The Exiled

[Knightflare]

c'mon guize
i jst wnt 2 c sum writng goin on
iz it 2 hard 2 aks?

[DrBanxon]

I'd write but I suck at writing :[
So yeah... If I were a good writer, I'd prolly be on The Calx 3 by now >:[

[yoyoj06]

ok, since NI found the log...

i have been asking everyone about the log, so i could use it to start the actual story which i will do. i am volunteering to write the first part of the story.
when i am finished, i will send it to oogie because he just mentioned he will be a writer

and im really sorry if i have been sounding like an ass or complaining to much. what oogie said about rpg is basically how i feel, but im still here. but hopefully with the log found (i <3 NI) things will work out

[twilight abyss]

Okay...I don't want to write if I'm not up to standards, just look on The Charxai Chronicles for Xat's story, and if you guys think I'm good enough I'll write, but please be truthful, so just read and if you guys agree I'll write...if I can't write I'll edit then, I just want to help =D

[╬ProperArtist╬]

Originally Posted by yoyoj06

ok, since NI found the log...

i have been asking everyone about the log, so i could use it to start the actual story which i will do. i am volunteering to write the first part of the story.
when i am finished, i will send it to oogie because he just mentioned he will be a writer

and im really sorry if i have been sounding like an ass or complaining to much. what oogie said about rpg is basically how i feel, but im still here. but hopefully with the log found (i <3 NI) things will work out

Actually the big reason why RPG isn't here anymore is because her mom blocked this site on her comp xD
But she said what i told yall afterwards so it really didn't bother her....

[Ojike]

Originally Posted by NobodyImportant

And yeah, that's all of it. Doesn't seem like much, come to think of it. Hmm.

You left out the part where Xana unknowingly freezes time for everybody but those around her, and passes out.

Originally Posted by Mastermind

Wait, what just happened here? We say a few words, then BAM back on track? It's like someone just pressed pause to resume the game or something...

When have we ever done anything like normal people? xD







Sweet. Page 100. O:

[╬ProperArtist╬]

Originally Posted by Ojike

You left out the part where Xana unknowingly freezes time for everybody but those around her, and passes out.

Hell yeah that's like the best part of that rp, because it's showing what she is capable of for the first time in her life. "Foreshadowing" i guess you could say.

Sweet. 100 pages. O:

It's only 38 for me :[

[Axel Owns]

Originally Posted by OogieBoogie

Actually the big reason why RPG isn't here anymore is because her mom blocked this site on her comp xD
But she said what i told yall afterwards so it really didn't bother her....

KHInsider Forums - Unblocked

Give that to RPG xD

and like i said, I can write, but i need outlines of what i'm going to be writing

[yoyoj06]

ok, i already got 2 or 3 titles in mind for this first chapter, unless its not the full chapter

i will start writing tonight and send to oogie when its done

[Axel Owns]

hey guys, been working on some moves for Charxai, enjoy =)

Black Fire - This is the most common form of Nitrogen Charxai uses. Charxai creates almost absolute-zero level temperatures, creating an effect that appears as a black-colored flame. This "fire" freezes everything it touches, and is extremely dangerous

Nitrogen Shield - This is not a physical shield, but one of air (more specifically, gaseous nitrogen xD). Charxai decreases the temperature around him (working with his natural ability to withstand extreme cold); freezing any projectile that comes his way.

Shield of the Cold - A more advanced form of the Nitrogen Shield. This shield is now visible (black fire), and can black incoming attacks (like a solid wall) or simply push them aside. You could compare this to Gaara's sand shield, but Charxai must consciously control it.

Nitro Overload - Charxai increases the amount of nitrogen in the air around his opponent, making it harder for him/her to breathe.

Nitrogen Waste - Charxai lets Nitrogen wastes naturally produced by the body build up. By doing this, he can shut down nerve impulses, the kidneys, and other organs in the body.

Nitrogen Bomb - Charxai barely knows the powers of this technique, for the one time he has used it, he barely escaped with his life. This technique is actually very simple: Charxai fuses two Nitrogen atoms together, and it creates a massive explosion.

Oxygen Boost - The opposite of Nitro Overload. Charxai removes nitrogen from the air (around himself or an ally), leaving almost pure oxygen. This allows for more stamina, and for wounds to heal faster.

Sword of 'Fire' - Charxai's most used application of Black Fire. Charxai covers Dusk in Black Fire, causing a devastating combination of strength and element.

Chilling Blade - Charxai makes the temperature of the Nitrogen around him incredibly low, and forms it into a solid replica of Dusk. This is the ultimate apparition of Charxai's element, and he rarely uses it due to the amount of strain it puts on his body.

Nitro Barrage - This attack comes in two parts. In Part I, Charxai creates a Chilling Blade, and then sticks this replica and the original Dusk into the ground. Charxai then barrages the enemy with small bursts of Black Fire. If the opponent is hit, there is no way to avoid part II.
At the start of Part II, Charxai then pulls both swords out of the ground and starts attacking (or beating the living hell out of) his opponent at extreme speeds. If Charxai was fighting a more powerful enemy, he would use techniques like Nitro Overload, Nitrogen Waste, and Oxygen Boost. Charxai is usually okay (stamina wise) after this attack, but using it in more advanced forms would cause him extreme fatigue.

[yoyoj06]

well i have sent the first draft to the editing floor

we are under way!

[╬ProperArtist╬]

I'm currently awaiting Knightflare and Mastermind's half of the edits, but me and NobodyImportant have finished our half of the editing section.

Win I finish putting everything together I'll post it here and on Deviantart so you all can read it and fix things that you guys think need editing


EDIT: Everyone is going to need to study their respected Organization XIII member, seeing as their boss battles with the Exiled isn't too far off.
From my understanding each member enters a silhouette that takes them to that Organization members battle area. However, unlike first anticipated, they will be much stronger than their original selves I.E Data Battles.

So Here are the youtube videos for all the Organization XIII data battles.
Watch them, study them, and I'll leave it up to everyone to write their own part, meaning everyone writes their own fight so it's fair to everyone. I mean no one understands your character more so than you.

Jynx vs Xemnas
YouTube - KH2FM - Xemnas 1 Data No Damage/Limit/Drive/Magic (LV1 CM)
YouTube - KH2FM - Final Xemnas Data No Damage (LV1 CM)

Daxic vs Xigbar
YouTube - KH2FM - Xigbar Data No Damage/Limit/Drive (LV1 CM)

Ruxel vs Xaldin
YouTube - KH2FM - Xaldin Data No Damage/More Restrictions (LV1 CM)

Salix vs Vexen
YouTube - KH2FM - Vexen Data No Damage (LV1 CM)

Banxon vs Lexaeus
YouTube - KH2FM - Lexaeus Data No Damage/More Restrictions (LV1 CM)

Xana vs Zexion
YouTube - KH2FM - Zexion Data No Damage/More Restrictions (LV1 CM)

Zixan vs Saix
YouTube - KH2FM - Saix Data No Damage/More Restrictions (LV1 CM)

Axel is trapped within Exal-although i still don't exactly see how that works seeing as he faded away into nothingness but if someone wants to fight him then here is his Data battle and speak up before he's taken
YouTube - KH2FM - Axel Data No Damage/More Restrictions (LV1 CM)

Rextanse vs Demyx
YouTube - KH2FM - Demyx No Damage/More Restrictions (LV1 CM)

Xodyc vs Luxord
YouTube - KH2FM - Luxord Data No Damage/Limit/Kingdom Key/etc (LV1 CM)

Marluxia is considered a traitor to the Organization so he wouldn't be brought back, unless we bring him back anyway in which case:
YouTube - KH2FM - Marluxia Data No Damage/More Restrictions (LV1 CM)

Zaverxi vs Larxene is considered a traitor to the Organization so she wouldn't be brought back, unless we bring her back anyway in which case:
YouTube - KH2FM - Larxene Data No Damage/More Restrictions (LV1 CM)

Roxas has reunited with Sora so there's no way he'd be resurrected by Trinity.

[Axel Owns]

Originally Posted by OogieBoogie

Axel is trapped within Exal-although i still don't exactly see how that works seeing as he faded away into nothingness but if someone wants to fight him then here is his Data battle and speak up before he's takenYouTube - Axel Data Rematch *CRITICAL MODE*

If (edit: sorry Charxai) I could fight Exal, that would be great. All of the senior members seem to have a fight, but if somebody else wants to, they can. I just think cold vs. fire to great an opputunity to pass up.

[Dawning Twilight]

Question: can i write the Salix vs. Vexen battle please? i just feel it might be better if i helped/did Salix's battle.

[╬ProperArtist╬]

Originally Posted by Axel Owns

If (edit: sorry Charxai) I could fight Exal, that would be great. All of the senior members seem to have a fight, but if somebody else wants to, they can. I just think cold vs. fire to great an opputunity to pass up.

That would work if Charaxi was around in the very beginning of the series. This the First chapter of the story aside from the Prologue (The Separation Begins).
And I said It would only work if Axel wasn't in Exal.
Plus i highly doubt Charaxi could take on Exal, he's the one that kills Ruxel near the end of the story.

Originally Posted by Dawning Twilight

Question: can i write the Salix vs. Vexen battle please? i just feel it might be better if i helped/did Salix's battle.

Everyone writes their own battle

Watch them, study them, and I'll leave it up to everyone to write their own part, meaning everyone writes their own fight so it's fair to everyone. I mean no one understands your character more so than you.