The Exiled

[Mastermind]

Plus, March and April tend to be Spring Break Months.

[╬ProperArtist╬]

I had my Spring Break long ago sadly. Then again I'll be in New Jersey next week so if there's anything you guys want me to say tell rpgangel, let me know and I'll give her the message. No matter what she tells you she didn't beat me in Super Smash Brothers Brawl or Naruto Accel 2, and she probably sucks at Kingdom Hearts 2 Final Mix on Critical xD

[Mastermind]

My spring break is next week...finally.

[Ojike]

I just never feel like coming over here. :0

Originally Posted by rpgangel

i like numbah 2....but maybe it should just be 'The Separation' ?

and why is this the 2nd chapter? i thought it was the first! >.>

yoyo has his chapter with the Reverse Order meeting as the first chapter. I doubt he's going to change it, though, since he seems to be ignoring mosts posts. Especially my critique ones. :<

[DrBanxon]

You see, three is clearly a smaller number than a million.

[Dawning Twilight]

^Lol.

well i posted my fight so i don't have much else to do.

[yoyoj06]

DT-you can work on the aconex/salix thing

[Dawning Twilight]

^i know about that actually i meant to ask you it's been such a long time and i kinda lost the file. so what was it supposed to be on? it looks like i might have time this weekend to write it up. ^_^

[Mastermind]

Well, I'm still editing my story (actually adding to the beginning of it some). Good times...

[yoyoj06]

DT - its about the time between when Sail and Ocean lived with the kings(read aconex back story part 1, chp 2, on my DA account if you forgot) to the time where sail and aconex live on their own, and aconex comes home with the news of the spaceship mission

its basically about everything in between and how they manage to deal with eachother, and its the start of sails experimenting as well, so there is a lot of things, overall, you can put in it

[Mastermind]

Well, I'm currently going through my second edit. After that, I'll edit my fight a third, and hopefully, final time.

[╬ProperArtist╬]

It's too dead in here. I think I'll do a final Jynx picture, which will feature him in final form with one of his eyes beaten shut with several cuts and bruises scattered about him as he looks up towards Daxic who's standing before him.

Not only that but I think I'll get started on the Xemo vs Jynx & Rextanse battle.
I'm also working with rpgangel on her story, which is fantastic btw.

[yoyoj06]

wow, its been really dead here lately
question for everyone-
is there any exiled member that has "everything going for them" in a way,and at one point in the story, they start to lose it all? i know thats confusing
the reason i ask this is because i would have a potential (theme) song for
a) that character
b) that moment in the story

[yoyoj06]

well since its been dead, i was brain storming another character (i know, crazy, right?)
i think this member's "element", if used correctly, is the smartest out there


Name: Xersee
Former Name: Reese
Alias: The Seventh Sense (you'll see as you read)
Age: 55
Weight: 6'2
Height: 165
Eyes: Light Black
Dominant Hand: Ambidextrous
Element: Semantics and Linguistics (confusing much?)
Weapon: The enemy's fear (keep reading, still not like anyone else's character)
Sex: M
Hair: Slicked back greyish, black
Outfit: Org clothes?
Clothes-at some point that robe is coming off-: ripped bluejeans, tight/white shirt
Number: um...
Attitude: Mute (but what about his element? it makes no sense! keep reading) his facial expressions are communication tools
Hometown:
Location:
Fighting Stylehere's where it all gets explained very simply and easily only if you READ CAREFULLY AND REREAD). Semantics is the study of meaning of communication. Linguistics is a sub-level of semantics, devoted to meanings of word phrases and things of that nature. so once provoked, he listens carefully to what the provoker is saying. he deciphers their speech in terms of meaning, way of saying it, and context of it. he then says(wHaT?!) what the opponent wants to hear and in the way the opponent wants to hear it. WHY? eventually, the opponent will be at such a high confidence level, they dont realize they are basically done for. HOW SO? when Xersee is deciphering the provoker's speech, there is another skill he has. As he communicate's with the provoker, he is deciphering down what they say to such detail, that he figures out what the provoker is afraid of, and summons that fear, and no matter what the fear is, it kills them, and if that fails, it drives them crazy. here is an example. a fear of heights. the provoker all the sudden sees that he is standing on a cliff. he feels a push from behind and he falls down the cliff. physically, the person hasnt even moved, but mentally, his mind has fallen off a cliff, and his brains are splattered on the ground. so whats the point of getting their confidence level so high. his nickname is "The Seventh Sense". he "senses" what the provoker wants to hear and once that confidence level is high, the only thought running through their mind is "i'm going to win and kill this guy, blah,blah,blah". so, because they have one, main thought running through their mind, the provoker's mind isnt stabele enough to handle their fear.

See how its all coming together?
HIS POWER ONLY WORKS WHEN PROVOKED. ANY OTHER TIME, IT IS BASICALLY USELESS. Notice throughout the whole description, I didn't write "enemy", i used "provoker"
Quote: He's mute, remember?
Background: Ill be brief for now because you're brain is probably fried from the fighting style. trying to solve mouth cancer, he drank a solution(because he had it) and became mute, but the cancer went away
Attacks:read fighting style
Theme Song: Stop!
Artist: Against Me!
wow thats a lot of stuff

[╬ProperArtist╬]

Nobodies don't have emotion which means they can't fear anything. In that case even if he listens to their speech patterns he wouldn't be able to sense any emotion, because like i said before nobodies have no emotion. Unless you're talking about displaying false emotion meaning summoning false fears from that person.

One thing that i don't get is if he's mute how can he speak the words they want to hear? Unless the words they hear them speak is just an "illusion" but that would mean he has telepathy, which would be treading on Xodyc's element slightly.

Caxjob has the element of fear however he dies during the Organzation XIII invasion i believe.

Also, where is he going to be placed? Most of us aren't even sure if the codename "Exiled 2" chapters are even going to take place, although Xior is an awesome enough character i think we should move him to the Exiled 1 in the middle somewhere if we don't do "Exiled 2".

If he is in the parts of the Exiled we're definitely going to work on, then we all need to get together and find out where he's going to placed meaning his number.

I personally think we already have enough Exiled 1 characters for now, unless he's going to be a sacrificial character, but some how i doubt you won't allow that (lol)

Also i suggest a conference soon for everyone to just talk about things and the direction we should start going in and exactly what we should be handling at the moment, becuase we still have many things to finish.

I talked to rpgangel today and we brought up the fact that we need to start drawing up our pictures of the Exiled characters in the coats AP designed for us, considering the Exiled are no longer part of Organization XIII anymore and shows their separation in a sorts.
While I'm on the subject "The Separation Begins" is in fact the best name for "Chapter 2" considering the title we've made for this story is "The Exiled" meaning a group alienating from the norm or a group of others. Most of the characters in the story are misfits and the first chapter being "The Separation Begins" adds emphasis on the ideals of who they used to be and who they used to belong to. Separating themselves completely to create something new in the Exiled and the "2nd" chapter is the first step in becoming something entirely different hints "The Separation Begins". -Just my thoughts on the hole name thing.

We need to vote on which chapter is going to be # 1 instead of just being told out of the blue without being asked about it, after all this is a team project. You guys know what I think about the chapter dilemma already but just in case:

If he somehow changed some things around and added a different feel to it though it could make sense. (Spiderman for example. The first shot you see is a meteor falling to earth as some black ooze starts coming out of it.) It's like introducing the bad guys first with a small glimpse/intro-maybe a glowing eye and you hear them talking but you don't see anything and in Exal's case an evil laugh with him saying "Got it Memorized..." But as for what you have no I wouldn't see how that'd work.

Any who yeah

The Separation Begins is a good name for the first Exiled chapter.

The only way it would work though yoyo is if you do what i suggested and it someone transitions smoothly into Zaxeldion, Xowlin, Xana, and Rextanse's time in Organization XIII as they prepare to leave.

Maybe I'm thinking about it too much, but I'm just picturing everything running like a movie.

(It's also kinda like how in Kingdom Hearts 2 the first thing you see is Roxas talking to Xemnas. You have no clue who they are and their voices are altered but it's a flash of the bad guy at the beginning of the story before the actual story begins. Also like in Kingdom Hearts 1 the first thing you do is end up in this dream world and the next thing you realize you're up against a Darkside Heartless, again it reveals a slight intro into the story with a flash of what's to come but it's so crazy and out of control and the atmosphere itself is so hazy you don't really know what's going on until later in the story)

Foreshadowing IS awesome

1 last quick note is that I think we may have to use Sir Schmoochy's character as a tool for a death scene later on in the story. Considering he is banned for now which is clearly evident by looking at his profile. He's hardly on AIM but we'll see if i or anyone else can contact him. If so we can begin to discuss things and see what we're going to do about his character and if he's going to stay a member, well just communicate through AIM or Meebo or whatever. If he chooses not to stay then we pretty much know what will be the eventual fate of his character.