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[Angel's Prayer]

Originally Posted by twilight abyss

Okay, since we were all going to make our character's symbols to use on the back of their cloak, this is Xatsuin's family symbol.

I just quickly did it on paint, how does it look?
Also, the Kanji from the top clockwise mean
Truth, Justice, Courage, Desire, Pride, Wisdom, Respect, Loyalty.

Forgive me for being so noobish...but isn't that a bit much to cram onto a coat? Dx

[Knightflare]

Originally Posted by Angel's Prayer

Forgive me for being so noobish...but isn't that a bit much to cram onto a coat? Dx

Hmmm, I wonder.
IN THE WORLD OF THE EXILED IS POSSIBLE!
I'm writing tommorow lol>:3

Note, I'm going to post each chapter I finish.
THOUGH,
THE CHAPTERS ARE GOING TO BE UBAR LONG.
like rally.
So, expect A LOT of scrolling lulz

Though, I'm not going to be posting a chapter soon.

[yoyoj06]

wow, its been really dead here for about a week, is anything going on?

knightflare has decided to PM me the chapters and i will post them on my site(check my sig). so he or i will let you know when something is there. and if you didnt know, chapter 1 has been there forever, so check it out

[quiteMAD]

I've been quiet due to working through college. I very much dislike the working part. D:

I still don't aprove of the symbol on the coat thing. :[

[yoyoj06]

anyways, here is the next ruxel flashback


i ran down the hallway, more bloody and battered than before. i just saw random bodies everywhere. After many bloody stairwells and torn up hallways i came to the kings throne room. do i dare enter. i had to. the king was in there i the king was my last resort to finding this man that had my answer. There was a small hole in the wall that i decided to look through. Inside the room the king was being held by 3 Tresesmen soldiers. there were other Epohmen being held by enemies. standing in the middle of the room, was that man. the man in the black cloak that ive been seeing for a year. it was really him this time, no illusion. i couldnt take it any longer. i bust through the door.

the cloaked figure turned around and saw me. i dropped my swords and ran to him and slid on my knees toward him until i was at his feet.
"You must be Rule." the figure said.
"You know who killed my father. Tell me now!" I shouted back.
Another cloaked figure poofed out from nowhere and appeared next to him. "You know Xaldin, you could tell him."
"I could tell him, but now's not the time."
The 2nd cloaked figure sighed and disappeared.
"KILL THE KING!" Xaldin shouted toward his men, as he himself disappeared.
"NOOOOO!!!!!" I shouted as i stood up. I put one hand forward like a stop sign. A green shield-shaped aura shot out of my hand went toward the king and his the enemies by him. The forcefield went through the 4 of them. A split second later, you could see the enemies weapons shatter in their hands.

The Tresesmen holding their own Epohmen killed those guys. One of the Tresesmen found a metal fragment on the ground and tossed it to one of the enemies by the king. I held my hand out toward one of my swords. It came floating toward me straight to my hand. I flung it as hard as i could toward the enemy with the pipe. The sword reached its target too late. The enemy had bashed the king over the head with the metal fragment and the king was out cold. The sword went through this guy just like the last one. I reached my other hand out for my other sword and it came to me.
"Now your'e all dead!" I pointed my sword to hole in the ceiling where I could see the skylight. a green beam flew out of my sword into the sky.seconds later, the beam came back down through the hole and split into mulitple beams that each hit the floor in separate spots. Each beam was in a separte part of the room. Each beam turned into an angel, an angel of death. they tore apart the enemies and is stood there and watched my enemies get their souls ripped out of them and become mangled corpses. When the last of the enemy was gone, the angels disappeared. I ran to the king to see if he was alive.
"Very well done, my friend. You are much stronger than I thought." The cloaked figure appeared again.
"You, Xaldin, tell me who killed my father!"
"All will be revealed soon enough. For the moment, why dont you help the king you so desparetly saved. You think he's the one who knows the answer. I mean that is why you came to save him."
"You son of a - "
"Easy now. The answer's will come soon enough. I shall depart for now. I'll be seeing you soon..........Ruxel." And with that he disappeared.
Ruxel? Who was Ruxel? I had no time to worry about that now. The king was hurt. I did the best I could to save him. I hope he was alright. I heard footsteps and then saw Dilan running through the door.
"Am I too late?" he asked.
No shit.........

[Oblivion Unkown]

Yeah, coat symbols are just a bit much, not to mention that what you came up with, TA, seems a bit... bulky (I think that's what I mean) it's just a bit massive for a family crest. I mean, my own family's crest (SCA-wise at least) is a blue cup on a white "X" on a green background. Or sometimes it's just the cup (House Mendicus is, for all intents and purposes, a begger's guild).

I haven't had much to say is why I haven't been saying much. I've got a new character idea, but I don't want to clog things up with yet another new character ('least not until we get Exiled 1 completely done with).

[Angel's Prayer]

Actually, I'm thinking of doing yet another Exiled coat...I realize now that the last 3 designs were either too unoriginal or too warped...

[Mastermind]

*gasp* You mean a.....4th design?!

Also, nice flashbacks Yoyo. I especially like the latest one.

[Xodyc]

im back. =D
yoyo- good job. i like the flashbacks
and also to you BM
also i may be quiet while working through college so yeah...ill reply whenever i can.

[NobodyImportant]

Heh. You kids'll get used to college. I've been in college since fall of 2004 after all...

I forgot about the silhouette thing, sorry. I'll get to working on it now. XD

[Xodyc]

i adjust quickly sometimes NI, so uh...yeah.
uh...can't wait to see it haha

[Dawning Twilight]

Originally Posted by NobodyImportant

*gasps* A DT is back!

Well if you look in past chapters, I've been coloring AP's pictures. I colored Salix, but no one seems to like him wearing a sky blue robe for some reason.

See? What do you think?

hmm well i guess from it could be considered odd or not properly fitting the character. but i think it'll probably stay the way it is. than ks for coloring it NI =D

Originally Posted by Angel's Prayer

whether or not Salix and Xishin's robes are black or sky blue is entirely up to DT...

yes it is and personally i don't think i'll change it unless someone has a suggestion that appears better as a color.

[Xodyc]

i dont DT and welcome back

[Mastermind]

The only problem that I see with this blue robe is that it stands out. It's all about uniformity (It's that a word?).

[Xodyc]

surprisingly MM, it is a word.