The Exiled - Page 12

╬ProperArtist╬ · 09/29/07, 09:20 PM

or maybe she could carry a gored of Oil around on her back..kinda like Gaara with his sand, cause she's not always guaranteed to strike oil when she fights. And that lighter could be one of those silver looking antique lighters. she could say some smart ass cool line when doing it to.

"You say you're angry, your life has & is too serious for the good things.hehe...You know what i think...you need to lighten up" *throws lighter on them*

BRILLANT

twilight abyss · 09/29/07, 09:20 PM

LOL "Oil of doom"
Okay, ummmmm, exeatly how would Jynx teach Xatsuin to use daimond? =D

╬ProperArtist╬ · 09/29/07, 09:27 PM

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Originally Posted by twilight abyss

LOL "Oil of doom"
Okay, ummmmm, exeatly how would Jynx teach Xatsuin to use daimond? =D

I dunno, probably start out by rushing him and fighting him to try to see what he's got to work with and see what he does under pressure and what he's come up on his own. Then he'd teach him out to harden his element as a shield, by constantly attack him. And teach him techniques with his element. Like Splintered Diamond, Diamond Needles, 100% pure, harden, etc.

and see how he progresses each time...by stepping up the training each time

Mastermind · 09/29/07, 09:31 PM

And for the Black water chick, her water could hold stolen souls and crap which it steals from the victims of the oils chick. The black water chick can then use the souls contained within her water for whatever purposes, like maybe being able to use some of their abilities (if they're superhuman or even other Nobodies.) Then again, that might be stepping on someone else's element. I'm not sure.

twilight abyss · 09/29/07, 09:36 PM

He carries daimonds with him at ALL times =D

╬ProperArtist╬ · 09/29/07, 09:36 PM

it's kinda Rogue kinda not, but it's more no than is...cause she has her own power it's just a trait of her power. How about i just make the ability to use other's she's trapped abilities only their black water fied...if that makes sense

twilight abyss · 09/29/07, 09:41 PM

Yeah, he carries a pouch made of daimond filled with crushed daimonds(he can reform them) at all times, also his weapons are made of daimond

EDIT: I got an idea, one of his enemies he has to fight could wear loves daimonds, and wear a necklace of daimonds
In the middle of the battle, he would realize they were daimonds, and make them close on his(he doesn't hurt girls) neck and make it slice his head off =D

**Dawning Twilight** · 09/29/07, 10:02 PM

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Originally Posted by Knightflare

OH SHIDANG!
IDEA ALERT IDEA ALERT

Rextanse loses a leg at the end of the Exiled 1 Story.
Good idea?
I need some help on HOW and WHY?
PLZ&&THANKYOU

wow very cool i like the look for Rextanse it seems very much like an "end of a battle" look. one question though what is that circle thing under his eye?

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Originally Posted by NobodyImportant

hmm NI now that i'm looking at the color for Salix's cloak i was actually thinking his color was a bit more like THIS or THIS i can't remember which was my original choice but i probably just got the color name confused at the very beginning and it became a bad habit. could i possibly ask you to try to color two of them one with THIS color and one with THIS color? just want to see. also only the outside of the cloak would be either of those colors while the gloves and boots would be black and the steel claws at least the parts that are sky blue are orange or so that's how i'd planned it. sorry about this ^^;;
EDIT: colors are Cyan and DeepSkyBlue

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Originally Posted by Mastermind

Sure, as long as they're both girls. We need mrore kickass women in the Exiled. What about a character that controls.....wait for it......CHOCOLATE!

lolz actually a while ago i remember someone joking around with that element never was made into a final character though ^^

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Originally Posted by Mastermind

And for the Black water chick, her water could hold stolen souls and crap which it steals from the victims of the oils chick. The black water chick can then use the souls contained within her water for whatever purposes, like maybe being able to use some of their abilities (if they're superhuman or even other Nobodies.) Then again, that might be stepping on someone else's element. I'm not sure.

hmm it kinda makes me think it's stepping on Diffusion of Hearts but only really kinda. i don't know but maybe if it were altered a bit if you don't mind that is MM. sorry about that...

Element: Diffusion of Hearts
Element Description: The element Diffusion of Hearts allows Salix to diffuse hearts from their bodies or hosts. In addition to that Diffusion of Hearts also allows Salix to take hold of a heart through his own will and contain it in a part of his memories so it is fresh for usage and safe from Heartless dominance. As a result it also allows for him to summon up the hearts he has diffused and create Heartless in his own image. Unfortunately unconsciously aware of this his own element is slowly eating away at his youth, soul and body.

gene chaos · 09/29/07, 10:19 PM

the black water reminds me of this move with a inidan swamp spirt that was angry because they were driilling for oil and crap and element thoughts

swamp and mentality

Ojike · 09/29/07, 11:20 PM

I thought we had it that because Jynx offered his heart to perminantly seal Kingdom Hearts, a nobody of him is born. Not an artificial one this time, a real one. I don't know if he'd be more powerful, or weaker though.

I'm sorry, but at this rate, I think I'm gonna wind up dropping out of the Exiled. It's just getting too bogged down for my taste. There's beauty in simplicity, and confusion in complexity.

That is all.

twilight abyss · 09/30/07, 12:12 AM

^ Yeah, I say we stop talking about Exiled 2 COMPLETELY until exiled 1 is done
And we should make a FINAL outline soon and NOTHING can change, that'll make it less confusing and just better because we can just get 1 over with and THEN start with 2

EDIT: To make the final outline, we would discuss it together, chapter by chapter, until we are all happy with the outcome

Do you like that idea???

╬ProperArtist╬ · 09/30/07, 12:25 AM

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Originally Posted by Ojike

I thought we had it that because Jynx offered his heart to perminantly seal Kingdom Hearts, a nobody of him is born. Not an artificial one this time, a real one. I don't know if he'd be more powerful, or weaker though.

I'm sorry, but at this rate, I think I'm gonna wind up dropping out of the Exiled. It's just getting too bogged down for my taste. There's beauty in simplicity, and confusion in complexity.

That is all.

Ojike..you're the one that got me into this story..if you go then I'm gone

twilight abyss · 09/30/07, 12:34 AM

If you leave then I think a lot more people will, and soon The Exiled will just die, you've worked on it for, what, like 2 years on it now, don't let that go to waste, you should at least see it though Exiled 1

The Lionheart · 09/30/07, 03:09 AM

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Originally Posted by Ojike

I thought we had it that because Jynx offered his heart to perminantly seal Kingdom Hearts, a nobody of him is born. Not an artificial one this time, a real one. I don't know if he'd be more powerful, or weaker though.

I'm sorry, but at this rate, I think I'm gonna wind up dropping out of the Exiled. It's just getting too bogged down for my taste. There's beauty in simplicity, and confusion in complexity.

That is all.

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Originally Posted by OogieBoogie

Ojike..you're the one that got me into this story..if you go then I'm gone

you guys cant quit
if you do everyone else will go
we just need to "trash" the idea of exiled 2 for now, and worry about it when exiled 1 is done. write down your character ideas on notepad or sumthin, and when the time comes pull them out.
we just need to worry about the present right now

twilight abyss · 09/30/07, 03:26 AM

^ Umm...I JUST said that dude

09/29/07, 09:20 PM	#166
╬ProperArtist╬ SHHHHHH MINDFREAK! Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Wait What? Age: 19 Posts: 2,722 Rep Power: 7	Re: CREATE A MEMBER version 3.0 or maybe she could carry a gored of Oil around on her back..kinda like Gaara with his sand, cause she's not always guaranteed to strike oil when she fights. And that lighter could be one of those silver looking antique lighters. she could say some smart ass cool line when doing it to. "You say you're angry, your life has & is too serious for the good things.hehe...You know what i think...you need to lighten up" throws lighter on them BRILLANT

09/29/07, 09:20 PM	#167
twilight abyss Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: On a long drive for someone with nothing to think about... Age: 15 Posts: 183 Rep Power: 3	Re: CREATE A MEMBER version 3.0 LOL "Oil of doom" Okay, ummmmm, exeatly how would Jynx teach Xatsuin to use daimond? =D

09/29/07, 09:31 PM	#169
Mastermind Ad Hominem Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Hidden in the clouds. Posts: 2,013 Rep Power: 8	Re: CREATE A MEMBER version 3.0 And for the Black water chick, her water could hold stolen souls and crap which it steals from the victims of the oils chick. The black water chick can then use the souls contained within her water for whatever purposes, like maybe being able to use some of their abilities (if they're superhuman or even other Nobodies.) Then again, that might be stepping on someone else's element. I'm not sure.

09/29/07, 09:36 PM	#170
twilight abyss Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: On a long drive for someone with nothing to think about... Age: 15 Posts: 183 Rep Power: 3	Re: CREATE A MEMBER version 3.0 He carries daimonds with him at ALL times =D

09/29/07, 09:36 PM	#171
╬ProperArtist╬ SHHHHHH MINDFREAK! Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Wait What? Age: 19 Posts: 2,722 Rep Power: 7	Re: CREATE A MEMBER version 3.0 it's kinda Rogue kinda not, but it's more no than is...cause she has her own power it's just a trait of her power. How about i just make the ability to use other's she's trapped abilities only their black water fied...if that makes sense

09/29/07, 09:41 PM	#172
twilight abyss Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: On a long drive for someone with nothing to think about... Age: 15 Posts: 183 Rep Power: 3	Re: CREATE A MEMBER version 3.0 Yeah, he carries a pouch made of daimond filled with crushed daimonds(he can reform them) at all times, also his weapons are made of daimond EDIT: I got an idea, one of his enemies he has to fight could wear loves daimonds, and wear a necklace of daimonds In the middle of the battle, he would realize they were daimonds, and make them close on his(he doesn't hurt girls) neck and make it slice his head off =D Last edited by twilight abyss; 09/29/07 at 10:05 PM.

09/29/07, 10:19 PM	#174
gene chaos Organization Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: in the aza world Age: 15 Posts: 362 Rep Power: 3	Re: CREATE A MEMBER version 3.0 the black water reminds me of this move with a inidan swamp spirt that was angry because they were driilling for oil and crap and element thoughts swamp and mentality

09/29/07, 11:20 PM	#175
Ojike The Truth Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: In your head. Age: 20 Posts: 1,706 Rep Power: 5	Re: CREATE A MEMBER version 3.0 I thought we had it that because Jynx offered his heart to perminantly seal Kingdom Hearts, a nobody of him is born. Not an artificial one this time, a real one. I don't know if he'd be more powerful, or weaker though. I'm sorry, but at this rate, I think I'm gonna wind up dropping out of the Exiled. It's just getting too bogged down for my taste. There's beauty in simplicity, and confusion in complexity. That is all.

09/30/07, 12:12 AM	#176
twilight abyss Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: On a long drive for someone with nothing to think about... Age: 15 Posts: 183 Rep Power: 3	Re: CREATE A MEMBER version 3.0 ^ Yeah, I say we stop talking about Exiled 2 COMPLETELY until exiled 1 is done And we should make a FINAL outline soon and NOTHING can change, that'll make it less confusing and just better because we can just get 1 over with and THEN start with 2 EDIT: To make the final outline, we would discuss it together, chapter by chapter, until we are all happy with the outcome Do you like that idea???

09/30/07, 12:34 AM	#178
twilight abyss Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: On a long drive for someone with nothing to think about... Age: 15 Posts: 183 Rep Power: 3	Re: CREATE A MEMBER version 3.0 If you leave then I think a lot more people will, and soon The Exiled will just die, you've worked on it for, what, like 2 years on it now, don't let that go to waste, you should at least see it though Exiled 1

09/30/07, 03:26 AM	#180
twilight abyss Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: On a long drive for someone with nothing to think about... Age: 15 Posts: 183 Rep Power: 3	Re: CREATE A MEMBER version 3.0 ^ Umm...I JUST said that dude

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