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| Haunted Melodies of Life Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Hanging out it my own little world beyond the reach of you
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Rep Power: 6 ![]() | Okay, here's a thread for some of my poems. Some are sad, happy, romantic and so on. I'm trying to do a whole range, even on confusion and regert. Also, here's one of my newest pieces. I just finished it! Tied up and Bound Staring through the dark, The light has faded again; Where did the light go? Why am I the one trapped? I don't want him in pain, I don't want to make him fall; Nothing makes sense anymore, A dull almost invisible pain hangs over. Tied up and bound, The last thing I want you to feel; No more on that aching pain and loneliness, A single heart beats in the night. It's not mine and I know it, it's the one of the light; The one I lost long ago, Confusion echoes in my head. Do you wish you were alone? Do you wish that I was someone else? Where would you be if you weren't here, with me? Where would you go if you were free? I never wanted to hold you back, Never wanted to slow you down; Your heart has disappeared and I know it, But some questions still remain unanswered. Have I become your enemy? Is it hard for you to be yourself in my company? Where has her heart gone? It's not here I know it! Do you wish that I would just disappear? Was I wrong all this time? Did he feel lonely around me? Why can't I feel his heart, is it already gone? I'm sorry if I made you feel tied up and bound. |
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| ハレ晴レユカイ Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Tokyo, Japan Age: 19
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Rep Power: 18 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() | Awesome poem, lots of un-answered questions well done. |
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| Haunted Melodies of Life Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Hanging out it my own little world beyond the reach of you
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Rep Power: 6 ![]() | Thank you Haku, also just got another one done. It does happen around my house! Hmm, maybe Dream's right about that one thing. I just don't understand Confusion grips my heart, They say I'm beautiful for my age; but I don't understand why, They'd lie like that when it's not true. All I do is have fun, But yet there's these stares; What are they staring at? Sure, I'm not like the other girls. I don't like make-up, I just can't understand; why girls drool over guys, What's the point with them? Sometimes I hear I need, A boyfriend but I don't understand; I don't want one at all but why, Does my two friends say I need one? Is it because how distant I am? Because I want talk to them and; Tell them what's on my mind? Is that the reason they think I need a guy? I've seen the way people stare, Is it because of the fact like my; one friend said, "I'm too cute for my own good?" Maybe that is the reason I'll never know. But yet I can't help but wonder, Why do guys like and chase me; when I don't want a guy at the moment? Maybe later I would like a boyfriend, I still don't know. But still one question remains: Why do people say things about me? I guess I will never understand this world; I'll just look for the answers alone for now. Here's another one! Angry All The Time I hold you close in a gentle grip, I stare into your face; Knowing that feeling of, Being left so far behind. As you mumble something, I stare at you with gentle eyes; I tell you that you don't have to, Be angry all the time like you are now. I promise that I won't leave, As I see the nod in agreement; I still catch that sense of doubt, Pulling you lower to my height I give you a kiss. Two years have come, Since we met at the fair; Who knew it would start off that way? But it doesn't matter, you don't have to be angry all the time. |
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| It's not her fault ♫ | The first one is probably my favourite. You express yourself very clearly and leave the reader to still think about what you've written,very well done. |
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| Haunted Melodies of Life Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Hanging out it my own little world beyond the reach of you
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Rep Power: 6 ![]() | Thanks, I just got figure out the next one I'm putting up. But I think your right, bluesky. I think my first one on this is my favorite so far. |
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| ハレ晴レユカイ Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Tokyo, Japan Age: 19
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Rep Power: 18 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() | Another clear in details poem, well done. |
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| Haunted Melodies of Life Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Hanging out it my own little world beyond the reach of you
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Rep Power: 6 ![]() | I can't hurt you We listened to the talk, But something wasn't right, Looking around trying to find the answer, I don't get it why can't you hear that voice? You had a concerned look, In your eyes yesterday, Only if you knew why I screamed, But you wouldn't understand it. Hiding the fear from you, I don't want you to worry, But you seem to be able, To see through the act. Hiding the truth from you, You want to know the truth, I can see it in your eyes, But you can't handle the dream. And another one: You come back again Standing on the dock, The motionless water remains; The lights have faded as the past, Ebony blackness closes in on me. Somewhere I know the lighthouse, Has dimmed it's light reflecting the; Darkness of emptiness that has collapsed, In this shallow heart of sorrow and loneliness. The light drifts in and out, Darkness caves in on me; Emptiness, loneliness my heart, Surrounds this empty house. This heart calls out to you, Although it's not as strong; From before within the emptiness, The waves roar with joy from something. Dashing outside to see the reason, Again the light is stronger than; the darkness from before that, Left my injured soul abound to here. Amethyst violet eyes shine brightly, They find gold pools that shine brighter; finding you in the ebony, lonely darkness, That left me alone for so many years. Shinning in faithfully to me, Your golden eyes hold love; having never felt the emotion, A tingling feeling leaves me frozen. Unsure of this emotion, You stand there staring; Emptiness once more, Covers me just like before. Nothing remains for me, You beckon for me like last time; Freezing in place I nod curtly in distaste, Turning away from you I storm away from you. How dare you think that you can control me? What's it with guys being so stubborn? Unanswered questions race through my mind, Snarling at the image of you in my mind, I swear softly. No one understands me, I'm not going to try for love; Failed the first time with that junk, A second time only to fail again! Finally giving in to love, I rest against you as those; kind but yet strong arms hold me, Than finally I whispered gently, "When you come back again." ------- Hmm, why is it that I'm thinking my top two favs are You Come Back Again and Tied and Bound. |
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| It's not her fault ♫ | Again,two awesome poems =3 I like the first one better,especially the last part with the eyes. How long does it usually take you to write a poem such as these? |
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| ハレ晴レユカイ Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Tokyo, Japan Age: 19
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Rep Power: 18 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() | Another awesome edition, these are much longer than my poems were. |
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| Haunted Melodies of Life Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Hanging out it my own little world beyond the reach of you
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Rep Power: 6 ![]() | To tell you the truth, bluesky. I had most of these done for a while now, here's another one. Someday I'll Have to Say Goodbye Thoughts whirl in this head, Staring at the dark ceiling; Laying awake in the night, Listening to you sleep it's hard. Thinking about that day, The one that'll happen sooner; or later...the day I'll have to say, Good-bye to the past along with your friendship. I don't get it though, Why would our friendship have to end? It's strange out happens when you lay awke, all these thoughts in your head. The day we became friends, Is fresh in my mind as alwyas; You were always there to cheer me up, Even if you were the one that had hurt me. Like before with a case, but let's not get into that; You said once, "I was to cute for my own good." Things seem to not really change to most people. If there's one thing I know, is that one day you and me; Will have to say good-bye to, Our friendship just like everyone else. The Road know as Life Walking this long road known as life, we go through bad times and good times. We all have to walk this road alone once, but it's what's at the end of the road. Nothing can stop us when we find, the path we are meant to be on. But the only ones who can, change who we are is us. So, let's walk this long road known as life. And see what is at the end, when it's becomes our time to leave. It can be a long trip alone, so let's walk this road together. |
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| ハレ晴レユカイ Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Tokyo, Japan Age: 19
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Rep Power: 18 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() | I really like the Road to Life one because it has so much meaning. |
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| Haunted Melodies of Life Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Hanging out it my own little world beyond the reach of you
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Rep Power: 6 ![]() | I know I like that one as well, also here's another poem I just finished! No not again Ebony darkness surrounds here, Ivory disappears like before; Pain isn't ebbing away as last time, Darkness surrounds this clouded mind. Broken glass lays on the floor, Numb to this sharp feeling inside; More and more heartache is there, Why is there fights and arguments? Blood trickles down my cheek, Did I cut it on something? I know I did lift a razor to it, How did the scratch get there than? Pain rushes through more now, I want someone who won't judge me; Glass breaking inside again, What's the point in this sort of thing? Ebony is the room now, The light's gone once more; Why is the light abandoning me? What did I do to receive this punishment? No not again with the fights, Time just rolls on by slowly; It leaves you in a cloud of dust, Mercy is what I seek but I can't find it. |
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| It's not her fault ♫ | Road to Life is really good,I like its topic The other two are great as well,but Road to Life is definitely better! |
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| ハレ晴レユカイ Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Tokyo, Japan Age: 19
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Rep Power: 18 ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() | I couldn't really relate to this one as much as the other one, but it was well written. |
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| Haunted Melodies of Life Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Hanging out it my own little world beyond the reach of you
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Rep Power: 6 ![]() | Okay, understood. Now, time for a poem for my dad! And this is listening to a song along the same lines as this. Weird, I know but oh well...here it is! If I Could Things have changed now, But one thing still remains; Your hands were soft and kind, When I was crying or when I had a nightmare. Hard as steel when I'd do wrong, No matter what there was always love; Things from the past fades as time rolls by, You always sacrificed just to keep us well. I've come to understand, Love was always there even if I did wrong; If I could do things over, I'd never take for granted the love. As the memories become distant and fuzzy, Struggling to keep a hold on them; Learning to understand the love reading quite, a story in the hands that had callouses and lines. If only I could remember, some things that I've forgotten; It's like a movie in black and white, But no matter what there was always love. Gone to work from three to twelve, I regert the hours gone by with you gone; You leave at two thirty or somewhere around there, The weekends are the only real time, but I still love you. Working 'til your hands bled from time to time, I remember your hands folded silently in pray; Reaching out to comfort me when I was scared, The way you hold her tight, always no matter what...I'll remember those hands. |
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