Twilight's Destiny.

[Bumblebee]

Youre really going well with this! Keep up the good work!

[Lone Ninja]

Short. Sweet. And to the point.

It was funny, in a way, but I liked it.

You really have gotten much, much better. Let me know when chapter 15 comes out. I want to read it.

[Hybrid~Fusion]

I'm back! Many people must be asking by now "Where were you?" or "What were you doing?". I'm sorry, but I had lots of personal problems. Still, I hope some of my friends still miss me. Well, since this is my fic, I couldn't leave before posting chapter 15. It's a short, but a sweet one.

Chapter 15: Release the Heartless! (Part 1)

At the town square, panic was the only clear thing you could see. The inhabitants of Halloween Town ran into their houses, scared by the heartless. That was a sad and funny scene, because who'd say that one day those guys would be scared by something. Sora wouldn't even believe on his own eyes.

"Jack, what is happening here? Why are these guys so scared?" Said Sora, that when entered in one world after another, things looked like were just scrambled and not as it should be like.

"We, scared? We are the ones who scare!" Said jack, seeming to be calm in such a situation like that one.

"Are you feeling…okay?" Said Sora, that couldn't understand Jack's position in relation to what was happening.

While this was happening, in a distant place in the same world, a dark cellar contained a prisoner. And it seemed that a woman was "taking care" of him.

And the woman said: "Don't worry. You're just the bait. Until they find you, IF they can find you, you don't have to worry. At least, for now…"

Back to the town, the battle was extremely fierce. Keyblades in hand, a staff and a shield, a strange weapon, and a Jack that wouldn't move. He looked like a statue. And it seemed that the heartless wouldn't attack him.

After all the heartless were destroyed, their hearts went to Jack. It wasn't really Jack Skellington. It was a heartless!

"What the-?" Said Sora. "Jack! Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!"

Then, time froze everything around Sora. Everyone, except for him, was standing and no one would move. Then, a mysterious voice reached his ears, and it said. "The Jack that you seek is not here. He is distant, in another place in this world."

As the voice stopped to reach his ears, time runned again. Now, they had to finish off that false jack and find the real one. And now, trouble was awaiting them.
(Continue…)

[Bumblebee]

Hmm, you still has me intruiged for the next part!