Final Haven

[Eternal Redemption]

A few years back I dreamt of becoming a video game designer but not any more.Well here is a story I worked on at the time.I know its stupid and I couldnt really come up with good character names like Square Enix does anyway here it is.If you think that I copied off of some thing please state so P.S all characters are fictional and original this FanFic has nothing to do with Kingdom Hearts but if you like the FF series interesting read this


: Prolouge:
Billions of years ago before the universe even existed there was a war not between humans but the almighty dragons of the elements no one really knows why the battle happened because according to legend the dragons lived in peace and harmony for millions of years.The battle was between the Imperial Dragon,who was the leader of the Dragons and the The Dragon of Darkness.The Dragons of Fire,Ice and Thunder joined The Dragon of Darkness.While the Dragons of Earth Air and Water joined the Imperial Dragon.The Imperial Dragin and the Dragons that had joined him were peace loving and didnt want war, on the other hand the versus loved war and were brutal.The war took place for centeries and in the end The Imperial Dragon sacrificed his body ending the war and creating an explosion that sealed the Dragons in an orb which later became earth.The soul of The Imperial Dragon was lost wandering in the universe.No one knew where it was untill now................................



:Chapter 1:
Orey was a lonely boy with blond hair and eyes that glowed like light, in his late teens that never knew family,no one in his village really knew of his parents and he was living alone in the little house his parents left him before they died.One day he was siting on his favorite part of his village.The hill that had one lonely tree on its top.He was lost in thought when suddenly Old Miss.Aka came and told him he had visitors.Miss.Aka was a nice old lady that lived next door to Orey.Orey considered her the closet to him no one else in the village ever really liked him but she had taken a liking for the boy and even offered him to stay with him but he did not accept.She had trouble making a living for her self so he didnt want to give her any trouble.Orey walked down the hill with Miss.Aka thinking why she was so kind to him maybe it had to do with the fact that she had no family her self.....When they reached Oreys house Orey took out the key and opened the door.There was a man with jet black hair with the yellowest eyes you would have ever seen as if thunder had been captured in them.........wearing dark black clothes with a maroon cape sitting on the couch as easily as if it were his own house.He spoke in a cool smooth voice"Orey,a pleasure to meet you.The names Dion.I know this is akward but we need your help the fait of man kind rests on your shoulders..............."

:Chapter 2:
All Orey could do was look at Dion one thing crossed his mind and he started to laugh."What you think you can fool me this is a joke isnt it Im just a boy.Look Im tired of stupid jokes and I am not the type that fall for them.So just leave me alone."
"What you think this is a joke?!HA you think that I need a joke to make you laugh?I do not like to joke they make me angry always did and dont make me angry you wont like me angry just one of the two spirits I hold within me is enough to destroy this little village before the blink of the eye"Dion replyed.
"Just tell me what you want and leave me alone" though Orey was starting to think the guy was not joking he still doubted it.
"We need your help come with me thats all I ask for"was the reply Orey got.
"What do you mean by we,there is only one of you?"'
"Look, come with me youll understand."

Looking at the sword that was hanging in its seath on the waist of Dion who was now standing Orey said "Looking at your outfit and sword I think you are a man who loves fighting."
"No I do not love fighting it is my job and as well as will become yours"
"I have never weilded a sword before I can not help you"
"Its in your blood it will come to you as fast as lightning urgh why do I say that word?"
"What do you mean in my blood and why are you afraid of saying lightning?"
"Youll find out soon enough all you need to do is ........"

All of a sudden rumbling could be heard and an earth quake shook the ground and then it stopped "What was that"Orey asked "Freinds" Dion said though he looked quite worried.He pulled out a Sword from within his cape and handed it to Orey and said"Take this use it to protect yourself and no questions" he added when he saw Oreys mouth move.Dion opened the door a bursting light came within his house they ran outside to face the unknown.


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Authors note :the first chapter is a bit short and boring but I think that the Prolouge makes up for the chapter post your ideas is it good or is it dry and boring the begining few chapters are boring please wait for later ones for action this is my first fanfic so im working on my authoring skills

[Eternal Redemption]

Hey will any one reply should I continue or not if you dont like it dont critisize me much this is my first fan fic

[nojerom_14]

alright i haven't read it yet.. no worries i'll find the time to. but make the chapters a little longer, dude.