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'A Stolen December'


Sacrifice yourself
You cried into the night
Your voice filled with fright
Were you all alone?
Or was I there?

I don't recall
I can't remember
All I know is this:
It's been a lonely December

So come back to me
No matter where you are
You can find your stolen heart
It'll be alright
In this long and lonely night

Hate is all that's left for me
Running to you I know
You lay lifeless in the snow
Was it quick and painless?
Or were you stuck waiting for me?

I don't recall
I can't remember
All I know is
It's been a lonely December

So come back to me
No matter where you are
You can find your stolen heart
It'll be alright
In this long and lonely night

Stop right there
As if you can care
Your heart is cold as ice
COuld it be that you don't even know
Where it is
Or what it does
Is your heart doomed
To fade to dust?

I don't recall
I can't remember
All I know is this:
You've been my cold December

Don't you dare come back to me
I don't care where you are
You have lost your stolen heart
It will never be alright
It's been a long and lonely night.





So uh, yeah. Criticism, whatever.

[Electropop]

....Your a song Writer? o.0....Or is it a Poem? o.0...Or could it be both?

I like the lyrics but I need like music to actuall sell it to me. >:

[Dr. Freeman]

All poems are lyrics, and vice versa

As Time said, it can be taken as either.

Also

/bump

[Ninja Usagi]

It reminds me of My December by Linkin Park...The mood of the lyrics and the fact that it's december...

However, the lyrics are a bit less weird/bad/emo
I like it, DK.

[Rich]

I like it, but a bit too emo imo.

Yeah, I've been writing kind of odd lately.

Some of my songs turn out nice and cheerful, and others turn out emo like this.

I should have another one up tonight.

Forty-One views and like six comments?

Come on, guys.

[Dash27]

I too, thought of Linkin Park. However, without either one being emo.

[Electropop]

Time gets browine points for that. >:

[Darkness Princess]

This is really good. I can just picture the chords that would go with this if it were used as a song.
The actual lyrics are pretty emo and sad.
I like it.

DK, spreading misery throughout KHI.

I've honestly been in a little writer's block. Everything is just so damn emo.

[nojerom_14]

Originally Posted by Dawning Kensei

Everything is just so damn emo.

you got that right, dude. everyone's obsessed with it.
but i seriously like it. it's Righteous [hippy word?] good luck with writer's block.

Well, might as well leave a bit of a teaser;

The next song is 'A Broken Eternity'.

[nojerom_14]

Lookin' forward to it, dude....