The Exiled

[Victor]

May I join this Order?
I'm not very good at RPing. >.<;; Although, I have an interesting member on my mind.

[yoyoj06]

the reason that i have been persistant with axel being trapped in exal is this

when axel would be freed after the ruxel vs exal fight,he is the one that explains the situation and the motives of the reverse order.

so if someone can find another way where things get explained, im more then happy to drop the whole axel being trapped thing

[Mastermind]

Originally Posted by Sir Schmoopy

May I join this Order?
I'm not very good at RPing. >.<;; Although, I have an interesting member on my mind.

Ah sorry dude, we can't accept members at the moment. Also, had we been accepting you need not worry about any RP elements. It's not centered around that. We are, however centered around creating this elaborate story revolving around the Exiled Order.

Then again, some strings could be pulled, but I highly doubt it. I 'll look into it anyway.

[Dawning Twilight]

i didn't think so.

MM - i certainly wouldn't mind more dedicated members. but that's only if they were such... what do you think?

[╬ProperArtist╬]

I say it depends on how good a character you can make and what it is you have to offer and like always with everyone who tries to join are you committed to this thing or are you just going to pop in and out when you feel like it which eventually leads to you leaving for good.

[Mastermind]

Originally Posted by Dawning Twilight

i didn't think so.

MM - i certainly wouldn't mind more dedicated members. but that's only if they were such... what do you think?

That's why I want some strings pulled for him to get in. He's certainly an active on KHI.

Originally Posted by OogieBoogie

I say it depends on how good a character you can make and what it is you have to offer and like always with everyone who tries to join are you committed to this thing or are you just going to pop in and out when you feel like it which eventually leads to you leaving for good.

Yeah, like Oogie said, you need a unique member and commitment to the project at hand. It wouldn't hurt to have patience as well.

[Dawning Twilight]

Originally Posted by Mastermind

That's why I want some strings pulled for him to get in. He's certainly an active on KHI.

Yeah, like Oogie said, you need a unique member and commitment to the project at hand. It wouldn't hurt to have patience as well.

might i just add having a unique element (EX: no fire, water, ETC.) and a unique weapon (EX: no swords/keyblades.) would probably help. personally i'm sick of keyblades and swords already...

[Victor]

Well, I'll pitch what I have thought of so far.
A member that can slowly kill the enemy by inflicting spells on them hurting them over a period time. In addition it can steal the soul when the enemy and make a shard. These shards can be used to heal allies or summon demons to help him fight.

Edit// Reading DT's post my weapon would probably be a book or a staff to channel the dark magic.

[Mastermind]

Originally Posted by Dawning Twilight

might i just add having a unique element and a unique weapon EX: no swords/keyblades. would probably help. personally i'm sick of keyblades and swords already...

Aren't we all, DT? One more keyblade and I'll go splody.

[╬ProperArtist╬]

Originally Posted by Sir Schmoopy

Well, I'll pitch what I have thought of so far.
A member that can slowly kill the enemy by inflicting spells on them hurting them over a period time. In addition it can steal the soul when the enemy and make a shard. These shards can be used to heal allies or summon demons to help him fight.

Edit// Reading DT's post my weapon would probably be a book or a staff to channel the dark magic.

2 things we need a specific name for your element
and a complete character template from you before we make our decision

[Victor]

Can I get a template layout? Or is it on the OP?

[Dawning Twilight]

EDIT: Sir Schmoopy - here is what you're looking for. the Exiled character template.

Exiled Order #:
Alliance:
Original Name:
Exiled Name:
Dominant Hand:
Age:
Height:
Weight:
Eyes:
Hair:
Sex:
Alias:
Weapon:
Clothing:
Hometown:
Theme Song:
Artist:
Fighting style:
Attacks:
Abilities:
Quote:
Personality:
Nobody Name:
Nobody Description:
Element:
Element Description:
Background:

Originally Posted by Sir Schmoopy

Well, I'll pitch what I have thought of so far.
A member that can slowly kill the enemy by inflicting spells on them hurting them over a period time.

basically like a "Death" spell with a countdown? Marluxia like?

Originally Posted by Sir Schmoopy

In addition it can steal the soul when the enemy and make a shard. These shards can be used to heal allies or summon demons to help him fight.

the first half about soul stealing sounds vaguely familiar. the demons summoning i'm a bit concerned about. due to the fact that it seems to mimic an aspect of Diffusion of Hearts. but i'll leave that mostly to the other members to decide.

Originally Posted by Sir Schmoopy

Edit// Reading DT's post my weapon would probably be a book or a staff to channel the dark magic.

staff is taken. i suggest book. though it does remind me of Zexion.

Originally Posted by Mastermind

Aren't we all, DT? One more keyblade and I'll go splody.

i remember in the beginning we had like half of our members with either keyblades or sword. it was so annoying. i'm just glad most members now have creativity.

[Victor]

Well, it would be several Death Spells.
E.G. Burning them then causing Shadow Pain. The Burn would cause initial damage then damage of a period of time. The Shadow Pain would cause more over the period of time but without initial damage.

Also, I can channel some life to myself from the enemy to make the Shard. It wouldn't be instant. They'd have to be near death and I'd have to be channeling when they die.
Also, the Demon thing I don't need.

Edit// I don't really even need a weapon. I could just use a charm or something. But if I don't have a weapon I'd like the ability to blast them with some sort of spell.

[╬ProperArtist╬]

Originally Posted by Sir Schmoopy

Can I get a template layout? Or is it on the OP?

:The template is as follows:

Name:
Former Name:
Alias:
Age:
Weight:
Height:
Eyes:
Dominant Hand:
Weapon:
Sex:
Hair:
Outfit:
Clothes-at some point that robe is coming off-:
Number:
Attitude:
Hometown:
Location:
Fighting Style:
Quote:
Background:
Attacks:

[Dawning Twilight]

Originally Posted by Sir Schmoopy

Well, it would be several Death Spells.
E.G. Burning them then causing Shadow Pain. The Burn would cause initial damage then damage of a period of time. The Shadow Pain would cause more over the period of time but without initial damage.

so like several levels of death spells? that sounds interesting.

Originally Posted by Sir Schmoopy

Also, I can channel some life to myself from the enemy to make the Shard. It wouldn't be instant. They'd have to be near death and I'd have to be channeling when they die.
Also, the Demon thing I don't need.

hmm i suppose. the demon thing yes that sounds better if that wasn't part of it. what would the shard's do then?

Originally Posted by Sir Schmoopy

Edit// I don't really even need a weapon. I could just use a charm or something. But if I don't have a weapon I'd like the ability to blast them with some sort of spell.

it might be better to have some sort of weapon. i'm sure you'll think of something. but that is up to you.