Hey everybody, I wrote a song(s) =D

[Daniel Faraday]

Uhhh, of my numerous brainchildren, these two are probably the ones I'm most proud of. Both, with their current guitar parts, sound a lot like a hideous Pixies/Green Day love child, just for reference.

First one's called Whipped, written about a friend who was in a fairly unbalanced relationship a while ago.


I always had so much to doubt but
I’ve got nothing left to think about
My ring finger is going numb
It needs some room to breathe

I’m whipped
I’m whipped
Whipped
Wrapped up in leather
And tied up in my room
And she floats light as a feather
I’m just whipped

Please miss could you remove
These handcuffs so that I can move
My hands away from this radiator
This just isn’t for me

I’m whipped
I’m whipped
Whipped
Wrapped up in leather
And tied up in my room
Please bring me some food
I’m just whipped
Whipped
Whipped
Whipped
Whipped

Second one's called Going Up. It's prominently about the drug abuse of a family member :\

I’ve been overdosing
I like where this is going
I’ve been having the time of my life
I’m staying off the knife

Gimme one more shot
Maybe then you’ll be hot
Gimme one more hit
I need to forget all this shit

Cause I’m going to heaven
Going strait to heaven
I’m going to heaven
Going strait to-

I’ve been overdosing
I don’t really like knowing
I’ve been having the time of my life
Where’d you put that knife?

Gimme one more shot
I need all you’ve got
Gimme one more hit
Oh god, I just don’t fit

Cause I’m going to heaven
Going strait to heaven
I’m going to heaven
Going strait to heaven
I’m gonna go to heaven
I’ll tell you how it went

Thoughts?

~Dorian Gray

[Nojerom]

Nice, Dorian. I think I liked the second one better. ^^

[weewee]

i make songs too! lol.....

[Hybrid~Fusion]

Wow.Amazing.I'd like to listen them.

[Guile]

Now you know we're going to force you onto vent to sing them, right?