The Exiled

[Ojike]

Originally Posted by OogieBoogie

shit why are you people fighting?

Stop acting like children, seriously. We do not need this bullshit.
Figures as soon as things start going right someone wants to start shit and start saying stuff

Didn't you once say that the arguments were what gave birth to most of our best ideas? I don't care what you think, all I've been speaking these past few days is the truth. Whether you want to accept it or not is up to you.

[Dawning Twilight]

Originally Posted by Ojike

Didn't you once say that the arguments were what gave birth to most of our best ideas? I don't care what you think, all I've been speaking these past few days is the truth. Whether you want to accept it or not is up to you.

let's just drop it plz Ojike. i don't want to see another problem with the Exiled again... thank you. ^_^











Anyways i finished part 2 so i hope it's good Vexen is introduced here...




Salix and Xishn vs. Vexen Part 2

As Salix and Xishn arrived at the entrance to the World that Never Was Salix focused and listened carefully. Based on the attack that had happened earlier there was without a doubt a reason to believe that they were now under surveillance by “someone” and that “someone” didn’t want them to approach the stronghold of the Organization. Who was it? Was it Xemnas? Or perhaps it was Demyx stuck on security duty. Whoever it was that was watching them he’d most likely soon find out.

Without warning a flash of light filled the area as dozens of Nobodies appeared surrounding both Salix and Xishn. All of the Nobodies were low class mostly Dusks however there were a few other Nobodies of a slightly higher class mixed in with the group. This was but a minor detail to be fixed. Xishn could handle them himself however; it would be easier if he had some help. Salix raised his right arm as it began to glow brightly.

“How interesting to see that trick again after all this time,” a voice echoed through the area.

Slowly a Corridor of Darkness opened up as a cloaked figure appeared and walked out as the Corridor of Darkness quickly vanished. After the Corridor of Darkness had vanished the cloaked figure walked forward and removed his hood. It was Vexen! The man whom it could have been said was the Organization’s version of Salix. The Chilly Academic walked forward approaching Salix but stopped a good distance away just outside of the center of the ring of gathered Nobodies.

“It seems so odd that you of all people would step forth to greet me,” Salix said.

“Is it really? As Organization member #4 I do have my responsibilities and one such thing was the responsibility of taking care of pesky intruders,” Vexen replied.

“Pesky intruders? Is that what he’s calling us now? I had hoped we’d be called something more appropriate like dedicated rivals or what not. However I suppose pesky intruders will do for now. So now step aside Vexen,” Salix replied.

“I already told you my responsibility is to take care of pesky intruders like yourselves. Our # 1 has given me this official order,” Vexen said.

“Xemnas? You don’t say. Unfortunately for you he’s most likely gone by now. Or is that rather fortunately,” Salix asked.

“Do not speak of the superior in such a light tone,” Vexen said suddenly raising his voice for some reason.

“…How predictable. Whenever “the superior” is mentioned your mood immediately changes. Altering into a state of unpredictability. You should change that problem of yours,” Salix replied calmly.

“Quite some talk. It’s easy for a man who is blind to assume his power is nothing to be feared,” Vexen said slowly calming himself but still staying a bit on edge.

“I may be blind but I’ve felt Xemnas’ power before I’ve “seen” it in combat as well. He’s about as special as you or I. I see no reason to fear a man like that,” Salix replied.

“You have no idea how naïve you sound,” Vexen said.

“Perhaps but at least I don’t fear a dead man,” Salix said. “As much fun as conversing with you has been I must be going. So now that you know that he is gone will you toss aside your orders and let me through?”

“A traitor can never be trusted especially not you. I’m afraid I shall have to keep to my original words. You shall not get into our stronghold,” Vexen answered.

“Old man let me take care of this coward,” Xishn said.

“Hold your tongue! How dare a man of lesser intelligence and rank speak to me in such a tone and tongue,” Vexen said angrily.

“Perhaps but to react in such a way Vexen makes you seem a bit frightened. Are you sure you’re not afraid,” Salix asked.

“Such insolence! Fine then I’ll just have the security teams handle this,” Vexen said. “These Nobodies were gathered by the superior in case someone tried to enter our world. You shall not set a foot in our territory.”

Vexen turned as he walked away entering the World that Never Was as the Nobodies slowly walked forward towards Salix and Xishn in large numbers. Salix had figured he’d use such a tactic it was not unlike him to do such. Xishn cracked his knuckles obviously anxious to get started.

“Might I assume that you can handle all of them,” Salix asked.

“Might I assume that you can kick his ass,” Xishn replied.

"Vexen was right about one thing your arrogant tone does precede you,” Salix said.

“Bah just get going already. If you don’t they might end up blocking the entrance,” Xishn said.

“I needn’t worry about that. Just make sure you catch up to me when you’re finished here,” Salix said.

“Yeah I know, I got it,” Xishn replied.

Salix walked away towards the Nobodies suddenly vanishing and then reappearing as he jumped into the air landing at the back of the Nobody circle. Turning towards Salix one of the Nobodies jumped at him only to get destroyed as Xishn appeared and shattered it with his right fist. Slowly Salix entered the portal as Xishn summoned his mirrors and blocked the entrance with them so they couldn’t follow Salix.

“They haven’t improved their security a bit! But I suppose you’ll all just have to make due,” Xishn said as he removed his hood showing his blue eyes and messy brown hair.

Swiftly the all of the Nobodies rushed forward at Xishn as he smiled. Things were about to finally become fun once again.

[The Lionheart]

Originally Posted by Dawning Twilight

“Might I assume that you can kick his ass,” Xishn replied.

xD another great read DT

and OB & Ojike, i didn't even realize we were fighting about anything D:

[╬ProperArtist╬]

Originally Posted by Ojike

Didn't you once say that the arguments were what gave birth to most of our best ideas? I don't care what you think, all I've been speaking these past few days is the truth. Whether you want to accept it or not is up to you.

Dude we fought on ideas and story elements not whether or not the Exiled or ever be anything other than a half assed script.

If that's the case why don't we all just drop out now considering this will never go beyond a script if it even gets that far as you put it.

Why am I even sticking around writing if nothing beyond what we're doing now will change.

Maybe i should just quit this whole thing once and for all seeing as we'll never amount to the level that we hope we can get to.

Thanks a lot Ojike I really needed to hear that

Effective immediately I'm out
seeing as I'm leaving you guys can do whatever you want with Jynx, and since we kill of those who aren't with us anymore swtich Jynx with Xatusin or DrBanxon. And talk to rpg about switching the Xana plots with another member.

or maybe i shouldn't but i probably will

[Sonja~Soulheart]

Originally Posted by OogieBoogie

Dude we fought on ideas and story elements not whether or not the Exiled or ever be anything other than a half assed script.

If that's the case why don't we all just drop out now considering this will never go beyond a script if it even gets that far as you put it.

Why am I even sticking around writing if nothing beyond what we're doing now will change.

Maybe i should just quit this whole thing once and for all seeing as we'll never amount to the level that we hope we can get to.

Thanks a lot Ojike I really needed to hear that

Effective immediately I'm out
seeing as I'm leaving you guys can do whatever you want with Jynx, and since we kill of those who aren't with us anymore swtich Jynx with Xatusin or DrBanxon. And talk to rpg about switching the Xana plots with another member.

or maybe i shouldn't but i probably will

OB dont leave D: you're needed here D:

[DrBanxon]

Oh, the drama, the overreacion. I missed you so.

Originally Posted by OogieBoogie

Dude we fought on ideas and story elements not whether or not the Exiled or ever be anything other than a half assed script.

If that's the case why don't we all just drop out now considering this will never go beyond a script if it even gets that far as you put it.

Why am I even sticking around writing if nothing beyond what we're doing now will change.

Maybe i should just quit this whole thing once and for all seeing as we'll never amount to the level that we hope we can get to.

Thanks a lot Ojike I really needed to hear that

Effective immediately I'm out
seeing as I'm leaving you guys can do whatever you want with Jynx, and since we kill of those who aren't with us anymore swtich Jynx with Xatusin or DrBanxon. And talk to rpg about switching the Xana plots with another member.

or maybe i shouldn't but i probably will

LOL, this is what, the 5th or 6th time you've "done" this?
Step 2: All the older members tell you "Well if you want to leave go ahead, we can't stop you." while the newer members will go "NOO DUN'T LEAVE :[[["
Either that or everyone will see how badly you are overreacting to nothing and beat you with the stupid stick.

I like that second one >.>

[Mastermind]

Originally Posted by DrBanxon

Oh, the drama, the overreacion. I missed you so.

LOL, this is what, the 5th or 6th time you've "done" this?
Step 2: All the older members tell you "Well if you want to leave go ahead, we can't stop you." while the newer members will go "NOO DUN'T LEAVE :[[["
Either that or everyone will see how badly you are overreacting to nothing and beat you with the stupid stick.

I like that second one >.>

LOL, but oh so true. OB if you leave, then that's your choice...for the 5th time now, right?

[Ojike]

Fine fine. I'll go back to coating all my posts in sugar, and try to make everybody happy. I'm not leaving, but don't expect me to do anything productive. It just seems like every time I visit this page, I get fatigued. The Exiled has taking a bunch out of me, and I don't like it.

[yoyoj06]

poll....

should i make a page on the site for all the org fights? so it can be separate and all in one spot so somone can read them all at once if they feel like it?

[The Lionheart]

sometimes OB, sometimes

and yoyo, i think you should make a page for all of the org fights. I vote yay

[Xodyc]

I'm outta town for one day with my dad and his friend and come back to see this...T_T *gets back on classwork*

[Ojike]

lol That's what happens when you leave us Xodyc. That's what happens when you leave us. >=[ I got tacos in my system everybody, so I don't feel quite so aggressive anymore. But I still feel like the majority of the people out there aren't going to read some of out chapters, due to length. I know I wouldn't, were I in the position of a stranger.


Also, DrB, the banana is finally home. I repeat. The banana is finally home.
Edit: yoyo, go ahead and make another page. :0

[╬ProperArtist╬]

douchebags you know me I like seeing the reactions of the new kids xD

Plus the only way i'd really leave is if something major was to go down or if me and rpg had a falling out. :[

Originally Posted by Ojike

lol That's what happens when you leave us Xodyc. That's what happens when you leave us. >=[ I got tacos in my system everybody, so I don't feel quite so aggressive anymore. But I still feel like the majority of the people out there aren't going to read some of out chapters, due to length. I know I wouldn't, were I in the position of a stranger.


Also, DrB, the banana is finally home. I repeat. The banana is finally home.
Edit: yoyo, go ahead and make another page. :0

You lie Ojike, I've seen you read long pages of written work just because it's from someone you admire like i dunno Ahdonis or Endling perhaps >:[

[DrBanxon]

Originally Posted by Ojike

But I still feel like the majority of the people out there aren't going to read some of out chapters, due to length. I know I wouldn't, were I in the position of a stranger.

Wait, so what does that mean for The Calx? :[[[

Originally Posted by Ojike

Also, DrB, the banana is finally home. I repeat. The banana is finally home.

:000000

Originally Posted by Xodyc

I'm outta town for one day with my dad and his friend and come back to see this...T_T *gets back on classwork*

You missed the sexy party, too :>

Originally Posted by yoyoj06

poll....

should i make a page on the site for all the org fights? so it can be separate and all in one spot so somone can read them all at once if they feel like it?

I love how this is just in the middle of everyone fighting xD

[The Lionheart]

Originally Posted by OogieBoogie

douchebags you know me I like seeing the reactions of the new kids xD

Plus the only way i'd really leave is if something major was to go down or if me and rpg had a falling out. :[



You lie Ojike, I've seen you read long pages of written work just because it's from someone you admire like i dunno Ahdonis or Endling perhaps >:[

i swear OB, your sole purpose in life is to mess with me D:

and strangers might not wanna read something thats too long, but you know what, that's their problem