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| Ruler of Light Registered: Nov 2005 Location: Illinois Age: 20 Posts: 587
Reputation: 5 ![]() Level: EXP: | And we continue on with the ruxel flashbacks. Here is the 3rd one.......... When I finally came to, I saw the same man standing over me. I was in some sort of hut. "You're finally awake." The man said. "Who are you?! Where am I?!" I shouted and sat up in the bed I was in. "Not so fast, you still need to rest." I layed back down and looked left. I saw my swords leaned up against the wall. "My name is Dilan, and you are in the kingdom of Epoh." "What was that thing that chased me through the jungle?" "The guardian of the jungle of course. It protects this 'town' and makes sure no intruders come in. Why it didn't attack you at first is still a mystery to me. It even chased you in the direction of the kingdom, like it wanted you to find this place. I saw you stumble down the hill. I carried you to my hut in this kingdom. What brings you this way anyway?" "I am looking for the man who killed my father." "Ah, the whole avenging death scenario. Well you can ask around this kingdom, maybe someone knows a thing or two about something." Dilan was right. This 'town' had to be the place that I had to go, to find a guy who knew the answer. I looked back up at Dilan and extended my hand. "Rule, I'm Rule." After about a week of searching, I still hadn't come across anything. I probaly hadn't even covered 50% of the kingdom. I still had a long way to go. I went to a market by Dilan's place. The street was lined with different stands that seemed to go down for miles. I walked through a market and I saw an apple roll across the ground. I stopped it with my foot, bent down, and picked it up. A little kid maybe 8 years old ran to my side with his hand extended. I rightfully returned the apple. I looked ahead and in the distance, I saw a figure in a black cloak. He had his arm extended and he looked like he wanted me to follow him. Could this be the guy I needed to find? He wasn't in brown, but I had a feeling he was the right guy. I ran toward him and when I got within 50 feet of him, he vanished. This appearing and vanishing went on for about a year. I kept asking around and no one knew anything. Dilan gave me the same look. He was just as clueless as I was. The next day... War. |
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| lions | hey guys hows it goin? gettin on real fast.... yoyo i thought id help you out with some stuff on your site (so it all matches) Xowlin - The First Stroke DrBanxon - The Wizard Zixan - The Enigma and thats all i can see for now. updated xowlins site, let me know if anything else needs doing WAH! TEH NEW SIG!! |
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| Warrior of Darkness Registered: Nov 2006 Age: 18 Posts: 116
Reputation: 4 ![]() Level: EXP: | YoYo i very much liek these flash backs of yours they are neat. This is only the first 3 chapters of Lexinoths past. but i warn every one that thier is Blood, gore, and disturbing descriptions. If this offence or sick DO NOT READ. Oh and AO if you want you can proof read this. just put anything in bold if you change it. Lexinoth -The pawn in a game of revenge.- Capter 1: The sunlight fell upon the city’s rooftops, and casted shadows that gave shade to the people below. Cars ran back and forth down the streets of Navaatnes. Crowds of people walk alone side of the streets, rushing to their next destination. They are all trying to beat the rush hour. The city was stirring and the heat kept rising. Lithoen stepped out of an ice cream shop, holding a sea salt ice cream. He was eating it quickly if fear of it melting. Another man came out after him, he look much older. “Lovely day, is it not Lithoen?” The man had two sea slat ice creams, one in each hand. “Well it could be better, it’s a little hot.” Lithoen was shielding his eyes from the sun. “Maybe to much for my liking.” “Well look on the bright side, its perfect weather to hit the beach.” “Beach?” Lithoen look at the man, “since when did you ever wont to go to the beach,” “Since I drove past it and saw cute girls in bikinis.” The old man was now smiling. “You’re a pretty sick old man Kales,” Lithoen was shaking his head. “Lets just get in the car.” Kales finish his sea salt ice creams and laughed as he got in the car. The car pulled out and entered the stream of cars with the rest of the city. They carried on throe the streets what seam like they were going no were. There was a man with long black hair that was walking on the sidewalk alone. He wore dark clothing and a black cloth was rapped all his right harm. It looked much buffer then his left arm. The man gave Lithoen a shake, but he drove past him and contined on. Kales spoke, “You know I just want you get exited on finding someone.” “Kales, I just got out of a relationship and I’m just not ready for another one!” “If you say so.” The conversation now was ended. The rest of the ride was silent. They came up to were Kales lived It was a small house that was panted blue and had yellow windows. There was a tree in the front yard with crab apples that were almost ripe. Flower bushes beneath the yellow windows. A brick pathway led up to the entryway. The house was full of life even though all lights were off. Kales got out of the car and waved Lithoen goodbye. “Hey Lithoen,” Kales called out. Lithoen rolled down the window. “Yeah dad?” “ Thanks for ride home.” “No problem,” Lithoen waved, rolled up the window and drove away. Chapter 2: Litheon drop his keys on the table and he flicked the lights. The room lighted up in an instant. He glanced at the clock and realized it was 9:45pm. He sighed and shook his head. “It is ridiculous how big this city is.” The city died down and the moon now ruled the sky. Only a couple cars passed Lithoens apartment. Clouds clustered that block out the stars. Rain hit the roof and windows. Only a faint thunder could be heard. Lithoen walk over to his answering mashing, “You have 0 new massages and 1 saved massage. Press 1 to reveille all massages.” Lithoen press 1, “First massage, um Lithoen, this is Christina. Your 21 and you just got fired. That was your 16th job. Your living in a crappie apartment and you can’t even pay the rent. You did not go to university, or even plan to I might add. Your life is going nowhere. It’s almost like you not even exist. I had enough. Were don”… Lithoen pulled the cord. He sighed then sat down on his front of his T.V. He turned it on to the news. “If you seen or have any information on this man please call,” ‘click’ the channel was change to easy listening music. “Ahh, that’s more like it.” Lithoen kick back his chair, laid back and soon fell asleep. ***** Morning came by in a flash; the light fell on Lithoens eyes lids as he woke up. The music was still on, and was playing some piano solo. Lithoen turned it off then got out of his chair. He opened the blinds and let the sun in. The clouds from the night before were gone and the day was clear. Lithoen worked himself up a meal, and washed it down with a glass of orange juice. He washed up and got his keys from the table as he stepped out the door. Lithoen got in his car and drove off. Lithoen got out his cell phone and dialed a number. It began to ring. Someone picked up, “Hello.” “Hi David,” Lithoen began to speak. “Its Lithoen.” “Ahh yes, when shall we meet.” “Well I’m heading over now. Is Troy, Shalynne, and Kira coming?” Lithoen asked. “Yeah I already talked to them. Their coming.” “Good, we would not want to miss your moving away get together. Well see you in a bit. Bye.” “See you soon Lithoen.” The conversation was ended. Lithoen shut his phone and continued driving. The streets were quieter then normal. Lithoen gave a puzzled look. He continued throe the streets yet only a few cars zoomed by him. It seamed they were in a rush. The deeper Lithoen got in the city the quieter it got. Soon the streets were dead. No lights were on in any building or people walking on the sidewalk. Lithoen did not like what he was seeing. The sky started to change colour the more Lithoen drove. It was a dark yellow and black blanket that covered the sky. Everything started to blur. The twilight sky gave an unwarming glow to everything. He turned a corner and saw a bus on fire in the middle of the street. Lithoen pulled up and got out of the car to take a look. It looked disgusting. It looked like bone and veins it self grew on the car. Lithoen made a face then looked in the bus. His eyes widened. “Oh my god, what the in the hell happened.” Lithoen said to himself. Inside the bus were people that had the bones and veins growing on them but their chests were ripped apart. Limbs were ripped from their torso. A head was busted throe a window. He got near the back when he found a seat full of pilled heads and arms. Lithoen ran out of the bus. Lithoen backed away. He looked like he was going to hurl. He gained control of himself. He walked around the bus to see the rest of the street. As soon as he saw it, he dropped to his knees. The streets were filled with dead people and smashed building all covered with Bone and veins. Chapter 3: Lithoen was filed with disgust. He clenched his fists, as the scraped the hot burning concrete. His head was bowed, and his eyes shut tight. A tear fell across his face. He looked up the twilight city. Pools of blood acted as rivers that ran down the streets drains. A thought ran throe his mind. “David!” he had to worn him and his friends. He got up and ran back to his car. He started it up and drove pass the bus into the lifeless streets. He pulled out his cell and called David. There was no answer. He closed it in frustration. He opened it again and called Troy and kira, again no answer. “Damn” he cursed. He tried Shalynnes cell. It ran and ran yet no answer. Lithoen hit the dashboard. He then tried his father’s house…nothing. He was driving fast on trying to get to David’s as fast as he could. Since David’s house was the closest person he knew. He was 5 blocks away when his cell phone rang. He jumped and the phone fell to the floor. He reached down to get it. He griped is and flipped it opened and looked to see who was calling. He saw Shalynne’s number ran across the screen. A rush of excitement ran through lithoen but he forgot to keep his eyes on the road. He looked up and there was a lamppost that was lying on the street. He swerved to avoid it but he spun out and hit pile of ruble that lay on the side of the road. He hit is sideways and his car flipped, slid and hit a building wall. ***** He gained conscience and found him self up side down. All his blood was rushing to his head. A headache grew from the back of his head. Lithoen unbuckled his seat belt and fell. The windows were smashed and by the looks of it so was every other part on the car. Lithoen crawled out the window and fell on his back staring out into the cold twilight sky. Black clouds mixed with the dirty gold covered the sky. Lithoen slowly got up and checked his surroundings. He was close to David’s. “If David is alive, he might be able to drive me to Shalynne’s and the others.” Lithoen thought to himself. Lithoen was in too much shock to realize his own pain. He left the car like the crash never happened. Yet, he stumbled all over the place, he also could not walk straight. This did not stop him from helping his friend. Bodies kept showing up as Lithoen walked further. Some were nailed to trees. Some were even nailed to several trees. People had the bone growing on their face. The bone spread inside their mouth and escaped through their eye sockets. Bodies laid on the streets, hanging from building windows, painted on the cars, babies were mounted on posts, and there were even piles of people gathered up and were burnt to ash. Everyone had their chests ripped out, or they were just a pile of dust. The blood was now starting to flood the street. Pieces of human’s organs went down stream and drifted past Lithoen’s feet. Litheon tried his best to avoid the seen but it could not be helped. There was just too much, and it was too much for him to bear. Vomit is all Lithoen could do. He tried his best not to but their was nothing he could do. He reached David’s house. It looked dark and vacant. The windows were smashed and the door knocked in. Lithoen ran in. his heart was pumping. He dug through fallen ruble and tipped desks to find his friend. The house was a mess. There were holes in the walls and the floor was flooded. Lithoen check his room. His bed was thrown throe the wall. His closet was shut and his dresser was plowed against it. Lithoen grabbed the dresser and throe it out of the way. He ripped it open in furry. There was David decapitated and chest ripped out. His bone from his rib cage was standing strait out. David was dead. Last edited by black_myth; September 1st, 2007 at 03:18 AM. |
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| Sidekick | *gasps* A DT is back! Well if you look in past chapters, I've been coloring AP's pictures. I colored Salix, but no one seems to like him wearing a sky blue robe for some reason. See? What do you think? Last edited by NobodyImportant; September 1st, 2007 at 03:02 AM. |
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| Member Registered: Jun 2006 Location: In the shadow of the statue Age: 17 Posts: 188
Reputation: 4 ![]() Level: EXP: | OMG DT is back!!!!!!!!XD Sorry I haven't been on I was grounded, I still am too I'm just allowed on for tonight. I looked at the pages and I didn't see anything on the game, how is it going KF? Also, you said you were starting to writte the story too, how is that going? |
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| I am Registered: Dec 2005 Location: In the Garden of Hopes and Dreams, being mauled by Hummingbirds... Age: 20 Posts: 2,074
Reputation: 7 ![]() Level: 20 EXP: | whether or not Salix and Xishin's robes are black or sky blue is entirely up to DT... |
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| lions | ok BM (sry i lol every time i type that xP) heres the edits. i know its not perfect, but its a start i put it on one of my mirror sites, if thats what your wondering edit: you might want to copy/paste it into microsoft word, it makes it easier to see the edits. OMG quick site update.... info on xana= all exiled 1 order members pages! ZOMG! Last edited by The Lionheart; September 1st, 2007 at 06:10 AM. |
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| Ruler of Light Registered: Nov 2005 Location: Illinois Age: 20 Posts: 587
Reputation: 5 ![]() Level: EXP: | AO- sure, what do you want to help me with, im only adding actual story stuff unless its something important anyways....heres the next Ruxel flash Another kingdom had heard about ours and was determined to wipe us out. I believe it was called Treseslah. They wanted to rule the land. I grabbed my 2 swords and ran outside. I was just apart of this kingdom as anyone else, I had to fight for it. I killed a few enemies until the area around Dilan's house was clear. I looked up and saw the palace. I saw enemies approaching the palace. THE KING! After a year of being here, I had neglected to ask the king about anytihng. He had to know the person I was looking for. Now, he's in danger. I had to go help him. I ran down the streets slicing and dicing anybody that got in my way until I finally reached the palace gates, all banged up and bloody. The gates were open and I ran through. The palace stairs didn't look to good either. 1 on 1 battles were lurking at every step. I ran past everyone and headed straight for the palace doors. I pushed a few people over and ran inside. The palace main corridor was worse than the steps. Fighting going on everywhere. I looked right and saw about 10 Tresesman advancing on 1 Epohmen. I had to go save this guy. I can't let a fellow countrymen die like this. I ran a few steps and through one of my swords. It flew through air like a missle, perfectly straight and horizontal and went through the back of an enemy, and out his stomach. He fell to the ground. This got the rest of the group's attention. They started heading toward me. With my free hand, I charged a soul ball. The air around my hand started to swirl and turn green. The air turned into a green ball and was spinning faster and faster, hovering above my hand. I threw my arm forawrd and the soul ball flew just like the sword. It flung into another enemy. You could literally see his sould leave his body, and he collapsed. By then, the rest of the group had reached me. I deflected the first sword hit from an enemy and then kneed him in the groin. He leaned forward. I saw another guy come at me running, sword above head. Just as he reached me, I stuck my foot out and caught him in the stomach. He leaned forward as well. Just then, my instinct told me to duck, and I saw a sword swing above my head. I took my sword and backstabbed the guy behind me. I left the sword in him. I stood up and took the two guys who were still leaning forward, and clunked their heads together. I turned back around and pushed the sword farther into the guy, then yanked it out as hard as I could, elbowing another guy behind me in the process. I turned around and rightfully beheaded him. I saw his head roll across the floor. I then dispatched the rest of that small group. I picked up my second sword. By this time, the other Tresesmen in the corridor and dispatched of their own Epohmen and started heading toward me and the fellow Epohman I had saved. We stood back to back, swords in hand, as the enemy circled around us. "Rule, what are we going to do?!" That voice sounded familiar. It was Dilan's. I had saved the guy, who helped me out and took me in. The enemies started moving in. I held my arms out wide with the swords in them, ready to fight. All of the sudden, the ground started shaking. It caught all the enemies attention. "Dilan!" I shouted, "Head to the king, go!" He was able to escape from the enemies because the enemies were distracted by the shaking. Hands spread apart, I floated up. My swords started spinning around me. Faster and faster they went. Until....the swords froze in mid air. They slowly tilted toward the ground and flew straight into it. The ground under me started cracking. The swords created a fault in between them and the ground started separating under me. The enemies tried to run. But a forcefield had locked them in. The hole in the ground grew bigger. I saw the enemies, scared as they ever could be, scream and squeal in hopes to survive. None did. Each one of the Tresesmen fell into the green fire that was below them. The ground slammed back together as if there were no hole to begin with. I floated back down, grabbed my swords, and headed the direction that Dilan took. |
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| I am Registered: Dec 2005 Location: In the Garden of Hopes and Dreams, being mauled by Hummingbirds... Age: 20 Posts: 2,074
Reputation: 7 ![]() Level: 20 EXP: | Quote:
Also... KHII: cupcake-alicious by *ImageC0rrupt3d on deviantART So I lol'd and began to think... What remedial chores would the Exiled specialize in... Zaxeldion-none, he would scamper around the castle being chased by the kids... Rextanse-uhh financial planning? Xowlin-most likely a sorta nanny (a manly nanny) to keep the younger members occupied Xana-the general "troubleshootin" big sis Zixan- relaxing on the roof, altering the weather so he can nap all he wants Xodyc- cooped up in the library, and the general "troubleshootin" big bro Jynx- wanders around the castle with Xana-chan DrBanxon- in teh kitchen causing a mess Ruxel- in h\the garage, trying to fix his car/motorbike Salix- in the basement, conducting experiments Kaarix- enjoying nature in the garden Sabixel- uhhhh wandering from room to room looking for something to do, and ends up tidying it for no reason Zaverxi- comes home late at night, and leaves early in the morning Daxic- playing pranks Jixah-hanging out with Xowlin Lexinoth-In the kitchen baking kayk Caxboj- zipping around playing pranks in an attempt to outdo Daxic Ojex-somewhere in the mountains trekking Zhymarx- in the observatory watching the stars Tellamox- in the garage forging numerous sharp pointy weapons Toxit- Daxic's partner-in-crime Delacroix- meditating in the living room/dojo Xishn- in the basement, secretly using the computer to update his blog Skyx- hanging out with Jixah cuz he has nothing better to do Xenge- with Zhymarx in the observatory Rogexeg-always leaves the house Lenxzuob- in the kitchen, being responsible for DrBanxon's mess and blaming him for it.. Lonex- under a tree, napping Xatsuin-eavesdropping on Jynx and Xana Xalatine- in the kitchen, trying to cook Axit- bothering Temallox to no end X- wanders the corridors aimlessly like a ghost, but like Sabixel, cleans the rooms from time to time... Last edited by Angel's Prayer; September 1st, 2007 at 10:33 AM. | |
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| Member Registered: Jun 2006 Location: In the shadow of the statue Age: 17 Posts: 188
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| Ruler of Light | Do I smell Foster's Home For Imaginary Friends cooking up in the oven? =D Gonna has to tell Lexinoth to take it out before it's gets cooked lawlz Financial Planning, lulzebub. Last edited by Knightflare; September 2nd, 2007 at 04:29 PM. |
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| Member Registered: Jun 2006 Location: In the shadow of the statue Age: 17 Posts: 188
Reputation: 4 ![]() Level: EXP: | Okay, since we were all going to make our character's symbols to use on the back of their cloak, this is Xatsuin's family symbol. ![]() I just quickly did it on paint, how does it look? Also, the Kanji from the top clockwise mean Truth, Justice, Courage, Desire, Pride, Wisdom, Respect, Loyalty. |
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| lions | ^^ wtf? ^^ i remember that, but the randomness is crazy Quote:
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| Sidekick | Quote:
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