Pieces of Heart - Page 2

Angel Shards · 03/17/08, 03:51 AM

......finally! very long, but still read entirity

i heart it. good job!

Takushi Rena · 03/27/08, 07:46 AM

Ack, sorry that chapter was so long... *headdesk* I'm trying to work on shortening it, though! But, there was lots of action in it, right? <.<; That might be why...

; Anywho, thankies for the comment, AS! :] *gives cookie*

Bizness... THANK YOU for posting that! I really, really, really appreciate that, 'specially since it's a review! And, that part reminds you of Agrabah? ...SHWEET.

It does seem like eet!

Mmkay, the next chapter'll be up as soon as possible. It may not be this week, though, but I'll try to get it up as soon as I can. I also have a beta for the story now, so I might let them look over that chapter before I posted it up. And 8 is almost done, 9 is one I'm planning, and I'm REALLY getting bored with this fic, so I might actually have to work on my other story for a bit. I'm gonna try really hard to get to chapter 13 before I do that, though, so we'll see.

Lectori Salutem · 03/28/08, 04:36 PM

Very good chapter!!! A little long, but I don't mind!

**Ban Mido** · 06/08/08, 06:12 AM

Definate progress in the later chapters. But I think the tips I gave my PM's a while ago still aplies. You'll only keep getting better.

Next time though, please give the link to a open, active thread.

03/17/08, 03:51 AM	#16
Angel Shards I would kill for you <3 Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Under your bed Age: 20 Posts: 1,851 Rep Power: 7	Re: Pieces of Heart ......finally! very long, but still read entirity i heart it. good job!

03/27/08, 07:46 AM	#17
Takushi Rena ガラスの中で眠れる記憶 Join Date: May 2004 Location: Playing Crisis Core! ZACK IS BETTER THAN CLOUD. >:[ Age: 8 Posts: 4,584 Rep Power: 12	Re: Pieces of Heart Ack, sorry that chapter was so long... headdesk I'm trying to work on shortening it, though! But, there was lots of action in it, right? <.<; That might be why... ; Anywho, thankies for the comment, AS! :] gives cookie Bizness... THANK YOU for posting that! I really, really, really appreciate that, 'specially since it's a review! And, that part reminds you of Agrabah? ...SHWEET. It does seem like eet! Mmkay, the next chapter'll be up as soon as possible. It may not be this week, though, but I'll try to get it up as soon as I can. I also have a beta for the story now, so I might let them look over that chapter before I posted it up. And 8 is almost done, 9 is one I'm planning, and I'm REALLY getting bored with this fic, so I might actually have to work on my other story for a bit. I'm gonna try really hard to get to chapter 13 before I do that, though, so we'll see.

03/28/08, 04:36 PM	#18
Lectori Salutem Organization Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Waiting for the snow to fall... Age: 16 Posts: 765 Rep Power: 2	Re: Pieces of Heart Very good chapter!!! A little long, but I don't mind!

06/08/08, 06:12 AM	#19
Ban Mido I Support President Elect Obama.* Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: *Don't Like it? Then SUCK IT!! Posts: 4,228 Rep Power: 12	Beta Reader Feedback: Piece of Heart Definate progress in the later chapters. But I think the tips I gave my PM's a while ago still aplies. You'll only keep getting better. Next time though, please give the link to a open, active thread.

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