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Old 04/17/08, 06:22 AM   #2026
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Nobody wants to fill me in? :[
Fine.
I'll do this THIS to your faces.

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(I have noticed that there's been a lot of writing. PRETTY COOL, YO. Seems like there's been a whole lot of production going on. But, that's pretty much all I know.)
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Old 04/17/08, 06:50 AM   #2027
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Well, that's all that's going on at the moment, KF. Writing and writing....
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Old 04/17/08, 07:03 AM   #2028
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Well, that's all that's going on at the moment, KF. Writing and writing....
Oh, so there's LOTS of stuff going on, eh?
Nice.
I LIKE WHERE THIS IS GOING YA'LL. I LIKE WHERE THIS IS GOING.

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Old 04/17/08, 07:08 AM   #2029
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LOL!!! I can just hear the overly dramatic music in the background. dun...dun...DUN!!!
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Old 04/17/08, 07:25 AM   #2030
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OF COURSE, THE PROBLEM TO EVERYONE'S PROBLEMS IS WRITTEN DOWN ON PAPER.

It's something that Rextanse doesn't care about lol.
Just write a new one and he's okay lol.

So, how much story have ya'll written so far?
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Old 04/17/08, 05:33 PM   #2031
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KF - i wouldn't know what to say to fill you in. Lol @ the comic. by the story do you mean the individual battles with the Org?
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Old 04/17/08, 07:33 PM   #2032
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Nobody wants to fill me in? :[
Fine.
I'll do this THIS to your faces.

>
(I have noticed that there's been a lot of writing. PRETTY COOL, YO. Seems like there's been a whole lot of production going on. But, that's pretty much all I know.)
waht did i just watch?
my brain h-
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Old 04/17/08, 08:50 PM   #2033
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KF - i wouldn't know what to say to fill you in. Lol @ the comic. by the story do you mean the individual battles with the Org?
Anything, really.
Just anything.
How many battles has everyone written?
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Old 04/17/08, 09:00 PM   #2034
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as far as i'm aware of everyone has gone into the editing phase of writing their battles. though i think a few of us are finishing the last parts of our battles.
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Old 04/17/08, 10:47 PM   #2035
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Here's the second to last piece of my fight.

The Moon's Lament pt. 4


Zixan, now fully coatless, jumped back out of the way. As the claymore struck the ground, it released a large wave of energy as well. Zixan quickly re-summoned his axe to block it.

“Why so serious?” Zixan taunted as he picked up Saix’s claymore. “Losing your temper only hurts you in the end, after all. Look at what you did. You’ve practically given me your claymore.”

Saix summoned another claymore even though his original was already embedded in the ground. Not wasting time, Saix dropped to the ground and charged at Zixan. Larger waves of energy were released as he charged forward.

“Well, I guess that solves that problem.” Zixan mentioned as he watched Saix advance.

Saix’s claymore and Zixan’s axe clashed together, but Saix quickly gained the upper hand as he put on the pressure. Just as it seemed Zixan was going to be defeated, Saix was yanked backward, dropping his second claymore on the way.

“Those darn snakes have a way of just popping up out of no where, don’t they?” Zixan teased as his axe vanished. “Anyway, I guess it’s about time this little skirmish came to an end, eh Saix?”

“I couldn’t agree more!” Saix roared as he jerked out of the snake’s grip, summoned another claymore, and rushed forward.

“Well, aren’t we just the anxious one?” Zixan yelled as he ran forward, picking up both of Saix’s former claymores. “Oh well, it’s your funeral.”

The two fighters clashed once again, but this time Zixan used one of the claymores to knock Saix’s claymore out of his hand. He followed up by slashing Saix with the second claymore. Saix stumbled back a few steps, but Zixan rushed forward and continued his assault. Zixan slashed Saix left and right. Bits of Saix’s coat could be seen falling to the ground as Zixan continued his onslaught.

“Where’s your divine moon now?” Zixan asked as he launched Saix’s into the air. “Here, let me give you a better view of her!”

Zixan jumped into the air and began spinning, slicing Saix with every rotation. “Now, for the finale!” Zixan shouted as he flipped and brought both claymores down on Saix. He was propelled toward the ground, headfirst and before he hit another Zixan kicked him off to the side.

“You didn’t think I’d let you hit your precious head, now did you?” Zixan landed on the ground. “You should thank my clone for being so thoughtful.”

The clone dispersed and Zixan was left standing alone. Saix was on all fours and staring at the ground pathetically, blood dripping down from his wounds.

“Why...why is this happening? This can’t be happening! I’m stronger and have the moon’s power, so why am I being defeated?” Saix asked angrily. “I refuse to let this happen! I refuse to disappoint the moon!”

Saix forced himself on his feet, despite his injuries, and charged forward with a newly summoned claymore. Zixan let his two claymores fall to the ground and summoned a single axe to replace them.

“And now for the curtain call…” Zixan mumbled as he and Saix were surrounded by replicas of Zixan’s axe. “Phantom Ceremony…”

Zixan and Saix came to a standstill again as their weapons clashed together. No one was gaining any ground, but the ring of axes surrounding were alive with activity. They were disappearing and reappearing in rapid succession. Cuts, of varying sizes, began to appear on Saix’s body.

“What is this madness?” Saix yelled.

“Silence! The ceremony has begun.” Zixan reprimanded as he pushed Saix backward.

A large gash appeared on Saix’s chest as he stumbled and soon the scar on his forehead was reopened and bleeding profusely. His claymore fell to the ground in a bright light, quickly disappearing. He fell to one knee afterwards, grasping his head.

“My own blood…” Saix whispered as he brought his hands down from his forehead. “Who’d have thought that it would come to this?”

“Your problem was that you were hung up on the past. You thought that I would be the same weakling that I was then.” Zixan explained slowly as the ring of axes disappeared.

A large gray snake lightly bit the back of Saix’s neck and brought him to his feet. Zixan rose his axe into the air and let it loom over Saix’s head for a moment. “To answer your previous question, as mighty as the moon is, it will always be shut out by the clouds.” Zixan whispered as the last beam of moonlight vanished behind the clouds above.

With those last words, Zixan slashed through Saix. He fell backward slowly, wisps of black smoke lifting from his body as he descended. Now, sprawled across the ground, the dying Saix stared blankly into the sky. “If I had a heart…” He murmured as he faded away into nothingness.
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Old 04/18/08, 12:20 AM   #2036
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I guess you could think of the CaM series as a child slowly growing up.

1.0 was a small, rambunctious child. Spam was everywhere.
2.0 was text message-crazy teenager, slowly becoming more serious.
3.0 is the most serious, and least active. I guess you could say that's it's slowly maturing. More of the story is being written in this thread also. We're already getting the fights out of the way.
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Hahaha. So 3.0 is more 'getting ready to settle down with a family' then? XD
ZOMG LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLOLOl! !!!! FUNNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 04/18/08, 05:53 AM   #2037
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maybe 4.0 will be us talking to eachother like we are eachother's grandkids
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Old 04/18/08, 06:12 PM   #2038
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lol, good one. Maybe. But with me, i'd doubt it. I'm the youngest, and the one who partied for a week straight on spring break. nonstop dancing cept for when i was in the bathroom or eating.

Oh yeah.

Yo. Pplz. Xeln4049 will be posting here soon. He wants to join. Lolz. Baka na baka.
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Old 04/18/08, 06:28 PM   #2039
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Oh thanks, stop babysitting me Idiot. And why did you call me a stupid idiot?

False Name: Avery
Exiled Order #: ??
Original Name: Len
Exiled Name: Xeln
Alliance: Salix's Group (iI like cake, though Kelly prefers icecream
Dominant Hand: right
Age: 12
Height: 5’1
Weight: 86
Eyes: blue
Hair: brown
Gender: male
Alias: The Silent Sneak
Weapon: his bare hands
Clothing: Black slim jeans
white tee
black slim jacket
Hometown: Radiant Garden
Location:
Theme Song: Stop and Stare
Artist: Buckcherry
Fighting Style: He is a ninja. He attacks from high places and attacks very fast.
Quote: "Catch me if you can" "I boomed you" "Riax likes to think that she taught me all the basics about being a ninja and fighting, but, in truth, I've known them since i was born. Well, as a nobody. Ari once taught Len everything there was to know about that stuff."
Nobody name: None
Nobody Description: None
Personality: He likes to be in high places and run fast. He is obnoxous and annoying, and clings to Riax most of the time. He's wimpy for a ninja and loves to laugh and make people laugh. He also likes to hit on girls.
Element: speed, wind, and sneakiness
Element Description: Xeln can run at the speed of light, and fly using the wind (like senna in memories of nobody) And is extremely sneaky
Background: His older sister is Riax, and thats all most know about him.

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Old 04/18/08, 07:15 PM   #2040
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good boy. And i called you that because you're really young to be included in our little... conferences. You have virgin ears and eyes. No way do you need to hear or see anything like our nightly chats. Final draft:

False Name: Catassa
Exiled Order #: ??
Original Name: Ari
Exiled Name: Riax (to tell the truth, I got these names from a fanfic)
Alliance: The Alliance
Dominant Hand: both
Age: 16
Height: 5’8
Weight: 115
Eyes: Sky blue
Hair: Silver
Gender: Female
Alias: The Silent Catalystic Killer
Weapon:

Clothing:
A white dress
A black jacket with white fur
A silver Organization Coat (when she wears it)
Hometown: Radiant Garden
Location:
Theme Song: Onegai (translated to english)
Artist: Angela aki
Fighting Style: She fights viloneltly and without meryc
Quote: "Every memory. From that time. From them. Of them. Every memory continues to haunt me. I am weak. I cannot handle their faces, their voices, their memories."
Nobody name: None
Nobody Description: None

Personality: Something in her past causes her pain, and that pain comes out in many different emotions. For the most part, she is outgoing and childish. She's very loud by her personality. She also likes to laugh, play around, be sarcastic, mess aound, and not take things seriously. She loves to read, and when she does, she's silent as the grave. She doesn't like to be reminded of her mysterious past, though she is everysecond of everyday apparently, and when she is, she becomes silent, there's no life in her eyes, she goes completely pale, and her body is weak. She can make anyone smile with her spontaneous personality and spunky and cocky attitude. she also brings out the best in all the members and has befrieded all of them. However,she loves to attack, but only attacks when something provokes her and gives her reasons to.

Element: Spirit
Element Description: Her powers come from her spirit. Anything and everything she does with her powers affects her. She has 3 categories of powers: Pain, which causes physical or emotional pain to the victim; Spirit, which allows her to go inside the hearts, minds, and bodies of those who she usues it on; Healing, which is capable of doing many healing jobs; Elements, obviously the use of elements; Vexal, a name she made her self for the other powers that she has which vary from power ups to spells that make people do what she wants them to.

Pain: She can make people relive their worst nightmares or get inside their bodies and hurt them there without even needing to physiclly hurt them. Basiclly, she can do anything that can cause people any kind of pain.

Spirit: She can see the aura’s of people, go into other people's dreams, be in someone elses body with them still in it (basicly seeing hearing and feeling -experiencing- anything thats going on with themat the moment)

Healing: She can heal anything possible except a broken heart.

Vexal: power up to make herself or someone stronger, can make herself or someone else invisable, fly, can levitate things, can make people do things her way

Her power is called spirit because everything she does with them takes away from her spirit. It caused depression, and to keep it from doing that, she always has alchohol or ciggarettes or something in her system.


Background: All anybody knows is that Xeln is her little brother


There it is

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