The Exiled

[Xodyc]

Damn internet being down at times

#10 Jynx v. Xemnas
#3 Rextanse v. Demyx
#1 Salix v. Vexen
#8 DrBanxon & Delacroix v. Lexaeous
#5 Xodyc v. Luxord
#4 Xana v. Zexion
#7 Zixan v. Saix
#9 Sabixel & Charxai v. Marluxia
#6 Ruxel v. Xaldin
#11 Daxic v. Xigbar
#2 Zaverxi v. Larxene

[yoyoj06]

oogie-didnt i ask to see it again before you put it out?

also, NO ONE should fight axel. here is why. axel is a good guy in this story. when he is freed from exal, he explains to everyone about everything going on and why everything happened. he also explains how he became trapped in exal. there is no reason to fight him

and to clear up the axel being trapped in exal mess

when axel was recruited, they copied is dna for a potential clone cause xemnas saw how powerful he was.
when exal awoke, after reading the prologue, he gains all these memories of axel and the exiled order. now, what isnt said but suppose to be implied, is exal seeks out axel, finds him, and "absorbs" him and his power because he feels he must be the only one and he feels that is the right thing to do(read the prologue)

hope this clears some things up

also, i dont really care the order of the fights really, but id like to note that the end of the ruxel vs xaldin fight reveals to ruxel, (and xana, even though she is not there during the fight), that ruxel was friends with xana's father and xana is the one ruxel must protect, which only emphasizes the 1st chapter with protecting xana, and the importance of it. i believe it also tells us more-in depth the reason to protect xana(w/o revealing the eventual reason), after the fight

[╬ProperArtist╬]

Even having that said. Axel dies and becomes one with his other.
Even if it's just a clone that's copied in Exal, that clone would become a perminate part of Exal makes him stronger meaning the only way to separate them would be to kill him.
And if Xemnas wanted to clone someone he'd clone the original 6 and Saix.
Seeing as they're the loyal one's that he knows he can trust. Plus knowing Vexen he'd probably go against it.
Also if there are more than 1 Axel there's bound to be more than one of everyone else, which brings up more clones that we have to fight and the subject of clones is something that's becoming overdone in this story.

I say Trinity should be the one to tell all, seeing as she's the one that shows up to kill Daxic and explains everything at the very end and Also ask Jynx to seal her up in Kingdom Hearts so that she can never be tempted to unleash destruction upon the world. Plus she pretty much sums up everything there.

oogie-didnt i ask to see it again before you put it out?

I figured sense everyone is involved in the story, everyone should have a chance to read it make complaints if needed so that we as a whole could fix it and have say.

[Ojike]

How on earth is Exal supposed to absorb Axel? I think Exal should just be the third of the 4 attempts at cloning nobodies. And the only successful one. The only thing that made Axel soft was his fondness for Roxas. Without that, he'd be exactly how we have Exal.

It should be that, after finally succeeding with Exal, they make Jynx to be the one to eliminate any threats as powerful as Sora. They planned on putting him on a short leash, but he broke free before they could.

That's just my take on the situation.

[Ojike]

Originally Posted by OogieBoogie

uh no

Kaarix and Rextanse end up together at the end of this series and kill her off would end that.

Zhymarx and Xishn appear at the end of the series, and Zhymarx gives Xana her powers.

So far the only one in there that's definitely dying is Caxboj

I never said THOSE guys would die. :l Otherwise there'd be a (to die) beside them. Only those two would die. Duh.

Sorry for the double post. :B

[╬ProperArtist╬]

I read that wrong....

my mistake <.<

[yoyoj06]

ok ill try to clear it up some more

first- when axel is freed, he explains about the motives of the reverse order. the only thing he says involving other people is like "there's a higher power though, but its all calm for now" and the exiled think he is referring to daxic who by then has started the betrayal, but they dont know axel is referring to trinity

now for the cloning stuff
axel and saix were cloned because xemnas saw how powerful they were and wanted to keep their dna.
demyx was too because xemnas wanted to see if he could make a "weaker" member "stronger"(in which he did)
YOU NEED TO READ THE PROLOGUE TO UNDERSTAND MORE OF EXAL

[╬ProperArtist╬]

Demyx is already strong he's just lazy.
Exal tells everyone their true intentions when they attack seeing as Ruxel would already be dead by the time Axel was released.

It just doesn't fit their personality. I see Xemnas making clones of his subordinates because of experiments Vexen would do on them in trying to find ways to create a heart, much like he did the other experiments in the basements of their headquarters (the place where there's a bunch of cages and the room that contains Aqua's armor).

I say something happens in that lab and only Exal, Xias, and Xymde come out uneffected. Something like an explosion would make sense.

The way the story is set up all this stuff happens before Organization XIII die at the hands of Sora. I'd say before he even shows up. That would mean Jynx was created to destroy any force that could come to take down Organization XIII.
I just don't see how a nobody can even absorb another nobody, unless their element was absorbion; while I'm on the subject what's to say Xias doesn't have Saix inside of him or Xymde having Demyx inside of him.

I personally just don't see how it connects with the story or logic set in the KH universe

I'm having more people to help edit just in case we missed anything. Ojike already pointed out something with his character neither I or the others caught

[yoyoj06]

i know the other 2 dont have the respective members inside
however, i do like the explosion idea
but then i have to rewrite the prologue

after reading the chapter that is up, i know for SURE that there are grammar errors
"...tried to swinging"? <--- makes no sense, there are a few more i know 100% are mistakes

also, in a way, it is unfair to base it off the KH universe because reverse order details were finalized BEFORE kh2fm(+) came out

[╬ProperArtist╬]

Most of our characters were made before Kh2 even came out, but we changed things to fit the style of Kingdom Hearts-although we do have blood and cussing-When things don't work out like you originally planned should be changed, not kept the way they are because you like it that way, it'll only create major plot holes and leave the reader saying WTF?! That shouldn't be possible in the word of Kingdom Hearts.

Axel fadded away so he can't be trapped at all, he's dead, so he can't be trapped within anyone. He blew himself up.

All the more reason i posted it here so things we didn't catch would be picked out, this story is for all of us so everyone should have a chance to look it over, before the final drafts are written up.

I'm not saying Exal shouldn't exist. I still think they should be a major part of the story as they were originally intended to be. I just don't see how Axel is trapped within him. Seeing as nothing adds up and you still haven't explained how Axel gets in him to begin with if Axel died during his encounter with Sora in Betwix in Between.

[Knightflare]

9. Jynx v. Xemnas - Ain't this the final battle?
1. Rextanse v. Demyx - Not really looking forward to this. Sounds kind of boring. I'm actually thinking Rextanse'll take his time, but it'll still probably be predictable.
8. Salix v. Vexen - I'd like to see mind against mind in this :]
10. DrBanxon & Delacroix v. Lexaeous - Delacrunk kicking his groove? AW HYELL NAH HOW CAN YOU NOT LIKE THIS
2. Xana v. Zexion - Sorry, can't picture this too well, really. To me it's just short people fighting.
11. Zixan v. Saix - WANT. TO ME IT'S JUST BERSERKER VS. BERSERKER
7. Sabixel & Charxai v. Marluxia - Sounds sexy

These battles are really at the same level :[
But, they're not low. Just don't know where to catagorize them.

Ruxel v. Xaldin - Two swords against six spears. Sounds tight
Daxic v. Xigbar - Sounds like an interesting battle, but I don't know how it'll go at all xD
Zaverxi v. Larxene - Doesn't sound any boring at all. I FEEL ZAVERXI'S PAIN<3
Xodyc v. Luxord - I can't really imagine Xodyc's Thought Abilities against Luxord's Luck Abilities and how the battle will go. That's not bad, but there's just a whole bunch of things I can think of for that

[DrBanxon]

Whoa whoa whoa, I don't read this thread in 2 days and suddenly everyone is anticipating some battle that I had no idea I was writing?
Awexome :3

[Dawning Twilight]

HERE ARE MY VOTES.

1. Jynx v. Xemnas
2. Rextanse v. Demyx
3. Zixan v. Saix
4. Salix v. Vexen
5. Ruxel v. Xaldin
6. Sabixel & Charxai v. Marluxia
7. Xodyc v. Luxord
8. Xana v. Zexion
9. Daxic v. Xigbar
10. DrBanxon & Delacroix v. Lexaeous
11. Zaverxi v. Larxene

Originally Posted by Knightflare

2. Xana v. Zexion - Sorry, can't picture this too well, really. To me it's just short people fighting.

LOL @ BOLDED.

[Knightflare]

Can't decide between this.
Really, I want to change Rextanse's theme song xD

On the Charxai Website, it says that Rextanse's theme song is something by The Devil Wears Prada.
But, I've wanted to change it to a Maylene and the Sons of Disaster song, because MatSoD has a more "Southern" type of sound which suits Rextanse because he's a really South-ish type of person.
He was born in something similar to "The South."

But, I can't decide on which Maylene song to pick :[[
SO, I'M ASKING YOU GUYZ

Press this link vv
Maylene and the Sons of Disaster on purevolume™

That's there PureVolume page since I know a few of ya'll who don't want to go to Myspace >:[
I, at first, wanted "Tough as John Jacobs" because that sounds like something that Rextanse would say.
But, I like "Dry the River" because, to me, the song sounds like a whole "Rextanse Battle" song.

WHATDOYOUTHINK
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[Dawning Twilight]

KF - sorry i'd help but i have no sound on my computer.