone agrees. It's unique and even though in our minds it's based off Kingdom Hearts, no one else would know that.

It's more like our own story.

One change i would like to make is the name of the Mistiqs group be changed to Elite Manifesto

I like the idea, but that's just me. As either a spin off or the actually story.

I'm actually going to write the whole thing if I get the time...
But, if the main one doesn't work out, then this can be the main.
BUT KEEP FOCUSING ON THE MAIN ONE.
THIS ONE IS MINE, YA'LL, until I say. ;]
I have to rely on ya'll to come up with the ideas for the main story so I can figure out how to transfer it to mine.

I'mma make pictures.

[Ojike]

It's a shame the manga I'm making with someone is also centered around gang violence. :< And I dare say the main villain my be more evil than Daxic. D=