Sam's attempt at Poetry

[Samber]

Well i've decided to try poetry, i'll post the first two i've written today:

When I first saw you

When I first saw you
All I saw was sadness
All I saw was anger

When I frirst saw you
We seemed so different
Yet we turned out to be so similar

When I first saw you
I thought you seemed strange
Though when I met you, you seemed to change

You changed in a good way
Or maybe you were always this way
You call yourself an asshole
Though I've yet to see this side

I've only known you for a few months
But it seems like forever
We became such good friends
And I want to be friends for a long time

Though I never thought i'd feel this way
Especially about you
But the feelings are true
I can't stop thinking about you
That's happened with so few

But I don't want to ruin what we have
And even though that makes me sad
I know i'll always have you there




Don't Change

Where have you gone?
You are no longer there
It's just not fair

We are the best of friends
We are cousins
We are sisters... Almost
but first and foremost
We know eachother like the back of our hand

But now you're gone
It's far away
An ocean separates us
I can't wait until the day you return

But meanwhile I live in fear
The fear you will seem strange
Like I don't know you
Like you'll be different
And that even though we sit next to each other
It'll be like we're worlds away
And I just wanted to say

Don't change
I'll be here waiting
Waiting for your return
And until then
I'll be missing you.

[Haku]

Wow there sure has been alot of poetry threads showing up lately, not like that's a bad thing but I enjoyed both of them. They both seem to have something to do with relationships.

[Samber]

Yeah, I think all the poetry threads are inspiring one another. lol

One is about my cousin, and the other is about my friend.

[Blue]

These are really good,I enjoyed both of them =)

I especially love the last part of 'When I first saw you'.Great work!

[Thor.]

SExy stuff Samber. . . .

Sexy stuff. . . . .. .

[Samber]

I don't think this one is as good as my others, but whatever.

Whatever the day brings

When the alarm sounds in the morning
You find yourself still snoring
You don't know what the day will bring,
But you still get up,
Though unwilling
You do what you must do

Once on the bus,
Sleep you must
But you look out the window
You see the sky filled with pale blue and pink
The trees blackened from the lack of light
Or maybe it's just your sight

You get to school and see your friends
You're then glad you got up
So you can say "Wassup?"
You all joke around
Then your soul is found
Happiness fills your entity

You smile and know whatever the day brings
Your friends will be there,
You know they care
And its friendship you all share

And once the day ends
You can't wait for the next
Whatever that day brings

[Haku]

Lol the typical day for those who go to school.

[Samber]

Here's more

Why?

Why do I always think of you?
Everything I do reminds me of you
But we're just friends
Or supposed to be

I'm not sure why I feel this way
But its you I think of everyday
I don't want to feel this way
Because I know you don't feel the same
But everyday I see you,
I need you more

I can't help it
I keep wishing you feel the same
Even though I feel so much
I never let it show
Because of her
I can see she cares
And that you do too
And when I see it, I feel like a fool
For wanting you so badly

But I'd rather have you as a friend
Than not have you at all
Because that's how much I care

[Haku]

Was that the full poem or just part of it?

[Samber]

I accidentally posted before it was finished

[Candy Man]

I thought I already posted here........................... no?

to hell with it. Awesome poems!!!!!!!

[Blue]

Nice poems,I liked 'Whatever the day brings' a lot.

[Samber]

Thanks guys! ^_^ Here's more:

You make me better


Before I met you
I didn't know what to do
I didn't know who I was
I didn't know my talents
Or my weaknesses

But once I met you
I found my soul
I laughed
I smiled
You made me feel like a child

You've made me a better person
I try to help others
I try to be kind
I've found so many things, I thought I'd never find

Like true friendship
Like true happiness
Like true love

The things you find in a story
I always want to be with you
I always want the feelings to be true
Because you've made me better
Better forever

Hopefully I had the same effect on you
And well, this is my queue
To say how much I love you

[Blue]

Beautiful...simply awesome poem.

I loved it.Some lines were my thoughts exactly.

Great job!

[Samber]

Thank you, I'm glad you like them. I'm pretty new at poetry, in fact the ones in this thread have been my first, so its nice to see that people like them. ^_^