Twilight's Destiny.

[Hybrid~Fusion]

Oh, almost forgot, Chapter 4's coming after Sunday.

[blendedhearts]

it's still way too random for me. but still, i'll see what i can do about staying with it.

[Hybrid~Fusion]

C'mon, I'm needing more comments

[Hybrid~Fusion]

Chapter 4: The remembrance - Part 1

So, as Sora left the spot, he went to the sandlot. Seifer and the struggle promoter were there. Then, as Seifer saw them, he just went to the Market Street. Then, the struggle promoter went to Sora.

"You're Sora, right?" - Asked the man, as fat as always, with a happy face.

"Yes, sir." - Said Sora, wondering why the promoter would call him.

"Well, after you defeated Seifer, I could not help it but start another struggle tournament. It will start in three weeks. What do you say? Want to sign up?" - asked the man, wanting a good answer.

"Okay. I'm in. But if you can excuse me, I need to go to the Market Street." - Said Sora, running off again.

Then, Sora went into Market Street. There, he and his friends started to ask people if they knew something. Later, than…

"You guys got anything?" - Said Sora, that didn't get any positive answer.

"Nope. No one that I asked knew something." - Said Kairi, that didn't want to make Sora more stressed.

"Sorry. No one knew." - Said the calm Riku

"Well, I didn't get anything too."- Said Ale, as sad as Sora, since now they could not get any way to know the Station of Serenity.

"Hey, guys, what's up?" - Said a familiar voice.

"Your majesty!" - Said Sora, glad to see the King once more. "What are you doing here?"

"Oh, I was just passing by, Sora… So, what are you guys doing here?" - Asked King Mickey, surprised to see his friends once again.

"Your majesty, we're trying to find a place, called the Station of Serenity. Do you know where that is?" - Asked Sora, thinking that the King might know something.

"Sora…I heard of that once…If Ansem the wise was here, he could have known of that…" - Said Mickey, turning his happy expression into a sad one.

"I'm sorry. But you can't just stay here thinking about that. But, now that you've mentioned Ansem… What happened to the Mansion?" - Said Sora, trying to make the King feel better about what happened.

"Oh… Sorry, but I could not help listening you talking about the mansion. Word says that here is now a haunted place. Or it has some strange creatures. I don't know what's real. Why don't you go there?"- Said a boy who was next to them. He appeared to have fourteen years, and he had blue hair, using a red t-shirt, a yellow short and black sandals.
"You seem that you can take care of yourself."

"Uh… thanks…" - Said Sora, wanting to know the boy's name.

"I'm… I'm Jack. So, if you're going there, could you take me there? I have some… 'Business' there." - Said Jack.

"Okay, come with us. But could you tell us what business you have there?" - Asked Sora.

"I could ask you the same." - Said the boy.

"Okay, I don't know who you are, Jack, but you're in good hands. Right, Riku?" - And Riku and Ale looked themselves with surprise.

Then, they made their way to the mansion. Just after they went through the woods, a surprise awaited them.

"What? Not them again!" - Said Sora, looking at the Mansion's doors.

"But, didn't we destroy them all?" - Said Riku, as surprised as his friends.

"Yes. They should not be here…" - Said the King.

A Shadow was standing in front of the door, and, along with him, a cloaked figure. Then, the guy summoned more shadows and vanished in a corridor of darkness. So, Sora, Riku and Mickey summoned their keybades and started to fight.

"Don't worry; I'll protect Kairi and Jack!" - said Ale, determined in helping them in any way. But then, two uniquely shaped weapons appeared in Ale's hands. As he got them, he looked surprised. "Okay! Now it is time to fight!" - And then, he went to help his friends in battle. So he remembered that once he had those weapons, and he used it in some way that all those enemies that were surrounding him disappear. So, he went in the middle of the shadows, and did what he once done before: he spinned his weapons around him and destroyed all the heartless in his surroundings.

"Wow! How did you do this?" - Asked Sora, surprised with what he just saw.

"I dunno. Maybe I already knew how to do it, but I only remembered how to do it now." - Said the more surprised Ale.

So, they headed into the Mansion. As they entered in the room, a voice said

"It's been a while, my friend."


Author's notes: Okay, I said that I'd be posting it on Sunday, but I could not wait for that. So, here it is.
P.S.: The Struggle Part wil lead to the sub-chapter part, that will work like a filler. Coming after the end of this Fic.
P.S.S.o Jack remember you guys of someone? (For those who have played FFXII, it will be easier to know.)

[Nelo Angelo]

hey not bad at all.
you've definetly improved. great job. sorry for lateness.

[Hybrid~Fusion]

You don't need to be sorry. Besides, Chapter 5's coming tomorrow or Wednesday.

[Hybrid~Fusion]

Chapter 5: Remembrance - Part 2

"Impossible. Is it…is it you?" - Asked Mickey, looking at the mysterious figure.

"Yes. It is me, my friend." - And then the figure revealed itself - it was Ansem the wise.

"Ansem? But… Didn't we see you disappear in the world that never was?" - Said Sora, surprised in seeing Ansem there, standing next to them.

"Yes. But after I disappeared, I ended up once more in the realm of nothingness. So, I tried to find a way out of that place. But, I did not find any way out. So, the fool that stands in the front of you accepted darkness once more to get out of that place. But, doing it, I did not realize that I was doing the wrong thing. It would be better for me if I stood there. Now, the Nobodies are back. And with them, the heartless. And the fault is only mine. Now, there is a new Xemnas. Stronger than the one you fought some time ago."
- Said Ansem, which was feeling that he should not be there. His eyes were turned to the other side, almost closed, with a sad expression.

"Ansem, you don't need to worry. I know that sometimes we make mistakes, but ya shouldn't be like that. We'll take care of that." - Said Mickey, trying to make Ansem feel better. "You didn't know that that was going to happen. And I'm glad you're here. We need you. So your comeback wasn't in vain."

"My friend, you always try to find a way to make others feel better. You are wiser than me. I am just a fool. I only sought my research, and things could be worse now if you didn't have come to me." - Said Ansem, with a better look. "But, you said you needed my help?"

"Actually, Sora is the one who needs your help. Go on, Sora, ask him." - Said Mickey, giving a signal for Sora makes his question.

"Ansem, I need to know if you know anything about a place called 'Station of Serenity'"
- Said Sora, who was glad to see someone that could know of something.

"In fact, I do know." - And, when Sora heard those words, he looked like more relaxed and happy. "Each person in the Organization has it's own grave in a place called 'Proof of Existence' Then, Each place is named an placed as the liking of the member. Roxas chose that place. But why do you want to know about it?" - Said Ansem, looking in Sora's eyes, trying to find out what the boy really wanted.

"It's because I had some strange dreams lately. And, Roxas was on them. He mentioned something about this place. So that's why we came to you." - Said Sora, explaining everything bit by bit. "So, is there a way to get there?"

"I'm afraid not. When you defeated Xemnas for the last time, the entire world that never was destroyed. Sorry, but there is no way to reach that place."- Said Ansem, sad because he couldn't help the keyblade master. "Only if your dreams could create it. And even if your dreams could re-create that place, what would we do next?"

"Okay. Hey, where is Jack? Wasn't he with us just now?" - asked Sora, wondering where could the boy have gone.

"That is no 'Jack'. It is my son, Ken. Sorry, but he likes to trick people when they mention the mansion and my name as well. Sorry for his behavior." - Said Ansem the wise. All of the others were shocked. How could Ansem have a child and even the King didn't even know about it? "But, I think that there is another way. We will have to go to the Radiant Garden. Maybe we can restore my laboratory and see what we can do. Until then, Sora you must defeat the new Xemnas. " - And then, they left the mansion, going towards Radiant Garden

Author's notes: Well, this one is shorter because is the last part of the "Rememberance.".
P.S. - I forgot that I would be going to travel tomorrow, so that's why I posted I today. So, no updates until next Thursday.

[Ban Mido]

Major improvement. Good work.:thumbup:

[Bumblebee]

Definately improved heaps from the start! keep it up!

[Zanarkand Lover]

I just read the first chapter. It was good, but it needs work. It should be in paragraph format, explain everything to it's best potential. Also, try to even out the text. Meaning, keep it to the point and have only what you need in there.

Take a look at the fic in my sig, you'll know what I'm talking about.

Over all, it was pretty good though, I like it.

Edit: I just saw the 5th chapter. It's in paragraph! I didn't read it yet, but thats an improvement already!

[Zanarkand Lover]

Just finished reading the re-write of the first chapter. GREAT improvement. Hope it keeps getting better.

[Haku]

You're definitely improving alot with each new chapters.

[Hybrid~Fusion]

yay! now people like my fic! Chapter 6 in the end of the week.

[Bumblebee]

I think people always did like it, it was just that it needed improvement.. Great work!

[Haku]

Precisely, I always knew that it had potential it just needed alot of work and effort put into it and now its paying off xD.