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| I would kill for you <3 | ......finally! very long, but still read entirity ![]() i heart it. good job! |
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| ガラスの中で眠れる記憶 Join Date: May 2004 Location: Playing Crisis Core! ZACK IS BETTER THAN CLOUD. >:[ Age: 8
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Rep Power: 12 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() | Ack, sorry that chapter was so long... *headdesk* I'm trying to work on shortening it, though! But, there was lots of action in it, right? <.<; That might be why... ; Anywho, thankies for the comment, AS! :] *gives cookie*Bizness... THANK YOU for posting that! I really, really, really appreciate that, 'specially since it's a review! And, that part reminds you of Agrabah? ...SHWEET. It does seem like eet!Mmkay, the next chapter'll be up as soon as possible. It may not be this week, though, but I'll try to get it up as soon as I can. I also have a beta for the story now, so I might let them look over that chapter before I posted it up. And 8 is almost done, 9 is one I'm planning, and I'm REALLY getting bored with this fic, so I might actually have to work on my other story for a bit. I'm gonna try really hard to get to chapter 13 before I do that, though, so we'll see. |
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| Organization Member | Very good chapter!!! A little long, but I don't mind! |
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| I Support President Elect Obama.* | Definate progress in the later chapters. But I think the tips I gave my PM's a while ago still aplies. You'll only keep getting better. Next time though, please give the link to a open, active thread. |
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