The Ultimate KHInsider Fanfiction Index - Page 7

bizness86 · 04/03/08, 10:03 AM

[Shines One Year After: Act 1]
[21 chapters]
[03/18/08]

[complete!]

ACT 1.1, Beforehands

Chapter 21, Answer Keys to the Helplessness Test
The closer you get to the light, the greater the shadow becomes...It seems as if Heaven's Mercenary and the Heartless Lord have acquired a common interest in a weapon that supposely purges the world of Darkness.

I'll think of a overview summary in due time.

Partly to get back into the habit of writing this fic, and partly because I had planned to do B-Side stories anyways. I will now starting working on ACT 1's sub acts. These acts will actually serve as more filler for character development and subtle amusement, and will not be major significance to the focal story. Act 1 will have three sub acts (each should be fairly short in comparison to the main act, might I add)

I've now posted the first act of the 'ACT 1.1, Beforehands.' In which, we following Mercuito's perspective as he arrives in Traverse Town, before talking with Java in Act 1, Chapter 7. I attempted a slightly different style (mainly trying to focalize Mercuito's point-of-view as the main perspective), but ultimately, this turns out to be another dialogue-driven chapter. Slow and fun read.

Act 1.1, Beforehands will depict the story through Mercuito's perspective just before the Act 1, Chapter 3 proceeds.

Act 1.2, Afterwards will follow up and attempt to conclude activity in Traverse Town. Leon, Donald, and Zidane will share perspectives in this act.

Act 1.3, Zany, Hardy, Mad Tea Party will finally refrain from Traverse Town, and progress to...you can guess...Java will be taking his prominent role as 'the most focal character'. in this act which will actually correlate more with Act 2 (Almost the same timeframe, only events in Act 2 have much more relevance to the story), but seeing as the events is act 1.2 lead directly to this act, I figured that this act would be best seperated as filler, and not integrated with Act 2.

This is the sub act overview; in other words sub-act chapters will be posted at a much slower pace...

Mercuito, and Mickey, and "Java's all for the Queen",
These are a few of my favourite things,
bizness86

Takushi Rena · 04/04/08, 03:43 AM

[AND THE SPIRITS WAKE]
[1 chapter (now being rewritten)]
[4/02/2008]
[http://forums.khinsider.com/fan-fict...its-wake.html]

Chapter 001 [ I ]
What do strange dreams and disappearances have to do with New York City? Everything, apparently.

ATSW has no specific schedule, except that you'll expect chapters when I'm bored with writing Pieces of Heart. ...Like I am now.

; Ahhhhhh I need to work on ittttt *headdesk* And, I appreciate any and all criticism or feedback. The more I can improve the story, the better!

Pieces of Heart'll be updated soon! ...I need to read something new, too... >.> *skips off to find something*

bizness86 · 04/04/08, 06:18 AM

[Shines One Year After: Act 1]
[22 chapters]
[03/18/08]

[complete!]

ACT 1.1, Beforehands

Chapter 22, In Between Charters
Continuing Mercuito's visit...and the entire Goods Shop Crew.

bizness86 · 04/04/08, 11:29 PM

[bizness86]
[Shines One Year After: Act 2]
[04/03/08]
[1 chapter]
[04/04/08]
[http://forums.khinsider.com/fan-fict...r-act-2-a.html]

Quote:

Originally Posted by bizness86

I can't believe that I've started a second act! After all the grief the first put me through...

Maybe I'm partially excited to once again start this story...just maybe...but I'll need to find the time, because I'm a busy man with a busy list of busy thing to do.

This act is called Potential Made Real; Journey Under Way. The name should give hints of what to expect compared to the last act. Chapter 1 of Act 2 introduces a focal character in the Disney and Kingdom Hearts universe, and is properly named Magnificent and Malevolent as tribute.

It seems as if someone is stirring trouble again. Wanna find out who? Then...be our guest...
be our guest...put our magic to ze test...

Also, small edits in Jiminy's Journal...things to come...

Elorah · 04/05/08, 12:34 PM

[Elorah]
[Good Day, Mary-Sue] - Abbrieviated possibly to GDMS
[Feb 17, 2008]
[Prologue and 9 Chapters] - Still in progress
[Apr 4, 2008]
[*link*]

Merlin326 · 04/07/08, 05:39 AM

[Kingdom Hearts Destati]
[55 chapters]
[4/6/08]

with all due respect,
Merlin326

Cicero · 04/07/08, 05:55 AM

I started a Fanfic... you may take a look at it. It's called: 'For I have power.'

Edit: Link: http://forums.khinsider.com/fan-fict...ave-power.html

Edit 2:

[Thomas (Grimmjow Jaggerjack)]
[For I have power.]
[d: 6 / m: 4 / y: '08]
[Busy with second chapter.]
[d: 6 / m: 4 / Y: '08]
[For I have power.]

**madammina** · 04/07/08, 06:32 AM

New Fanfic, Not KH but looking for constructive criticisms. I first wrote this about 2 years ago, so stuff will be posted when I rewrite. I have a prologue and first chapter up.

http://forums.khinsider.com/fan-fict...timefixer.html

**T-M** · 04/07/08, 06:43 AM

[TwilightMan]
[Power Rangers: Engine Squadron]
[02-14-2008]
[18 Chapters]
[04-06-2008]
[http://forums.khinsider.com/fan-fict...-squadron.html]

I need more criticism, comments, opinions.

Dantés de Divinity · 04/10/08, 11:27 PM

[Dantez of Divinity]
[Broken Chain of Memories (Kingdom Hearts Infinities 2)]
[04-06-2008, 10:35 PM]
[http://forums.khinsider.com/fan-fict...s-2-a-10.html]

Merlin326 · 04/14/08, 04:39 AM

[Kingdom Hearts Destati]
[56 chapters]
[4/13/08]

the fourth member of the "trench coat brigade" is introduced, and even more secretive plans are set...

with all due respect,
Merlin326

Jet · 04/15/08, 05:00 AM

[mike2014]
[Kingdom Hearts:Warriors of the City]
[4/14/08]
[Prologue added]
[4/14/08]
[http://forums.khinsider.com/fan-fict...ors-city.html]

**madammina** · 04/15/08, 06:23 AM

[madammina]
[timefixer]
[4/14/08]
[chapter 6]
http://forums.khinsider.com/fan-fict...ml#post2890499

We learn more about Ren, and what does James have in store for Kaiba?

**Ban Mido** · 04/16/08, 01:25 AM

Beginning of Destiny
All-Star Gamer
04/15/08
23 Chapters
http://forums.khinsider.com/fan-fict...estiny-32.html

Comments:
A pirate left for dead returns, desiring only one thing: His ship and the life of the man who stole it. But is that desire strong enough to bet something that's just a little more than he could afford?

Merlin326 · 04/18/08, 08:47 PM

[Kingdom Hearts Destati]
[57 chapters]
[4/18/08]

get smart ends, but the mysteries have yet to be solved...

with all due respect,
Merlin326

04/03/08, 10:03 AM	#91
bizness86 Sidekick Join Date: Feb 2008 Age: 22 Posts: 298 Rep Power: 1	Re: The Ultimate KHInsider Fanfiction Index [Shines One Year After: Act 1] [21 chapters] [03/18/08] [complete!] ACT 1.1, Beforehands Chapter 21, Answer Keys to the Helplessness Test The closer you get to the light, the greater the shadow becomes...It seems as if Heaven's Mercenary and the Heartless Lord have acquired a common interest in a weapon that supposely purges the world of Darkness. I'll think of a overview summary in due time. Partly to get back into the habit of writing this fic, and partly because I had planned to do B-Side stories anyways. I will now starting working on ACT 1's sub acts. These acts will actually serve as more filler for character development and subtle amusement, and will not be major significance to the focal story. Act 1 will have three sub acts (each should be fairly short in comparison to the main act, might I add) I've now posted the first act of the 'ACT 1.1, Beforehands.' In which, we following Mercuito's perspective as he arrives in Traverse Town, before talking with Java in Act 1, Chapter 7. I attempted a slightly different style (mainly trying to focalize Mercuito's point-of-view as the main perspective), but ultimately, this turns out to be another dialogue-driven chapter. Slow and fun read. Act 1.1, Beforehands will depict the story through Mercuito's perspective just before the Act 1, Chapter 3 proceeds. Act 1.2, Afterwards will follow up and attempt to conclude activity in Traverse Town. Leon, Donald, and Zidane will share perspectives in this act. Act 1.3, Zany, Hardy, Mad Tea Party will finally refrain from Traverse Town, and progress to...you can guess...Java will be taking his prominent role as 'the most focal character'. in this act which will actually correlate more with Act 2 (Almost the same timeframe, only events in Act 2 have much more relevance to the story), but seeing as the events is act 1.2 lead directly to this act, I figured that this act would be best seperated as filler, and not integrated with Act 2. This is the sub act overview; in other words sub-act chapters will be posted at a much slower pace... Mercuito, and Mickey, and "Java's all for the Queen", These are a few of my favourite things, bizness86

04/04/08, 03:43 AM	#92
Takushi Rena ガラスの中で眠れる記憶 Join Date: May 2004 Location: Playing Crisis Core! ZACK IS BETTER THAN CLOUD. >:[ Age: 8 Posts: 4,585 Rep Power: 12	Re: The Ultimate KHInsider Fanfiction Index [AND THE SPIRITS WAKE] [1 chapter (now being rewritten)] [4/02/2008] [http://forums.khinsider.com/fan-fict...its-wake.html] Chapter 001 [ I ] What do strange dreams and disappearances have to do with New York City? Everything, apparently. ATSW has no specific schedule, except that you'll expect chapters when I'm bored with writing Pieces of Heart. ...Like I am now. ; Ahhhhhh I need to work on ittttt headdesk And, I appreciate any and all criticism or feedback. The more I can improve the story, the better! Pieces of Heart'll be updated soon! ...I need to read something new, too... >.> skips off to find something

04/04/08, 06:18 AM	#93
bizness86 Sidekick Join Date: Feb 2008 Age: 22 Posts: 298 Rep Power: 1	Re: The Ultimate KHInsider Fanfiction Index [Shines One Year After: Act 1] [22 chapters] [03/18/08] [complete!] ACT 1.1, Beforehands Chapter 22, In Between Charters Continuing Mercuito's visit...and the entire Goods Shop Crew. Last edited by bizness86; 04/04/08 at 11:29 PM.

04/05/08, 12:34 PM	#95
Elorah Organization Member Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Hunting down fictional characters... Net at the ready Age: 15 Posts: 752 Rep Power: 3	Re: The Ultimate KHInsider Fanfiction Index [Elorah] [Good Day, Mary-Sue] - Abbrieviated possibly to GDMS [Feb 17, 2008] [Prologue and 9 Chapters] - Still in progress [Apr 4, 2008] [link]

04/07/08, 05:39 AM	#96
Merlin326 Enigmatic Soldier Join Date: May 2007 Location: In the Twiligt Zone Age: 17 Posts: 886 Rep Power: 2	Re: The Ultimate KHInsider Fanfiction Index [Kingdom Hearts Destati] [55 chapters] [4/6/08] with all due respect, Merlin326

04/07/08, 05:55 AM	#97
Cicero Consul Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: provoking people into discussions. Age: 18 Posts: 1,710 Rep Power: 7	Re: The Ultimate KHInsider Fanfiction Index I started a Fanfic... you may take a look at it. It's called: 'For I have power.' Edit: Link: http://forums.khinsider.com/fan-fict...ave-power.html Edit 2: [Thomas (Grimmjow Jaggerjack)] [For I have power.] [d: 6 / m: 4 / y: '08] [Busy with second chapter.] [d: 6 / m: 4 / Y: '08] [For I have power.] Last edited by Cicero; 04/15/08 at 05:02 AM.

04/07/08, 06:32 AM	#98
madammina I wanted to see you Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: in the mansion, drawing my old home and waiting for him... Posts: 3,844 Rep Power: 9	Re: The Ultimate KHInsider Fanfiction Index New Fanfic, Not KH but looking for constructive criticisms. I first wrote this about 2 years ago, so stuff will be posted when I rewrite. I have a prologue and first chapter up. http://forums.khinsider.com/fan-fict...timefixer.html

04/07/08, 06:43 AM	#99
T-M It's Morphin' Time Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Chicago, Illinois Age: 15 Posts: 4,480 Rep Power: 13	Re: The Ultimate KHInsider Fanfiction Index [TwilightMan] [Power Rangers: Engine Squadron] [02-14-2008] [18 Chapters] [04-06-2008] [http://forums.khinsider.com/fan-fict...-squadron.html] I need more criticism, comments, opinions.

04/10/08, 11:27 PM	#100
Dantés de Divinity Devoted affection Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: On a hill in a white dress waiting for my dearest to arive Posts: 1,967 Rep Power: 4	Re: The Ultimate KHInsider Fanfiction Index [Dantez of Divinity] [Broken Chain of Memories (Kingdom Hearts Infinities 2)] [04-06-2008, 10:35 PM] [http://forums.khinsider.com/fan-fict...s-2-a-10.html]

04/14/08, 04:39 AM	#101
Merlin326 Enigmatic Soldier Join Date: May 2007 Location: In the Twiligt Zone Age: 17 Posts: 886 Rep Power: 2	Re: The Ultimate KHInsider Fanfiction Index [Kingdom Hearts Destati] [56 chapters] [4/13/08] the fourth member of the "trench coat brigade" is introduced, and even more secretive plans are set... with all due respect, Merlin326

04/15/08, 05:00 AM	#102
Jet lol sup? Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 1,895 Rep Power: 7	Re: The Ultimate KHInsider Fanfiction Index [mike2014] [Kingdom Hearts:Warriors of the City] [4/14/08] [Prologue added] [4/14/08] [http://forums.khinsider.com/fan-fict...ors-city.html]

04/15/08, 06:23 AM	#103
madammina I wanted to see you Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: in the mansion, drawing my old home and waiting for him... Posts: 3,844 Rep Power: 9	Re: The Ultimate KHInsider Fanfiction Index [madammina] [timefixer] [4/14/08] [chapter 6] http://forums.khinsider.com/fan-fict...ml#post2890499 We learn more about Ren, and what does James have in store for Kaiba?

04/16/08, 01:25 AM	#104
Ban Mido I Support President Elect Obama.* Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: *Don't Like it? Then SUCK IT!! Posts: 4,229 Rep Power: 12	Re: The Ultimate KHInsider Fanfiction Index Beginning of Destiny All-Star Gamer 04/15/08 23 Chapters http://forums.khinsider.com/fan-fict...estiny-32.html Comments: A pirate left for dead returns, desiring only one thing: His ship and the life of the man who stole it. But is that desire strong enough to bet something that's just a little more than he could afford?

04/18/08, 08:47 PM	#105
Merlin326 Enigmatic Soldier Join Date: May 2007 Location: In the Twiligt Zone Age: 17 Posts: 886 Rep Power: 2	Re: The Ultimate KHInsider Fanfiction Index [Kingdom Hearts Destati] [57 chapters] [4/18/08] get smart ends, but the mysteries have yet to be solved... with all due respect, Merlin326

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