The Exiled

[dark_light13]

Originally Posted by pokepotterkhkids

lol, good one. Maybe. But with me, i'd doubt it. I'm the youngest, and the one who partied for a week straight on spring break. nonstop dancing cept for when i was in the bathroom or eating.
Oh yeah.

Yo. Pplz. Xeln4049 will be posting here soon. He wants to join. Lolz. Baka na baka.

You don't know party until you've seen me XD. Trust me I am probally the closest thing the Exiled has to a drunk. Ask BM or Dr.B....

Anyways great story MM. I really loved Zix's little one liner at the end there. SabiVSMarlyP3 is almsot done just doing some finishing touches.

But just a heads up You guys probally won't see much of me until Wednesday. This weekend there are gfar to many parties and on Moday and Tuesday Im gone to Regina to See Avenged Sevenfold and Bulet For My Valentine in concert!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :thumbsup:

[pokepotterkhkids]

i have lots of parties to plan with my brother, and we have 'ninja training' as he calls it. Basically it's just us getting ready to start a family tradition. On any birthday from the 8th to the 15th, a child will recieve their own... KEYBLADE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm gettin a keyblade. So is he. And a yaoi paddle.Yeah! We're practicing for karate lessons we may never take. And our swordsmanship.

[╬ProperArtist╬]

Originally Posted by xeln4049

Oh thanks, stop babysitting me Idiot. And why did you call me a stupid idiot?

False Name: Avery
Exiled Order #: ??
Original Name: Len
Exiled Name: Xeln
Alliance: Salix's Group (iI like cake, though Kelly prefers icecream
Dominant Hand: right
Age: 12
Height: 5’1
Weight: 86
Eyes: blue
Hair: brown
Gender: male
Alias: The Silent Sneak
Weapon: his bare hands
Clothing: Black slim jeans
white tee
black slim jacket
Hometown: Radiant Garden
Location:
Theme Song: Stop and Stare
Artist: Buckcherry
Fighting Style: He is a ninja. He attacks from high places and attacks very fast.
Quote: "Catch me if you can" "I boomed you" "Riax likes to think that she taught me all the basics about being a ninja and fighting, but, in truth, I've known them since i was born. Well, as a nobody. Ari once taught Len everything there was to know about that stuff."
Nobody name: None
Nobody Description: None
Personality: He likes to be in high places and run fast. He is obnoxous and annoying, and clings to Riax most of the time. He's wimpy for a ninja and loves to laugh and make people laugh. He also likes to hit on girls.
Element: speed, wind, and sneakiness
Element Description: Xeln can run at the speed of light, and fly using the wind (like senna in memories of nobody) And is extremely sneaky
Background: His older sister is Riax, and thats all most know about him.

The element isn't going to work so you should start thinking about another one. As you probably intended your character to be; "Xeln" will more than likely be looked at like a childish and immature nobody by the other more serious/ veteran members. Which basically just means they won't take him seriously and will most likely send him on meaningless lack luster missions, that is until he earns his keep and their respect.

[pokepotterkhkids]

exactly. Which is why he joins the traitors. They wont look down at him

[╬ProperArtist╬]

Actually if anything the Traitors will just use him as a means for a decoy. Meaning send him out and get killed. You forget that Daxic is the head of the traitors and cares about no one's life in any sense of the word as long as he can get what he needs from them.

But if that's what you're going for then I say go for it.

[dark_light13]

Amen to that OB!

Well like I promised here is part 3 although I think once I have written out the entire fight Im thinking I will go back and make some major revisions to it. Enjoy

Sabixel vs Marluxia: Part III


Thorned vines crawled through the walls and entangled the stunned Sabixel's shoulders, their thorns burrowing into his arms. The vines dragged him upwards so he lazily dangled on his feet. An odd gigantic looking flower dressed in pink pedals tunneled through the floor and curled around the lower half of his body. The grip of the flower was surprisingly strong and in his cheapened state he had no chance of breaking out.
Marluxia approached Sabixel, his grin stretching larger then ever across his face. He stopped about a foot away and howled in his face. “You put up a good fight traitor! But what now? Whats the matter? Nothing left?” Marluxia roared mockingly in Sabixel's face.
Sabixel remained silent his head drooped down. Not even enough energy remained for him to hold up his head. The toxic mist had left him totally impaired.
Marluxia nudged his head up with the back of his scythe. Sabixel's coughs came more rapidly and released more hefty amounts of blood then ever.
Marluxia stared in twisted amusement. He then rocked back his arm and delivered a swift array of punches across Sabixel's face sending his head snapping back and forth uncontrollably. Darkened blood pooled in Sabixel's mouth before it seeping through his lips. Marluxia displayed a crazed and driven look on his face a she jabbed the point on the end of his scythe into Sabixel's gut. The cavity bled like a river, spraying into a puddle forming at their feet.
“C'mon! You must have a bit more fight left in you. I thought that old fool Vexen designed you better then this.
Sabixel's head rose up slightly in interest of this. “wha....?” he grumbled followed by continuous moans and coughs.
Marluxia let out a screech of laughter. “Awe, no one's broke the news yet. Why isn't that just adorable. You still think you have a shot at being real.” Marluxia
Sabixel completely puzzled by this stared up into Marluxia's empty pupils.
“Well this makes things even more interesting. What can I do to make you tick? Maybe I can go find your little girl friend Kanasia. I mean it doesn't look as if your going anywhere. I just hope you don't bleed to death before I get back.” Jeered Marluxia.
“How do you......?” coughed Sabixel. “How could he know about her”
“The sound of her screaming and the colour of her blood should tickle your temper.” Marluxia rambled on cruelly.
“I hate you...” muttered Sabixel faintly.
“Speak up rat!” taunted Marluxia moving his ear neared to Sabixel.
“I HATE YOU!” Sabixel's words flooded the room with a compulsiveness never before seen. His voice became unnaturally and disturbingly morphed. It was now a demoniacally deep and cold voice consumed with rage. The echoes vibrated the room like a powerful tremor, shattering the glass pods and cracking the walls and floors. A shroud of darkness blinded Sabixels features and his eyes became two white glowing lights burning in hi skull. All the muscles in his body began to grow larger and more evident. Sabixel ripped his arms free from the vines and a wave of energy shattered the large plant around his legs. His scythe floated in front of him, trembling in the air before him. Soon the whole scythe was absorbed into Sabixel's very body. Finally a great pulse of energy serged from Sabixel.
'What the hell?! Vexen never said anything about this!” shrieked Marluxia fear swallowing his voice as the pulse forced him backwards.
A new and opposing being hovered before Marluxia and for the first time in an eternity he thought he knew what it was to be afraid.

[Mastermind]

Thanks for the compliment, d_l. As far as this new person is concerned, everyone should know my position on the matter.

Anywho, here's the last part of my story. Also, everything is subject to editing.

The Moon's Lament pt. 5

“Well, that’s that, I guess.” Zixan sighed while resting the axe on his uninjured shoulder. Upon quickly glancing around the courtyard, his face dropped. “Oh, Banxon’s going to kill me. Just look at this mess! Even in death, you manage to get me in trouble, Saix.”

“Die now!” came Saix’s voice from behind Zixan.

Saix came falling from the sky, claymore held high above his head. Zixan heard the voice suddenly, but made no move to turn around. Instead, a smile crept onto his face. It’s just as I thought. A gray hand had grasped Saix’s neck, stopping the attacker and his manic banter at once. Upon further inspection, Saix could see that the hand was protruding from the center of Zixan’s back.

“Honestly, you disappoint me, Saix. You’ve been the benchmark that I’ve strived to surpass for so long now. Little did I know, I had already passed you. You had only one trump card, your berserker mode. That only managed to destroy my coat and give me minor scrapes. You landed a few good shots, but your overall performance was pathetic. I spent most of my time holding back in anticipation of you showing more, but I was wrong. That’s the last time I overestimate my opponent.”

“But how?” Saix began to ask. “No, it can’t be! You’re a–”

“A clone?” Zixan answered with a question. “I’m not the type that stays in one spot for long. Plus, I expected some sort of surprise attack. You were, after all, practically second in command. Surely, feigning your own death wasn’t out of the question.”

“Your insight is impressive. I should’ve killed you back in the past. I wouldn’t have had to go through so much trouble.” Saix said as blood ran out of the side of his mouth. “I’ll just end this now!”

Saix struggled to get free, but two medium-sized snakes emerged from Zixan’s back and bit, then coiled, around both of Saix’s arms. “You should’ve gotten away while you still had a chance. I would’ve been more than happy to let you go hone your skills to give me a better fight. Unfortunately, you had to come back.” Zixan rebutted as gray tendrils rose out of his back and began to wrap around and draw Saix in.

“What is this! Let me go, you insolent brat!” Saix barked.

“Consider this a favor. You no longer have to obsess over not having a heart.” Zixan said softly as the rest of his body turned gray. “Phantom Explosion…”

“Phantom Explosion...” Saix repeated. “Explosion!”
“To be honest, I expected you to push me more. Y’know, push me to my limits?” Zixan sighed. “I guess I was wrong.”

Zixan’s clones suddenly exploded. The surrounding area shook violently as the huge cloud mass expanded outward, smashing into the wall that served as a barrier between the courtyard and the outside world. The cloud mass ravaged anything it came in contact with. Statues were reduced to dust while the foliage was vanquished altogether. The explosion came within inches of the actual stronghold itself. The clouds above roared to life as lightning streaked across the sky. It was as if they were enjoying the spectacle Zixan had produced.

After several more minutes, everything was calm again. The courtyard was now reduced to shambles, now donning a huge crater in its center. As the dust cleared, the last wisps of black smoke were disappearing into the air.

From the clouds above, a large mass floated down to the ground. It quickly gained a familiar humanoid shaped, eventually revealing itself to be the real Zixan.

“Now Banxon’s really going to kill me…” he muttered to himself. “Hmm…I’ll need someone to take care of these wounds while they’re fresh.” He poked at the gash on his left shoulder. “…which reminds me, I’ll have to ask Daxic how he goes about performing self-regeneration. I’m sure he’ll have a few pointers for me.”

With that, Zixan was swallowed by a Corridor of Darkness.

[Xodyc]

good read MM. Yes very good read overall

[pokepotterkhkids]

Originally Posted by OogieBoogie

Actually if anything the Traitors will just use him as a means for a decoy. Meaning send him out and get killed. You forget that Daxic is the head of the traitors and cares about no one's life in any sense of the word as long as he can get what he needs from them.

But if that's what you're going for then I say go for it.

Exactly what we're going for. Xeln just wants to fit in. So he joions the traitors thinking that they want him. They do wawnt him of course. But want him dead. They use him and make him feel like he has a place, then send him out to go fight Riax. A very intense battle between the closest of siblings begins, followed by Riax killing Xeln. It's a very starwarsy moment as Xeln's last moments are him listening to Riax talking about how close they were and why did he have to turn traitor.

Oogie said that there was a guy that wasn't being used atm. Xior. Well, after Riax's battle with her brother, she runs into Xior and she is already weaked -emotionally- from killing her brother, and dies battling him.

Well, what do you think?

[Ojike]

EXILED DEATH LIST
1 ZAXELDION (???) -dies from Zexion's poison
2 REXTANSE (TERANES)
3 XOWLIN (WOLIN) -dies at the hands of Xemnas
4 XANA (ANA) -dies at the hands of Daxic (brought back by Jynx)
5 ZIXAN (ZAIN)
6 XODYC (CODY) -dies at the hands of Ruthax(?)
7 JYNX (***) -dies by self sacrifice
8 DrBANXON (BRANDON) -dies at the hands of Toxit(while also killing him)
9 RUXEL (RULE) -dies at the hands of Exal
10 SALIX (SAIL)
11 KAARIX (***)
12 CHARXAI (RICHAR)
13 ZAVERXI (ZAVIER) -dies at the hands of Sabixel
14 DAXIC (CIDA) -dies at the hands of Trinity
15 SABIXEL (BLAISE)
16 LEXINOTH (LITHOEN)
17 JIXAH (JIHA)
18 OJEX (JOE) -dies at the hands of Xohlnect
19 ZHYMARX (YZMAHR)
20 DELACROIX (CLADEROI)
21 XISHN (SHIN)
22 SKYX (SKY) -dies at the hands of Sabixel and Lexinoth
23 XENGE (GENE) -dies at the hands of Zallex
24 LONEX (LEON) -dies at the hands of ???
25 XATSUIN (AUSTIN) -dies at the hands of Xemo
26 XALATINE (TALANIE)
27 AXIT (TAI)
28 XENRA (ANRE)
29 LENXUZOB (ZEBULON) -dies at the hand of Killopteros
30 CAXBOJ (JACOB) -dies at the hand of Killopteros
31 MYROMEX (X)

So that's about it. There were a couple we couldn't decide on because the owner wasn't at the conference. I'd personally like for Charxai, Xenra, and some of AP's characters died as well. I know Lonex dies, but I don't know who does him in. Salix is also in dire need of at least one kill in the final battle. He's too good not to have one :[


If there are any dissagreements with this post, let me know and I'll fix it.

[╬ProperArtist╬]

Just to add to the list. I know Axit, Zhymarx, Xalatine, Mymorex, Xenra, and Xishin die i believe.

I'm not positive as to if Delacroix dies, but I do think it would be better if Jixah killed herself during the end of the series seeing as she has been basically used as a tool the ENTIRE story.

While we're putting up a list of just Xziled members who die I believe we should also make a list of Traitors who die so we can see all of thoughs who die in the story.

[Mastermind]

I'm pretty sure Lonex is taken care of by Zixan.

[Ojike]

Originally Posted by OogieBoogie

but I do think it would be better if Jixah killed herself during the end of the series seeing as she has been basically used as a tool the ENTIRE story.

Nah. I had it in my mind since the begining that she'd just leave in search of her brother, Ricti, who she doesn't know is dead. It's even more cruel. Besides if she doesn't have the nerve to kill someone else, I doubt she'd kill herself. xD

[╬ProperArtist╬]

^

I dunno it could be the last straw for her. In everyone's life there's always that single event that occurs that can make them snap.

[NobodyImportant]

I want Zaverxi to kill someone.

He's pretty badass. Oh, and yesterday was my birthday. *points to Age*

Hahaha, I'm so old....