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[Knightflare]

Originally Posted by Angel's Prayer

Yesh....

Oh quite. Quite.

Originally Posted by Angel's Prayer

And now, thoughts on Xalatine....

=D I MUST HEARZ

Originally Posted by Angels' Prayer

Xalatine originally intended to save her Heartless by becoming one with her. However, she found that her Heartless was doing quite well, and even encouraged her to pursue her own life as a Nobody. Somewhat happy about this, Xalatine leaves, several centuries later, the Exiled Order is formed and she joins...

I like waht I'm hearing. Go onz.

Originally Posted by Angel's Prayer

Now, flash forward to a battle between Xalatine and Myromex, where Xalatine sacrifices herself so the others can escape. But rather than killing her, Myromex wipes out all her memory since she became a Nobody, and thus rendering her a vegetable, capable of living but in an eternal coma.

No. NO. NOOOOOOO! :[[[
Xalatine is in a coma :[ Drama.

Originally Posted by Angel's Prayer

Zhymarx, who has fallen in love with her, has sought many attempts to get it back, even destroying Myromex (with the help of Rextanse, but more of that later on) However, the conditon is truly irreversible, and Xalatine truly becomes an empty shell. But rather than letting her fade into Darkness, Zhymarx works with Xana and creates a portal in time. They travel back to the past to Talanie, Xalatine's Heartless, and fuses Xalatine's empty shell with her.

With the halp of Rextanse, eh? A lazy god is doing a lot of stuff in the Exiled. Dx
Anyway, so they go back in time, eh? and fuse them? D:

Originally Posted by Angel's Prayer

Thus a paradox is formed in which the future Xalatine reunites with her past Heartless, while past Xalatine continues to move forward in accordance to time until that fated day.

OH NOEZ PARADOX?
This is the part where I got confused.
I'm going to need to see it in action. Dx

Originally Posted by Angel's Prayer

Watcha tink?

You should know waht I think lol.
Anyway, I think it's a REAL good idea. I like it. I think it's real good. =D

[twilight abyss]

Originally Posted by Angel's Prayer

Hay all, just posting some pics....

Sabixel is done...


And for all of us...
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f1...plshexiled.jpg
For the record, other than Skyx (who I have no photogrpahic reference of) and Zaxeldion (who is a puppy) Every Exiled 1 (and 2 premiere members of Exiled 2) are here. Try to find yourself lol...

Also, I'd like to discuss Xalatine in the next post...

not only is sabixel one of the most awesome character ever, but the other pic is awesome XD
Which is Xatsuin? If he is in there.

[Angel's Prayer]

Originally Posted by OogieBoogie

but..Zhymarx doesn't interact with Jynx :(

I don,t follow, Oogie, I was talking about Myromex, Xana and Rextanse

Also KF needs to add Xalatine to the list of grrrlz as ninja...

I considered that pic Ojike, but his hair was covered so there was no real way for me to draw him...

Also, about half of our poeple have the same hairstyle, and the only differences would be hair color lol...

edit: Xatsuin is behind his 2 mentors...

[Knightflare]

Originally Posted by Angel's Prayer

I don,t follow, Oogie, I was talking about Myromex, Xana and Rextanse

Also KF needs to add Xalatine to the list of grrrlz as ninja...

I considered that pic Ojike, but his hair was covered so there was no real way for me to draw him...

Also, about half of our poeple have the same hairstyle, and the only differences would be hair color lol...

edit: Xatsuin is behind his 2 mentors...

He's like, "Jynx and Zhymarx don't interact a lot. :[" haha

AS A NINJA, EH? =D
You do know that she's going to be kinda revealing as a ninja. You sure you want that?

lol I can understand that.

lol Mentors.

HAY AP, I SENT AN OLD PIC OF ZAXELDION TO YOU =D

[Angel's Prayer]

kk thankies KF..but hmm, rather than a Ninja, make her a scientist lol......

Also the death of Myromex:

In a mass battle between the good guys and bad guys, Zhymarx singles out Myromex and the 2 duel, but myromex just won't go down, and he than plans to put Zhymarx in a coma by reaching out to him, than Zhymarx does the unthinkable, and warps Rextanse in front of him to recieve the sapping of teh memories. Of course having 1500 years worth of memories (possibly even more) is too much for Myromex and he literally falls apart and explodes...(don't worry Rextanse is perfectly fine, but a little mad at Zhymarx for the abrupt intervention)

[yoyoj06]

ap, i was looking at the ruxel pic, and i realized that you hadnt drawn the other half of ruxels sword in his right hand(it should be showing through the other side). was that intentional? cause it looks like he has half a sword in his right hand

[Angel's Prayer]

Actually the straight line behind Ruxel's claok is the sword, the point is hidden by the claok.


More thoughts...

We should have other poeple junctioned to specific stars, and not just Zhymarx, I'm thinking...side character or possibly minor villain...

[yoyoj06]

im having trouble seeing it ap
i just feel like half a sword is missing lol

[Knightflare]

Originally Posted by Angel's Prayer

kk thankies KF..but hmm, rather than a Ninja, make her a scientist lol......

Also the death of Myromex:

In a mass battle between the good guys and bad guys, Zhymarx singles out Myromex and the 2 duel, but myromex just won't go down, and he than plans to put Zhymarx in a coma by reaching out to him, than Zhymarx does the unthinkable, and warps Rextanse in front of him to recieve the sapping of teh memories. Of course having 1500 years worth of memories (possibly even more) is too much for Myromex and he literally falls apart and explodes...(don't worry Rextanse is perfectly fine, but a little mad at Zhymarx for the abrupt intervention)

HA!
That's an awesome idea.
REAL awesome. xD

I don't know if Rextanse would be mad.
He'd prolly not know what just happened and be like.
"Hay. Zhymarx. Wasn't I just like, sipping some tea or something? Hm. Who was that guy that just tickled me anyway..?

WHEN DID SOMEONE FIGURE OUT I WAS TICKLISH!?

I thought you said you'd never tell Zhymarx. :[
I thought you said you'd NEVER TELLLLLLL :[[[[[[[[[[["

Or we could just go with him getting kinda mad.

Oh, 15000+ years. I made a slight typo xD It's 15000+ years.

Yes. Rextanse is in fact





Ticklish. VERY Ticklish. lol He's had a problem with it ever since he was a little kid.




The picture with all the ladies is ggoing to be like an Ecchi thing. If you don't want her to be kinda Ecchi looking, like how Jixah is going to be (She's a school girl, but she's not going to look so :>:>:>:>), then you can just tell me. c:

[Angel's Prayer]

You can just make Xalatine look like one of those really sexy and conveninetly intelligent scientists with a lab coat and the glasses you tend to see in B-rated monster movies lol

lol ticklish, But I'd rather not make that scene funny, I mean it is Zhymarx's vengeance for rendering Xalatine in a coma...

[Knightflare]

Originally Posted by Angel's Prayer

You can just make Xalatine look like one of those really sexy and conveninetly intelligent scientists with a lab coat and the glasses you tend to see in B-rated monster movies lol

lol ticklish, But I'd rather not make that scene funny, I mean it is Zhymarx's vengeance for rendering Xalatine in a coma...

Yeah I know what your getting at.
Pony tail or no pony tail?
A lot of the :> doctor's I see have those pony tails. :0

Yeah, but does Rextanse know that it'll happen?
Probably not. If he knows the situation quite well he'd act right and stuff.
But yeah, I guess it's a better idea to have him not so, "WTF JUST HAPPENED D:"

Lorixssa - Fairy
Xana - Princess
Kaarix - French Maid
Jixah - School Girl
Zhennista - Witch
Avraja - Pirate
Trishka - Cat
Kerari - Nurse
Cambodia - Elf
Banxina - Cowgirl
Meirta - Vampire
Xalatine - Scientist

[Mastermind]

Originally Posted by Knightflare

Yeah I know what your getting at.
Pony tail or no pony tail?
A lot of the :> doctor's I see have those pony tails. :0

Yeah, but does Rextanse know that it'll happen?
Probably not. If he knows the situation quite well he'd act right and stuff.
But yeah, I guess it's a better idea to have him not so, "WTF JUST HAPPENED D:"

Lorixssa - Fairy
Xana - Princess
Kaarix - French Maid
Jixah - School Girl
Zhennista - Witch
Avraja - Pirate
Trishka - Cat
Kerari - Nurse
Cambodia - Elf
Banxina - Cowgirl
Meirta - Vampire

Xalatine - Scientist

You don't have a teacher on that list.... you always need a sexy teacher....with glasses.

[Knightflare]

Originally Posted by Mastermind

You don't have a teacher on that list.... you always need a sexy teacher....with glasses.

I don't know any other girl lol.
I don't feel like adding The Quinta Essentia girls cuz that's pretty much putting down Xana and Lorixssa twice. Haha.

I'm going to be using all Exiled Girls. lol
That means Tanaryx, DrChanax, Rixhiki, Sheleyxc, Myix...

GIMME THE GIRLZ AND THE IDEAZ

I'm thinking that Myix can be the lil Devil. lol

[dark_light13]

OMFG...... I just shit a brick... AP thanks so much for that pic of Sabi.. I am very impressed.. almost exactly how I wanted him.

Glad everyone seemed to enjoy my story :D. Chapter 2 will be stalled sadly. For I am in Calgary for a week. But as soon as im back I plan on doing them. perhaps with a lil more help from you BM!

[NobodyImportant]

More colored pics! Daxic was a PITA though because I think AP didn't sharpen his pencils or whatever so the lines were really smudgy. >[

Zixan
Daxic

Ok, who's next? *eyes that picture of Sabixel* Nice!

Oh there you are, DL. What color is Sabixel's weapon/hair/whatever?