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    Lies and Cake
    By: Walt Whitman

    It's true our hearts are united as one,
    But for curiosities sake, let's tear them apart for fun.
    You see, I love you like a fat kid loves cake,
    But you're that one addiction that I just can't shake.

    Your eyes kill me like a knife to the back.
    My guard is always down, so go ahead and attack.
    I'm that one piece of evidence that you always can track,
    Just like Miami PD keeps tabs on the Cartel's crack.

    I swear, I won't believe your lies anymore,
    Instead, you'll land on the freaking floor.
    Wanna go out? There's the door.
    You're eyes have just became a big-ass bore.

    --

    Four Years is A Long Time
    By: Walt diddlying Dank Ass Whitman

    Four years is a long time,
    But you're my number one.
    You're the type of person I admire,
    And you're the type of person who can have fun.

    Four years is a long time,
    But if feels just like yesterday.
    We were chit-chatting about random stuff,
    But it meant the most to me.

    Four years is a long time,
    But I remember every bit of it.
    I remember the important stuff,
    And I remember you being cool with it.

    Four years seems like a long time,
    But it passed so quickly.
    Every hour that went by without you,
    My heart ached bad emotionally.

    Four years is still not enough,
    And I know you feel the same.
    Just like tomorrow is just another day,
    Father time is the one to blame.

    Our four years are up,
    But I promise you it's not going to end.
    If we have each other we'll know where we'll end up,
    And time will be ours and ours alone to mend.

    Four years might be a long time,
    But a day without you is an eternity.
    Hearts and all, I love you with my all,
    If either of us are to catch each other, then we will both fall.
    For each other hard.

    --



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    "haha it's so goddamn good"
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    "wow omg the symoblism ties together so nicely and i like the twists and turns"
    -ernest hemingway

    "my mom gave birth to the wrong boy, he shoulda gave birth to these poems"
    -ralp waldo emerson

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    An Eternal Heartache
    By: Walt "The Rogue Bludger" Whitman

    Is there really a forever?
    I think not cause I hate her.

    Is there really an eternity?
    If so, then her memory haunts me entirely.

    Forever
    Eternity
    I
    Think
    Not
    Heart Ache
    Definitely Fake
    Is love really forever?
    Possibly, but not for me.

    Does heartache last for an eternity?
    I like to believe it does.
    It's forever
    It's an eternity
    Heartache
    Endless.

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    Sin is My Existance
    By: Walt Whitman

    Sin is the reason I exist.
    My greed is amiss
    The lust in my heart.

    I give into my sloth
    So my wrath can rot
    Within my pride.

    I have eyes of envy
    That flows within me
    So that I can maintain my gluttony.

 

 

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